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S1E13
· The Big Goodbye

Geordi Reports Critical Holodeck Lockdown to Bridge

Amid mounting tension, Chief Engineer Geordi La Forge urgently contacts the Enterprise bridge with alarming news: Captain Picard and his party are unresponsive inside the Holodeck, trapped by a system malfunction. Geordi reveals that all communications with the Holodeck are severed, the simulation program is inaccessible, and the entrance doors remain sealed. His grave tone and halting speech underscore the growing crisis, signaling to the bridge crew—especially Commander Riker—that this is no routine glitch but a life-threatening predicament demanding immediate command attention. This moment crystallizes the external stakes of the narrative, transitioning the threat from Picard's perilous internal struggle within the simulation to a ship-wide emergency, thereby escalating the story's dramatic urgency as Act Three unfolds.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Geordi’s grim expression hardens as he punches the intercom, urgently contacting the bridge, signaling a brewing crisis.

concern to urgency ['Enterprise bridge']

Geordi reports his inability to locate the captain and communicates a critical malfunction trapping Picard and the crew inside the Holodeck, heightening the stakes.

urgency to alarm ['Enterprise bridge']

Silence falls over the bridge as the crew absorbs the gravity of Geordi’s halting report, their collective tension tightening.

alarm to dread ['Enterprise bridge']

Geordi reveals the Holodeck’s systems have failed: communication is lost, the program is inaccessible, and escape routes are sealed, sealing the crew’s perilous fate.

dread to hopelessness ['Enterprise bridge']

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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William Riker
Commander
 primary

Concerned and alert, balancing calm command with underlying worry about the unfolding crisis affecting his captain and crew.

Commander William Riker responds from the bridge via intercom, attentively receiving Geordi’s distressing report. His voice, though offscreen, carries concern and focus as he prompts Geordi for clarity about the nature of the malfunction.

Goals in this moment
  • • Clarify the scope of the Holodeck issue
  • • Maintain command stability aboard the Enterprise
  • • Prepare to coordinate rescue or emergency protocols
  • • Reassure crew through composed leadership
Active beliefs
  • • Captain Picard is in danger inside the Holodeck
  • • The Holodeck malfunction is escalating beyond normal parameters
  • • Immediate, coordinated action from command is necessary
  • • Clear communication channels are vital for crisis management
Character traits
Authoritative Attentive Decisive Empathetic listener
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Geordi La Forge
Chief Engineer
 primary

Grave concern tinged with professional composure, masking rising anxiety about the escalating emergency.

Chief Engineer Geordi La Forge stands at the Holodeck entrance corridor, visibly grave, initiating urgent communication via intercom to the bridge. His speech is halting and serious, underscoring the malfunction’s severity as he conveys inability to locate Captain Picard, access the program, or open the Holodeck doors.

Goals in this moment
  • • Inform bridge command of the critical Holodeck malfunction
  • • Ascertain the status and safety of Captain Picard and party
  • • Seek immediate assistance or intervention from leadership
  • • Prevent further deterioration of the situation by clear communication
Active beliefs
  • • The Holodeck malfunction is serious and potentially life-threatening
  • • Captain Picard and his party are trapped inside with no immediate means of rescue
  • • Bridge command needs to be fully aware to coordinate a response
  • • Technical failure is not a routine glitch but an emergency
Character traits
Technically astute Urgent Cautiously alarmed Methodical communicator
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Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Captain's Ready Room Intercom

The Captain's Ready Room Intercom functions as the critical communication device enabling Geordi to urgently contact the Enterprise bridge. Its crackling line carries the tense, fragmented exchange that reveals the severity of the Holodeck malfunction, serving as the vital lifeline connecting isolated technical personnel to command authority.

Before: Operational and located at the Holodeck entrance corridor, …
After: Actively engaged in emergency communication, transmitting Geordi's distress …
Before: Operational and located at the Holodeck entrance corridor, ready for use in routine and emergency communications.
After: Actively engaged in emergency communication, transmitting Geordi's distress to bridge command.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Main Bridge

The Main Bridge of the USS Enterprise functions as the command nerve center where Riker listens intently to Geordi’s urgent report. It represents centralized authority and decision-making, becoming the focal point for mobilizing response to the escalating Holodeck crisis. The bridge’s role in this event is to process incoming information, maintain operational control, and prepare immediate action.

Atmosphere Charged with quiet tension, alertness, and mounting concern as the crew absorbs the distressing news.
Function Command center coordinating emergency response and crisis management.
Symbolism Embodies institutional power and the weight of leadership responsibility.
Access Restricted to senior officers and command personnel during crises.
Glowing consoles and flashing alerts indicating heightened alert status Echoes of repeated intercom communication Focused crew members poised for rapid action
Holodeck IV Entrance

The Holodeck Entrance corridor serves as the tense physical threshold where Geordi attempts to gain access and establish contact with the trapped party inside. It symbolizes the barrier between safety and danger, underscoring the confinement and isolation created by the malfunctioning Holodeck doors. This location frames the escalating crisis and the bridge between virtual peril and real-world command.

Atmosphere Tense, foreboding, and tightly wound with urgency and uncertainty.
Function Barrier preventing ingress and egress; communication staging point for crisis reporting.
Symbolism Represents the fragile border between artificial reality and lethal entrapment.
Access Holodeck doors remain sealed; physical access to simulation denied.
Dimly lit corridor emphasizing isolation Echoing sounds of Geordi's voice through the intercom Presence of sealed Holodeck doors acting as physical barrier

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Key Dialogue

"GEORDI: La Forge to bridge."
"RIKER'S COM VOICE: Riker here."
"GEORDI: I can't find the captain, sir."
"RIKER'S COM VOICE: I told you, he's in the Holodeck."
"GEORDI: Something's... gone wrong."
"RIKER'S COM VOICE: What are you saying Lieutenant?"
"GEORDI: I can't communicate with them. I can't access the program -- and I can't open the doors."