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Noranium Smoke and the Failed Parley

Riker's attempt at diplomacy is cut short when concealed Gatherers open phaser fire. Thinking fast, Riker rigs a noranium pile to vaporize, creating a choking smoke screen that allows him, Worf, Data and Geordi to break cover and call for transport. The gambit preserves the away team's safety but also collapses the initial openness of the parley—Brull sneers ‘cowards’—and forces a pivot: the Enterprise re-emerges with Marouk and a fragile offer of amnesty, shifting the encounter from ambush to high-stakes negotiation.

Plot Beats

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Riker attempts peaceful dialogue with the Gatherers, but they respond with phaser fire, rejecting communication.

hope to hostility ['Gatherer camp']

Riker devises a plan using noranium vaporization to create smoke cover for an escape.

confusion to clarity

The crew vaporizes the noranium, creating thick smoke and momentarily escaping Gatherer aggression.

tension to relief

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Contemptuous and defensive — anger at perceived betrayal mixed with a practical desire to protect resources.

Brull initiates and participates in the ambush, sneers 'Cowards' when the away team uses the smoke to withdraw, grabs a bucket of sand to smother the noranium smoke and protect his loot, then stands confronted at phaser-point as the smoke clears.

Goals in this moment
  • Prevent loss of the Gatherers' salvaged material and maintain control of the situation.
  • Preserve Gatherer authority and reputation after the failed ambush.
Active beliefs
  • Force and cunning protect the Gatherer way of life.
  • Public displays of strength and contempt intimidate rivals and uphold status.
Character traits
suspicious territorial pragmatic
Follow Brull's journey

Aggressive and reactive; their hostility turns quickly to anxious protection of material goods when the smoke threatens loss.

The Three Gatherers open phaser fire from concealed positions to pin the away team, then follow Brull by dumping sand on the noranium to smother the smoke when it threatens their spoil and tactical control.

Goals in this moment
  • Enforce Gatherer dominance through ambush and prevent negotiation.
  • Protect or recover the salvaged noranium and other loot from damage.
Active beliefs
  • Diplomacy is a sign of weakness; action secures what matters.
  • Material resources are vital to Gatherer survival and authority and must be defended.
Character traits
coordinated hostile practical
Follow Three Gatherers's journey

Clinically focused; calm execution of procedure without panic, driven by logical assessment of material properties.

Data supplies the precise vaporization temperature for noranium, assists in aiming and firing on the pile, and uses the resulting smoke to withdraw with the team while maintaining analytical composure.

Goals in this moment
  • Provide accurate technical data to enable a safe tactical maneuver.
  • Ensure the team can withdraw under cover with minimal exposure.
Active beliefs
  • Technical knowledge yields predictable, controllable outcomes in crisis.
  • Precision and procedure will reduce risk to the away team.
Character traits
analytical methodical unflappable
Follow Data's journey

Alert and combative; calm warrior focus with a readiness to use force if required.

Worf moves to provide tactical cover, avoids a phaser hit by maneuver, fires on the noranium to help create the smoke screen, then emerges with phaser aimed to confront Brull once the smoke clears.

Goals in this moment
  • Protect fellow officers and prevent friendly casualties.
  • Maintain tactical advantage and deter further Gatherer aggression.
Active beliefs
  • Direct physical readiness is necessary where words fail.
  • A show of disciplined force preserves crew safety and command authority.
Character traits
vigilant martial protective
Follow Worf's journey

Determined and urgent — outwardly controlled command masking the stress of being pinned and the need to preserve diplomatic objectives.

Riker spots the noranium pile, formulates and executes a rapid improvisation, coordinates phaser settings and gives the transport order as the team breaks cover through the smoke.

Goals in this moment
  • Get his away team to safety with minimal casualties.
  • Salvage the diplomatic mission by preserving access to Marouk and the promise of amnesty.
Active beliefs
  • Violence can be forestalled or responded to with quick technical improvisation.
  • Maintaining face and leverage (bringing Marouk, offering amnesty) is critical even after the ambush.
Character traits
decisive resourceful command-focused
Follow William Riker's journey

Focused and pragmatic; comfortable with rapid technical adjustments under pressure.

Geordi, pinned with the team, proposes the phaser setting, adjusts his phaser, fires at the noranium pile, and withdraws through the smoke while remaining practical and technically minded.

Goals in this moment
  • Execute the phaser shot with the correct setting to create the smoke screen.
  • Protect the away team and enable a clean transport pickup.
Active beliefs
  • Engineering judgment can translate to tactical advantage.
  • Clear-headed technical action reduces chaos in combat situations.
Character traits
pragmatic technically adept supportive
Follow Geordi La …'s journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Brull's Bucket of Sand

Brull's battered bucket of sand is used decisively to neutralize the tactical smoke screen by pouring grit over the noranium pile, halting the vaporization and preserving Gatherer salvage; its use converts the immediate tactical advantage back to the Gatherers.

Before: Full and at hand near Brull and the …
After: Emptied onto the noranium pile, now in Brull's …
Before: Full and at hand near Brull and the Gatherers, used for camp maintenance.
After: Emptied onto the noranium pile, now in Brull's possession but partly spilled; it has fulfilled a defensive function.
Gatherer Camp Noranium Pile

The pile of noranium functions as an improvised tactical device: targeted and vaporized by phaser fire to create a dense, choking smoke screen that conceals the away team's movement and forces the Gatherers to react defensively.

Before: Sitting as a ragged heap of metallic ore …
After: Momentarily transformed into a billowing smoke cloud; after …
Before: Sitting as a ragged heap of metallic ore and slag within the Gatherer camp, unlit and exposed near their equipment.
After: Momentarily transformed into a billowing smoke cloud; after sand is poured on it its smoke is smothered and the remaining pile is preserved from complete loss.
Starfleet standard‑issue hand phaser — Enterprise tactical/away-team (handheld)

Standard-issue phasers are the event's operative tools: fired initially by the Gatherers to ambush, then by Riker, Data, Geordi, and Worf to vaporize the noranium pile. They serve both as weapons and as instruments enabling a tactical smoke screen and the threatened confrontation when the smoke clears.

Before: Holstered or held at the ready by both …
After: Still in the participants' hands; Enterprise officers aim …
Before: Holstered or held at the ready by both teams; Gatherers have already fired at the away team.
After: Still in the participants' hands; Enterprise officers aim phasers at Brull and the Gatherers after emerging from the smoke.

Location Details

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Gatherer Camp

The Gatherer Camp is the cramped, ruinous stage for the ambush-turned-diplomacy. Its scavenged scrap and open fire ring supply both the noranium pile used as an improvised smoke generator and concealment for the attackers. The camp's layout shapes the tactics, concealment, and spectacle of the negotiation attempt.

Atmosphere Tension-filled and claustrophobic: flickering firelight, sudden phaser cracks, and choking grey smoke make the scene …
Function Battleground and meeting place — originally staged as a parley site but transformed into an …
Symbolism Embodies cultural ruin and the raw material desperation that fuels Gatherer aggression; the camp symbolizes …
Access Informally restricted: controlled by the Gatherers, hostile to outsiders, and dangerous; not safe for unescorted …
Scavenged circuitry and scrap metal strewn across the clearing providing cover and fuel. Communal fire ring and noranium pile capable of violent chemical reactions when ignited. Nocturnal darkness punctuated by phaser fire and rising, choking smoke.

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Key Dialogue

"WORF: (holding up his phaser) Your words are wasted, Commander. They understand only this."
"RIKER: Data... noranium vaporizes at... ?"
"DATA: Two thousand three hundred fourteen degrees. Of course, noranium carbide alloys vaporize at a slightly higher temperature."