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S3E13
· Deja Q

Powerless, Time Running Out

In Picard's ready room the technical failure becomes moral ballast: Geordi delivers a blunt debrief that the tractor beam drained critical power and they lack the time or energy to re‑stabilize Klyo. The revelation crystallizes the crisis — millions face annihilation — while Q, stripped of his powers, pleads for sanctuary. His confession both shocks and enrages the crew. Picard must reconcile the urgent engineering defeat with the new, fraught responsibility of housing an erstwhile god now human and vulnerable. This beat is a turning point: it tightens the clock and forces riskier, ethically fraught choices.

Plot Beats

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Picard records the crew's failure to stabilize the moon's orbit and hints at Q's involvement as the cause.

frustration to suspicion ["Captain's Ready Room"]

Geordi briefs Picard on the failed tractor beam attempt, admitting they lack the power and time to avert disaster.

urgency to resignation ["Captain's Ready Room"]

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Urgent and conflicted: outwardly controlled command presence masking disgust and the private weight of responsibility for millions of lives.

Picard receives Geordi's engineering debrief, absorbs the moral consequences of the failed tractor attempt, confronts Q with restrained loathing, and ultimately authorizes confinement — converting technical failure into an ethical command decision.

Goals in this moment
  • Clarify the technical options and constraints for saving Bre'el Four
  • Protect the crew and planet by making a defensible command decision
  • Contain the immediate threat posed by Q while holding to Starfleet principles
Active beliefs
  • Lives of millions outweigh individual sentiment
  • Q is dangerous and untrustworthy even if currently powerless
  • Command requires decisive action under uncertainty
Character traits
disciplined morally serious command-responsible restrained indignation
Follow Jean-Luc Picard's journey

Clinically curious with emerging warmth: primarily analytical but participating with mild, novel amusement at the humanistic anomaly.

Data scans Q with a tricorder, reports that Q 'is reading as fully human,' and offers a clinical aside about an echo; his analytic verification lends objective weight to the crew's judgment about Q's new state.

Goals in this moment
  • Provide objective biometric verification of Q's physiological state
  • Collect diagnostic data that informs command decisions
  • Observe human behavior for study
Active beliefs
  • Empirical evidence should inform command choices
  • Q's physiological state can be measured and used to assess claims
  • Knowledge accumulation is valuable even under crisis
Character traits
analytical curious methodical detachedly observant
Follow Data's journey

Sternly satisfied and duty-bound: confident in enforcement, showing little sympathy and some grim pleasure in executing orders.

Worf advocates immediate incarceration, physically seizes control of Q's movement, insists on conveying him to the brig, and closes the turbolift doors — enforcing Picard's order with martial relish.

Goals in this moment
  • Remove a perceived threat from the command environment
  • Enforce ship security protocols without delay
  • Demonstrate loyalty and reliability in following Picard's orders
Active beliefs
  • Security protocol justifies immediate detention of dangerous individuals
  • Q cannot be trusted even in a powerless state
  • Physical containment is the most reliable safeguard
Character traits
disciplined stern procedural unsentimental
Follow Worf's journey

Angry and accusatory: convinced of Q's culpability and impatient for punitive action or accountability.

Riker directly accuses Q of causing the crisis, voices crew suspicion and moral anger, and exchanges a knowing glance with Picard as the decision to confine Q is made.

Goals in this moment
  • Hold Q accountable for the apparent catastrophe
  • Support Picard and the crew by ensuring an immediate safety response
  • Prevent further manipulation by Q
Active beliefs
  • Q is likely responsible and dangerous
  • Direct confrontation is necessary under threat
  • Protecting innocents justifies strict measures
Character traits
confrontational loyal impatient accusatory
Follow William Riker's journey

Concerned and attentive: emotionally responsive to Q's fear and focused on conveying the human element to command decisions.

Troi moves toward Picard, reads Q's affect as terrified and provides empathic confirmation that Q's emotional state is authentic, pressing the human reality behind Q's theatrics.

Goals in this moment
  • Ensure Picard recognizes the human (mortality/terror) dimensions of Q's condition
  • Mitigate reflexive punitive responses by emphasizing emotion and vulnerability
  • Maintain crew morale by clarifying emotional truth
Active beliefs
  • Emotional truth matters to moral decisions
  • Q's fear, if genuine, changes the ethical calculus
  • Counsel should influence command by providing human context
Character traits
empathetic observant supportive ethical-minded
Follow Deanna Troi's journey

Frustrated and professional: bitter acceptance of system limitations with a measured readiness to continue troubleshooting.

Geordi delivers a blunt, technical debrief: the tractor beam flexed, they could not transfer sufficient kinetic energy, and they lack time and power. He accepts responsibility and offers to recheck rules—resigned but focused.

Goals in this moment
  • Convey the true technical limits so command can make informed choices
  • Find any remaining technical workaround or overlooked procedure
  • Protect the ship by accurately reporting constraints
Active beliefs
  • Honest technical accounting is essential to sound command decisions
  • There are no miraculous engineering solutions without more power or time
  • He must try every avenue even if it seems exhausted
Character traits
pragmatic technically authoritative resigned methodical
Follow Geordi La …'s journey
Q
primary

Desperate and defensive: oscillating between grandiosity and genuine fear, attempting to persuade the crew of his sincerity while protecting his interests.

Q declares he has been stripped of Continuum powers, pleads—almost vulnerably—for sanctuary aboard the Enterprise, explains his mortality was chosen, and tries to leverage personal connection to Picard to gain sympathy.

Goals in this moment
  • Secure refuge aboard the Enterprise to escape whatever pursues him
  • Convince Picard and crew that he truly lacks powers
  • Leverage his relationship with Picard to avoid punishment
Active beliefs
  • The Continuum has punished him and removed his powers
  • Appealing to Picard's compassion will grant him sanctuary
  • He can still influence events through words and emotional leverage
Character traits
theatrical defensive manipulative vulnerable
Follow Q's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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USS Enterprise-D — Main Bridge Aft Turbolift Doors

The aft turbolift doors serve as a physical barrier and procedural punctuation: Worf closes them as he escorts Q out, sealing Q's exile from the ready room and converting Picard's order into immediate, tactile containment.

Before: Open or ready as bridge/ready-room access; part of …
After: Closed and sealed, transporting Q toward the brig; …
Before: Open or ready as bridge/ready-room access; part of normal circulation between compartments.
After: Closed and sealed, transporting Q toward the brig; functioning as a secure transit barrier.
Data's Tricorder

Data uses the palm-sized tricorder to sweep Q's body, producing a clear biometric readout that objectively confirms Q 'reads as fully human.' The tricorder functions as evidentiary proof, shifting the debate from speculation to verifiable fact.

Before: In Data's possession and operational; stored as standard …
After: Remains in Data's possession after scanning; data likely …
Before: In Data's possession and operational; stored as standard diagnostic equipment.
After: Remains in Data's possession after scanning; data likely logged to the ship's systems as a diagnostic record.
Captain Picard's Captain's Log — Sector 487 / Lal Incident

Picard's supplemental captain's log is used as a framing device (V.O.) to summarize the situation and assert that Q's arrival clarifies the cause of the moon's instability — it orients the scene morally and procedurally by documenting events for command accountability.

Before: Stored in ship computer as a time-stamped audio …
After: Active in narration (the supplemental log has been …
Before: Stored in ship computer as a time-stamped audio file; not currently playing until Picard's V.O. begins.
After: Active in narration (the supplemental log has been recorded and is part of mission archives); remains stored for archival use.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Brig (USS Enterprise-D)

The brig is invoked as the immediate destination for Q — a cold, secured cell representing containment and a finalizing response to perceived danger; its mention converts ethical debate into concrete custody.

Atmosphere Clinical, punitive, and foreboding when referenced — symbolizes removal of influence and enforced isolation.
Function Holding cell for Q; a pragmatic safeguard for crew safety and legal containment.
Symbolism Embodies institutional justice and the moral cost of exile; physical manifestation of command's punitive power.
Access Heavily guarded and restricted to security personnel and authorized officers.
Reinforced doors and sterile metallic surfaces (implied) Hissing hydraulics and ventilation hum (implied) Guard presence at the threshold (implied by Worf's escort)
Deep Space - USS Enterprise and USS Hood Separation Maneuver

The Enterprise's orbital position provides the vantage and responsibility: the ship is the staging ground for rescue attempts and the place offering sanctuary to Q while monitoring Klyo's trajectory. Orbitality compresses time and converts technical limits into moral urgency.

Atmosphere Clinically tense with an undercurrent of dread — a vessel carrying both refuge and judgment.
Function Operational hub and refuge; platform for tractor-beam attempts and Q's confinement.
Symbolism Represents institutional authority and lifeline between technical capability and the threatened world below.
Access Ship command restricts certain areas to senior staff; overall ship controlled by command hierarchy.
Console readouts and sensor pings (implied) The silent vista of Klyo visible externally (implied) A steady hum of ship systems and low alarms
Klyo (Moon)

Klyo, the destabilized moon, functions as the immediate, visible antagonist: its failing orbit is the technical cause discussed in the room and the human-scale threat that forces every command choice.

Atmosphere Menacing and inexorable when described — an impersonal cosmic threat that amplifies moral stakes.
Function Plot catalyst and ticking clock responsible for the technical debrief and ethical urgency.
Symbolism Embodies collateral human cost and the limits of human/Starfleet control in the face of cosmic …
Described as 'falling out of the sky' and trailing dust and fragments (implied) Sensor readouts and red alarms tracking its destabilization (implied)
Western Continent (Bre'el Four) — Impact Zone

The Western Continent of Bre'el Four is the human-scale stage of potential annihilation — referenced to emphasize the millions endangered and to make the technical failure morally immediate.

Atmosphere Imagined panic and impending catastrophe — voices of civilians compressed into urgent moral weight.
Function Stakes location that justifies desperate technical and ethical choices.
Symbolism Represents the aggregated humanity whose lives ground Picard's decisions.
Mention of 'millions of people down there' watching the moon fall Implied coastal plains and settlements facing tidal failure (from synopsis description)

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Key Dialogue

"GEORDI: "We couldn't drive the tractor emitters hard enough, Captain... The beam was flexing, and it was impossible to transfer enough kinetic energy to the moon...""
"PICARD: "Return the moon to its orbit.""
"Q: "I have no powers.""