S2E15
· Pen Pals

Tectonic Alert — Data Rushes for Picard

Data converts the bridge from passive observer to urgent investigation: he orders a full read on Drema Four's volcanic and tectonic activity, the viewscreen flooding with diagnostic data that implicates a catastrophic geological process. The scan's implication — a planetary crisis tied to a dilithium lattice anomaly — makes the situation immediately command‑level. Seeing Picard is on Holodeck Three, Data's grave expression and abrupt exit telegraph personal stakes (his bond with Sarjenka) and force the ethical dilemma upward, setting the scene's pivotal turning point.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Data commands a full tectonic scan of Drema Four, shifting the bridge from passive observation to active investigation, as the planet's violent地质 upheaval floods the viewscreen with data that will later reveal the dilithium lattice's deadly resonance.

detached observation to urgent inquiry ['Main Bridge']

Data learns Picard is on Holodeck Three, and without hesitation, he crosses the bridge and enters the turbolift—his serious expression betraying a crisis beyond technical duty, signaling the moment his connection to Sarjenka becomes too heavy to remain silent.

professional calm to private turmoil ['Main Bridge', 'turbolift corridor']

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Externally controlled, but gravely concerned—Data's mechanical calm gives way to urgent seriousness, implying a personal stake beneath objective analysis.

At Science One Data issues an immediate, technical order, ingests the arriving seismic and volcanic telemetry with a fast read, queries for Picard’s location, then crosses to and enters the turbolift with a very serious expression.

Goals in this moment
  • Obtain complete, rapid diagnostics of Drema Four's tectonic/volcanic activity.
  • Locate and inform Captain Picard (or summon his presence) to escalate command decision-making.
Active beliefs
  • Accurate, immediate data is necessary to assess scale and response options.
  • This situation requires captain‑level authority or consultation; personal action alone may be insufficient or improper.
Character traits
procedural precision analytic urgency quiet resolve
Follow Data's journey

Alert and watchful—Worf's stance is one of disciplined readiness, expecting possible orders or threats and prepared to act without hesitation.

Worf is stationed at Tactical, watching displays and standing ready; he functions as the bridge’s procedural sentinel while the scientific data arrives and the command hierarchy is consulted.

Goals in this moment
  • Monitor tactical implications of the seismic/volcanic data for ship and crew safety.
  • Ensure security posture is maintained while command evaluates the crisis.
Active beliefs
  • Situational awareness and preparedness prevent escalation or surprise.
  • Adherence to procedure and chain of command is essential during crises.
Character traits
vigilant disciplined procedural
Follow Worf's journey

Focused and vigilant—Riker is ready to translate incoming data into tactical or operational steps while waiting for higher command input.

Riker holds command of the bridge, receiving Data's orders and the flood of diagnostic information while maintaining overall operational control and presence at the helm; he remains prepared to act on bridge procedures or Picard's direction.

Goals in this moment
  • Maintain bridge order and readiness while new crisis data is assessed.
  • Be prepared to implement command decisions or emergency procedures as they are issued.
Active beliefs
  • The bridge must remain functional and decisive under pressure.
  • Protocol and chain of command guide responses to crises; unnecessary improvisation risks compounding problems.
Character traits
authoritative composed procedurally minded
Follow William Riker's journey

Neutral and functional—providing information without interpretation or emotional coloring.

The Enterprise Computer responds to Data's requests with concise confirmations: it begins data access routines and reports Captain Picard's current location, enabling rapid operational decisions and directing Data's next move.

Goals in this moment
  • Execute requested data access and reporting tasks accurately and quickly.
  • Provide authoritative system responses that enable crew decision-making.
Active beliefs
  • Fulfilling procedural queries promptly supports bridge operations.
  • Objective reporting of status and locations is the proper role of shipboard systems.
Character traits
clinical efficient unemotional
Follow Custodian Voice's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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USS Enterprise-D — Main Bridge Aft Turbolift Doors

The aft turbolift doors function as the physical threshold where Data's private urgency becomes public action—he crosses the bridge and the doors hiss as he departs, converting an analytic alert into movement toward command consultation and escalating the scene's stakes.

Before: Closed and idle in the aft bulkhead, recessed …
After: Opened to admit Data as he leaves the …
Before: Closed and idle in the aft bulkhead, recessed with the illuminated call panel inactive relative to this specific event.
After: Opened to admit Data as he leaves the bridge; the doors close again as he departs toward the Holodeck, marking a shift from static analysis to active resolution-seeking.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Main Bridge

Science One (Data's workstation) is the immediate analytic locus: Data issues commands from here, rigs and reads telemetry, and initiates the diagnostic sequence that reveals Drema Four's catastrophic geological processes.

Atmosphere Clinically intense and electrically charged—focused on forensic analysis with terse activity and rapid data parsing.
Function Forensic eye and technical flashpoint where private investigation ignites the broader bridge response.
Symbolism Represents the collision of curiosity-driven science with institutional responsibility.
Access Functionally operated by science officers; briefly becomes the epicenter of bridge attention.
Cables, consoles, and sensor readouts concentrated around Data’s station. A fast, scrolling telemetry feed filling local displays and contributing to the bridge's information surge.
Drema Four

Drema Four is the off-world subject of the diagnostic sweep; seismic and volcanic telemetry from this planet provide the evidentiary basis for the bridge's alarm and for Data's determination that the problem is catastrophic and possibly tied to a dilithium lattice anomaly.

Atmosphere Not directly seen but implied as catastrophic—sensors suggest violent geological upheaval and imminent planetary threat.
Function Source of the crisis driving the plot; the planet is the object of scientific inquiry …
Symbolism Represents an external moral test that forces Starfleet's Prime Directive into sharp relief.
Access Remote; direct access requires transport or intervention which may violate regulations.
Cascading tectonic telemetry indicating continental plates grinding and volcanic activity. Intermittent signals (a child's voice earlier in the episode) tying the raw data to human life on the surface.
Holodeck Three — Recreated Space Station Laboratory

Holodeck Three is the off-bridge location reported by the computer as Captain Picard’s whereabouts; its mention instantly reframes the crisis as one requiring retrieval of the captain and signals that command counsel is not physically present on the bridge.

Atmosphere Absent but narratively present—a quiet, paradoxical calm implied by Picard’s absence, which increases bridge urgency.
Function Off-site refuge where the commanding officer currently resides; here it functions as the destination Data …
Symbolism Represents the separation between individual retreat/reflection and the public demands of command.
Access Holodeck access is normally controlled and may be private; entering requires authorization or urgency.
Referenced via a sterile computer announcement rather than direct sensory description. Holds implied sensory contrast—leisure or study within the holodeck versus bridge urgency.

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Key Dialogue

"DATA: Access all volcanic and tectonic plate activity of Drema Four."
"COMPUTER VOICE: Accessing."
"DATA: Computer, locate Captain Picard."
"COMPUTER VOICE: Captain Picard is on Holodeck Three."