Narrative Web
S3E20
· Tin Man

The Hood’s Phantom Warning: A Mission Specialist’s Shadow Arrives

The Enterprise’s routine mission to chart the Hayashi system is violently disrupted when the USS Hood—a ship Picard knows well—abruptly materializes on an intercept course, its urgency unannounced and its presence unsettling. Captain DeSoto, an old friend of Picard’s, delivers a cryptic, high-priority directive via a secured channel, his tone laced with the kind of caution that suggests Romulan eavesdropping is a real and immediate threat. The Hood’s sudden appearance and just-as-sudden departure—without explanation—escalates the tension, signaling that the mission’s stakes have shifted dramatically. DeSoto reveals that Starfleet has assigned a mission specialist to the Enterprise: Tam Elbrun, a name that triggers visceral reactions from Riker and Troi. Riker’s sharp intake of breath and Troi’s visible distress at the mention of Elbrun’s name foreshadow the Ghorusda disaster—a traumatic event tied to Elbrun’s past—and hint at the emotional and psychological minefield the crew is about to navigate. Picard, ever the strategist, masks his own unease but immediately recognizes the gravity of the situation: this is no ordinary assignment. The Hood’s departure leaves the Enterprise crew in a state of heightened alert, their original objectives now overshadowed by an unspoken urgency. The stage is set for a collision of past and present, as Elbrun’s arrival forces the crew to confront not just the mission’s dangers, but the ghosts of their own histories. This moment is a narrative pivot—a turning point that reframes the entire mission, introducing a volatile wildcard whose presence could either save them or doom them all.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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The Enterprise, while charting the Hayashi system, is unexpectedly intercepted by the USS Hood, disrupting their routine mission and creating a sense of mystery.

Routine to curious

Captain DeSoto of the USS Hood contacts Picard, revealing that Starfleet has new, top-priority orders that require the Enterprise's speed and expertise, delivered via a mission specialist due to Romulan eavesdropping concerns.

Puzzled to urgent

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Cautiously urgent, with a underlying sense of camaraderie and respect for Picard and the Enterprise crew.

DeSoto appears via a secured channel from the Hood’s Ready Room, delivering cryptic and urgent orders to Picard. His tone is cautious, laced with humor to ease tension, but his urgency is palpable. He reveals Elbrun’s name with a sigh, acknowledging the crew’s potential reservations but emphasizing the mission’s priority. His abrupt departure leaves the Enterprise crew in a state of heightened alert, signaling the gravity of the situation.

Goals in this moment
  • Convey Starfleet’s orders with the necessary urgency and secrecy to avoid Romulan eavesdropping.
  • Prepare the *Enterprise* crew for the challenges ahead, acknowledging the emotional weight of Elbrun’s arrival.
Active beliefs
  • The mission’s success depends on the *Enterprise*’s speed and the crew’s ability to cooperate with Elbrun despite past traumas.
  • Romulan eavesdropping is a real and immediate threat that necessitates caution and discretion.
Character traits
Urgent Cautious Diplomatic Humorous Authoritative
Follow DeSoto's journey
Tam Elbrun
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Not physically present, but his name alone evokes fear, apprehension, and unresolved trauma in those who know his history.

Elbrun is mentioned by name as the mission specialist assigned to the Enterprise, triggering strong negative reactions from Riker and Troi. His past involvement in the Ghorusda disaster is foreshadowed, setting up his volatile and traumatic history. Though physically absent, his presence looms large, casting a shadow over the crew’s morale and the mission’s potential success.

Goals in this moment
  • (Inferred) Complete the mission successfully, despite his personal demons and the crew’s reservations.
  • (Inferred) Prove his worth and reliability to Starfleet and the *Enterprise* crew, despite his past failures.
Active beliefs
  • (Inferred) His telepathic abilities are crucial to the mission’s success, but his mental state is fragile.
  • (Inferred) The crew’s distrust of him is justified, but he is determined to overcome it.
Character traits
Traumatized Volatile Highly Skilled (telepathy) Emotionally Complex Potentially Unstable
Follow Tam Elbrun's journey

Calmly analytical but inwardly unsettled by the sudden shift in mission and the emotional undercurrents surrounding Elbrun’s name.

Picard stands at the center of the bridge, his posture shifting from relaxed command to alert skepticism as the USS Hood materializes unannounced. He engages in a tense exchange with DeSoto, probing the urgency and secrecy of the mission. His puzzled expression deepens when Elbrun’s name is mentioned, and he subtly observes Riker’s and Troi’s reactions, masking his own unease. He dismisses Troi’s request to join him, revealing his strategic caution and desire to control the introduction of Elbrun, a wildcard with a troubled past.

Goals in this moment
  • Understand the true nature and urgency of the new mission without revealing his own concerns.
  • Assess the crew’s reactions to Elbrun’s name to gauge the potential impact on morale and mission success.
Active beliefs
  • Secrecy and haste in Starfleet’s orders suggest a high-stakes, potentially dangerous situation.
  • Elbrun’s presence is a liability that must be managed carefully, given the crew’s visceral reactions.
Character traits
Strategic Diplomatic Observant Cautious Authoritative
Follow Jean-Luc Picard's journey

Neutral and analytical, with a subtle undercurrent of curiosity about Elbrun’s unique role and the mission’s implications.

Data reacts to the Hood’s approach on the Ops panel, reporting the intercept to Picard with his usual calm precision. He later accompanies Picard to greet Elbrun, his demeanor contrasting sharply with the crew’s emotional reactions. His analytical nature and lack of emotional bias make him a steadying presence amid the tension, though his curiosity about Elbrun’s role is subtly evident in his focused attention.

Goals in this moment
  • Provide Picard with accurate, unbiased information to aid his decision-making.
  • Observe Elbrun’s interactions to assess his reliability and potential impact on the crew.
Active beliefs
  • Elbrun’s presence is an anomaly that requires careful observation and analysis.
  • His own lack of emotional bias makes him an ideal observer in emotionally charged situations.
Character traits
Analytical Calm Curious Supportive Unemotional
Follow Data's journey

Startled and apprehensive, with a underlying current of protective instinct toward the crew and mission.

Riker stands beside Picard, his initial skepticism about the Hood’s urgency giving way to shock when Elbrun’s name is mentioned. His sharp intake of breath and tightened jaw betray his deep-seated trauma, tied to the Ghorusda disaster. He engages in light banter with DeSoto but remains visibly tense, his body language suggesting a mix of apprehension and protective caution. His reaction foreshadows the emotional and psychological challenges Elbrun’s arrival will bring.

Goals in this moment
  • Assess the potential threats posed by Elbrun’s presence, both to the mission and the crew’s stability.
  • Support Picard while subtly signaling his concerns about Elbrun’s reliability and the risks of revisiting past traumas.
Active beliefs
  • Elbrun’s involvement in the *Ghorusda disaster* makes him an unstable and potentially dangerous asset.
  • The crew’s past traumas could resurface, jeopardizing the mission’s success.
Character traits
Protective Skeptical Traumatized Loyal Observant
Follow William Riker's journey

Distressed and anxious, with a strong sense of responsibility to support Elbrun and shield the crew from potential harm.

Troi is visibly distressed at the mention of Elbrun’s name, her Betazoid empathy amplifying the emotional weight of the situation. She steps forward anxiously, requesting to join Picard in greeting Elbrun, and reveals her past as his therapist. Her body language—gripping her armrest, stepping forward—suggests a deep personal connection to Elbrun’s trauma and a desire to mitigate the fallout of his arrival. Her emotional reaction underscores the gravity of Elbrun’s history and the potential risks of his presence.

Goals in this moment
  • Advocate for Elbrun’s well-being and ensure he is greeted with understanding and care, given his traumatic past.
  • Protect the crew from the emotional fallout of Elbrun’s arrival, leveraging her therapeutic skills and personal history with him.
Active beliefs
  • Elbrun’s mental state is fragile, and his arrival could destabilize the crew if not handled with care.
  • Her past relationship with Elbrun gives her unique insight into how to navigate his presence on the *Enterprise*.
Character traits
Empathetic Protective Anxious Insightful Determined
Follow Deanna Troi's journey
Wesley Crusher

Wesley is mentioned as being at the Conn station but does not speak or act in this event. His presence …

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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USS Hood

The classified top-priority orders are the tangible manifestation of Starfleet’s directives, delivered by Captain DeSoto aboard the *USS Hood*. These orders assign Tam Elbrun as the mission specialist and emphasize the urgency and secrecy of the assignment. The orders’ classified nature and the need for physical delivery—rather than subspace transmission—highlight the high stakes and potential dangers of the mission. Their content triggers visceral reactions from Riker and Troi, foreshadowing the emotional and psychological challenges ahead.

Before: In the possession of Captain DeSoto aboard the …
After: Transferred to the *Enterprise* via Tam Elbrun, who …
Before: In the possession of Captain DeSoto aboard the *USS Hood*, ready to be delivered to the *Enterprise*.
After: Transferred to the *Enterprise* via Tam Elbrun, who will bring them aboard and brief the crew on the mission details.
Enterprise-D Forward Operations Console

The Ops panel on the *Enterprise* bridge is the technical interface through which Data detects the *USS Hood*’s approach. Its sensors and readouts provide critical information about the intercept, allowing the crew to respond swiftly to the unexpected arrival. The panel’s amber and red LEDs pulse as it processes the incoming data, contributing to the tense atmosphere on the bridge. Data’s interaction with the panel underscores the crew’s reliance on technology to navigate the sudden shift in mission.

Before: Operational and monitoring the *Enterprise*’s surroundings, with no …
After: Active and processing data related to the *Hood*’s …
Before: Operational and monitoring the *Enterprise*’s surroundings, with no immediate threats detected.
After: Active and processing data related to the *Hood*’s intercept and the subsequent mission briefing.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Bridge of the USS Enterprise-D

The *Enterprise*’s main bridge is the command center where the crew’s reactions to the *USS Hood*’s arrival and the revelation of Tam Elbrun’s assignment unfold. The bridge’s layout—with Picard at the center, Riker beside him, and the rest of the crew at their stations—creates a dynamic tension between authority and emotional response. The forward viewscreen displays DeSoto’s image, drawing the crew’s attention to the secured channel transmission. The bridge’s operational atmosphere shifts from routine to high alert as the crew processes the sudden change in mission and the emotional weight of Elbrun’s name.

Atmosphere Tense and charged with unspoken apprehension, as the crew grapples with the sudden shift in …
Function Command center and hub for the crew’s reactions to the mission’s sudden pivot, where authority, …
Symbolism Represents the intersection of duty and personal history, where the crew must balance their professional …
Access Restricted to senior officers and essential crew members; access is tightly controlled to maintain operational …
The forward viewscreen displays DeSoto’s image from the *Hood*’s Ready Room, drawing the crew’s attention to the secured transmission. The bridge’s ambient lighting shifts subtly, reflecting the heightened tension and urgency of the situation. The Ops panel’s amber and red LEDs pulse as Data processes the *Hood*’s approach, contributing to the sense of alertness.
Captain DeSoto's Ready Room (USS Hood) [Tin Man Episode]

The *USS Hood*’s Ready Room is the private space from which Captain DeSoto delivers the mission’s cryptic orders via a secured channel. Its stark confines and subdued lighting contrast sharply with the *Enterprise* bridge’s activity, amplifying the mission’s secrecy and urgency. The room’s desk consoles and bulkheads are tailored for urgent briefings, and DeSoto’s abrupt transmission—followed by the *Hood*’s warp departure—leaves the *Enterprise* crew in a state of heightened alert. The Ready Room symbolizes the institutional weight of Starfleet’s directives and the personal stakes of the mission.

Atmosphere Sterile and urgent, with a sense of institutional authority and personal responsibility.
Function Communication hub for the transmission of classified orders and the briefing of the *Enterprise* crew …
Symbolism Represents the institutional power of Starfleet and the personal burden placed on its officers to …
Access Restricted to senior officers and authorized personnel; access is tightly controlled to maintain operational security.
The Ready Room’s desk consoles display classified data and mission briefings, emphasizing the urgency of the assignment. The subdued lighting and stark bulkheads create a sense of isolation and focus, reinforcing the secrecy of the transmission. DeSoto’s image on the *Enterprise* viewscreen is framed by the Ready Room’s confines, underscoring the personal and professional stakes of the mission.

Organizations Involved

Institutional presence and influence

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Starfleet

Starfleet is the directive authority behind the mission, assigning the *Enterprise* and its crew to a high-priority assignment involving Tam Elbrun. Its orders are delivered via Captain DeSoto aboard the *USS Hood*, emphasizing the urgency and secrecy of the operation. Starfleet’s concern about Romulan eavesdropping necessitates the physical delivery of orders and the use of a secured channel, highlighting the high stakes and potential dangers of the mission. The organization’s influence is felt in the crew’s immediate shift from routine to high alert, as they prepare to cooperate fully with Elbrun despite their reservations.

Representation Through formal directives delivered by Captain DeSoto and the assignment of Tam Elbrun as a …
Power Dynamics Exercising authority over the *Enterprise* crew, directing their actions and priorities with urgency and secrecy.
Impact The mission’s success is tied to Starfleet’s ability to balance the crew’s emotional and psychological …
Internal Dynamics The organization’s internal processes are reflected in the careful selection of mission specialists and the …
Ensure the *Enterprise*’s speed and the crew’s cooperation in executing the mission with Tam Elbrun, despite past traumas. Prevent Romulan eavesdropping and interference by maintaining operational secrecy and discretion. Through the assignment of high-priority orders and mission specialists, leveraging the *Enterprise*’s reputation as the fastest and most capable ship in the fleet. By enforcing protocols for secrecy and security, such as the use of secured channels and physical delivery of classified information.
Romulan Star Empire Forces

The Romulan Star Empire is an implicit but looming threat in this event, as DeSoto’s warning about Romulan eavesdropping sets the tone for the mission’s secrecy and urgency. Though not physically present, the Empire’s influence is felt in the crew’s heightened alertness and the need for discretion. The Romulans’ potential interference underscores the high stakes of the mission and the dangers posed by Elbrun’s telepathic abilities, which could be exploited or threatened by external forces. The organization’s shadow looms over the *Enterprise* crew, driving their caution and preparedness.

Representation Through the implied threat of eavesdropping and potential interference, as well as the Romulan commander’s …
Power Dynamics Operating as a looming external threat, challenging the *Enterprise*’s ability to execute the mission without …
Impact The Romulans’ presence as a potential antagonist drives the *Enterprise* crew’s caution and preparedness, shaping …
Internal Dynamics (Inferred) The Romulan command structure is hierarchical and ruthless, prioritizing territorial dominance and preemptive force …
(Inferred) Gather intelligence on the *Enterprise*’s mission and the sentient entity Tin Man to gain a strategic advantage. (Inferred) Disrupt or sabotage the *Enterprise*’s efforts to secure first contact with Tin Man, leveraging deception and preemptive force. Through surveillance and eavesdropping, exploiting vulnerabilities in communication and operational security. By deploying tactical maneuvers and deceptive strategies to gain an advantage over the *Enterprise* and Starfleet.

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 4
Causal

"DeSoto reveals the need for a mission specialist, then reveals that specialist is Tam Elbrun, eliciting negative reactions from the crew."

The Ghost of Ghorusda: Elbrun’s Arrival and the Crew’s Unspoken Dread
S3E20 · Tin Man
Causal

"DeSoto reveals the need for a mission specialist, then reveals that specialist is Tam Elbrun, eliciting negative reactions from the crew."

Picard’s Strategic Delegation: Trust and Trauma Collide in the Wake of Elbrun’s Arrival
S3E20 · Tin Man
NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"The Enterprise is intercepted, then Captain DeSoto reveals the reason for the intercept: new orders."

The Ghost of Ghorusda: Elbrun’s Arrival and the Crew’s Unspoken Dread
S3E20 · Tin Man
NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"The Enterprise is intercepted, then Captain DeSoto reveals the reason for the intercept: new orders."

Picard’s Strategic Delegation: Trust and Trauma Collide in the Wake of Elbrun’s Arrival
S3E20 · Tin Man
What this causes 14
Causal

"DeSoto reveals the need for a mission specialist, then reveals that specialist is Tam Elbrun, eliciting negative reactions from the crew."

The Ghost of Ghorusda: Elbrun’s Arrival and the Crew’s Unspoken Dread
S3E20 · Tin Man
Causal

"Picard invites Data and Troi to greet Elbrun; then, Troi formally introduces Elbrun, setting the stage for his arrival and behavior."

Tam’s Unreadable Encounter: Vulnerability, Control, and the Android Paradox
S3E20 · Tin Man
Causal

"DeSoto reveals the need for a mission specialist, then reveals that specialist is Tam Elbrun, eliciting negative reactions from the crew."

Picard’s Strategic Delegation: Trust and Trauma Collide in the Wake of Elbrun’s Arrival
S3E20 · Tin Man
Causal

"Picard invites Data and Troi to greet Elbrun; then, Troi formally introduces Elbrun, setting the stage for his arrival and behavior."

Tam’s Rejection of Connection: A Telepath’s Isolation and Picard’s Silent Fury
S3E20 · Tin Man
Causal

"Picard invites Data and Troi to greet Elbrun; then, Troi formally introduces Elbrun, setting the stage for his arrival and behavior."

The Ghost of Ghorusda: Riker’s Grief and the Weight of Trust
S3E20 · Tin Man
Causal

"Picard invites Data and Troi to greet Elbrun; then, Troi formally introduces Elbrun, setting the stage for his arrival and behavior."

The Unwanted Guest Arrives: Elbrun’s First Impression and the Crew’s Unease
S3E20 · Tin Man
Character Continuity

"Riker's reaction to Elbrun's name (due to the Ghorusda incident) is directly explored in a later scene between Riker and Geordi, where they discuss the specifics of the incident and Riker's reservations about Elbrun."

Tam’s Rejection of Connection: A Telepath’s Isolation and Picard’s Silent Fury
S3E20 · Tin Man
Character Continuity

"Riker's reaction to Elbrun's name (due to the Ghorusda incident) is directly explored in a later scene between Riker and Geordi, where they discuss the specifics of the incident and Riker's reservations about Elbrun."

The Unwanted Guest Arrives: Elbrun’s First Impression and the Crew’s Unease
S3E20 · Tin Man
Character Continuity

"Riker's reaction to Elbrun's name (due to the Ghorusda incident) is directly explored in a later scene between Riker and Geordi, where they discuss the specifics of the incident and Riker's reservations about Elbrun."

Tam’s Unreadable Encounter: Vulnerability, Control, and the Android Paradox
S3E20 · Tin Man
Character Continuity

"Riker's reaction to Elbrun's name (due to the Ghorusda incident) is directly explored in a later scene between Riker and Geordi, where they discuss the specifics of the incident and Riker's reservations about Elbrun."

The Ghost of Ghorusda: Riker’s Grief and the Weight of Trust
S3E20 · Tin Man
Character Continuity

"Troi's distress at Elbrun's presence connects directly to the explanation she and Beverly give Picard later about Elbrun's troubled background and unique telepathic abilities."

The Race to Tin Man: Science, Secrets, and the Shadow of War
S3E20 · Tin Man
Character Continuity

"Troi's distress at Elbrun's presence connects directly to the explanation she and Beverly give Picard later about Elbrun's troubled background and unique telepathic abilities."

Tam’s Unraveling: The Weight of Isolation and the Cost of Trust
S3E20 · Tin Man
NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"The Enterprise is intercepted, then Captain DeSoto reveals the reason for the intercept: new orders."

The Ghost of Ghorusda: Elbrun’s Arrival and the Crew’s Unspoken Dread
S3E20 · Tin Man
NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"The Enterprise is intercepted, then Captain DeSoto reveals the reason for the intercept: new orders."

Picard’s Strategic Delegation: Trust and Trauma Collide in the Wake of Elbrun’s Arrival
S3E20 · Tin Man

Key Dialogue

"**DESOTO:** *(grinning, but with an edge of urgency)* *'Sorry to sneak up on you like that, Jean-Luc—out here, you never know who’s listening. Keeps you on your toes, anyway.'* *(Subtext: DeSoto’s casual tone belies the seriousness of the situation. His reference to "listening" is a deliberate warning—Romulan interference is already a factor, and the Hood’s stealthy approach suggests this mission is being treated as a potential security breach from the outset.)*"
"**RIKER:** *(startled, voice tight)* *'Elbrun? You mean Tam Elbrun—as in the Ghorusda disaster?'* *(Subtext: Riker’s reaction is visceral, not just professional. The *Ghorusda* disaster is clearly a wound that hasn’t healed, and Elbrun’s name alone is enough to make him question the mission’s wisdom. His tone suggests he already views Elbrun as a liability, if not a threat.)*"
"**TROI:** *(anxious, stepping forward)* *'Captain, let me come with you to greet Tam—'* **PICARD:** *(raising an eyebrow)* *'You know him?'* **TROI:** *(hesitant, then quiet)* *'I do... He was at the university on Betazed when I studied psychology there.'* **PICARD:** *(nodding)* *'Ah, I see. He was a colleague, then.'* **TROI:** *(softly, with weight)* *'No, sir. He was a patient...'* *(Subtext: Troi’s hesitation and the way she corrects Picard reveal a **deeply personal connection** to Elbrun. Her past as his therapist isn’t just professional history—it’s emotional baggage. The crew’s dynamic is about to fracture under the weight of unresolved trauma, and Troi’s presence will be critical in either stabilizing Elbrun or becoming another casualty of his instability.)"