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S17E5 · City of Death Part 1

Artist's sketch sparks time loop revelation

A normally tranquil afternoon at the Notre Dame Brasserie is disrupted when an artist secretly sketches Romana without her knowledge. When she turns to look at him, his drawing spirals into chaos as he repeatedly tears up his attempts and storms off. Twice more the dance resets as if a damaged record skips, revealing the Doctor and Romana trapped in a time loop. After the cycle breaks, they examine the crumpled sketch and discover a fractured clock face frozen at ten to two, a symbol mirroring the instability in their temporal reality. The clue hints at deeper manipulations of history yet to be uncovered.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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The Doctor and Romana discuss the city's spirit while enjoying a leisurely moment at the Notre Dame Brasserie.

calm to curiosity ['Notre Dame Brasserie']

The artist sketches Romana, leading to a peculiar 'time slip' where the event repeats.

curiosity to concern ['Notre Dame Brasserie']

The Doctor and Romana examine the sketch, noticing it's a portrait of Romana as a Time Lady with a fractured clock face.

concern to fascination ['Notre Dame Brasserie']

The Doctor and Romana discuss the significance of the fractured clock face and its implications on time.

fascination to determination ['Notre Dame Brasserie']

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Initially calm and leisurely, then alarmed but intrigued as the time loop forms, finally fascinated by the temporal clue.

The Doctor watches Romana from behind a book, then attempts to prevent her from looking at the artist. He notices anomalies in the artist’s behavior and calls out the sketching with hushed urgency. His tone shifts from playful to alert as the time loop reveals itself, then to fascinated as the clock-face portrait is revealed.

Goals in this moment
  • Prevent Romana from 'spoiling' what he sees as a priceless moment of artistic observation
  • Uncover the cause of the artist’s strange behavior and the temporal skip
  • Protect Romana from unintended consequences of her curiosity
Active beliefs
  • Art and observation are valid and enriching parts of time travel, if not urgent
  • Temporal anomalies should be treated with both caution and curiosity
Character traits
Observant Playfully authoritative Curious in the face of anomaly Dry humor even during disruption
Follow The Fourth …'s journey

Initially cheerful and curious, then momentarily annoyed at the Doctor’s caution, finally intrigued and unsettled by the temporal revelation.

Romana is absorbed in a crossword until the Doctor warns her not to spoil a work of art. She turns anyway—knocking over wine—and greets the artist’s presence with enthusiasm, then confusion as the loop repeats. She examines the fractured clock-face sketch and voices wonder at its meaning.

Goals in this moment
  • Satisfy her curiosity about being sketched by an artist
  • Understand why the artist reacts and why time resets
  • Make sense of the clock-face portrait’s significance
Active beliefs
  • Observation is harmless and informative, even in temporal anomalies
  • Art reveals truths beyond surface appearances
Character traits
Playfully inquisitive Impulsive curiosity Pragmatic observer Dryly humorous under pressure
Follow Romana's journey
Artist
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Initially calm and artistic, then increasingly agitated and disoriented as the loop resets against his will.

The artist remains silent and focused, sketching Romana intently. Each time she turns, his demeanor fractures: he throws down his pencil, tears the page, and storms out—only to restart the scene exactly. His agitation stems from an unstated awareness of time’s fracture.

Goals in this moment
  • Complete a portrait of Romana
  • Respond to her gaze with each attempt
Active beliefs
  • His art reflects objective reality
  • He must respond to her attention
Character traits
Silent Intently observant Frustrated Unknowingly embedded in temporal anomaly
Follow Artist's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Romana's Time Loop Sketch

Romana’s time loop sketch is crumpled and torn multiple times as the loop resets, its fractured clock face frozen at ten to two becoming more visible with each unfolding. After the loop breaks, the Doctor and Romana examine it as a temporal clue.

Before: Non-existent; drawn hastily into existence in the loop.
After: Crinkled, ink-fresh, with a visible cracked clock face …
Before: Non-existent; drawn hastily into existence in the loop.
After: Crinkled, ink-fresh, with a visible cracked clock face drawn over Romana’s profile, showing ten to two.
Artist's Red Wine Bottle

The bottle of red wine stands half-full at first, then is knocked over by Romana when she turns suddenly. Its contents spill but remain symbolically still, unaffected by the loop—witnessing the chaos passively as a static element in a fractured reality.

Before: Half-full bottle on the table, untouched.
After: Upright again after loop reset (spilled contents remain …
Before: Half-full bottle on the table, untouched.
After: Upright again after loop reset (spilled contents remain on cloth), bottle restored to near original state.
Artist’s Sketch Book

The artist’s sketchbook lies open on the table, pages holding hasty, frantic sketches of Romana. These become the canvas for the temporal fracture, each drawing abandoned and torn only to restart in the loop’s reset.

Before: Open, pages showing partial sketches and charcoal marks.
After: Pages crumpled and discarded, one drawing preserved with …
Before: Open, pages showing partial sketches and charcoal marks.
After: Pages crumpled and discarded, one drawing preserved with the clock face.
Artist's Sketch Pencil

The artist’s sketching pencil is gripped tightly and frantically as Romana turns, then discarded when each drawing is torn up. It rolls across the table during the loop reset, its marks fragmenting into patterns that mirror the fractured clock in the sketch.

Before: Clean, slightly worn graphite pencil with a chewed …
After: Discarded, rolled slightly from the force of discarded …
Before: Clean, slightly worn graphite pencil with a chewed eraser tip, lying on the sketchbook.
After: Discarded, rolled slightly from the force of discarded sketches, graphite dust scattered on the table.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Notre Dame Brasserie

The Notre Dame Brasserie serves as a mundane yet precarious stage where time fractures manifest within a lived-in Parisian setting. Its glass windows frame a busy street, while warm lighting contrasts with the cold revelation of a broken clock in an artist’s sketch. The static environment becomes a vessel for temporal instability.

Atmosphere Leisurely Parisian afternoon turned unsettling—clinking cutlery and murmurs persist oddly as the world skims backward …
Function Anchoring institution of daily life disrupted by invisible forces, turning a public space into a …
Symbolism Represents the fragility of ordinary reality under time manipulation, where the beauty of Paris and …
Access Public but intimate, with only the artist, Doctor, Romana present during the core anomaly.
Red-checkered tablecloths glowing under warm pendant lamps Sunlight slanting through large front windows during afternoon hours

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 1

"The Doctor and Romana's playful discussion about Paris's 'bouquet' echoes their earlier philosophical conversation, reinforcing their dynamic as intellectual equals exploring time and culture."

Doctor and Romana discuss time over a meal
S17E5 · City of Death Part 1

Themes This Exemplifies

Thematic resonance and meaning

Key Dialogue

"DOCTOR: He's sketching you."
"ROMANA: What's he doing?"
"ROMANA: I wonder why he did it like that? The face of the clock is fractured."