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S13E9 · Pyramids of Mars Part 1

Discovery in the Locked Wing

Sarah and the Doctor investigate an oddly secured storage room in Stargrove Manor, suspecting dark activities behind it. Collins, the butler, enters unexpectedly and warns them about an unnamed Egyptian menace stirring within the house. His nervousness reveals a ticking clock ahead of Namin’s true nature becoming apparent. As they prepare to leave through an alternate route, Collins escapes unnoticed while the pair depart, oblivious to the mummy case’s unnatural movement behind him—a sign Sutekh’s awakening has already begun.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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The Doctor and Sarah inquire about the locked wing of the manor, speculating on its usage and purpose.

curiosity to apprehension ['storage room', 'manor']

Collins warns the Doctor and Sarah about Namin's volatile temper and the potential danger posed by the Egyptian artifacts.

apprehension to concern ['manor']

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Amused by Collins’ urgency but internally sensing the growing threat

The Doctor examines the locked door and identifies the mummy scent, using the French picklock with practiced ease despite Collins’ arrival. He engages Collins with dry humor and skepticism before heeding his warning to leave. He helps Sarah escape through the window, remaining composed even as the mummy case stirs behind Collins.

Goals in this moment
  • Uncover the secrets of the locked wing through investigation
  • Protect Sarah from danger while responding to Collins’ warning
Active beliefs
  • That investigation and knowledge are the best tools against unknown threats
  • That Collins’ nervousness indicates a serious but poorly understood danger
Character traits
Wry Curious Calm under pressure
Follow The Fourth …'s journey
Supporting 2

Cautiously intrigued at first but shifting to tension as Collins’ warnings escalate

Sarah assists the Doctor in investigating the locked storage room, initially remarking on its mustiness before hiding with him as Collins enters. She actively participates in the conversation, asking Collins what danger he refers to, and later escapes with the Doctor through the window.

Goals in this moment
  • Assist the Doctor in exploring the locked storage room’s secrets
  • Gather information about the Egyptian menace Collins warns of
Active beliefs
  • That curiosity and investigation are necessary for understanding the danger
  • That Collins may hold crucial information about the locked wing
Character traits
Curious Alert Wary
Follow Sarah Jane …'s journey

Feigned calm masking deep anxiety

Collins enters the locked wing unexpectedly, answering the Doctor’s question with nervous urgency. He warns them about the Egyptian menace and advises an alternate escape route. His demeanor is anxious throughout, emphasizing the wing’s second key and the peril of discovery. He slips away unaware of the mummy case’s movement behind him.

Goals in this moment
  • Warn the Doctor and Sarah of the danger posed by the Egyptian menace
  • Secure his own escape from discovery by Namin or Sutekh
Active beliefs
  • That the Egyptian menace is a genuine and immediate threat
  • That discretion and quick action are necessary for survival
Character traits
Nervous Authoritative Secretive
Follow Collins's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Collins' Second Key

Collins produces the second key from his coat pocket to emphasize the secrecy and urgency of their situation. The key symbolizes the hidden mechanisms of Sutekh’s confinement within Stargrove Manor, with Collins’ possession of it representing his limited defiance against Namin.

Before: Secured on a chain in Collins’ coat pocket, …
After: Unknown, but Collins escapes with it still in …
Before: Secured on a chain in Collins’ coat pocket, known only to him.
After: Unknown, but Collins escapes with it still in his possession.
Marie Antoinette’s French Picklock

The Doctor uses Marie Antoinette’s French picklock to manipulate the storage room’s lock, demonstrating his expertise and dismissing the seriousness of the threat with levity. The picklock’s introduction serves as a narrative device to highlight the Doctor’s calm competence amid escalating danger.

Before: In the Doctor’s possession, tucked away in a …
After: Still in the Doctor’s possession, stowed away as …
Before: In the Doctor’s possession, tucked away in a pocket. Kept in good condition, occasionally twirled as a conversational piece.
After: Still in the Doctor’s possession, stowed away as the pair escape through the window.
Sutekh's Mummy Case (Preserved Form)

The mummy case remains closed but ominously stirred during Collins’ presence, its lid juddering slightly as if sensing awakening energy. It serves as a silent antagonist, its movement behind Collins foreshadowing the supernatural threat of Sutekh’s resurrection.

Before: Locked in the storage room, its bands and …
After: The lid judders upward slightly, expelling embers and …
Before: Locked in the storage room, its bands and hieroglyphs hinting at ancient origins.
After: The lid judders upward slightly, expelling embers and dust as unseen force stirs within.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Locked Wing Secondary Access

The alternate escape route through the window and around the manor’s exterior offers a fleeting moment of safety but underscores vulnerability in open spaces. It symbolizes the Doctor’s preference for concealment and stealth when confronting threats beyond conventional understanding.

Atmosphere Dim, cautiously navigated, with tension lingering under the starlit sky
Function Secondary exit and temporary refuge from detection
Symbolism Represents the need for secrecy and adaptability when facing forces that do not respect the …
Access Accessible by unobserved routes but perilous if seen
Darkened exterior paths requiring stealth under windows Twilight sky providing cover but no safety from unseen threats
Stargrove Manor

Stargrove Manor as a whole acts as a gothic labyrinth where hidden wings and corridors conceal deeper threats. The corridor and exterior around the storage room become transient escape routes, their grandeur contrasting with the claustrophobic tension inside.

Atmosphere Grand but creeping with unseen menace, a veneer of Victorian opulence masking corruption
Function Mansion serving as both a refuge for suppressed horrors and a battleground for ancient forces
Symbolism Reflects the fragile boundary between civilization and untamed, ancient evil
Access Open to intended personnel but monitored by Namin’s influence
Polished mahogany paneling muffling footsteps Gabled roofline and cold windows contributing to an eerie, watchful presence

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Key Dialogue

"COLLINS: He locked this wing. He didn't know there was a second key. If he were to find me along here, let alone you two, he'd go stark raving mad, sir."
"DOCTOR: What are you afraid of?"
"COLLINS: He's only been here a few days. I wouldn't be staying, but, well, situations aren't easy to find at my age."