Narrative Web
S22E1
· Attack of the Cybermen Part 1

Stratton and Bates neutralize Cyberman patrol

Stratton and Bates use their captured Cyber head in a desperate confrontation with a patrol as they plan their assault on Cyber Control. Bates disables the Cyberman’s weapon before Stratton forces it down the slope, then severs its head with a swipe of his pipe. Stratton resents using the Cyber head as a weapon but Bates insists it will serve as their disguise, exposing the tension between caution and pragmatic brutality that defines their unlikely partnership beneath Telos. key_dialogue: [ STRATTON: You're mad. Why didn't you let me use the gun on him? BATES: Too risky. You might have damaged it. STRATTON: So? Now you have a trophy. ]

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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A Cyberman patrol approaches, causing Bates to duck down, and Stratton inquires about the importance of the Cyber head.

caution to tension ['gully on Telos']

Stratton and Bates successfully fend off a Cyberman, with Bates knocking off its gun hand and Stratton removing its head.

relief to determination ['slope on Telos']

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Stratton
primary

Exasperated and resentful, masking unease with sarcasm.

Stratton ducks as the Cyberman fires, engaging in the skirmish with visible frustration. He questions Bates' refusal to use the gun and criticizes the decapitated Cyberman as a mere trophy, revealing his doubt and impatience.

Goals in this moment
  • • survive the immediate encounter
  • • avoid unnecessary violence
Active beliefs
  • • violence must be controlled to avoid further risk
  • • Bates' plan is overly cautious
Character traits
doubtful frustrated reactive
Follow Stratton's journey
Cyberman Subordinate Enforcer (CyberLeadership Ops)
Subordinate Cyberman
 primary

Functionally neutral, operating purely under directive.

The Cyberman patrol actively monitors the gully, firing at Stratton and ascending the slope before being disarmed and decapitated by Bates and Stratton. Its presence enforces the oppressive regime of Telos and catalyzes the human prisoners' violent response.

Goals in this moment
  • • maintain surveillance and control
  • • eliminate perceived threats
Active beliefs
  • • obedience to hierarchical orders is absolute
  • • resistance must be crushed without hesitation
Character traits
methodical oppressive unrelenting
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Bates
Captain
 primary

Focused and resolute, suppressing frustration with Stratton's hesitation.

Bates disarms the Cyberman using his pipe, swiftly decapitating it with a decisive motion. He dismisses Stratton's complaints with blunt logic, prioritizing the preservation of their resources and the potential of the captured Cyber head.

Goals in this moment
  • • neutralize the immediate threat efficiently
  • • secure the Cyber head for future use
Active beliefs
  • • careful use of resources is essential for survival
  • • discipline ensures success
Character traits
pragmatic decisive direct
Follow Bates's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Stolen Cyber Head

The Cyber head, initially intended as a disguise, becomes a tactical weapon in the struggle. Bates discards its value as a mere 'trophy' after using it to incapacitate the patrol, while Stratton resentfully acknowledges its potential despite his aversion to wearing it.

Before: A dismembered Cyberman cranial unit, cracked and dim, …
After: Severed from the Cyberman's body, its systems failing, …
Before: A dismembered Cyberman cranial unit, cracked and dim, with a flickering identity signature.
After: Severed from the Cyberman's body, its systems failing, now a contested asset with layers of narrative and strategic significance.
Bates' Pipe

Bates uses his pipe as an improvised weapon, striking the Cyberman's gun wrist to disable its firearm before severing its head with a swift, brutal motion. The pipe becomes an extension of Bates' intent, breaking the Cyberman's mechanical defenses and securing a critical asset for their infiltration plans.

Before: A personal item carried by Bates, straight and …
After: Bent and stained with Cyberman fluid, serving as …
Before: A personal item carried by Bates, straight and hardwood, well-worn and polished.
After: Bent and stained with Cyberman fluid, serving as a testament to the brutality of survival beneath Telos.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Telos Gully Tactical Chokepoint

The gully on Telos serves as the ambush site, its steep walls providing cover for Stratton and Bates until the Cyberman approaches. The location's harsh terrain and eerie atmosphere heighten the tension, forcing the confrontation into a constrained space where every action risks detection by additional patrols.

Atmosphere Tense and claustrophobic, filled with the metallic tang of Cyberman corrosion and the echoes of …
Function Battleground for desperate resistance against cybernetic oppression
Symbolism Represents the precarious foothold of human defiance under absolute tyranny.
Access Policed by Cyberman patrols, monitored within the rigid control grid of Telos colony
Wind carrying the metallic reek of Cyberman corrosion Patches of frost clinging to sheltered stone
Telosian Slope (Choke Point)

The Telosian slope provides the stage for the Cyberman's ascent and subsequent disarming. Its steep incline amplifies the violence of the confrontation as Bates and Stratton force the Cyberman into an unstable position, culminating in its decapitation and tumble down the slope. The unstable terrain mirrors the fragility of their survival.

Atmosphere Volatile and dangerous, with shifting scree underscoring every movement and heightening the sense of imminent …
Function Combat zone where mechanical and human force collide
Symbolism Embodies the steep odds faced by the human rebels in their struggle.
Access Accessible to Cyberman patrols and slave laborers, but tightly controlled by the hive's hierarchical structure
Loose shale cascading underfoot during the struggle Jagged edges cutting into fractured bedrock

Organizations Involved

Institutional presence and influence

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Cybermen

The Cybermen operate through their patrol, enforcing surveillance and control over Telos. Their presence triggers the prisoners' confrontation and serves as the immediate face of the oppressive organization dominating the moon. The patrol embodies the Cybermen's rigid hierarchy and zero-tolerance policy toward resistance.

Representation Through a subordinate Cyberman patrol following doctrinal enforcement procedures
Power Dynamics Exercising total authority over the environment, subjecting human prisoners to unrelenting surveillance and threat
Impact The confrontation reflects the broader institutional violence of Cyberman rule, where dissent is crushed and …
maintain control over Telosian slave populations eliminate threats to cybernetic operations mechanical superiority in arms and cybernetic enhancements omnipresent surveillance and coercive labor systems

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 2
Escalation

"Stratton and Bates successfully obtaining a Cyber head (beat_cfb82bdc8dfb76a0) leads to them fending off a Cyberman and removing its head (beat_168d8255fbf44e8c), showing increased resourcefulness and simultaneously escalating the Cybermen's hunt for them."

Stratton and Bates steal Cyber head develop plan
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Thematic Parallel medium

"Stratton and Bates observing a Cyberman work party and discussing escape plans across Telos (beat_797b09e6907d8f7e) parallels their later dialogue about securing a Cyber head and infiltrating Cyber Control (beat_dec842e90633eb5b), both emphasizing resilience and strategic resourcefulness against the Cybermen."

Bates and Stratton plan Cyber Control strike
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