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The Disassembly Declaration — The Sentience Rift

On the Enterprise bridge Commander Maddox coldly converts philosophical opposition into a practical threat: he reminds Data he opposed his Academy entry and then bluntly announces, "I'm going to disassemble Data." The exchange exposes the ideological fault line — Maddox treats Data as equipment and Data answers with clinical dignity — and forces Picard to remove the argument from the public deck. As the senior officers exit, the moment crystallizes the personal, ethical, and legal battle to come and sets the stakes for Data's life and personhood.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Maddox and Data trade formalities that quickly reveal history: Maddox admits he opposed Data's Academy entry, and Data confirms Maddox viewed him as non-sentient—laying ideological groundwork for the confrontation to come.

polite curiosity to affronted exposure

Maddox coldly declares, 'I'm going to disassemble Data,' and Picard, reeling, moves to remove the discussion to the lounge—Data and the senior officers physically exit to continue the confrontation, crystallizing the imminent personal and legal battle.

shocked disbelief to determined action ['lounge']

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Determined and dismissive — confident in his technical authority and indifferent to crew sentiment, treating Data as an object to be interrogated and taken apart.

Enters impatiently, identifies himself as the evaluator who opposed Data's Academy admission, and delivers a blunt, declarative threat: 'I'm going to disassemble Data.' His posture and tone turn philosophical opposition into a concrete intention.

Goals in this moment
  • Assert his technical prerogative to study and dismantle Data for scientific purposes.
  • Reframe the conversation from abstract ethics to practical action under Starfleet auspices.
Active beliefs
  • Data is an engineered construct whose parts can and should be analyzed to advance knowledge.
  • Institutional authority and procedure can and should be used to carry out necessary scientific work, regardless of crew attachment.
Character traits
impatient dogmatic clinical
Follow Bruce Maddox's journey

Civil and controlled — outwardly courteous while representing Starfleet priorities; his tone lends institutional weight to Maddox's authority.

Tours the bridge with Picard, delivers polished diplomatic remarks about the Enterprise's legacy, and is introduced to Maddox; his presence anchors the institutional pressure that legitimizes Maddox's actions.

Goals in this moment
  • Represent Starfleet's strategic interests and reassure presence near the Neutral Zone.
  • Signal institutional endorsement of Maddox's mission and observe ship readiness personally.
Active beliefs
  • Visible demonstration of force and oversight is necessary near sensitive borders.
  • Delegating technical work to a skilled officer like Maddox is an appropriate use of command resources.
Character traits
cordial official strategic
Follow Nakamura's journey

Uneasy and quietly alarmed — he senses the gravity of an adult ethical conflict unfolding but remains peripheral and unsure how to help.

Stiffens among the bridge crew as senior officers arrive and watches the terse exchange with curiosity and unease; does not intervene but registers the moral tension keenly.

Goals in this moment
  • Understand the situation and its implications for crew members he respects.
  • Remain composed and not disrupt senior officer proceedings.
Active beliefs
  • Senior officers will protect the crew and act responsibly.
  • Ethical disputes among adults are complicated and not for him to resolve publicly.
Character traits
observant youthful sensitive
Follow Wesley Crusher's journey

Protective and authoritative — surprised by the bluntness but quick to reclaim control, balancing respect for procedure with defense of his officer.

Tours the bridge with Admiral Nakamura, listens to the admiral's remarks, interrogates the wisdom of the base placement, and then decisively removes the discussion from the public bridge to protect the crew and preserve order.

Goals in this moment
  • Shield Data and the crew from an immediate public threat and move the argument to a controlled, private setting.
  • Preserve the dignity of his command while engaging the visiting officers diplomatically.
Active beliefs
  • Command responsibility includes protecting subordinates from undue institutional exposure.
  • Proper procedure requires certain discussions be moved off the public bridge to avoid operational risks.
Character traits
authoritative protective procedural
Follow Jean-Luc Picard's journey

Clinical equanimity masking inherent vulnerability — composed because he is programmed that way, yet the stakes for his existence are existential.

Stands when Maddox addresses him, locks eyes with his evaluator, replies with measured, factual language about his condition, and endures Maddox's blunt declaration without panic or theatricality.

Goals in this moment
  • Clarify factual information about his condition to establish the terms of the debate.
  • Preserve his agency by calmly asserting his identity in the face of instrumentalization.
Active beliefs
  • Transparent, factual testimony best defends his standing before skeptical authorities.
  • A calm, rational demeanor will make his claim to personhood harder to dismiss emotionally.
Character traits
calm analytical dignified
Follow Data's journey

Calmly dutiful with a low-key undercurrent of alertness; emotionally reserved but attentive to command.

Receives Picard's indication and dutifully escorts Admiral Nakamura from the bridge; stands at attention during the exchange and remains a disciplined, ceremonial presence as tension rises.

Goals in this moment
  • Follow Captain's orders and maintain protocol during the admiral's visit.
  • Protect the bridge's operational integrity by controlling movement and preserving decorum.
Active beliefs
  • Hierarchy and ritual are essential to order aboard ship.
  • Officers must execute commands without display of personal prejudice in public spaces.
Character traits
disciplined ceremonial stoic
Follow Worf's journey

Alert and concerned — outwardly controlled but privately unsettled by the ethical stakes and the strain on crew cohesion.

Announces the admiral's arrival, watches the mounting exchange between Maddox and Data, frowns at the confrontation, and physically moves with the group toward the doors when Picard ends the public discussion.

Goals in this moment
  • Maintain unit cohesion and de-escalate a public confrontation on the bridge.
  • Support Picard's command decisions and shield junior officers from institutional threats.
Active beliefs
  • Personal loyalty to crew members matters and must be defended within command limits.
  • Procedural order is necessary but can be subordinated to protect individuals from punitive institutional actions.
Character traits
attentive protective professional composure
Follow William Riker's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Android/Robot Terminology (Data)

The spoken category 'android' functions as a linguistic object in the exchange: Maddox invokes his prior evaluation ('evaluated Data') and treats Data as a non-sentient machine, converting descriptive terminology into justification for physical disassembly. The word operates as a tool of dehumanization and institutional rationale.

Before: An established label available in Starfleet parlance and …
After: Re-deployed as a rhetorical weapon by Maddox to …
Before: An established label available in Starfleet parlance and previously used during Academy deliberations.
After: Re-deployed as a rhetorical weapon by Maddox to validate his plan and mobilize institutional authority against Data's personhood.
Ten-Forward Entry Doors

The bridge doors act as the immediate physical threshold that Picard uses to remove the confrontation from public view; after saying they will move to the lounge, senior officers (Riker, Maddox, Data, Picard) walk toward and through the doors, converting the public scene into a private negotiation.

Before: Closed or idle as the gathering occurs on …
After: Used as a transitional portal as the officers …
Before: Closed or idle as the gathering occurs on the bridge, functioning as the boundary between the public bridge and adjacent corridors or reception areas.
After: Used as a transitional portal as the officers exit the bridge to continue the threatened disassembly discussion in private.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Main Bridge

The Main Bridge serves as the public stage where Maddox's theoretical opposition becomes a concrete threat. Its operational formality and presence of crew turn the declaration into an institutional challenge rather than a private academic note, forcing command-level containment.

Atmosphere Tension-filled and formal — officers stiffen, conversation is measured, processors hum beneath a rising moral …
Function Stage for public confrontation and the trigger point requiring command intervention.
Symbolism Embodies institutional authority and public accountability; the place where private judgments are exposed to collective …
Access Restricted to bridge personnel and visiting dignitaries; controlled by command protocol during official tours.
Curved consoles and low overhead lighting Steady hum of processors and clipped footsteps Rank pips visible on uniforms, creating a formal theater of command
Starbase 173

The Starbase 173 lounge is invoked as the immediately reachable private venue where Picard will continue the conversation away from the bridge's public scrutiny. It is named as the procedural remedy to diffuse a public spectacle and to allow more controlled, diplomatic discussion.

Atmosphere Invoked as quieter and more private — softer lighting and modular seating imagined to support …
Function Intended meeting place for a private, controlled negotiation and de-escalation of public confrontation.
Symbolism Represents an attempt to move contested institutional decisions out of communal scrutiny and into managerial …
Access Public lounge but situationally semi-private when attended by senior officers; not an open hearing space.
Modular seating and soft lighting Distant mechanical thrum of docking rings A quieter, more intimate acoustic than the bridge

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What this causes 5
Foreshadowing medium

"Maddox's stated opposition to Data's Academy entry and his view of Data as non-sentient prefigure the prosecution's courtroom strategy to emphasize Data's manufactured origin and hardware."

Turning Off the Witness
S2E9 · The Measure of a Man
Foreshadowing medium

"Maddox's stated opposition to Data's Academy entry and his view of Data as non-sentient prefigure the prosecution's courtroom strategy to emphasize Data's manufactured origin and hardware."

The Machine Demonstration — Riker Turns Data Off
S2E9 · The Measure of a Man
Foreshadowing medium

"Maddox's stated opposition to Data's Academy entry and his view of Data as non-sentient prefigure the prosecution's courtroom strategy to emphasize Data's manufactured origin and hardware."

The Switch: Riker Powers Data Down
S2E9 · The Measure of a Man
NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Maddox's blunt declaration he will disassemble Data leads to Data preparing to depart—packing personal effects—which turns private stakes into a visible personal loss."

Packing Memory — Data's Quiet Resignation
S2E9 · The Measure of a Man
NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Maddox's blunt declaration he will disassemble Data leads to Data preparing to depart—packing personal effects—which turns private stakes into a visible personal loss."

Violation of Quarters — Data's Resignation
S2E9 · The Measure of a Man

Themes This Exemplifies

Thematic resonance and meaning

Key Dialogue

"DATA: And were the sole member of the committee to oppose my entrance on the grounds that I was not a sentient being."
"MADDOX: I'm going to disassemble Data."
"PICARD: I think we will remove this discussion to the lounge."