Narrative Web
S3E8
· The Price

Wormhole: Promise and Precaution

In the captain's ready room the crew confronts a discovery that could upend travel and politics: Barzan probe data shows a wormhole that collapses a century-long voyage into seconds. Data's clinical revelation collides with Riker's tactical instincts and Mendoza's commercial warnings, while Picard anchors the moment with measured skepticism — likening a rushed purchase to "buying the proverbial lemon." The scene functions as a decisive setup: Picard forbids any impulsive manned mission, orders exhaustive sensors, and tentatively schedules Data and Geordi to enter only if safety is confirmed. Subtext: temptation, diplomatic stakes, and the friction between bold curiosity and command caution.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Data presents the Barzan probe's impressive findings, revealing the wormhole's potential to bridge an otherwise century-long journey in seconds.

curiosity to awe

Picard expresses cautious skepticism about the wormhole's stability, likening a rushed deal to buying a 'proverbial lemon'.

optimism to caution

Riker and Data volunteer to explore the wormhole, but Picard insists on thorough sensor analysis first to ensure safety.

anticipation to resolve

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Not present physically; inferred as watchful and protective of Barzan interests, likely wary of external interference.

Bhavani is invoked by Mendoza as a stakeholder who 'could object' to a manned inspection; she is not present but her interests shape the group's thinking about sovereignty and consent.

Goals in this moment
  • Preserve Barzan control over their discovery
  • Prevent actions that could compromise Barzan sovereignty or survival
Active beliefs
  • Barzans must retain agency over their assets
  • External intervention without consent would be improper or harmful
Character traits
protective (inferred) sovereignty‑minded (inferred) politically consequential (inferred)
Follow Bhavani's journey

Not present; inferred as confident and strategically poised to take advantage of any negotiation opening.

Devinoni Ral is named by Riker as the negotiator 'to watch out for' — he is not in the room, but his diplomatic presence is flagged as a subtle, potentially manipulative influence on the talks.

Goals in this moment
  • Cultivate influence over delegates to shape wormhole access
  • Exploit ambiguity or rushed decisions for personal or patron advantage
Active beliefs
  • Emotional and social leverage can be as decisive as technical claims
  • Subtle influence matters most when stakes are ambiguous
Character traits
charming (inferred) manipulative (inferred) politically adroit (inferred)
Follow Devinoni Ral's journey

Not present in the room; inferred as opportunistic and confident, likely seeking advantage.

DaiMon Goss (Ferengi) is referenced in Riker and Mendoza's remarks as a blustering commercial actor whose presence at the negotiations represents a competitive, profit-driven threat to outcomes.

Goals in this moment
  • Secure commercial advantage or control over wormhole access
  • Leverage Ferengi tactics and influence to profit from discovery
Active beliefs
  • Strategic discoveries are primarily commercial opportunities
  • Bluster and negotiation pressure can yield concessions
Character traits
blustering commercially aggressive (inferred) theatrical (inferred)
Follow Goss's journey

Cautiously opportunistic — excited by the potential value but wary of contractual and reputational exposure.

Mendoza offers the commercial frame: recognizes extraordinary value but warns about contractual obligations and the danger of committing the Federation to an unverified purchase; he engages Picard and Riker conversationally about risk.

Goals in this moment
  • Avoid the Federation entering a binding agreement without certainty
  • Protect commercial and diplomatic standing by advocating due diligence
Active beliefs
  • Contracts create binding obligations that can be costly if based on faulty data
  • Prudence and negotiation discipline protect institutions from exploitation
Character traits
commercially shrewd cautious persuasive collegial
Follow Mendoza's journey

Calmly skeptical — intrigued by potential value but quietly anxious about institutional risk and diplomatic fallout.

Picard listens to Data's technical report, reframes the discovery through institutional caution, offers the lemon metaphor, and closes the discussion by issuing a sensor-first order and conditional authorization for a manned entry.

Goals in this moment
  • Prevent hasty, risky action that could endanger crew or Federation credibility
  • Ensure rigorous verification before committing the Federation to any agreement or expedition
Active beliefs
  • Extraordinary discoveries require extraordinary verification
  • The Federation must avoid transactional mistakes that could become diplomatic or operational liabilities
Character traits
measured institutional skeptical decisive under caution
Follow Jean-Luc Picard's journey

Clinically curious with quiet determination — intellectually engaged but lacking human fear, focused on the acquisition of data.

Data presents the probe telemetry clinically, explains the probe's limitations regarding stability and duration, and volunteers himself as one of the crew to enter the wormhole if authorized.

Goals in this moment
  • Obtain definitive sensor and experiential data about the wormhole
  • Support command decisions by volunteering a controlled, technically-minded reconnaissance
Active beliefs
  • Empirical verification resolves scientific uncertainty
  • Personal risk is acceptable when it advances knowledge and mission objectives
Character traits
analytic curious duty‑oriented literal
Follow Data's journey

Concerned and impatient — pragmatic worry about losing strategic advantage combined with eagerness to resolve uncertainty through action.

Riker reacts viscerally to the implications, imagines political consequences (Ferengi tolls), advocates for direct verification, nominates La Forge for the mission and presses the operational urgency of seeing for themselves.

Goals in this moment
  • Obtain direct verification to remove uncertainty
  • Protect Federation/Starfleet strategic interests by acting before rivals
Active beliefs
  • Firsthand observation is the most reliable way to resolve ambiguity
  • Delay can translate into political or commercial loss
Character traits
pragmatic tactically minded blunt protective of Starfleet interests
Follow William Riker's journey

Supportive and responsible by implication — trusted to perform a precise, potentially hazardous technical task.

La Forge is referenced by Riker as having continuous visual contact with the wormhole and as the logical co-investigator; he is not speaking but is positioned as the operational partner for a potential reconnaissance.

Goals in this moment
  • Provide continuous visual confirmation and technical oversight if a probe or shuttle is sent
  • Maintain sensor and piloting readiness for a possible manned entry
Active beliefs
  • Technical expertise is essential for safe exploration
  • Operational readiness mitigates unknown risks
Character traits
technically capable (inferred) reliable (inferred) hands‑on (inferred)
Follow Geordi La …'s journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Captain's Ready Room Viewscreen (consolidated wall & tabletop variants)

The viewscreen displays the probe telemetry, charts, and graphs that ground the entire argument; characters lean toward it, read numerical claims, and base tactical and diplomatic inferences on its imagery and data representation.

Before: Installed in the ready room and actively showing …
After: Continues to display the probe data as the …
Before: Installed in the ready room and actively showing Barzan probe charts and wormhole telemetry.
After: Continues to display the probe data as the basis for the ordered sensor sweep and the planned conditional mission; remains a focal information asset.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Denkiri Arm

The Denkiri Arm is invoked as the far-side landmark the probe reached via the wormhole, serving as the tangible, scientific claim that makes the wormhole strategically significant; it anchors the otherwise abstract distance in concrete astronomical terms.

Atmosphere Referenced as remote and scientifically significant; a distant, cold point on sensor maps.
Function Contextual destination that validates the wormhole's asserted transit capability.
Symbolism Represents the far-reaching implications of the discovery and the geopolitical stakes of instant access.
Described via telemetry and charts rather than seen directly Referenced distance creates cognitive dissonance between warp travel and instant transit
Gamma Quadrant

The Gamma Quadrant is named as the region reached by the probe; it transforms the wormhole from a local anomaly into a gateway to an unfamiliar political and strategic quarter, increasing the negotiation stakes.

Atmosphere Unseen, remote, and full of unknowns — a place of opportunity and risk.
Function Contextual region that heightens the wormhole's value and underscores the need for caution.
Symbolism Symbolizes the unknown consequences of instant connectivity between distant polities.
Referenced solely through sensor readouts and Data's report Carries narrative weight without physical depiction

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What this causes 2
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"Picard's skepticism about the wormhole's stability leads to the shuttle mission to confirm its reliability."

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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS medium

"Picard's skepticism about the wormhole's stability leads to the shuttle mission to confirm its reliability."

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Themes This Exemplifies

Thematic resonance and meaning

Part of Larger Arcs

Key Dialogue

"DATA: The data from the Barzan's probe into the wormhole is impressive, Captain. The wormhole delivered the probe beyond the Denkiri Arm, in the Gamma Quadrant."
"PICARD: The Federation could wind up buying itself the proverbial lemon, Mister Mendoza."
"PICARD: Before anyone goes in there, we're going to conduct a full sensor analysis. I want to do everything possible to determine that it's safe. If we're satisfied, Data, you and Commander La Forge will enter the wormhole tomorrow."