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Picard’s Calculated Gamble: Trading Whalen’s Life to Save Beverly

Trapped within the Holodeck’s 1941 noir simulation, Picard confronts the menacing Cyrus Redblock and his henchmen Leech and the thug as they search for a mysterious item. With Whalen fatally wounded and Beverly’s life threatened, Picard coldly asserts possession of the coveted item and proposes a ruthless bargain: Whalen’s life in exchange for Beverly’s safety. This tense negotiation forces Redblock to restrain Leech’s violent urges and highlights Picard’s grim pragmatism under pressure. The scene crystallizes the collapsing boundary between fiction and reality, underscoring the desperate stakes and Picard’s willingness to make morally fraught decisions to protect his crew.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Picard claims possession of the item and bargains for Beverly’s safety; Redblock orders Leech to stand down reluctantly, while McNary protests and is brutally silenced.

hope to cautious suspense ["Dixon Hill's office"]

Redblock demands Picard explain himself and offers to bargain; Picard reveals the price: Mister Whalen’s life, attaching grave stakes to the negotiation.

tense negotiation to desperate plea ["Dixon Hill's office"]

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Grim determination tempered by strategic calm, masking internal tension and moral conflict over the price demanded.

Captain Jean-Luc Picard remains resolutely pragmatic and in control, navigating a deadly hostage negotiation with Cyrus Redblock. He asserts possession of the sought-after item, demands Leech to stand down, and offers a cold bargain trading Whalen’s life for Beverly’s safety, embodying grim leadership amid chaos.

Goals in this moment
  • Protect Beverly Crusher from lethal harm.
  • Negotiate for Whalen’s survival by leveraging possession of the item.
  • De-escalate violent threats by controlling Leech’s aggression.
Active beliefs
  • Possession of the mysterious item gives him bargaining power.
  • Preserving the crew’s lives is paramount despite moral compromises.
Character traits
pragmatic authoritative calculating resolute
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Emotionally neutral with focused attentiveness, offering steady presence amid chaos.

Data assists Beverly by managing environmental controls and providing support while calmly analyzing threats. Despite Leech’s menacing physical intimidation, Data maintains logical clarity and composure, serving as both intellectual anchor and practical aid during the tense standoff.

Goals in this moment
  • Assist Beverly in medical efforts.
  • Assess and defuse hostile threats.
  • Support Picard’s leadership with factual clarity.
Active beliefs
  • Maintaining calm and logic will improve survival chances.
  • Violence can be countered with reason and precision.
Character traits
logical calm supportive analytical
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Anxious yet determined, balancing professional composure with fear for Whalen and herself.

Doctor Beverly Crusher is focused and anxious, tending carefully to the fatally wounded Whalen while under direct threat from Leech’s gun. She remains composed but visibly vulnerable, embodying the emotional stakes of the negotiation and the physical danger to the crew.

Goals in this moment
  • Stabilize and save Whalen’s life.
  • Survive the immediate threat posed by Leech and Redblock.
Active beliefs
  • Whalen’s life can still be saved with urgent help.
  • Violence must be contained to protect the crew.
Character traits
compassionate determined tense resilient
Follow Beverly Crusher's journey

Irritated and desperate, teetering between rage and panic under Redblock’s control.

Felix Leech is volatile, angry, and violent, pressing a stiletto and gun against Picard and Beverly to intimidate. Frustrated by Picard’s evasions, he lashes out impulsively, but is ultimately restrained by Redblock, revealing a dangerous volatility that jeopardizes their position.

Goals in this moment
  • Eliminate perceived threats by killing Picard and Beverly.
  • Pressure Picard to reveal the item’s location.
  • Assert dominance within the hostile group.
Active beliefs
  • Violence is the quickest solution to control the situation.
  • Picard’s claims are lies or evasions to be crushed.
Character traits
aggressive impulsive frustrated menacing
Follow Felix Leech's journey

Fading consciousness and pain, representing the immediate mortal peril faced by the crew.

Charles Whalen lies fatally wounded in an adjacent room, the human cost that escalates the stakes of the negotiation. Though incapacitated, his presence is a silent catalyst driving Picard’s grim bargain and Beverly’s urgent medical attention.

Goals in this moment
  • Survive the wound with medical aid.
  • Serve as the bargaining chip in this deadly standoff.
Active beliefs
  • His life depends on prompt medical intervention.
  • His injury shifts the power dynamics in the negotiation.
Character traits
vulnerable victimized tragic
Follow Charles Whalen's journey

Calm yet wary, aware of danger but determined to warn the crew.

Lieutenant McNary unexpectedly enters, shows calm caution, and verbally warns Picard against trusting Redblock before being violently subdued by the thug. His intervention briefly disrupts the tension, exposing the precariousness of the hostage situation.

Goals in this moment
  • Warn Picard about Redblock's danger.
  • Avoid exacerbating the hostage situation.
Active beliefs
  • Redblock is untrustworthy and dangerous.
  • Violence can escalate if unchecked.
Character traits
cautious principled alert
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Impatient but in control, intrigued by Picard’s claims and weighing options carefully.

Cyrus Redblock orchestrates the negotiation with calculated patience, restraining Leech’s violent impulses and engaging Picard’s assertions with a mix of disbelief and pragmatic interest. His imposing presence and clipped British accent underscore his role as the primary antagonist and strategic mind controlling the hostage standoff.

Goals in this moment
  • Obtain the mysterious item at any cost.
  • Maintain control over Leech and the hostage situation.
  • Exploit Picard’s leverage to maximize advantage.
Active beliefs
  • The item holds immense value and power.
  • Calculated negotiation is preferable to reckless violence.
Character traits
calculating impatient authoritative strategic
Follow Cyrus Redblock's journey

Coldly focused on enforcement, showing no hesitation in using force to maintain control.

Redblock’s thug enforces the boss’s orders through physical intimidation and violence, disarming Lieutenant McNary and threatening Beverly. His presence intensifies the immediate physical danger to Picard’s crew and maintains Redblock’s control over the situation.

Goals in this moment
  • Protect Redblock's interests through violent enforcement.
  • Suppress any resistance or interference from Enterprise crew or simulation police.
Active beliefs
  • Physical force ensures obedience.
  • Supporting Redblock’s dominance is paramount.
Character traits
hostile loyal violent intimidating
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Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Felix Leech's Gun

Felix Leech wields this cold, lethal firearm to enforce his violent threats, including pointing it at Beverly Crusher and using it to intimidate Picard and the others, marking a dangerous escalation from simulated roleplay to deadly real threat.

Before: In Leech's possession, actively brandished as a weapon …
After: Still in Leech's possession, held during the negotiation …
Before: In Leech's possession, actively brandished as a weapon of intimidation during the confrontation.
After: Still in Leech's possession, held during the negotiation but restrained by Redblock's command to lower it.
Leech's Stiletto

Leech uses the sharp stiletto dagger in a menacing gesture, pressing it against Picard’s chest to threaten him physically and psychologically, while plucking buttons off Picard’s shirt to heighten intimidation and tension.

Before: In Leech’s hand, actively used to threaten Picard …
After: Remains in Leech’s possession but lowered on Redblock’s …
Before: In Leech’s hand, actively used to threaten Picard during the escalating confrontation.
After: Remains in Leech’s possession but lowered on Redblock’s order as negotiation commences.
Dixon Hill Office Floor Lamp

The vintage floor lamp provides crucial lighting once Data restores its connection after it was accidentally unplugged, enabling Beverly to tend to Whalen and illuminating the grim negotiation scene, thus anchoring the claustrophobic atmosphere.

Before: Plugged into the socket but briefly unpowered after …
After: Reconnected and lit, casting a muted glow over …
Before: Plugged into the socket but briefly unpowered after the lamp cord was pulled out.
After: Reconnected and lit, casting a muted glow over the tense room.
Buttons on Picard's Shirt

The buttons on Picard’s shirt become tools of menace when Leech slowly plucks them during his stiletto threat, symbolizing Picard’s vulnerability and heightening the psychological tension of the confrontation.

Before: Sewn onto Picard’s shirt, intact and part of …
After: Several buttons removed by Leech, emphasizing the escalating …
Before: Sewn onto Picard’s shirt, intact and part of his costume.
After: Several buttons removed by Leech, emphasizing the escalating threat.
Mysterious Sought Item

The mysterious sought item is the center of the deadly negotiation, driving Redblock’s demands and Picard’s calculated bargaining. Though its exact form remains undisclosed, it embodies the high stakes and blurred realities of the Holodeck crisis.

Before: Unknown to Redblock’s henchmen, held in Picard’s possession …
After: Still in Picard’s possession, used as leverage in …
Before: Unknown to Redblock’s henchmen, held in Picard’s possession and concealed.
After: Still in Picard’s possession, used as leverage in negotiation.
White Handkerchief

Cyrus Redblock uses the white handkerchief to wipe his brow during tense moments, emphasizing his physical exertion and adding a humanizing detail to his composed but calculating demeanor amid the violent hostage situation.

Before: Held by Redblock, used intermittently to wipe sweat …
After: Still in Redblock’s possession, symbolizing his attempt to …
Before: Held by Redblock, used intermittently to wipe sweat during the confrontation.
After: Still in Redblock’s possession, symbolizing his attempt to maintain control.
Lamp Cord

The lamp’s electrical cord is a minor but pivotal technical object; it is accidentally yanked from the socket causing a sudden blackout that heightens tension before Data quickly reconnects it, demonstrating the fragility of their environment and the blurred lines between simulated and real danger.

Before: Connected to the power source, supplying electricity to …
After: Reconnected and functional after Data replaces it in …
Before: Connected to the power source, supplying electricity to the floor lamp.
After: Reconnected and functional after Data replaces it in the socket.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Holodeck Dixon Hill San Francisco Simulation

The Holodeck Dixon Hill San Francisco Simulation functions as the claustrophobic and atmospheric battleground where the fictional noir world collapses into lethal reality. Its detailed 1941 office setting frames the hostage negotiation, intensifying the tension as Picard and the crew confront violent intruders amid crumbling simulation controls.

Atmosphere Tense, oppressive, and charged with a growing sense of imminent violence and moral ambiguity.
Function Stage for a deadly hostage negotiation and confrontation between Picard’s crew and Redblock’s gang.
Symbolism Embodies the collapsing boundary between fiction and reality, symbolizing the fragility of escapism and the …
Access Restricted by hostile occupants; controlled and dominated by Cyrus Redblock and his henchmen during the …
Dim overhead lighting supplemented by a vintage floor lamp. Muted sounds of footsteps and tense voices echoing in the enclosed office. Period-specific furnishings and props creating a noir ambiance.
Dixon Hill's Office Hallway

Dixon Hill's Office Hallway serves as the threshold through which Redblock and his gang enter, marking the transition from relative safety to direct confrontation. The hallway's shadowed corners and vintage decor heighten the noir atmosphere as tensions escalate fundamentally within the office.

Atmosphere Foreboding and charged, filled with looming shadows and the threat of violence.
Function Entry point for antagonists and a spatial marker of shifting power dynamics.
Symbolism Represents the fragile divide between illusion and harsh reality, foreshadowing the violence to come.
Access Initially open but effectively controlled by Redblock’s forces upon entry.
Shadows cast by dim hallway lighting. Sounds of heavy footsteps announcing the hostile arrival.

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

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Escalation

"The realization of lethal stakes causes Picard and Data to confront the invading Redblock gang, heightening danger and transforming the scenario into a fight for survival."

Leech's Violent Betrayal and Whalen’s Fatal Wounding
S1E13 · The Big Goodbye
Escalation

"The realization of lethal stakes causes Picard and Data to confront the invading Redblock gang, heightening danger and transforming the scenario into a fight for survival."

Picard Disarms Leech as Holodeck Entrapment Becomes Deadly
S1E13 · The Big Goodbye
Escalation

"The realization of lethal stakes causes Picard and Data to confront the invading Redblock gang, heightening danger and transforming the scenario into a fight for survival."

Holodeck Turns Deadly as Exit Seals Shut
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Escalation

"Riker's confirmation of orbit and subsequent urgent reaction reflect rising external pressure that parallels the internal Holodeck crisis, linking dual narrative tensions."

Riker’s Fracturing Composure and Desperate Holodeck Recall
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Key Dialogue

"PICARD: Redblock. I have the item."
"REDBLOCK: At last. I knew it! God, man, you are a character! Waiting until the last moment! Testing my resolve! What an ally you would make! Now -- where is it?"
"PICARD: There is a price."
"REDBLOCK: By God, man, I knew we were of the same stripe. Name it."
"PICARD: Mister Whalen's life. You must help us save him."