S1E17
· Home Soil

Arrival at Velara III and Unsettling Terraforming Revelations

Commander Riker's away team beams onto Velara III's terraforming base, where they meet the warm, idealistic botanist Luisa Kim and the guarded engineers Arthur Malencon and Bjorn Bensen. Luisa passionately shares the grand vision of transforming a lifeless planet into a thriving biosphere, evoking a godlike ambition. Yet beneath this enthusiasm, tension simmers: Malencon and Bensen's wariness, cryptic mentions of erratic power surges, and Director Mandl's brusque urgency hint at underlying troubles. Troi’s empathic alert to Malencon’s distress precedes a sudden laser attack, abruptly shifting the mission from hopeful exploration to a dangerous investigation. This event sets the stage for the mystery of Velara III’s sabotage and the hidden inorganic life threatening the project.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Riker's away team beams into the terraforming base and meets the terraformers: the friendly botanist Luisa Kim and the guarded engineers Arthur Malencon and Bjorn Bensen, establishing the initial contact and contrasting personalities.

anticipation to guarded openness ['terraforming base interior with visible machinery …

Luisa enthusiastically explains the ambitious terraforming process transforming the barren Velara III, captivating the away team and revealing the project's scope and ideals.

curiosity to inspired optimism ['terraforming base control room with display …

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Focused and prepared, quickly shifting to defensive urgency.

Lieutenant Tasha Yar accompanies the away team maintaining security with vigilance. She remains alert throughout the welcoming and technical exchanges, instantly responding with readiness to the alarm and laser attack to safeguard her team.

Goals in this moment
  • Ensure the team’s security during the visit
  • React swiftly to any threat or hostile engagement
Active beliefs
  • Safety of the team is paramount
  • Hostile attacks are likely in unknown or unstable environments
Character traits
alert ready decisive professional
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Emotionally neutral, intellectually engaged and ready for action.

Lieutenant Commander Data methodically examines the terraforming base's plans and hydraulic systems, engaging with Malencon and Bensen to understand the technical challenges. His focus is analytical and neutral, offering precise observations and participating in technical dialogues. Data remains composed and utilitarian, then promptly reacts to the alarm, joining the response effort.

Goals in this moment
  • Gather detailed technical data on the terraforming process and equipment
  • Assist in diagnosing and addressing the hydraulic system anomalies
Active beliefs
  • Believes logic and data analysis can solve complex problems
  • Trusts in the reliability of technology and his own programming
Character traits
analytical calm methodical precise
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Cautiously optimistic with underlying concern, shifting quickly to alert readiness upon crisis onset.

Commander William Riker leads the away team onto Velara III, introducing his crew and engaging with the terraforming team. His demeanor is curious and supportive, reflecting cautious optimism mixed with concern as he navigates the guarded reception and the mounting tension. He responds promptly to Troi’s distress signal and the emergency alarm, shifting from diplomatic observer to crisis leader.

Goals in this moment
  • Establish rapport and understanding with the terraforming team
  • Assess the situation and gather accurate information about the project and its troubles
Active beliefs
  • Believes in Starfleet's mission of peaceful inquiry and support
  • Trusts in his team's competence to handle emerging dangers
Character traits
curious supportive concerned commanding diplomatic
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Increasingly worried and urgent as she senses impending danger.

Counselor Deanna Troi uses her empathic abilities to detect concealed distress and emotional tension among the terraforming team, especially focusing on Malencon. Her concern intensifies as she perceives Malencon's trouble, prompting her to alert Riker and her team just before the emergency erupts.

Goals in this moment
  • Detect hidden emotional and psychological tensions
  • Warn the team to prepare for emergent threats
Active beliefs
  • Emotional states reveal critical information beyond spoken words
  • Protecting the crew's psychological welfare is essential for mission success
Character traits
empathic alert concerned perceptive
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Focused and alert, with a growing sense of urgency.

Geordi La Forge carefully studies the hydraulic systems alongside Malencon, engaging in professional technical exchange about erratic power surges and their possible causes. His demeanor is concerned and analytical, collaborating closely with the local engineer. Upon the sudden alarm and laser blasts, he promptly joins the emergency response.

Goals in this moment
  • Identify the source of hydraulic system failures
  • Support the safety and operational integrity of the terraforming station
Active beliefs
  • Technical problems have logical causes that can be uncovered
  • Cooperation with local specialists is essential for mission success
Character traits
concerned analytical collaborative professional
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Stressed and defensive, masking fear of failure.

Director Kurt Mandl arrives with brusque urgency, emphasizing the critical and demanding timetable of the project. His guarded and tense demeanor pressures Malencon to take immediate action, revealing a leadership under strain and struggling to maintain control during escalating trouble.

Goals in this moment
  • Ensure hydraulic systems are promptly repaired to meet deadlines
  • Maintain authority and control over the project team
Active beliefs
  • The project’s success hinges on strict adherence to schedule
  • Delays or failures could jeopardize the entire initiative
Character traits
tense brusque guarded urgent
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Anxious and pressured, bordering on overwhelmed.

Arthur Malencon, the hydraulics specialist, is visibly tense and nervous as he works amid erratic power surges and technical challenges. His distress grows under Mandl's brusque pressure to attend the hydraulics chamber immediately. His emotional strain is sensed by Troi moments before he is thrust into a life-threatening situation amid sudden sabotage.

Goals in this moment
  • Resolve the hydraulic system anomalies
  • Comply with urgent directives despite personal unease
Active beliefs
  • The hydraulic problems are critical to the project’s success
  • Timely intervention is necessary even at personal risk
Character traits
tense nervous troubled dutiful
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Optimistic and emotionally invested, yet subtly aware of underlying tensions.

Luisa Kim warmly welcomes the Enterprise team with idealistic enthusiasm, openly sharing her passionate vision of terraforming Velara III into a thriving, lush biosphere. Her demeanor is optimistic and sincere, embodying hope amid the creeping tensions revealed by others.

Goals in this moment
  • Communicate the grandeur and promise of the terraforming project
  • Foster goodwill and openness with the visiting team
Active beliefs
  • Terraforming is a noble, transformative endeavor
  • Sharing knowledge builds trust and support
Character traits
warm idealistic enthusiastic hopeful
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Cautious and uneasy, masking concern with reserve.

Bjorn Bensen, the chief engineer, maintains a guarded and curt stance, skeptical particularly toward Data. He closely monitors hydraulic issues and maintains professional distance, signaling wariness and underlying tension as the crisis mounts.

Goals in this moment
  • Protect the integrity of the terraforming system
  • Maintain control amidst increasing uncertainty
Active beliefs
  • Technical problems threaten the project’s viability
  • Trust must be earned, especially with outsiders
Character traits
guarded tense skeptical professional
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Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Engineering Control Computer Consoles

The terraforming base’s computer screens display critical data including hydraulic schematics, vegetation growth graphs, and environmental metrics. They serve as focal points for technical discussions, monitoring, and reveal the complexity and scope of the terraforming project to the visiting away team.

Before: Active, displaying real-time project and system data.
After: Continuing to display data but overshadowed by emergent …
Before: Active, displaying real-time project and system data.
After: Continuing to display data but overshadowed by emergent crisis.
Hydraulic Equipment of Velara III Terraforming Base

The hydraulic equipment forms the operational backbone of the terraforming station’s power and water distribution systems. During the event, it endures erratic power surges that visibly strain its mechanical components, acting as the physical locus of the technical crisis Malencon and the engineers grapple with.

Before: Operational but stressed with fluctuating power surges causing …
After: Still under stress and subject to emergency interventions …
Before: Operational but stressed with fluctuating power surges causing instability.
After: Still under stress and subject to emergency interventions following sabotage alerts.
Laser Weapons

Laser weapons become active during the sudden attack on the terraforming base, discharging rapid energy blasts that escalate the situation from peaceful inspection to violent conflict, forcing immediate defensive actions from the away team.

Before: Stored and inactive within security or terraforming team’s …
After: Active in hostile fire, creating imminent danger and …
Before: Stored and inactive within security or terraforming team’s armory.
After: Active in hostile fire, creating imminent danger and chaos.
Velara III Terraforming Base Alarm Siren

The Velara III terraforming base alarm siren sounds abruptly to warn of immediate danger, signaling the onset of sabotage and laser attacks. Its shrill, piercing tone shatters the initial calm, catapulting the away team and terraforming staff into emergency response mode.

Before: Silent, standing ready as a safety device.
After: Actively sounding emergency alarm throughout the attack response.
Before: Silent, standing ready as a safety device.
After: Actively sounding emergency alarm throughout the attack response.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Hydraulics Chamber

The hydraulics chamber within the terraforming base serves as a critical operational nerve center, housing vital machinery and control systems that govern the planet’s subsurface water distribution. It is the focal point of Malencon’s distress and the site implied for immediate action following director Mandl’s urgent orders.

Atmosphere Claustrophobic, mechanical, and tense with the ominous rumble and clank of hydraulic machinery under strain.
Function Operational heart of the terraforming project’s infrastructure and immediate setting for emergent sabotage threats.
Symbolism Embodies the fragile interdependence of technology and nature, and the vulnerability of human control.
Access Restricted access to authorized engineering personnel only during critical operations.
Dim lighting with industrial fixtures Audible mechanical rumbling and occasional clanking
Terraforming Planet Velara III

Velara III itself serves as the planetary setting beneath the orbiting Enterprise, embodying the narrative’s core mystery and conflict. The terraforming base on its surface is both a hub of scientific ambition and the crucible for unfolding sabotage and alien life tensions.

Atmosphere Tense and foreboding beneath a veneer of scientific optimism, imbued with underlying suspicion and danger.
Function Primary operational and narrative locale where exploration, conflict, and revelation converge.
Symbolism Represents the fragile boundary between human ambition and unknown alien ecosystems.
Access Restricted to terraforming team and authorized visitors such as Starfleet personnel.
Barren and lifeless planet surface Harsh yellow-ochre hue visible from orbit

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 5
Causal

"Mandl orders Malencon to attend the hydraulics chamber immediately, directly leading Malencon to the fatal encounter with the sabotaged laser system."

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Causal

"Mandl orders Malencon to attend the hydraulics chamber immediately, directly leading Malencon to the fatal encounter with the sabotaged laser system."

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Escalation

"Mandl's concealed fear evolves into abrupt and tense commands to Malencon, heightening tension and foreshadowing imminent danger within the terraforming base."

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Escalation

"Mandl's concealed fear evolves into abrupt and tense commands to Malencon, heightening tension and foreshadowing imminent danger within the terraforming base."

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Escalation

"Mandl's concealed fear evolves into abrupt and tense commands to Malencon, heightening tension and foreshadowing imminent danger within the terraforming base."

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What this causes 6
Causal

"Mandl orders Malencon to attend the hydraulics chamber immediately, directly leading Malencon to the fatal encounter with the sabotaged laser system."

Tensions Mount Over Hydraulic Failures and Imminent Crisis
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Causal

"Mandl orders Malencon to attend the hydraulics chamber immediately, directly leading Malencon to the fatal encounter with the sabotaged laser system."

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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"The chaos of Malencon's death leads Data and Tasha to enter the hydraulics room for recovery, initiating the deeper investigation into the sabotage."

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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"The chaos of Malencon's death leads Data and Tasha to enter the hydraulics room for recovery, initiating the deeper investigation into the sabotage."

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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"The chaos of Malencon's death leads Data and Tasha to enter the hydraulics room for recovery, initiating the deeper investigation into the sabotage."

Data Alone Confronts Sabotage Amid Laser Barrage
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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"The chaos of Malencon's death leads Data and Tasha to enter the hydraulics room for recovery, initiating the deeper investigation into the sabotage."

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Part of Larger Arcs

Key Dialogue

"LUISA: "Welcome to Velara III. Remember it as it is now, because in a couple of decades you won't recognize the place. Luisa Kim. Gardener of Edens.""
"BENSEN: "An android." / DATA: "Both matters are subjects of protracted discussion." / BENSEN: "Remarkable.""
"LUISA: "Terraforming makes you feel a little godlike. Is that a terribly arrogant thing to say?" / DATA: "Not at all. It is accurate.""
"MANDL: "We are set to step up to full conversion, immediately. Shouldn't you be in the hydraulics chamber, Arthur?" / MALENCON: "Now?""
"TROI: "Malencon. He's in trouble.""