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S2E6 · Star Trek: The Next Generation - Loud as a Whisper

Data's Overzealous Mastery

Following Deanna Troi's sobering counsel about Riva's psychological impasse, Data bursts into Picard's ready room with mechanical enthusiasm, demonstrating his rapid mastery of sign languages. His precise but overwhelming recitation—escalating from simple color identification to elaborate romantic scenarios—forces Picard to sharply interrupt. This moment contrasts Data's literal brilliance with human emotional limits, highlighting the episode's tension between technical communication and authentic connection. Data's social misstep starkly follows Troi's wisdom about internal confidence, framing the upcoming confrontation with Riva.

Plot Beats

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Data bursts in with a technical solution—he has mastered five signing languages—and immediately demonstrates, unfolding increasingly elaborate signed vignettes. His clinical excess transforms hope into irritation, and Picard cuts him off with a sharp 'Enough!'

hopeful curiosity to exasperated dismissal

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Worried about Riva with diminishing patience for technical distractions

Picard sits at his desk in quiet contemplation of Troi's counsel when Data interrupts with excessive enthusiasm. His sharp 'Enough!' cuts through Data's demonstration with commanding precision, refocusing on Riva's crisis.

Goals in this moment
  • Solve Riva's sudden communication crisis
  • Prevent exacerbating Riva's psychological distress
Active beliefs
  • Technical solutions must serve emotional needs first
  • Riva's mediation abilities transcend language alone
Character traits
Commanding Diplomatic Concerned Time-pressed
Follow Jean-Luc Picard's journey

Enthusiastic about technical achievement but oblivious to social cues

Data enters crisply, demonstrating enthusiastic mastery of signing with escalating complexity—from basic colors to romantic scenarios—until abruptly halted by Picard. His synthetic cadence lacks awareness of emotional context.

Goals in this moment
  • Demonstrate linguistic proficiency to assist Riva
  • Contribute meaningfully to the crisis resolution
Active beliefs
  • Mastery of languages equates to effective communication
  • Technical solutions can replace psychological barriers
Character traits
Precise Eager Lacking contextual awareness Overly logical
Follow Data's journey

Concerned connection transitioning to quiet observation

Having just delivered sobering psychological insight about Riva's need for self-confidence, Troi physically comforts Picard before Data's intrusion shifts the room's dynamics from empathetic to mechanical.

Goals in this moment
  • Support Picard's leadership decisions
  • Monitor Riva's psychological welfare
Active beliefs
  • True confidence must come from within
  • Human connection transcends technical solutions
Character traits
Empathetic Insightful Physically comforting Observer of interactions
Follow Deanna Troi's journey

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Captain's Ready Room

The Captain's Ready Room serves as an intimate yet authoritative space where empathetic counsel gives way to technical interruption, its transitional nature reflecting the episode's tension between emotional intuition and synthetic precision.

Atmosphere Shifting from quiet intimacy to abrupt technical intrusion
Function Command nexus for crisis management
Symbolism Represents Starfleet's dual nature: both highly technical and deeply humanistic
Access Senior staff access only via door chime
Polished oak desk bearing celestial mechanics puzzles Dim lighting emphasizing serious mood

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Key Dialogue

"TROI: I can't do anything. It's up to him. Confidence is faith in oneself, it can't be given by another."
"DATA: This is two happy people in love walking along the beach by a blue ocean at sunset. This is --"
"PICARD: Enough!"