Data's Positronic Systems Flatline
Plot Beats
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Geordi runs diagnostic scans over Data, eyes on a beeping monitor as he cross-references recorded norms with the current, wildly erratic readings; Riker watches tensely while Geordi admits he can't stabilize Data and asks for an expert like Maddox, signaling the problem exceeds their immediate skill set.
The scanner's steady blip collapses into a flat, steady tone and the line goes flat; Geordi's stunned finality—'He's gone.'—converts diagnostic alarm into immediate, devastating loss as Data's functions cease.
Who Was There
Characters present in this moment
Not present; functions as imagined competence that underscores current helplessness.
Maddox is invoked by Geordi as the name of an external specialist who might diagnose or repair Data; he does not appear in-scene but functions as a narrative placeholder for unavailable expertise.
- • (Implied) Provide specialized diagnostic and repair expertise for positronic systems if summoned.
- • Serve as a potential external resource to restore Data's functions.
- • There exist outside specialists with knowledge beyond the Enterprise crew's capacity.
- • Calling for such experts is a rational step when onboard resources are insufficient.
Non-emotive due to incapacitation; his absence creates an emotional vacuum in others.
Data is the subject of Geordi's scans; he is inert and non-responsive during this exchange, his recorded norms referenced against live telemetry before his systems collapse to a flatline.
- • (No active goals due to incapacitation) Maintain integrity of positronic systems (implicit).
- • Serve as the critical analytic tool whose availability determines tactical options (implicit).
- • Unable to form beliefs while incapacitated; prior operational design presumes repairability and diagnosability.
Tense, apprehensive; masking the impulse to immediately order broader measures while calculating next operational steps.
Riker stands by watching tensely, absorbing Geordi's technical narration and the sudden collapse of the scanner's blip; he is a silent witness to the moment the situation escalates.
- • Assess how Data's loss changes immediate tactical and mission priorities.
- • Protect the crew and preserve mission capability by directing appropriate responses.
- • Starfleet protocol and chain-of-command require measured responses, but decisive action is necessary when assets are lost.
- • Data's analytical capacity is mission-critical; without it, risk to away teams and ship systems increases substantially.
Frantic technical focus that fractures into shocked grief and the cold, professional recognition of loss — outwardly procedural, inwardly panicked.
Geordi operates the handheld diagnostic unit, narrating his comparisons aloud, expressing procedural desperation and then collapsing into stunned acceptance when the scanner flatlines; his hands and voice attempt to bridge engineering procedure and personal loss.
- • Diagnose Data's malfunction quickly to restore functionality.
- • Find an external specialist or solution (e.g., Maddox) to repair or understand Data's failure.
- • Data's positronic systems can be diagnosed and repaired with sufficient expertise and data.
- • Losing Data would critically impair the away team's ability to interface with the Iconian console and jeopardize the mission.
Objects Involved
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The palm-sized medical diagnostic scanner, held and operated by Geordi, provides real-time telemetry of Data's positronic systems; its steady beeping transforms into a flat, sterile tone that visually and audibly confirms Data's cessation and catalyzes the emotional and procedural shift in the room.
Location Details
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Main Engineering serves as the crucible where technical theory meets bodily risk: it houses the diagnostic procedure, the scanner, and the interpersonal collapse that follows Data's flatline. The space converts a clinical procedure into an emotional turning point that redefines the mission's tone.
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Key Dialogue
"GEORDI: "I don't know how to help him. But comparing recorded norms for Data to the current readings, it's clear that all his functions are going crazy. If we had an expert -- Maddox, or somebody --""
"GEORDI: "He's gone.""