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S1E15
· Angel One

Riker Demands Urgency as Virus Countdown Narrows

On the Enterprise bridge, Commander Riker confronts Data about the delay in reaching the Neutral Zone, emphasizing the critical stakes involved. Data’s precise calculation reveals only forty-eight minutes remain for Doctor Crusher to develop an inoculant against the mutating airborne virus before a Romulan attack threatens the border outpost and the USS Berlin. This tense exchange underscores the razor-thin margin for error, heightening the crew’s urgency and spotlighting Riker’s growing frustration and determination. The event pivots to a moral challenge as Riker turns to Trent, signaling a shift from tactical urgency to ethical confrontation amid mounting crises.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Riker demands an explanation for the delay in heading to the Neutral Zone, asserting urgency and command pressure.

authority to impatience

Data explains the precise timing calculations showing that Doctor Crusher still has forty-eight minutes to develop the virus inoculant before a Romulan attack threatens the border outpost and USS Berlin.

calm calculation to tense urgency

Tasha Yar energizes the group with the realization that time remains to act against the crisis.

uncertainty to energized hope

Riker acknowledges the narrow margin of forty-eight minutes with grim acceptance, highlighting the critical stakes.

hope to grim realism

Data clarifies the idiom 'splitting hairs' and underscores the vital importance of every minute for those infected.

detached logic to poignant urgency

Data updates the countdown timer to forty-seven minutes, intensifying the ticking clock scenario.

steady urgency to heightened tension

Riker contemplates the urgency Data presents, weighing the precarious situation.

contemplation to tense resolve

Riker thanks Data for precise adherence to orders and ends communication, signaling readiness to act.

professional tension to controlled determination

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Energized hopefulness mixed with practical determination.

Lieutenant Tasha Yar injects an energized optimistic tone into the exchange, highlighting that despite looming threats, there remains actionable time. Her brief but hopeful intervention contrasts the tension, providing emotional uplift and reinforcing the crew’s resolve to act.

Goals in this moment
  • To emphasize that time remains to address the crisis.
  • To bolster crew morale and encourage proactive responses.
Active beliefs
  • There is always potential to influence outcomes positively if time allows.
  • Maintaining morale is crucial during high-pressure situations.
Character traits
energetic optimistic supportive pragmatic
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Clinically detached yet aware of the gravity of the situation; focused on delivering accurate information.

Data responds with unemotional precision, detailing the exact timing left before a Romulan attack imperils the Enterprise’s allies, using logical deduction based on warp speed and threat endurance. He corrects his own timing in real-time referencing the ship’s consoles, demonstrating methodical accuracy and commitment to mission data.

Goals in this moment
  • To communicate precise, factual information about timing and risks.
  • To clarify the meaning of Riker’s orders within logical parameters.
  • To support the command team with reliable data for decision-making.
  • To correct any miscalculations promptly.
Active beliefs
  • Accurate data is essential for mission success.
  • Logical clarity benefits decision-making under pressure.
  • Orders must be interpreted within their actual meaning rather than emotional impulse.
  • Every minute counts in crisis scenarios.
Character traits
logical precise methodical calm duty-bound
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Frustrated impatience coupled with resolute determination; strategically cautious but driven by mounting pressure.

Commander Riker confronts Data with a pointed demand about the delay to the Neutral Zone, revealing his mounting frustration and urgency. He weighs Data’s detailed timing with skepticism yet allows room for possibility. Ultimately, Riker asserts command authority with a mix of irritation and respect before turning to Trent to invoke a moral imperative, signaling a shift toward ethical challenge.

Goals in this moment
  • To hold Data accountable for the delay in reaching the Neutral Zone.
  • To assess the realistic time left to develop the viral inoculant.
  • To maintain command control under increasing pressure.
  • To challenge Trent with a moral imperative reflecting the stakes involved.
Active beliefs
  • Time is critically scarce and every minute lost risks mission failure.
  • Starfleet’s duty to protect allies and uphold ethical standards is paramount.
  • Precise adherence to orders is essential but must be balanced with moral considerations.
  • Moral accountability is necessary when lives are at stake.
Character traits
authoritative decisive frustrated strategic morally engaged
Follow William Riker's journey

Passive but implicated by Riker’s invocation; poised as a symbol of moral responsibility.

Trent is addressed by Riker as a moral witness, symbolizing the shift from tactical calculations to ethical challenge. Though silent, his presence is invoked as a figure representing local authority and the moral dimension of the unfolding crisis.

Goals in this moment
  • To serve as a moral witness to Starfleet’s ethical demands.
  • To uphold Beata’s authority while navigating the ethical tension.
Active beliefs
  • Moral imperatives hold weight in political and cultural negotiations.
  • Silent presence can be a form of power and accountability.
Character traits
dutiful subordinate formal silent observer
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Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Tactical Operations Console (Tactical Sensor Display / Science One Console)

The Ops Station Console serves as the interface Data uses to monitor and update precise time calculations regarding the Romulan attack timeline and the virus inoculant development window. It grounds Data’s logical pronouncements in verified ship data, reinforcing the tension and urgency communicated to Riker.

Before: Fully operational on the Enterprise main bridge, actively …
After: Continues in active use, updating real-time parameters for …
Before: Fully operational on the Enterprise main bridge, actively displaying mission-critical data.
After: Continues in active use, updating real-time parameters for ongoing tactical decisions.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Neutral Zone

The Enterprise's Main Bridge is the command center where this tense confrontation takes place, serving as the nerve center for decisions balancing mission urgency and ethical challenges. The bridge atmosphere reflects mounting pressure and rapid information exchange critical to the unfolding crisis.

Atmosphere Tense, focused, with undercurrents of frustration and urgency.
Function Decision-making hub and stage for command conflict.
Symbolism Represents command authority and the burden of leadership under crisis.
Access Restricted to senior officers and command team during crisis operations.
Glowing control panels Ambient low hum of ship systems

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Key Dialogue

"RIKER: I gave you a direct order to head for the Neutral Zone immediately. Explain the delay."
"DATA: To be precise, Commander, you ordered me to reach the Neutral Zone "before it is too late. I have computed the length of time the border outpost and USS Berlin can safely withstand a Romulan attack... deducted our time to destination at maximum warp speed. That leaves Doctor Crusher with forty-eight more minutes to complete her research and develop an innoculant to the virus."
"DATA: Splitting hairs is a figure of speech I recognize, Commander. Speaking for those whose hair is soon to be split, forty-eight minutes may make a great deal of difference."