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First Contact in Sickbay: Clare Raymond Awakens

Dr. Beverly Crusher brings the first of three 21st‑century cryonics patients back to consciousness while Picard, Data and Worf observe. Data's recovered disk supplies the identification and medical context: Clare Raymond, thirty‑five, succumbed to a sudden pulmonary embolism. Clare wakes steady, absorbing the alien room with wary composure—a quiet human anchor amid technological wonder. The scene functions as a setup and emotional touchstone: it humanizes the temporal rescue, introduces the trio's contrasting responses (compassion, entitlement, curiosity), and foreshadows cultural friction and ethical complications the Enterprise must manage.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Beverly rouses the three cryonically preserved humans while Picard, Data and Worf watch; the guests are revealed still wrapped in sheets, marking their abrupt reintroduction to life and the Enterprise crew's first contact with them.

uncertainty to guarded attention

Data announces he retrieved data from an ancient disk and identifies the first revival as Clare Raymond; Beverly confirms cause of death (embolism) and that her body was otherwise well preserved, turning clinical curiosity into a sobering medical fact.

curiosity to sobering realization

Clare Raymond remains awake, scans the room and the people around her with solid, no-nonsense steadiness, registering dislocation but immediately grounding the moment with wary alertness.

dismay to wary alertness

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Calm and satisfied on the surface, carrying quiet concern for ship safety and the ethical duty his command requires.

Picard supervises from the periphery, listens to Data and Crusher, authoritatively delegates medical custody to Dr. Crusher, nods Data forward, declares he will go to the bridge, and exits.

Goals in this moment
  • Ensure the recovered individuals are treated humanely and medically cared for.
  • Delegate bedside responsibility to free himself to manage the broader Neutral Zone crisis.
  • Ascertain that the survivors do not pose an immediate security risk to the Enterprise.
Active beliefs
  • These recovered persons are living and deserve Starfleet custodial care.
  • Command responsibilities require delegation so he can address operational/diplomatic priorities.
  • Objective data (Data's identification) should inform but not replace humane judgment.
Character traits
measured authoritative decisive strategic
Follow Jean-Luc Picard's journey

Clinically curious and focused, prioritizing accuracy and preservation of archival data while recognizing its immediate utility.

Data reads forensic information recovered from an ancient disk, announces the three names and fragmentary occupational/vital details, provides evidentiary context and then follows Picard to the bridge.

Goals in this moment
  • Establish the identities and medical backgrounds of the recovered persons.
  • Preserve and communicate objective evidence to inform command and medical decisions.
  • Support Picard's operational needs by preparing to accompany him to the bridge.
Active beliefs
  • Accurate archival data is crucial to appropriate treatment and legal/ethical handling.
  • Objective, documented facts will reduce uncertainty for command and medical staff.
Character traits
analytical precise methodical curious
Follow Data's journey

Guarded professionalism: alert to potential threat but composed and compliant with command decisions.

Worf stands present as security presence, accepts Beverly's instruction to escort the survivors to guest quarters, leads them out with quiet efficiency.

Goals in this moment
  • Secure and escort the survivors to controlled accommodations.
  • Maintain the safety of the ship and crew by enforcing containment and oversight.
  • Follow Starfleet orders without unnecessary escalation.
Active beliefs
  • Unexpected recovered persons may present security risks and require supervision.
  • Chain of command and obedience to orders are primary duties.
Character traits
dutiful stern protective efficient
Follow Worf's journey

Compassionate and controlled, slightly exasperated by Ralph's entitlement but resolute in protecting patients' welfare.

Dr. Crusher conducts triage and revival procedures, delivers blunt medical diagnoses, soothes and instructs the newly awakened, asserts custody of their care, and pushes for patience when Ralph demands money.

Goals in this moment
  • Stabilize and medically assess each recovered individual.
  • Protect patients from exploitation and unnecessary stress.
  • Establish a period of rest and orientation before full explanation.
Active beliefs
  • These individuals are patients first and legal/financial concerns are secondary to their immediate well‑being.
  • Medical ethics require patience and humane treatment for disoriented survivors.
Character traits
compassionate professional direct authoritative
Follow Beverly Crusher's journey

Overwhelmed and grieving — clear eyed but emotionally raw as she faces the estrangement of time and death.

Clare Raymond is reawakened and remains conscious; she studies the room and people with stunned sobriety and a grief‑tinged disorientation, anchoring the medical fact to human loss.

Goals in this moment
  • Assess what has happened and locate any familiar anchors or explanations.
  • Avoid panic and find a steadying presence to process the shock.
  • Receive clear information about her condition and circumstances.
Active beliefs
  • Something sudden and catastrophic happened to her world.
  • She is in a place and time that are foreign and possibly hostile; she must be careful.
Character traits
pragmatic grounded stunned grieving
Follow Clare Raymond's journey

Agitated and combative — using old instincts of control and financial leverage to mask fear and helplessness.

Ralph Offenhouse awakens disoriented and immediately shifts into transactional mode, demanding to know costs and asserting entitlement despite his confusion.

Goals in this moment
  • Reassert control over his situation by demanding information about costs and procedures.
  • Protect his perceived rights and social standing even in unfamiliar circumstances.
  • Gain immediate answers that reaffirm his sense of agency.
Active beliefs
  • Services require payment and he must approve costs before proceeding.
  • His previous status and wealth still afford him entitlement and leverage.
Character traits
entitled commodifying defensive calculating
Follow Ralph Offenhouse's journey

Dazed and fragile with flickers of buoyancy — physically battered but behaviorally adaptable to new cues.

L.Q. "Sonny" Clemonds is identified by Data and assessed by Crusher as chemically ravaged; he is dazed, has a short attention span, but shows a surprising glimmer of adaptability as he finishes dressing.

Goals in this moment
  • Stabilize physically and mentally in the immediate aftermath.
  • Find comfort or distraction to manage withdrawal and disorientation.
  • Remain present and open to assistance that mitigates his vulnerability.
Active beliefs
  • Life has been a series of survival strategies; adaptability will help now.
  • Immediate needs — sleep, food, calm — matter more than abstract explanations.
Character traits
distracted world‑weary resilient volatile
Follow L. Q. …'s journey

Professional and reassuring, focused on immediate comfort and practical needs rather than broader policy.

Nurse Wright awakens and assists with bedside care, stands ready to furnish necessities, and follows Dr. Crusher's orders to support and calm the patients.

Goals in this moment
  • Provide immediate comfort and supplies to the disoriented patients.
  • Support Dr. Crusher's stabilization plan and maintain clinical order.
  • Prevent panic and unnecessary movement until patients are assessed.
Active beliefs
  • Following the doctor's instructions is the best way to stabilize patients.
  • Calm, practical care reduces disorientation and the risk of complications.
Character traits
helpful composed attentive efficient
Follow Wright's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Sickbay Medical Sheets

Light clinical sheets initially conceal the three recovered bodies, preserving modesty and the visual shock of their reawakening; staff lift and smooth the linens during diagnosis and the patients finish dressing, leaving sheets partially displaced.

Before: Draped over the three cryonics patients on Sickbay …
After: Partially removed as the patients begin dressing and …
Before: Draped over the three cryonics patients on Sickbay biobeds, slightly damp from body heat and providing full concealment.
After: Partially removed as the patients begin dressing and are prepared for transfer to guest quarters; remain available for covering as needed.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Main Bridge

The bridge functions as Picard's next destination; his decision to leave Sickbay for the bridge reframes the revival as an operational concern that must be balanced alongside diplomatic and tactical obligations.

Atmosphere Controlled, procedure‑oriented, and tense with looming strategic concerns.
Function Command center where strategic decisions about the Neutral Zone crisis will be coordinated; Picard departs …
Symbolism Embodies institutional authority and the weight of duty pulling the captain from humane bedside concerns …
Access Restricted to command officers and essential personnel.
Curved consoles with pulsing LCARS keys Low processor hum and clipped reports Officers at elbow‑height stations A looming viewscreen and tactical readouts
Enterprise Sickbay

Enterprise Sickbay is the intimate, clinical theater where revival occurs: doctors and technicians convert an archaeological salvage into an urgent medical and moral problem, directly shaping command choices and human reactions.

Atmosphere Antiseptic, tightly focused, intimate — clinically busy but underpinned by quiet tension and the emotional …
Function Sanctuary and triage center for the newly awakened; the stage where ethical custody is determined …
Symbolism Represents the ship's humane imperative and institutional care — a bridge between scientific discovery and …
Access Restricted to medical staff, senior officers, and necessary security escorts during stabilization.
Antiseptic light washing over stainless biobeds Diagnostic consoles blinking with patient vitals Clinicians moving with economical purpose Sheets and clinical equipment present, faint mechanical hum
Enterprise Guest Quarters

Enterprise Guest Quarters are designated as temporary lodging and quarantine for the disoriented survivors; Worf is instructed to escort them there to keep them secure and under Starfleet custody while medical care continues.

Atmosphere Quiet and constrained — intended refuge but edged with formality and containment.
Function Holding space for recovery and orientation away from Sickbay's bustle; enforces supervised privacy and quarantine.
Symbolism A liminal space between rescue and reintegration, signifying containment and institutional control.
Access Under escort and monitored; not open to casual visitors while survivors are disoriented.
Narrow berths and fold‑out chairs Portable monitors and sanitized linens Guarded door chimes and steady life‑support hum Sealed meal packs and a subdued, clinical aura
Sickbay (USS Enterprise)

Enterprise Sickbay is the intimate, clinical theater where revival occurs: doctors and technicians convert an archaeological salvage into an urgent medical and moral problem, directly shaping command choices and human reactions.

Atmosphere Antiseptic, tightly focused, intimate — clinically busy but underpinned by quiet tension and the emotional …
Function Sanctuary and triage center for the newly awakened; the stage where ethical custody is determined …
Symbolism Represents the ship's humane imperative and institutional care — a bridge between scientific discovery and …
Access Restricted to medical staff, senior officers, and necessary security escorts during stabilization.
Antiseptic light washing over stainless biobeds Diagnostic consoles blinking with patient vitals Clinicians moving with economical purpose Sheets and clinical equipment present, faint mechanical hum

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 2
Causal

"Data's decision to pull data via the disk enables later identification of Clare Raymond in Sickbay."

Analog Recovery: Data Counters Worf's Force
S1E26 · STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION …
Causal

"Data's decision to pull data via the disk enables later identification of Clare Raymond in Sickbay."

Low‑Tech Discovery and Twelve‑Minute Countdown
S1E26 · STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION …
What this causes 4
Character Continuity medium

"Ralph’s immediate demands in Sickbay persist into later insistence on calls and control in the Lounge."

Awakening and Disorientation in the Guest Lounge
S1E26 · STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION …
Character Continuity medium

"Ralph’s immediate demands in Sickbay persist into later insistence on calls and control in the Lounge."

Commercial Resurrection: Cryonics, Contracts, and Consequences
S1E26 · STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION …
Character Continuity medium

"Ralph’s immediate demands in Sickbay persist into later insistence on calls and control in the Lounge."

Naming the Other
S1E26 · STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION …
Character Continuity medium

"Ralph’s immediate demands in Sickbay persist into later insistence on calls and control in the Lounge."

Temporal Shock: Offenhouse's Urgency vs. Starfleet Protocol
S1E26 · STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION …

Part of Larger Arcs

Key Dialogue

"DATA: I was able to retrieve some information from the ancient disk I removed from the module's computer. Based on that..."
"DATA: Her name is Clare Raymond, age thirty-five; occupation, homemaker... must be some kind of construction work."
"BEVERLY: She died of an embolism. It probably happened very suddenly, otherwise her physical condition was excellent."
"RALPH: I demand to know the cost of anything you do before the procedure is approved."