Narrative Web

Jaradan Ultimatum Forces Picard's Recall from Holodeck

Following the abrupt cessation of Jaradan probing, tension on the Enterprise bridge spikes as Commander Riker intercepts a demanding and hostile subspace transmission from the Jaradan, who refuse to acknowledge any officer but Captain Picard. Riker's frustrated attempts at diplomacy underscore his impotence, compelling him to order Geordi to retrieve Picard from the Holodeck where he is trapped. This event pivots the narrative sharply from diplomatic uncertainty and internal crisis to an urgent call for leadership amid escalating external threat, catalyzing the convergence of Picard's personal peril with the broader interstellar conflict.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Geordi intercepts a Jaradan subspace message, signaling an unexpected escalation; Riker reacts with concern and orders the message to be played.

calm to escalating tension ['USS Enterprise main bridge']

Riker commands Geordi to fetch Captain Picard from the Holodeck as the diplomatic crisis intensifies; Geordi departs swiftly, leaving Riker alone with the hostile screen.

tension to urgent resolve ['USS Enterprise main bridge']

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Coldly hostile with mounting impatience, conveying a threatening diplomatic posture.

The Jaradan’s composite alien voice delivers a chilling subspace ultimatum, mixing multiple vocal tones to convey a hive-mind’s impatience and hostility. It refuses to acknowledge any officer but Captain Picard, escalating diplomatic tension and forcing the Enterprise crew into a corner.

Goals in this moment
  • Ensure direct communication exclusively with Captain Picard.
  • Express dissatisfaction and disapproval of Federation’s protocol.
  • Pressure the Enterprise to comply with Jaradan demands.
  • Assert Jaradan authority and intimidate the Federation crew.
Active beliefs
  • Only a greeting from the captain is acceptable.
  • Subordinates represent insult or disrespect.
  • Delays or refusals provoke unrest and escalation.
  • Demands must be met promptly to maintain honor.
Character traits
hostile impatient authoritative inscrutable
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Alert and focused, aware of the urgency and seriousness of the situation.

Lieutenant Commander Geordi La Forge listens intently to the incoming hostile Jaradan subspace message and promptly acts on Riker’s command to fetch Captain Picard from the Holodeck, demonstrating alertness and readiness to support command decisions during escalating external threats.

Goals in this moment
  • Retrieve Captain Picard swiftly to reestablish diplomatic communication.
  • Support Commander Riker’s command decisions effectively.
  • Maintain operational readiness amid rising tensions.
  • Ensure smooth communication flow on the bridge.
Active beliefs
  • Captain Picard’s presence is critical for successful negotiations.
  • Riker’s leadership is decisive and must be supported.
  • External threats require prompt and coordinated responses.
  • The Holodeck is currently a containment area for the captain.
Character traits
alert loyal efficient responsive
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Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Captain's Ready Room Data Terminal and Information Viewscreen

The Jaradan Subspace Message serves as the medium for the hostile transmission, delivering a layered, multi-voiced communication that heightens the narrative tension. It functions as the catalyst for Riker’s diplomatic challenges and the subsequent command decision to involve Captain Picard.

Before: Idle, with Jaradan probes previously conducting active signals …
After: Transmission terminated abruptly after delivering the ultimatum, ceasing …
Before: Idle, with Jaradan probes previously conducting active signals scanning the Enterprise.
After: Transmission terminated abruptly after delivering the ultimatum, ceasing all probing activity.
USS Enterprise — Main Bridge Viewscreen

The Enterprise Bridge Viewer Screen vividly projects the Jaradan’s demanding subspace message, becoming the focal point of tension and interaction on the bridge. It visually embodies the rupture in diplomatic protocol and Riker’s frustration as he attempts to respond.

Before: Active, displaying bridge status and ongoing subspace signals.
After: Continuing to project the subspace message until communication …
Before: Active, displaying bridge status and ongoing subspace signals.
After: Continuing to project the subspace message until communication ends.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Main Bridge

The Main Bridge of the USS Enterprise operates as the nerve center of command during this event, a high-tech arena where tensions spike amid the fragile Jaradan diplomatic crisis. It frames Riker’s authoritative command and the crew’s urgent response to the hostile subspace communication, embodying the pressure cooker of interstellar diplomacy and crisis management.

Atmosphere Tense and charged with mounting diplomatic pressure, punctuated by moments of uneasy silence and abrupt …
Function Command center orchestrating diplomatic engagement and emergency response.
Symbolism Embodies the precarious balance between Starfleet discipline and alien diplomacy under threat.
Access Restricted to senior command and bridge crew during diplomatic crises.
Bright, blinking consoles and alert panels reflecting active systems. The large wall-mounted communications viewscreen displaying the Jaradan message. Low hum of starship engines and occasional crew murmurs.
Holodeck Dixon Hill San Francisco Simulation

The Holodeck Dixon Hill San Francisco Simulation contains Captain Picard, who is currently unreachable through conventional means. It represents both a physical containment and a psychological refuge, juxtaposing the noir detective fantasy with the real urgent crisis unfolding on the bridge.

Atmosphere Isolated and surreal, contrasting sharply with the bridge’s tension; cloaked in artificial shadows and period …
Function Containment area for Captain Picard, pivotal to the plot's turning point as retrieval is ordered.
Symbolism Symbolizes Picard’s mental escape and vulnerability amid interstellar danger.
Access Restricted access, conventional retrieval required due to malfunction trapping Picard.
Artificial rain-slicked streets and smoky jazz club ambiance. Dim lighting with strong noir shadows and period music. Holodeck safety protocols currently overridden or malfunctioning.

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 4
Causal

"Riker's increasing frustration with the hostile Jaradan communications leads to the order to fetch Picard from the Holodeck, accelerating the crisis response."

Jaradan Abruptly Sever Communications, Escalating Diplomatic Tensions
S1E13 · The Big Goodbye
Causal

"Riker's increasing frustration with the hostile Jaradan communications leads to the order to fetch Picard from the Holodeck, accelerating the crisis response."

Jaradan Reject Riker, Demand Captain’s Direct Greeting
S1E13 · The Big Goodbye
Thematic Parallel medium

"Jaradan refusal to negotiate with Riker as subordinate parallels their distrust and hostility, thematically underscoring the diplomatic difficulties Picard faces and the tension aboard Enterprise."

Jaradan Abruptly Sever Communications, Escalating Diplomatic Tensions
S1E13 · The Big Goodbye
Thematic Parallel medium

"Jaradan refusal to negotiate with Riker as subordinate parallels their distrust and hostility, thematically underscoring the diplomatic difficulties Picard faces and the tension aboard Enterprise."

Jaradan Reject Riker, Demand Captain’s Direct Greeting
S1E13 · The Big Goodbye
What this causes 4
Causal

"Riker's increasing frustration with the hostile Jaradan communications leads to the order to fetch Picard from the Holodeck, accelerating the crisis response."

Jaradan Abruptly Sever Communications, Escalating Diplomatic Tensions
S1E13 · The Big Goodbye
Causal

"Riker's increasing frustration with the hostile Jaradan communications leads to the order to fetch Picard from the Holodeck, accelerating the crisis response."

Jaradan Reject Riker, Demand Captain’s Direct Greeting
S1E13 · The Big Goodbye
Thematic Parallel medium

"Jaradan refusal to negotiate with Riker as subordinate parallels their distrust and hostility, thematically underscoring the diplomatic difficulties Picard faces and the tension aboard Enterprise."

Jaradan Abruptly Sever Communications, Escalating Diplomatic Tensions
S1E13 · The Big Goodbye
Thematic Parallel medium

"Jaradan refusal to negotiate with Riker as subordinate parallels their distrust and hostility, thematically underscoring the diplomatic difficulties Picard faces and the tension aboard Enterprise."

Jaradan Reject Riker, Demand Captain’s Direct Greeting
S1E13 · The Big Goodbye

Key Dialogue

"RIKER: One could get the feeling they don't exactly trust us."
"GEORDI: Commander, I'm receiving a subspace message from the Jarada."
"JARADAN'S COM VOICE: En-ter-prise. The time has come to honor us. We await your greeting."
"RIKER: This is Commander Riker, first officer of the Enterprise --"
"JARADAN'S COM VOICE: -- You are not captain?!"
"RIKER: No sir, I'm not. I suggest we commence with screen to screen communication so we can see each other --"
"JARADAN'S COM VOICE: -- You offend us! We will not show ourselves to a mere subordinate. We await your captain's greeting with growing unrest. End of communication!"
"RIKER: (sighing) Terrific."
"RIKER: Get the captain. You'll find him in the Holodeck."