Fabula
S13E11 · Pyramids of Mars Part 3

Desperate salvage of unstable gelignite

The Doctor and Sarah break into a poacher’s hut under severe time pressure, needing explosives to disable Sutekh’s missile before it launches. Sarah discovers gelignite in a box but handing it to the Doctor immediately exposes the crucial flaw: the unstable substance is far too volatile to handle safely. Their hope of using traditional detonators evaporates with no other equipment in sight, forcing an uncomfortable improvisation. Both realize the sabotage plan has just become far more dangerous, compounding the already immense stakes. key_dialogue: [ DOCTOR: Sutekh was only defeated in the end by the combined might of seven hundred and forty of his fellow Osirans led by Horus. SARAH: The seven hundred and forty gods whose names were recorded in the tomb of Tutmoses the Third. DOCTOR: Could be. ]

Plot Beats

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The Doctor and Sarah enter the poacher's hut, searching for materials to sabotage Sutekh's missile. They discuss the historical context of Sutekh's defeat.

curiosity to cautious excitement ["poacher's hut"]

Sarah finds a box of sweaty gelignite on an upper shelf, but they realize there are no detonators or fuses. The Doctor warns about the gelignite's instability.

excitement to concern ["poacher's hut"]

The Doctor and Sarah express concern about the lack of detonators or fuses and the gelignite's instability. They handle the situation with caution.

concern to determination ["poacher's hut"]

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Startled by the ferret only to find her confidence further rattled by the unstable gelignite, caught between action and pained acknowledgment of their mistake

Sarah urgently searches the hutch in the poacher’s hut, retrieves a box she believes contains explosives, then throws it down to the Doctor. Her initial confidence in their plan wavers as the Doctor’s reaction reveals the gelignite’s instability, leaving her briefly apologetic and uncertain.

Goals in this moment
  • Find usable explosives quickly to further the sabotage plan
  • Respond effectively to the Doctor’s assessment without delay
Active beliefs
  • Raw materials like gelignite are the fastest path to success under duress
  • The Doctor’s expertise will bridge unforeseen hazards
Character traits
resourceful impetuous responsive adaptive
Follow Sarah Jane …'s journey

Internally alarmed despite a composed exterior, aware the plan’s feasibility has just collapsed beneath them

The Doctor carefully undoes the padlock and chain to enter the poacher’s hut, then physically examines the gelignite box Sarah retrieves from the hutch, testing its unstable contents before cautiously placing it back on the floor. His posture shifts from methodical urgency to measured caution as he identifies the high risk.

Goals in this moment
  • Locate and secure stable explosives to sabotage Sutekh’s missile
  • Assess the gelignite’s safety to determine immediate handling protocols
Active beliefs
  • Time pressure justifies high-risk solutions when standard tools are unavailable
  • Caution must override haste when dealing with unstable explosives
Character traits
methodical analytical cautious adaptable
Follow The Fourth …'s journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Poacher's Ferret

The ferret distracts Sarah during her mission, snatching her hand into the hutch and forcing her to recoil abruptly. Though unrelated to the gelignite itself, the ferret briefly diverts focus and heightens the sense of unpredictability in an already precarious environment.

Before: Slithering unnoticed through the cluttered poacher’s hut
After: Still at large in the hut, having briefly …
Before: Slithering unnoticed through the cluttered poacher’s hut
After: Still at large in the hut, having briefly exposed Sarah’s sudden vulnerability
Poacher's Hut Chain and Padlock

The chain and padlock form the initial barrier preventing quick access to the poacher’s hut. The Doctor successfully undoes them to enter, establishing the urgency of the mission and creating the literal threshold crossed before the gelignite’s volatile nature is discovered.

Before: Secured tightly around the poacher’s hut door, rusted …
After: Forcibly undone and left hanging open, allowing rapid …
Before: Secured tightly around the poacher’s hut door, rusted and encumbering
After: Forcibly undone and left hanging open, allowing rapid ingress and contributing to the momentary illusion of safety before crisis sets in
Poacher's Hutch

The hutch within the poacher’s hut serves as Sarah’s primary search area where the gelignite box is discovered. Its cluttered shelves and dim lighting create a setting where hazards—both seen and unseen—lie waiting amid the squalor.

Before: A weathered, cramped storage area filled with old …
After: Partially emptied and searched, its contents now suspect …
Before: A weathered, cramped storage area filled with old fishing gear and stacked boxes
After: Partially emptied and searched, its contents now suspect due to the discovered gelignite
Stabilizer Gelignite Box

Sarah discovers and retrieves the box containing sweaty gelignite from the upper shelf of the hutch, then immediately hands it off to the Doctor for inspection. Its visible instability and acrid scent force a critical reassessment of the sabotage plan, making it both the hinge of hope and the source of danger.

Before: Sealed in a weathered wooden ammunition box on …
After: Exposed and identified as too dangerous to handle …
Before: Sealed in a weathered wooden ammunition box on the poacher’s hut shelf, brittle and volatile with age
After: Exposed and identified as too dangerous to handle directly, carefully repositioned on the floor to avoid accidental detonation
Sutekh's Mummy Case (Preserved Form)

The inactive mummy of Sutekh is referenced in the scene text as a contextual detail to set the atmosphere and highlight the expanding threat posed by Sutekh’s power. Though not physically present in the hut, its dominion over events looms visibly during the Doctor’s and Sarah’s confrontation with the unstable gelignite.

Before: Motionless and bound within the lodge’s burial chamber, …
After: Unchanged, though the urgency to prevent its eventual …
Before: Motionless and bound within the lodge’s burial chamber, awaiting Sutekh’s awakening
After: Unchanged, though the urgency to prevent its eventual freedom has intensified

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