Mendon Pushes Protocol, Earns the Look
Plot Beats
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Mendon peers over the Tactical crewmember's shoulder and unloads an unsolicited technical critique of the defensive-shield routine, projecting confident expertise into a room that reacts with a single, pointed look.
Who Was There
Characters present in this moment
Calm, analytical, and neutral — registers the interaction as data without social judgment or emotional response.
Data holds Command and passively oversees bridge operations while Mendon moves about; he does not intervene but provides the silent institutional authority framing the exchange.
- • Maintain smooth bridge operations during informal interactions
- • Monitor crew behavior as part of command duty
- • Allow appropriate professional exchanges unless operationally disruptive
- • Professional behavior will self‑regulate within Starfleet norms
- • Unsolicited technical notes should be permitted if not interfering with operations
- • Observing social dynamics yields useful command insight
Eager and confident, bordering on officiousness; genuinely intent on improving systems and seemingly unaware of the social friction he creates.
Mendon leaves Science One and walks the bridge, stopping at Tactical then the Conn to offer unsolicited technical critiques and declare his intent to brief Captain Picard, speaking with officious confidence.
- • Observe systems across bridge stations to identify theoretical improvements
- • Establish credibility by offering technical suggestions and preparing to brief Captain Picard
- • Integrate himself professionally into Enterprise operations
- • Technical theory and protocol corrections are valuable even when unsolicited
- • Captain Picard will be receptive to well‑founded observations
- • Precise procedural improvement equals better ship performance
Courteous patience with an undercurrent of mild irritation and skepticism — he tolerates Mendon because of rank and protocol but is unconvinced by purely theoretical critique.
Wesley remains at the Forward Station, receives Mendon's praise and critique courteously, asks for specifics, defends the helm's practical record, and watches Mendon walk away with a quietly bemused expression.
- • Defend the operational integrity of the helm system
- • Maintain bridge decorum while extracting useful specifics
- • Avoid escalating minor friction into formal complaint
- • Practical experience matters more than theoretical improvements
- • Bridge efficiency depends on mutual respect and clear justification
- • Rank and protocol require polite acceptance of a superior’s comments
Objects Involved
Significant items in this scene
The USS Enterprise Helm Console serves as the physical locus for Mendon’s second critique; Mendon peers over Wesley’s shoulder and proposes a minor alteration to helm readouts, framing the console as a site where theoretical optimization meets practiced control.
The Enterprise Defensive Shields are referenced verbally by Mendon as the target of his unsolicited critique; he comments on shield‑control response time and suggests an improvement, using the shields as a concrete example of his theoretical expertise.
Wesley’s Helm Input Sampling Readout is specifically called out in Mendon's critique; he recommends a minor change to the helm readout for emergency situations, making the readout the technical focal point of the exchange.
Location Details
Places and their significance in this event
Science One functions as Mendon's origin point; he departs from this diagnostic alcove to inspect other stations, linking his scientific mindset to the rest of the bridge and visually reinforcing his role as an observing specialist.
The Bridge Tactical Station is the first place Mendon stops; his comment on shield control provokes a pointed reaction from the tactical operator, turning a technical aside into a social rebuke.
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Key Dialogue
"MENDON: That's a wonderful method of maintaining a constant control factor over defensive shields, but I'm sure there's a way to improve response time."
"MENDON: Oh, sorry, didn't mean to interrupt you... Just thought I could be of some help, however I am correct in what I said."
"WESLEY: You're going to advise Captain Picard? MENDON: Captain Picard... I'll have to discuss these improvements with him. He is open to some astute observations, isn't he?"