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Empty Chair on the Bridge — Kolrami's Snub and Riker's Request

On the Enterprise bridge Picard presides while Data's conspicuous absence leaves a cold, technical gap. Burke reports Riker on the Hathaway: Ensign Crusher must reboard because he abandoned critical experiments to join an away team. Kolrami treats the matter as a tactical footnote—ordering escort and muttering a contemptuous aside that the ensign is a "non-commissioned child." Picard quietly grants the request and sends Burke to act. The scene crystallizes multiple stakes—human error, procedural discipline, and Kolrami's corrosive disdain—raising moral and tactical tension for what follows.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Bridge posture locks in: Picard commands, Kolrami sits close, Burke holds Tactical—while Data’s absence opens a conspicuous gap that pricks the room’s composure.

poised to uneasy

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Focused and businesslike; shows no visible reaction to Kolrami's aside, ready to execute orders cleanly.

At Tactical, announces the Hathaway message, receives Picard's order to 'handle that,' and immediately exits to carry out the escort/reboarding task—acting as the executive instrument of Picard's delegation.

Goals in this moment
  • Execute Picard's orders without delay
  • Ensure the safe reboarding/escort of the named ensign
Active beliefs
  • Orders from the captain are to be carried out promptly
  • Procedural clarity prevents small errors from becoming operational problems
Character traits
professional prompt dutiful
Follow Burke's journey

Detached superiority; displays contempt that intentionally undermines Riker's personnel choice and escalates interpersonal tension.

Seated to Picard's left, offers an immediate tactical judgment that the ensign be escorted and restrict contact, then mutters a contemptuous aside about the ensign's status, injecting scorn into an otherwise procedural exchange.

Goals in this moment
  • Assert intellectual dominance over the command conversation
  • Signal skepticism about Starfleet's personnel decisions and Riker's judgment
Active beliefs
  • Emotional/ill-disciplined personnel compromise mission effectiveness
  • Public displays of superiority will expose weaker command choices
Character traits
clinical condescending provocative
Follow Sirna Kolrami's journey

Restrained professionalism masking irritation—he chooses procedure and crew safety over public confrontation with Kolrami.

Sits in the Command Chair, solicits Kolrami's view on the request, quietly grants Riker permission, and delegates the escort to Burke; controls the exchange with contained authority while suppressing irritation.

Goals in this moment
  • Resolve the personnel/safety issue efficiently
  • Maintain command decorum and keep the simulation's integrity intact
Active beliefs
  • Crew safety and procedure trump petty commentary
  • Maintaining chain-of-command and impartial judgment preserves morale
Character traits
measured authoritative diplomatic restraint
Follow Jean-Luc Picard's journey

Absent; his nonappearance produces an implicit coolness and a subtle anxiety about missing diagnostics or unemotional counsel.

Not physically present on the bridge; his conspicuous absence is explicitly noted, creating a perceptible technical and emotional void that alters how command processes information in the exchange.

Goals in this moment
  • Provide precise technical and tactical counsel when present
  • Ensure procedural correctness through data-driven analysis
Active beliefs
  • Accurate technical input is essential for sound command decisions
  • Objective analysis reduces emotional bias in critical judgments
Character traits
analytical (implied) reliable (implied) absent-presence
Follow Data's journey

Practical concern mixed with mild frustration—he focuses on remedying a personnel lapse rather than moralizing about it.

Appears on the Main Viewer from the Hathaway, reports that Ensign Crusher left critical experiments unattended, and formally requests permission for the ensign to reboard—framing the matter as practical and safety-oriented.

Goals in this moment
  • Secure the return of a crew member who compromised experiments
  • Preserve the operational integrity of the Hathaway/simulation
Active beliefs
  • Personnel mistakes must be corrected swiftly to protect mission outcomes
  • Command decisions require clear permission channels
Character traits
pragmatic concerned decisive
Follow William Riker's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Enterprise Bridge Main Viewer

The Main Viewer functions as the communication conduit showing Riker aboard the Hathaway; it externalizes the off-bridge source of the problem and focuses bridge attention toward the practical request, making remote command decisions immediate and public.

Before: Idle in the bridge forward bulkhead, ready to …
After: Displays Riker's message until the exchange concludes; remains …
Before: Idle in the bridge forward bulkhead, ready to display incoming comms.
After: Displays Riker's message until the exchange concludes; remains the visual link between ships.
Message from the Hathaway

The 'Message from the Hathaway' acts as the initiating object that triggers the scene's action—its arrival compels Riker's request and forces immediate personnel triage, turning an off-screen mistake into an on-bridge decision.

Before: Queued in ship comms, awaiting acceptance by the …
After: Consumed—message displayed and acted upon; its content prompts …
Before: Queued in ship comms, awaiting acceptance by the bridge.
After: Consumed—message displayed and acted upon; its content prompts subsequent orders and an escort assignment.
USS Enterprise-D Bridge Command Chair

The Command Chair anchors Picard's authoritative posture during the exchange; its physical centrality underscores his role as decider and the focal point where Kolrami's aside and Picard's restraint meet.

Before: Occupied by Picard, symbolizing active command.
After: Remains occupied as Picard continues to oversee the …
Before: Occupied by Picard, symbolizing active command.
After: Remains occupied as Picard continues to oversee the bridge and issue orders.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Bridge Tactical Station

The Conn Station exists as a peripheral witness point: supernumeraries sit there, eyes tracking the exchange. Its presence underscores the bridge as a shared workplace where even minor personnel actions are seen and recorded by the crew.

Atmosphere Alert but contained—quiet attention with intermittent movement as orders are issued.
Function Witness and minor operational node supporting ship-handling readiness during the exchange.
Symbolism Represents the collective crew whose routines are affected by command decisions.
Access Typically staffed by qualified helm personnel; not a public area.
Muted LCARS glow Soft foot traffic of supernumeraries Low background hum of ship systems

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Key Dialogue

"RIKER: I'd like to request permission for Ensign Crusher to reboard the Enterprise, Captain."
"PICARD: Permission granted."
"KOLRAMI: I saw no sense in Riker choosing him anyway -- he is just a non-commissioned child."