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S4E20 · The Underwater Menace Part 2

Ramo’s distrust of Zaroff exposed

The Doctor, seeking to warn Atlantean leadership about Zaroff’s apocalyptic plan, stumbles upon a tense exchange between Ramo and Damon. Ramo’s long-standing skepticism of Zaroff surfaces as Damon defends the scientist’s role in Atlantis’s resurrection. The Doctor seizes the moment, using Ara to distract Damon and isolate Ramo for a private conversation. This scene underscores the fracturing alliances within Atlantis’s leadership, revealing Ramo’s preexisting distrust of Zaroff—which the Doctor now leverages to gain a critical ally in his fight against the impending catastrophe. The confrontation also highlights the political tension between those who view Zaroff as a savior and those who recognize him as a destructive force, setting up Ramo’s potential role as a pivot point in the Doctor’s efforts to stop the ocean-draining disaster.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Ramo and Damon enter, discussing the escaped prisoners and Zaroff's potentially destabilizing interference, highlighting Ramo's deep-seated suspicion of Zaroff.

Concern to suspicion

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Determined and focused, with a hint of nervous tension—she knows the stakes are high, but her loyalty to the Doctor and her hatred for Zaroff drive her actions.

Ara, the servant girl, enters the chamber with food and clothes for Polly, her primary concern. When the Doctor emerges from hiding, she quickly adapts, lying to the Guard about seeing strangers to protect him. Her deception deepens as she lures Damon away with a false lead about Polly’s location in the market. Ara’s movements are swift and purposeful, her voice steady despite the risk. She plays a pivotal role in the Doctor’s plan, using her knowledge of Atlantis’s layout and Damon’s priorities to create the distraction needed for the Doctor to speak privately with Ramo.

Goals in this moment
  • Protect the Doctor and create an opportunity for him to speak with Ramo
  • Distract Damon using a plausible lie about Polly’s whereabouts
Active beliefs
  • Damon will prioritize capturing Polly over questioning her story
  • Ramo’s distrust of Zaroff makes him a potential ally for the Doctor
Character traits
Quick-witted and resourceful Loyal to the Doctor and companions Skilled in deception under pressure Understands the political dynamics of Atlantis Acts with quiet determination
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Defensive and frustrated—he resents Ramo’s criticism of Zaroff but is also under pressure to resolve the escapees’ threat, making him vulnerable to Ara’s misdirection.

Damon, the Chief Surgeon, enters the chamber with Ramo, his voice firm and defensive as he justifies Zaroff’s actions. He is visibly frustrated by Ramo’s skepticism, his posture rigid as he argues that Zaroff is essential to Atlantis’s resurrection. When Ara interrupts with news of Polly’s whereabouts, Damon’s focus shifts immediately, his urgency to capture the escaped prisoner overriding his conversation with Ramo. He leaves the chamber with Ara, his mind already on the hunt, unaware of the Doctor’s hidden presence and the private conversation about to unfold.

Goals in this moment
  • Defend Zaroff’s role in Atlantis’s revival and counter Ramo’s accusations
  • Capture the escaped prisoners, particularly Polly, to maintain order
Active beliefs
  • Zaroff’s methods, though extreme, are necessary for Atlantis’s survival
  • Ramo’s opposition to Zaroff is rooted in outdated traditions and personal bias
Character traits
Defensive and loyal to Zaroff Prioritizes institutional goals over personal conflicts Quick to act on new information Underestimates the Doctor’s presence and Ara’s deception
Follow Damon's journey

Skeptical yet intrigued—he is wary of the Doctor but recognizes the sincerity in his warnings, and his preexisting distrust of Zaroff makes him receptive to the conversation.

Ramo, the Priest of Atlantis, engages in a tense debate with Damon, his voice laced with disdain for Zaroff. He accuses Zaroff of appealing to the baser instincts of their people and questions his interference with the temple sacrifice. When Damon leaves with Ara, Ramo is momentarily caught off guard by the Doctor’s sudden appearance. His skepticism is palpable, but the Doctor’s urgency and shared distrust of Zaroff give him pause. Ramo listens intently, his expression shifting from wariness to cautious consideration as the Doctor speaks.

Goals in this moment
  • Assess the Doctor’s claims about Zaroff’s apocalyptic plan
  • Determine whether to trust the Doctor and potentially ally with him
Active beliefs
  • Zaroff’s actions threaten Atlantis’s moral and spiritual foundation
  • The Doctor may have critical information, but his motives must be verified
Character traits
Skeptical but open to persuasion Morally principled and tradition-bound Distrusts Zaroff’s scientific approach Responsive to urgent, well-reasoned arguments
Follow Ramo's journey

Cautiously optimistic with an undercurrent of urgency—he senses Ramo’s openness but knows the alliance is fragile and time is short.

The Doctor, concealed behind a pillar in the Atlantean chamber, eavesdrops on the heated exchange between Ramo and Damon. His sharp eyes dart between the two men as he formulates a plan. When Damon departs with Ara, the Doctor seizes the opportunity, stepping forward to engage Ramo directly. His posture is urgent yet measured, his voice a low, persuasive whisper as he appeals to Ramo’s existing distrust of Zaroff. The Doctor’s demeanor shifts from cautious observer to assertive negotiator, leveraging the moment to turn Ramo into a potential ally against Zaroff’s apocalyptic scheme.

Goals in this moment
  • Convince Ramo to trust him and share information about Zaroff’s plans
  • Exploit the political divide between Ramo and Damon to gain a critical ally
Active beliefs
  • Ramo’s distrust of Zaroff can be harnessed to stop the apocalyptic plan
  • Ara’s deception will successfully distract Damon, creating an opening for private conversation
Character traits
Strategic opportunist Persuasive and adaptable Urgent but measured in delivery Leverages existing tensions Resourceful in high-pressure situations
Follow The Second …'s journey
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Alert and professional—he is fully engaged in his duty but unaware of the larger conspiracy unfolding around him.

The Atlantean Guard briefly questions Ara about strangers in the chamber before leaving to search the compression chamber. His presence is brief but tense, his alert demeanor underscoring the high stakes of the escapees’ capture. He plays a minor but critical role in setting the stage for Ara’s deception, as his departure allows the Doctor and Ara to move freely and execute their plan.

Goals in this moment
  • Locate and apprehend the escaped prisoners
  • Follow protocol in searching the chamber
Active beliefs
  • The escapees pose a serious threat to Atlantis’s security
  • His role in capturing them is essential to maintaining order
Character traits
Dutiful and alert Focused on his assigned task Unaware of the Doctor’s hidden presence
Follow Atlantean Labor …'s journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Ara's Food and Clothing Supplies for Companions

The food and clothes Ara carries serve as both a practical necessity for Polly’s survival and a narrative device to facilitate the Doctor’s plan. Ara uses her errand as a cover to approach the Doctor and later as a pretext to distract Damon. The items symbolize the precarious state of the companions—Polly’s vulnerability and the group’s reliance on Ara’s resourcefulness. While the objects themselves are not central to the dialogue, their presence underscores the stakes of the escape and the alliances being forged in the shadows.

Before: Carried by Ara as she enters the chamber, …
After: Still in Ara’s possession as she leaves with …
Before: Carried by Ara as she enters the chamber, intended for delivery to Polly’s hiding place.
After: Still in Ara’s possession as she leaves with Damon, the items remain undelivered but serve their purpose in creating the distraction.
Carved Pillars of the Temple of Amdo

The carved pillars of the Temple of Amdo provide critical cover for the Doctor and Ara as they eavesdrop on Ramo and Damon’s conversation. The pillars’ imposing height and detailed stonework create a sense of grandeur and secrecy, their shadows offering concealment in a space designed for ritual and authority. The Doctor presses against one, his form blending into the architecture, while Ara emerges from behind another to execute her deception. The pillars thus serve as both a physical shield and a metaphor for the hidden tensions within Atlantis’s leadership—concealed beneath the surface of power and tradition.

Before: Standing as permanent fixtures in the chamber, their …
After: Unchanged physically, but their role in the event …
Before: Standing as permanent fixtures in the chamber, their carvings worn but intact, providing ample cover for those who know how to use them.
After: Unchanged physically, but their role in the event transforms them from mere architectural elements to active participants in the Doctor’s strategy.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Atlantean Council Chamber

The Atlantean Chamber serves as the crucible for this high-stakes political maneuver. Its confined, echoing space amplifies the tension between Ramo and Damon, their voices bouncing off the stone walls as they clash over Zaroff’s influence. The chamber’s dual role—as a meeting place for Atlantis’s leadership and a hiding spot for the Doctor and Ara—creates a layered dynamic where power struggles and covert alliances intersect. The Doctor’s emergence from behind the pillars feels like a theatrical reveal, the chamber’s acoustics ensuring that every whispered word carries weight. The location’s atmosphere is one of urgency and secrecy, with the Doctor and Ara’s hidden presence adding a layer of intrigue to the open conflict between Ramo and Damon.

Atmosphere Tension-filled with whispered conversations and the echo of raised voices, the chamber feels like a …
Function Meeting point for secret negotiations and a stage for political confrontation, where the Doctor exploits …
Symbolism Represents the moral and ideological fractures within Atlantis’s leadership, where tradition (Ramo) clashes with progress …
Access Restricted to high-ranking Atlanteans and those with legitimate business, though the Doctor and Ara infiltrate …
Dim, flickering light casting long shadows across the carved pillars The echo of voices bouncing off the stone walls, making eavesdropping easier A guard stationed outside the door, ensuring privacy for the conversation between Ramo and Damon

Organizations Involved

Institutional presence and influence

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Atlantean Mine Enforcement Corps

The Atlantean Guard Forces are represented in this event by the single guard who questions Ara and searches the chamber. His presence underscores the regime’s militarized approach to maintaining order, particularly in the wake of the escapees’ flight. While his role is secondary, it is critical to the Doctor’s plan—his departure allows Ara to execute her deception, creating the opening for the Doctor to engage Ramo. The guard’s alertness and adherence to protocol reflect the broader organizational culture of surveillance and control that Zaroff’s faction has either exploited or reinforced.

Representation Through the guard’s actions—questioning Ara, searching the chamber, and reporting back—he embodies the organizational mandate …
Power Dynamics Operating under the authority of higher-ranking officials like Damon, the guard enforces the regime’s will …
Impact The guard’s actions reinforce the regime’s reliance on fear and control to suppress dissent, but …
Internal Dynamics The guard’s role highlights the hierarchical structure of the Atlantean Guard Forces, where lower-ranking members …
Locate and capture the escaped prisoners (Polly, the Doctor, Ben, and Jamie) Maintain security in high-risk areas like the chamber and compression chamber Through physical presence and surveillance (e.g., body searches, patrols, questioning personnel) By enforcing institutional protocols (e.g., reporting findings, directing searches, monitoring areas)
Zaroff’s Scientific Faction (Atlantean Leadership)

Zaroff’s Scientific Faction is the unseen antagonist in this event, its influence looming over the conversation between Ramo and Damon. Damon’s defensive posture and Ramo’s outright hostility toward Zaroff reveal the deep divisions Zaroff’s faction has sown within Atlantis. The Doctor’s urgent warnings about Zaroff’s apocalyptic plan further highlight the faction’s role as a destabilizing force, one that threatens not only the planet but also the moral fabric of Atlantean society. The faction’s absence from the scene is telling—its power is felt through the reactions of its allies and detractors, shaping the dynamics of the conversation and the Doctor’s gambit to turn Ramo against it.

Representation Through Damon’s defense of Zaroff’s actions and Ramo’s vocal opposition, the faction’s ideological conflict is …
Power Dynamics Exercising indirect authority over the conversation—Damon’s loyalty to Zaroff gives the faction a foothold in …
Impact The faction’s influence is a wedge driving Atlantis’s leadership apart, with Ramo’s distrust symbolizing the …
Internal Dynamics The faction’s internal cohesion is implied but not explored here—Damon’s defensiveness suggests loyalty, but the …
Maintain control over Atlantis’s revival through Zaroff’s scientific dominance Suppress opposition to Zaroff’s methods, particularly from traditionalists like Ramo Through Damon’s advocacy and the threat of Zaroff’s wrath (e.g., 'he's furious, of course. Could upset his plans') By creating dependency on Zaroff’s experiments for Atlantis’s survival, as Damon argues: 'without him, Atlantis will never rise again from the sea'
Atlantean Council (Leadership Hierarchy)

The Atlantean Leadership is embodied in this event by Ramo and Damon, whose clash over Zaroff’s influence reveals the organization’s internal divisions. Ramo’s role as a traditionalist priest positions him as a voice of moral and spiritual resistance to Zaroff’s scientific faction, while Damon’s loyalty to Zaroff represents the leadership’s pragmatic embrace of progress at any cost. The Doctor’s intervention exploits this rift, offering Ramo an opportunity to align with a external ally (the Doctor) against Zaroff’s destructive ambitions. The organization’s ability to function cohesively is undermined by this event, as the Doctor sows doubt in Ramo’s mind and potentially gains a critical ally.

Representation Through the direct confrontation between Ramo and Damon, the leadership’s ideological and moral conflicts are …
Power Dynamics The leadership is fractured, with Ramo and Damon representing opposing factions. Ramo’s skepticism gives him …
Impact The event highlights the leadership’s inability to present a united front, with Ramo’s distrust of …
Internal Dynamics The leadership is deeply divided, with Ramo’s faction (traditionalists) at odds with Damon’s faction (scientific …
Maintain unity and authority within Atlantis’s leadership despite internal conflicts Respond to the threat posed by the escaped prisoners and the Doctor’s interference Through Ramo’s moral and spiritual authority, which he uses to challenge Zaroff’s faction Via Damon’s institutional leverage, which he wields to defend Zaroff’s experiments By controlling access to information and resources, as seen in Damon’s prioritization of capturing Polly

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 7

"The Doctor needing to speak with Ramo privately causes Ara to create a fabricated story to lure Damon away."

Doctor Seeks Ramo’s Trust Amid Zaroff’s Threat
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"The Doctor needing to speak with Ramo privately causes Ara to create a fabricated story to lure Damon away."

Doctor isolates Ramo for private warning
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"Ramo agreeing to listen the Doctor, because he is already suspicious of Zaroff."

Doctor Seeks Ramo’s Trust Amid Zaroff’s Threat
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"Ramo agreeing to listen the Doctor, because he is already suspicious of Zaroff."

Doctor isolates Ramo for private warning
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"The Doctor asks Ara about Polly, which leads to discussing the escaped prisoners and Zaroff's interference between Damon and Ramo."

Doctor Seeks Ramo’s Trust Amid Zaroff’s Threat
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"The Doctor asks Ara about Polly, which leads to discussing the escaped prisoners and Zaroff's interference between Damon and Ramo."

Doctor isolates Ramo for private warning
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"Guards searching for the doctor in the corridors directly leads to them searching the chambers."

Doctor acquires Atlantean disguise
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What this causes 8

"The Doctor needing to speak with Ramo privately causes Ara to create a fabricated story to lure Damon away."

Doctor isolates Ramo for private warning
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"The Doctor needing to speak with Ramo privately causes Ara to create a fabricated story to lure Damon away."

Doctor Seeks Ramo’s Trust Amid Zaroff’s Threat
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"Ramo agreeing to listen the Doctor, because he is already suspicious of Zaroff."

Doctor isolates Ramo for private warning
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"Ara, who resents and hates Zaroff, assists both Polly's escape and helps the Doctor and his companions, motivated by her hatred for Zaroff and their kindness."

Ara’s fleeting alliance and forced separation
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"Ramo agreeing to listen the Doctor, because he is already suspicious of Zaroff."

Doctor Seeks Ramo’s Trust Amid Zaroff’s Threat
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"The Doctor asks Ara about Polly, which leads to discussing the escaped prisoners and Zaroff's interference between Damon and Ramo."

Doctor isolates Ramo for private warning
S4E20 · The Underwater Menace Part 2

"The Doctor asks Ara about Polly, which leads to discussing the escaped prisoners and Zaroff's interference between Damon and Ramo."

Doctor Seeks Ramo’s Trust Amid Zaroff’s Threat
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"Ramo agreeing to listen, leads to Ramo leading the Doctor into the temple to discuss the plans."

Doctor demonstrates Zaroff’s apocalyptic plan
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Themes This Exemplifies

Thematic resonance and meaning

Key Dialogue

"RAMO: He's a destroyer. He appeals to all that is base in our people. He should never have come to Atlantis."
"DAMON: But without him, Atlantis will never rise again from the sea."
"DOCTOR: We're both on the same side, Ramo. You distrust Zaroff out of instinct. I distrust him because I know the truth."
"RAMO: All right, tell me what you know."