Smoke Screen, Return, and the Amnesty Reveal
Plot Beats
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Brull dismisses the crew's retreat as cowardice but is shocked when they reappear with phasers drawn.
Riker announces Marouk's presence and offer of amnesty, sparking curiosity among the Gatherers.
Who Was There
Characters present in this moment
Contemptuous defensive — quick to protect material interests, skeptical of sudden diplomatic claims, and wary of being outmaneuvered.
Brull opens the confrontation with phaser fire, reacts to the rising smoke by scrambling to save his noranium — grabbing and pouring a bucket of sand to extinguish the vapor cloud — then shows surprise and guarded curiosity when Riker claims Marouk and amnesty are present.
- • Prevent the loss of valuable noranium from his camp.
- • Repel the away team and protect his group's autonomy.
- • Assess whether the sovereign claim presents an opportunity or a ruse.
- • Maintain authority over his followers and possessions.
- • Material resources (noranium) are central to his power and must be defended.
- • Outsiders likely bluff with political claims to manipulate Gatherers.
- • Direct action (sand, force) is necessary to protect immediate assets.
- • Negotiation must be approached with suspicion when accompanied by sudden shows of force.
Hostile then guarded suspicion — defensive about their loot and wary of political overtures masked by force.
The other Gatherers join Brull's initial phaser barrage, assist in pouring sand onto the noranium to extinguish the smoke, and after the away team's reappearance with weapons leveled they fall silent — curious and suspicious at the mention of Marouk and amnesty.
- • Defend the camp and its scavenged resources.
- • Neutralize the immediate technological threat (the smoke).
- • Gauge whether the sovereign claim is credible or a trap.
- • Follow the leader's directives to preserve group standing.
- • Strangers bring danger and likely want to steal their goods.
- • Immediate material protection (sand on the fire) is the rational response.
- • Authority only matters if it can be seen or enforced locally.
- • Political offers may be meaningless without tangible guarantees.
Clinically focused — attentive to the data and procedural execution without visible emotional fluctuation.
Data supplies precise vaporization temperature for noranium, aligns his actions with the team's plan, fires his phaser to vaporize the pile, withdraws under the smoke and later emerges with weapon trained on the Gatherers.
- • Provide technically accurate information to enable the tactic.
- • Execute orders reliably to ensure the smoke screen is effective.
- • Protect himself and teammates by contributing to the withdrawal.
- • Maintain operational composure to preserve credibility with the team.
- • Material properties (temperatures, settings) are predictable and actionable.
- • Following calculated procedure minimizes risk.
- • Technological solutions are preferable to uncertain negotiation under fire.
- • The team's survival depends on precise application of known data.
Alert and combative — confident in the effectiveness of force as deterrent and ready to enforce safety for the away team.
Worf moves to cover the pinned team, avoids incoming fire, joins the coordinated phaser strike on the noranium, offers cover during the withdrawal and then emerges with phaser leveled, punctuating the return with a brusque taunt to Brull.
- • Provide protective cover for the away team during the maneuver.
- • Suppress immediate Gatherer threats to allow the tactical feint to succeed.
- • Reassert dominance to deter further hostilities.
- • Support Riker's strategic objectives through controlled show of force.
- • Strength and readiness are effective deterrents in hostile encounters.
- • The safety of Starfleet personnel requires decisive action.
- • Personal directness (including taunting) can unsettle opponents.
- • Team orders and coordination should be implemented without hesitation.
Controlled urgency — outwardly decisive and authoritative while masking the pressure of an improvised extraction and the need to salvage the negotiation.
Riker identifies the noranium pile as a tactical asset, queries Data for vaporization data, coordinates phaser settings, orders and times the smoke strike, calls for transport, and reappears aiming phasers while announcing Marouk and an amnesty offer.
- • Create cover to extract the away team safely.
- • Turn a tactical retreat into a bargaining position by presenting Marouk and amnesty.
- • Prevent escalation into slaughter.
- • Preserve Federation diplomatic credibility on-scene.
- • Technology can be used non-lethally to gain tactical advantage.
- • A sovereign's presence and an offer of amnesty will materially alter Gatherer incentives.
- • Crew safety takes priority over immediate diplomatic face-saving.
- • The Gatherers respond to combined demonstrations of force and political leverage.
Calm and professional — focused on solving the immediate tactical problem and preserving the team's safety.
Geordi recommends the phaser setting, quickly adjusts and fires to help vaporize the noranium pile, takes cover with the team during the smoke, and emerges with weapon aimed to back Riker's declaration.
- • Select and set the correct phaser parameters to create the smoke.
- • Support the extraction maneuver with technical competence.
- • Keep himself and teammates safe during retreat.
- • Enable the team to reassert control of the scene when the smoke clears.
- • Correct engineering choices materially affect outcomes in the field.
- • He can rapidly adjust gear to meet emergent tactical needs.
- • Team cohesion and technical skill will outmatch improvised local tactics.
- • Non-lethal environmental manipulation is preferable to escalating violence.
Objects Involved
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Brull's bucket of sand is the immediate countermeasure: he grabs it and pours its contents on the noranium to smother the smoke. Narratively it represents the Gatherers' quick, material response to technological tactics and their desire to preserve loot.
The pile of noranium is intentionally targeted by Starfleet phasers to vaporize into a dense, choking smoke screen. Functionally it becomes the tactical tool that conceals the team's movement, enabling withdrawal and a staged reappearance that changes the negotiation dynamic.
Away-team phasers are used in two phases: first to strike the noranium pile at a specific setting to create the smoke screen, and then as weapons leveled at Brull and his followers when the team re-emerges. They function as both improvisational tools and coercive instruments.
Location Details
Places and their significance in this event
The Gatherer Camp serves as the battered, nocturnal arena for both the attempted parley and the tactical exchange. Its scavenged wreckage and central noranium pile provide the physical props that allow Riker to convert a tactical retreat into a political maneuver; the camp's layout channels confrontation and spectacle.
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Key Dialogue
"RIKER: We want to talk --"
"WORF: Your words are wasted, Commander. They understand only this."
"DATA: Two thousand three hundred fourteen degrees. Of course, noranium carbide alloys vaporize at a slightly higher temperature."