Narrative Web

Breaking Protocol — Confronting the Inevitable

Picard deliberately breaks rank and clears Shuttle Bay Two, overruling Pulaski to create a solitary, sacramental space in which he can face the terrified duplicate of himself. As P2 insists on abandoning ship—driven by a parasitic temporal entity that 'wants' him—Picard probes for information, trying to pierce the loop of inevitability. The moment functions as a turning point: Picard refuses the deterministic script, prioritizes focused confrontation over procedure, and sets up the moral gamble that will decide the Enterprise's fate.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Picard orders P2 released from the forcefield, overruling Pulaski’s warning—his command fractures protocol, signaling he will no longer contain the inevitable.

restraint to rebellion ['Sickbay']

Picard clears Sickbay of all personnel—ordering security to stand down—creating a sacred, isolated space for the confrontation that will decide the ship’s fate.

chaos to lethal silence ['Sickbay']

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Neutral, procedural readiness — prepared to execute orders and secure areas as directed.

Named by Pulaski when she calls via communicator; Security is summoned to Sickbay but Picard countermanded that call and ordered them to clear Shuttle Bay Two instead, which redirects their operational focus though they do not appear physically in the excerpt.

Goals in this moment
  • Respond to medical/security calls and secure Sickbay or other ordered locations.
  • Execute Captain's orders to clear Shuttle Bay Two and remove distractions.
Active beliefs
  • Orders from medical officers or the captain carry authority and must be followed.
  • Clearing areas and enforcing access are the quickest way to reduce chaotic variables in a crisis.
Character traits
procedural responsive disciplined
Follow Engineering Security …'s journey

Concerned, professionally wary — she prioritizes safety and procedure but defers to command when confronted with Picard's direct order.

Pulaski monitors the duplicate's agitation, maintains clinical authority, initially keeps the containment field engaged, touches her communicator to summon Security, and complies when Picard orders release, registering concern while attempting to preserve medical protocol.

Goals in this moment
  • Prevent harm to the duplicate and the ship via medical containment and security support.
  • Ensure Sickbay protocol and patient safety are maintained despite command pressure.
Active beliefs
  • Medical containment is the correct immediate response to an unstable patient.
  • Chain-of-command and Security involvement are necessary for safety in ambiguous, dangerous situations.
Character traits
pragmatic procedural protective authoritative
Follow Katherine Pulaski's journey

Overwhelmed panic mixed with resigned urgency — believes leaving is the only option and appears haunted by traumatic memory.

Physically agitated and disoriented, P2 insists on leaving for Shuttle Bay Two, claims the vortex 'wants' him, has intermittent recognition of Sickbay and Picard, and responds with rising panic while being escorted into the corridor and turbolift.

Goals in this moment
  • Reach Shuttle Bay Two and leave the Enterprise.
  • Satisfy or appease the entity in the vortex to protect the ship (as he understands it).
Active beliefs
  • The energy vortex is a sentient entity that seeks him specifically.
  • If he does not leave, the Enterprise will be destroyed and his leaving might distract the vortex long enough for the ship to escape.
Character traits
terrified single-minded confused desperate
Follow Jean-Luc Picard's journey

Businesslike urgency — prioritizes delivering critical engineering status to command under pressure.

Riker's voice reports an imminent technical failure via com — 'We are about to lose warp drive' — interrupting the interrogation and heightening the urgency; he does not appear in person but his report briefly aligns Picard and P2.

Goals in this moment
  • Inform the captain about the warp drive failure so appropriate tactical decisions can be made.
  • Maintain ship safety by reporting technical status quickly and clearly.
Active beliefs
  • Technical realities (warp drive status) must be reported immediately, regardless of other ongoing crises.
  • Command needs precise information to make life-or-death decisions.
Character traits
tactical efficient concise urgent
Follow William Riker's journey

Quietly concerned and emotionally attuned — absorbing the duplicate's distress and Picard's intensity, ready to support the captain or patient as needed.

Troi stands with Pulaski, listening and observing the exchange between Picard and his duplicate; she provides empathic presence though she speaks little in this excerpt and registers emotional resonance with P2's panic.

Goals in this moment
  • Stabilize the emotional situation and provide empathic interpretation if asked.
  • Protect both Picard and the duplicate from panic-driven choices that could worsen the crisis.
Active beliefs
  • Emotional states provide critical data in anomalies involving duplicates and temporal phenomena.
  • Her empathic insight can help bridge understanding between Picard and the duplicate.
Character traits
attentive empathetic calming observational
Follow Deanna Troi's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Pulaski's Sickbay Restraint Forcefield

Pulaski has the restraining medical forcefield engaged around P2's biobed; Picard orders the field released so he can confront and physically escort the duplicate. The field's brief reappearance and deactivation dramatize the tug between medical containment and command prerogative.

Before: Engaged around the duplicate's gurney in Sickbay, containing …
After: Deactivated at Picard's command, permitting P2 to be …
Before: Engaged around the duplicate's gurney in Sickbay, containing P2 and limiting his movement.
After: Deactivated at Picard's command, permitting P2 to be escorted out of Sickbay toward the turbolift.
USS Enterprise-D

The turbolift functions as the physical conduit when P2 and Picard leave Sickbay; its arrival and doors opening mark the transition from a contained medical setting to an active, ship‑wide tactical pathway toward the shuttle bay and the looming decision.

Before: Idle at a nearby deck stop, doors closed, …
After: Used to carry Picard and the duplicate out …
Before: Idle at a nearby deck stop, doors closed, available to transport crew between Sickbay and Shuttle Bay Two.
After: Used to carry Picard and the duplicate out of Sickbay and down the corridor toward Shuttle Bay Two.
Riker’s Handheld Starfleet Communicator

Pulaski touches her communicator to summon Security, using it as the procedural lever to call enforcement; Picard then uses the same communication channel to override her request and issue a counter-order to clear Shuttle Bay Two, turning the device into an instrument of competing authority.

Before: On Pulaski's person/within Sickbay duty equipment, ready to …
After: Used to transmit both Pulaski's initial Security call …
Before: On Pulaski's person/within Sickbay duty equipment, ready to contact Security.
After: Used to transmit both Pulaski's initial Security call and Picard's overriding command; remains in Sickbay control but has shifted the operational focus to Shuttle Bay Two.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Enterprise Turbolift

The turbolift serves as the mechanical threshold marking the shift from private interrogation to active pursuit; its doors opening and closing punctuate the urgency and provide the necessary mobility to reach Shuttle Bay Two quickly.

Atmosphere Claustrophobic and functional, a brief pause-point between emotional confrontation and enacted decision.
Function Transport/staging area enabling rapid movement of Picard and the duplicate toward the shuttle bay.
Symbolism A conduit of fate — each stop potentially determining who leaves and what follows.
Access Standard ship access; usable by officers and crew, but movement is being dictated by command …
Doors sigh open and shut, hydraulic whisper of actuators. Low ceiling, recessed handrails, illuminated destination panel.
Shuttlecraft Bay

Shuttle Bay Two is the focal objective of P2's plan and Picard's intervention: the potential site of escape where the duplicate believes he must go to placate the vortex. The captain orders the bay cleared to remove distractions and control the conditions of any confrontation that will occur there.

Atmosphere Ominous as a potential point of departure — charged with the possibility of catastrophic finality …
Function Potential escape point and tactical location that must be controlled to influence the duplicate's choices.
Symbolism Embodies the brink between sacrifice and salvation; a physical threshold that would separate the ship …
Access Subject to order — Picard commands clearance of all personnel to create a solitary space.
Cavernous hangar lighting and maintenance catwalks (implied beyond scene). Tractor motors and engineering hum (implied), space for shuttle access.
Main Shuttle Bay

Shuttle Bay Two is the focal objective of P2's plan and Picard's intervention: the potential site of escape where the duplicate believes he must go to placate the vortex. The captain orders the bay cleared to remove distractions and control the conditions of any confrontation that will occur there.

Atmosphere Ominous as a potential point of departure — charged with the possibility of catastrophic finality …
Function Potential escape point and tactical location that must be controlled to influence the duplicate's choices.
Symbolism Embodies the brink between sacrifice and salvation; a physical threshold that would separate the ship …
Access Subject to order — Picard commands clearance of all personnel to create a solitary space.
Cavernous hangar lighting and maintenance catwalks (implied beyond scene). Tractor motors and engineering hum (implied), space for shuttle access.
Corridor Outside Sickbay

The corridor just outside Sickbay acts as the compressed transitional throat where Picard and P2's verbal duel continues; it physically narrows options and symbolically funnels the duplicate toward the ship's edge and his decision to leave.

Atmosphere Tense and hurried, a charged in-between space as decisions are transported from clinic to shuttle …
Function Transition path linking Sickbay to the turbolift and Shuttle Bay Two, allowing the confrontation to …
Symbolism Represents the narrowing of choice — movement from containment toward irreversible action.
Access Public passageway but under implicit command control during crisis; Picard instructs personnel to remain behind.
Fluorescent strips along metallic bulkheads. Recycled air with a faint antiseptic tang. Compressed space that intensifies emotional exchange.
Sickbay (USS Enterprise)

Sickbay is the event's crucible: a clinical ward where medical containment, emotional confrontation, and command collide. It houses the restrained duplicate, Pulaski's forcefield console, Troi's empathic presence, and becomes the staging ground for Picard's decisive override of procedure.

Atmosphere Tension-filled and clinical, with an undercurrent of dread as the ship slips toward the vortex.
Function Sanctuary for examination and the immediate site of the confrontation between Picard and his duplicate.
Symbolism Represents institutional order and the attempt to medically categorize a metaphysical threat; also becomes a …
Access Normally restricted to medical staff and authorized personnel; Security was summoned but Picard redirected access …
Fluorescent clinical lighting bathing the biobed. Antiseptic tang and low electronic hum from diagnostics. A faintly shimmering restraining forcefield around the gurney. Pulaski and Troi present, Picard entering with purposeful stride.

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 2
Thematic Parallel

"Riker’s Möbius loop theory is mirrored in P2’s inability to conceive of any choice beyond self-sacrifice. Both moments explore inescapable fate — one as a narrative construct, the other as psychological prison — reinforcing the theme that deterministic thinking (whether temporal or personal) is the true enemy."

Three Hours, Nineteen Minutes — Shuttle Log of Destruction
S2E13 · Time Squared
Thematic Parallel

"Riker’s Möbius loop theory is mirrored in P2’s inability to conceive of any choice beyond self-sacrifice. Both moments explore inescapable fate — one as a narrative construct, the other as psychological prison — reinforcing the theme that deterministic thinking (whether temporal or personal) is the true enemy."

Mobius Loop — Picard's Resolve
S2E13 · Time Squared

Key Dialogue

"PICARD: "No. Security, this is the captain -- disregard that order. And clear all personnel -- repeat, all personnel -- from Shuttle Bay Two. I don't want any distractions. You... stay here.""
"P2: "I must.""
"P2: "It's me.""