Narrative Web

Mediator Unmasked

Picard aggressively shifts tactics when Data's literal translation proves inadequate for Riva's nuanced communication needs. What begins as professional frustration escalates into a searing personal attack, with Picard accusing Riva of being 'all show' and hiding behind his Chorus. The confrontation turns visceral as Picard deliberately provokes Riva by calling him a 'fake,' gambling that emotional shock might break through Riva's despair. This explosive moment marks both the nadir of their relationship and a desperate intervention strategy—Picard's verbal violence intentionally mirrors the physical violence threatening the peace talks, making Riva's crisis impossible to ignore. When Riva flees, Picard immediately recognizes the gambit's partial success, pursuing him with Data to capitalize on the emotional breakthrough.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Picard presses Riva to adapt, urging him to 'use' Data as his Chorus and to exploit the resources available rather than lament what was lost.

frustration to insistence

Riva collapses inward—he declares he has 'nothing' without his Chorus—while Picard escalates to personal attack, calling him a fake and accusing him of hiding behind the Chorus to provoke a reaction.

despair to confrontation

The provocation escalates physically as Riva makes a threatening step; Data labels Picard's tactic an attempt to provoke, and Picard delivers a grim, practical threat—'A lot of people are going to die'—raising the stakes.

anger to urgent dread

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Frustration giving way to controlled aggression

Picard shifts from frustration to aggressive confrontation, deliberately provoking Riva with accusations of being 'all show' and a 'fake'. He employs harsh tactics hoping to shock Riva into action, then quickly pursues him once the emotional breakthrough occurs.

Goals in this moment
  • Provoke Riva into action by shattering his emotional barrier
  • Break through Riva's dependence on his Chorus to enable mediation
Active beliefs
  • Desperate situations require drastic measures
  • Riva's true abilities lie beyond his technological crutch
Character traits
Frustrated Calculating Aggressive
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Logically concerned, unperturbed by the emotional exchange

Data attempts to literally translate Riva's signs, acknowledging the inadequacy but remaining calm and logical throughout the exchange. He translates Riva's defiance and follows Picard to pursue him after the confrontation.

Goals in this moment
  • Accurately translate the interaction despite its limitations
  • Assist Picard in any capacity required
Active beliefs
  • Literal translation serves basic but not nuanced communication
  • Following Picard's lead is the correct course of action
Character traits
Logical Precise Neutral
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Concerned but tactfully restrained

Troi quietly advises Picard to change tactics when she sees the current approach failing, demonstrating her intuitive grasp of the emotional stakes before withdrawing from the direct confrontation.

Goals in this moment
  • Guide Picard toward more effective communication with Riva
  • Prevent further emotional escalation if possible
Active beliefs
  • Riva's emotional state requires careful handling
  • Picard's current approach is counterproductive
Character traits
Empathetic Strategic Observant
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Angry yet calculating, masking deep despair with defiance

Riva reacts sharply to Data's literal translation, expressing frustration at the lack of nuance. When Picard accuses him of being a 'fake', Riva first responds with anger, then smirking defiance before retreating in emotional turmoil.

Goals in this moment
  • Express the necessity of nuanced communication
  • Maintain dignity despite technological dependence being exposed
Active beliefs
  • Literal translation fails to convey his true intent
  • His value as a mediator is compromised without the Chorus
Character traits
Frustrated Defiant Emotionally vulnerable
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Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Riva's Chorus Communication Device

Riva's Chorus Communication Device is absent but its absence is keenly felt, becoming the crux of the confrontation. Its breakdown directly leads to Riva's communicative struggles and Picard's frustration, highlighting the device's vital role in Riva's identity and profession.

Before: Non-functional, absent from the scene
After: Remains non-functional and absent
Before: Non-functional, absent from the scene
After: Remains non-functional and absent

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Observation Lounge (USS Enterprise-D)

The Observation Lounge serves as the tense meeting point where Picard's confrontation with Riva reaches its boiling point. The vast starlit viewports contrast with the claustrophobic tension of the argument, amplifying the emotional stakes.

Atmosphere Claustrophobic tension under the guise of formal diplomacy
Function Meeting point for high-stakes confrontation
Symbolism Represents the fragile veneer of diplomacy shattering under pressure
Access Limited to senior officers and Riva
Starlit viewports providing cold, distant backdrop Central conference table serving as psychological battleground

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 6
Causal

"Data's study and rapid acquisition of gestural languages directly enables Picard's tactical idea to use Data as Riva's temporary translator at the summit."

Binary to Blur: Data's Silent Mastery
S2E6 · Star Trek: The Next Generation …
Causal

"Data's study and rapid acquisition of gestural languages directly enables Picard's tactical idea to use Data as Riva's temporary translator at the summit."

Silent Crisis, Dancing Hands
S2E6 · Star Trek: The Next Generation …
Causal

"Picard's deliberate provocation—labeling Riva a 'fake'—directly triggers Riva to bolt from the room, shifting the crisis from argument to immediate, personal collapse."

The Limits of Literal Translation
S2E6 · Star Trek: The Next Generation …
Causal

"Picard's deliberate provocation—labeling Riva a 'fake'—directly triggers Riva to bolt from the room, shifting the crisis from argument to immediate, personal collapse."

The Shattering Point
S2E6 · Star Trek: The Next Generation …
Escalation

"The proposal that Data translate for Riva sparks a sequence of exchanges (Data's objections, literal translation concerns) that escalate when Picard presses Riva and accuses him of hiding behind the Chorus—provoking an intense emotional reaction."

The Limits of Literal Translation
S2E6 · Star Trek: The Next Generation …
Escalation

"The proposal that Data translate for Riva sparks a sequence of exchanges (Data's objections, literal translation concerns) that escalate when Picard presses Riva and accuses him of hiding behind the Chorus—provoking an intense emotional reaction."

The Shattering Point
S2E6 · Star Trek: The Next Generation …
What this causes 6
Causal

"Picard's deliberate provocation—labeling Riva a 'fake'—directly triggers Riva to bolt from the room, shifting the crisis from argument to immediate, personal collapse."

The Limits of Literal Translation
S2E6 · Star Trek: The Next Generation …
Causal

"Picard's deliberate provocation—labeling Riva a 'fake'—directly triggers Riva to bolt from the room, shifting the crisis from argument to immediate, personal collapse."

The Shattering Point
S2E6 · Star Trek: The Next Generation …
Escalation

"The proposal that Data translate for Riva sparks a sequence of exchanges (Data's objections, literal translation concerns) that escalate when Picard presses Riva and accuses him of hiding behind the Chorus—provoking an intense emotional reaction."

The Limits of Literal Translation
S2E6 · Star Trek: The Next Generation …
Escalation

"The proposal that Data translate for Riva sparks a sequence of exchanges (Data's objections, literal translation concerns) that escalate when Picard presses Riva and accuses him of hiding behind the Chorus—provoking an intense emotional reaction."

The Shattering Point
S2E6 · Star Trek: The Next Generation …
NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Riva's flight from the Observation Lounge leads Picard to find and reach him in his quarters, setting up the intimate confrontation that reignites Riva's agency."

The Turning Point
S2E6 · Star Trek: The Next Generation …
NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Riva's flight from the Observation Lounge leads Picard to find and reach him in his quarters, setting up the intimate confrontation that reignites Riva's agency."

Turning Disadvantage into Strength
S2E6 · Star Trek: The Next Generation …

Key Dialogue

"PICARD: "You're right. Maybe you are all show.""
"PICARD: "You hide behind your Chorus. You're a fake.""
"RIVA (via Data): "You are attempting to provoke me. It is not going to work.""
"PICARD: "That's too bad. A lot of people are going to die.""