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S1E17 · Home Soil
S1E17
· Home Soil

Picard Demands Urgent Status Amid Deadly Sabotage

In the hydraulics room of the Velara III terraforming base, the away team grapples with the aftermath of Engineer Malencon's fatal sabotage. Captain Picard urgently demands an immediate situation report as Riker coordinates the shutdown of power to safely recover Malencon's body. Data and Tasha Yar enter the hazardous room, while Geordi and Bensen manage the controls remotely. Data reactivates the drilling program to understand the malfunction, but narrowly dodges a deadly laser blast from the sabotaged equipment, revealing the base's systems are actively hostile. Despite the chaos and destruction of a year's work, Data emerges unscathed, signaling the severity of the unknown threat. This tense sequence marks a key turning point where the crew moves from passive investigation to active confrontation with an intelligent, inorganic adversary, underscoring Picard's determination to maintain control and uncover the truth amid escalating danger.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Picard demands an immediate away team report, escalating command urgency as the situation deteriorates.

calm command to urgent demand

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Guarded and resolute, balancing urgency with careful procedure.

Lieutenant Tasha Yar accompanies Data into the hydraulics room, affixes a communicator to Malencon’s body for transport, and initiates the beam-up process, demonstrating determination and caution in a hazardous environment.

Goals in this moment
  • Secure and preserve Malencon’s body for medical analysis.
  • Support Data and ensure safe extraction from the hazardous environment.
Active beliefs
  • Preserving the victim’s body is vital for investigation.
  • Caution is necessary to avoid additional harm during recovery.
Character traits
Determined Cautious Efficient Responsible
Follow Tasha Yar's journey

Urgent and focused, projecting steady leadership amidst escalating danger and uncertainty.

Captain Picard provides firm, commanding oversight remotely via communicator, demanding immediate situation reports and maintaining authoritative control over the unfolding crisis despite physical absence from the hydraulics room.

Goals in this moment
  • Obtain accurate, real-time updates on the sabotage aftermath.
  • Ensure the safety of crew and maintain control of the investigation.
Active beliefs
  • The situation is critical and requires decisive command.
  • Accurate information is essential to formulate an effective response.
Character traits
Authoritative Decisive Commanding Calm under pressure
Follow Jean-Luc Picard's journey

Alert and focused, maintaining composure under sudden danger while prioritizing mission understanding.

Data enters the hazardous hydraulics room with Tasha Yar to secure the victim's body, then independently investigates the sabotage by reactivating the laser drill program. When the drill attacks, Data displays quick reflexes to dodge lethal blasts, demonstrating analytical curiosity and calm under mortal threat.

Goals in this moment
  • Recover Malencon’s body safely.
  • Analyze and understand the nature of the sabotage and malfunction.
Active beliefs
  • The sabotage is active and possibly intelligent.
  • Data’s precision and calm are critical for survival and investigation.
Character traits
Analytical Alert Brave Methodical
Follow Data's journey

Tense but controlled, balancing concern for the victim with mission priorities.

Commander Riker coordinates the remote shutdown of power for safety, organizes the recovery and transport of Malencon's body, maintains communication with transporter room, and manages logistical aspects with tense focus.

Goals in this moment
  • Safely retrieve Malencon’s body from a hazardous environment.
  • Maintain clear communication flow with transporter and command.
Active beliefs
  • Safety protocols must be strictly followed to prevent further casualties.
  • Rapid recovery and medical attention are critical, even if hope is slim.
Character traits
Tense Focused Pragmatic Supportive
Follow William Riker's journey

Concerned and alert, balancing technical control with immediate crisis response.

Geordi La Forge manages the main control room consoles alongside Bensen, overseeing the power shutdown and servomotor lock. He communicates with Data, responds urgently to the hostile laser drill activation, and hastens to assist on site, displaying technical mastery and concern.

Goals in this moment
  • Ensure safety by securing power and systems remotely.
  • Assist Data and contain the sabotage threat.
Active beliefs
  • Technical measures can stabilize the sabotage situation.
  • Quick response is essential to protect personnel and equipment.
Character traits
Concerned Focused Technically skilled Responsive
Follow Geordi La …'s journey

Reluctantly compliant, carrying underlying tension and responsibility.

Kurt Mandl, reluctant yet tense, agrees to accompany the team into the hydraulics room, embodying a conflicted leadership figure caught between duty and fear amid escalating sabotage and tragedy.

Goals in this moment
  • Maintain some control over the unfolding disaster.
  • Support recovery efforts despite personal reservations.
Active beliefs
  • The situation is deteriorating beyond his comfort level.
  • Presence is necessary even when fearful.
Character traits
Reluctant Tense Defensive Fractured
Follow Kurt Mandl's journey

Distressed and vulnerable, grappling with loss and the need for connection.

Luisa Kim, emotionally distressed, insists on accompanying the away team to be present for Malencon, expressing concern and empathy. She requests Kurt Mandl join, revealing her emotional investment and hope for solidarity amid tragedy.

Goals in this moment
  • Be with the team during the recovery operation.
  • Support colleagues facing the crisis first-hand.
Active beliefs
  • Presence with the team is important for morale.
  • Togetherness can help face the emotional toll of sabotage.
Character traits
Distressed Concerned Empathetic Optimistic
Follow Luisa Kim's journey

Anxious and overwhelmed, silently absorbing the gravity of the sabotage's destruction.

Bjorn Bensen supports Geordi in locking down the hydraulics system and power shutdown, works the controls with visible anxiety, and follows the team’s movements closely. His presence underscores technical responsibility tempered by worry over the sabotage’s impact.

Goals in this moment
  • Assist in safely powering down hazardous systems.
  • Monitor the unfolding crisis from the control room.
Active beliefs
  • The sabotage is beyond normal malfunction.
  • Preventing further damage requires coordinated control.
Character traits
Anxious Silent observer Cautious Diligent
Follow Bjorn Bensen's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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USS Enterprise Battle Bridge Control Consoles

USS Enterprise Battle Bridge Control Console remains a distant command interface monitored indirectly as the away team operates on-site, symbolizing remote command authority and the separation between bridge command and hazardous operations.

Before: Operational and monitoring base systems remotely.
After: Continues to provide command support but with limited …
Before: Operational and monitoring base systems remotely.
After: Continues to provide command support but with limited direct influence over on-site events.
Servomotor Drive System

The servomotor drive system is remotely locked by Bensen and Geordi to secure the hydraulics room during power shutdown, attempting to create a safe environment for recovery operations, highlighting the critical role of safety protocols amid sabotage.

Before: Active and controlling hydraulic movement with normal operation.
After: Locked and safely secured, preventing accidental machinery movement …
Before: Active and controlling hydraulic movement with normal operation.
After: Locked and safely secured, preventing accidental machinery movement during power shutdown.
Sabotaged Laser Drilling Systems

The sabotaged laser drill, once a routine industrial tool, is reactivated by Data to understand its malfunction but turns aggressively hostile, firing lethal laser blasts at Data. It transforms from benign equipment into a direct antagonist, revealing the inorganic life-form’s dangerous interference.

Before: Inactive, embedded within the hydraulics room amid twisted …
After: Reactivated and hostile, actively firing laser blasts targeting …
Before: Inactive, embedded within the hydraulics room amid twisted wreckage, disabled remotely via power shutdown.
After: Reactivated and hostile, actively firing laser blasts targeting Data before being shut down again.
Malencon's Body

Malencon's body serves as the grim focal point of the event, anchoring the investigation into sabotage. It is carefully recovered by Tasha Yar and Data, tagged with a communicator for transport to Sickbay, symbolizing the human cost of the crisis.

Before: Lying lifeless amid twisted wreckage in the hydraulics …
After: Affixed with communicator and beamed up to Enterprise …
Before: Lying lifeless amid twisted wreckage in the hydraulics room, exposed to hazardous malfunctioning equipment.
After: Affixed with communicator and beamed up to Enterprise Sickbay for medical examination.
Geordi's Portable Communicator (Handset)

Portable communicators are used extensively in this event for real-time communication between the hydraulics room, main control room, transporter room, and bridge, facilitating coordination amid chaos and enabling Data and others to issue commands and reports.

Before: In possession of away team and control room …
After: In continuous use, critical for command and control …
Before: In possession of away team and control room personnel, active but with limited situational awareness.
After: In continuous use, critical for command and control throughout the event.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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USS Enterprise Transporter Room 4

USS Enterprise Transporter Room 4 functions as the critical transfer point where Malencon’s body and later members of the away team are beamed aboard for medical examination and safety, symbolizing the threshold from danger to healing.

Atmosphere Clinical and urgent, suffused with sterile lighting and charged with emotional weight.
Function Gateway for evacuation and medical transport from the hazardous base to the starship.
Symbolism Marks the transition between death’s proximity and hope for resolution.
Access Restricted to authorized personnel during transport operations.
Glowing transporter consoles emitting shimmering beams. Tension-filled silence punctuated by transport sounds.
Corridor Outside Hydraulics Room

The hydraulics room forms the crucible of this event, housing the sabotage's physical devastation, Malencon’s body, and the hostile laser drill. It serves as a dangerous battleground where the crew confronts a lethal inorganic threat and attempts recovery amid chaos.

Atmosphere Tense, oppressive, and chaotic, filled with the sounds of malfunction, laser blasts, and the weight …
Function Primary battleground and investigation site for sabotage aftermath and active threat confrontation.
Symbolism Embodies the destructive consequences of unchecked sabotage and the encroachment of alien life on human …
Access Restricted due to power shutdown and hazardous conditions; only essential personnel enter under strict safety …
Twisted metal and wreckage litter the room. Intermittent laser blasts and mechanical noises create a hostile environment.
Main Control Room

The main control room is the operational nerve center where Geordi and Bensen coordinate power shutdowns, monitor system statuses, and communicate with the away team, embodying the fragile command bastion amid technological crisis.

Atmosphere Focused and tense, with flickering consoles and urgent communications dominating the mood.
Function Control center managing safety protocols and remote system operations during the crisis.
Symbolism Represents human attempt to impose order and safety amid mechanical chaos.
Access Staffed by technical personnel only, access tightly controlled during emergency.
Array of computer panels and displays. Sounds of urgent voice communications and console beeps.
Sickbay (USS Enterprise)

Enterprise Sickbay awaits Malencon’s body for medical examination and investigation, embodying the frontline of healing and scientific inquiry amid the fallout of sabotage and death.

Atmosphere Harshly lit, sterile, and tense, focused on critical medical intervention.
Function Medical facility receiving evidence and victims from the sabotage incident.
Symbolism Represents hope for understanding and recovery despite tragedy.
Access Restricted to medical staff and authorized personnel.
Bright clinical lighting highlighting every detail. Quiet urgency and focus of medical teams.

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 6
Character Continuity

"Data’s narrow escape from the laser attack establishes the laser system’s hostile reprogramming and sets the stage for suspicion of sabotage directed against the Enterprise team."

Hydraulics Power Shutdown and Laser Sabotage Escalation
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Character Continuity

"Data’s narrow escape from the laser attack establishes the laser system’s hostile reprogramming and sets the stage for suspicion of sabotage directed against the Enterprise team."

Data Confronts Deadly Sabotage in Laser Drill
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Character Continuity

"Data’s narrow escape from the laser attack establishes the laser system’s hostile reprogramming and sets the stage for suspicion of sabotage directed against the Enterprise team."

Data Alone Confronts Sabotage Amid Laser Barrage
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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"The chaos of Malencon's death leads Data and Tasha to enter the hydraulics room for recovery, initiating the deeper investigation into the sabotage."

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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"The chaos of Malencon's death leads Data and Tasha to enter the hydraulics room for recovery, initiating the deeper investigation into the sabotage."

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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"The chaos of Malencon's death leads Data and Tasha to enter the hydraulics room for recovery, initiating the deeper investigation into the sabotage."

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What this causes 6
Causal

"Data’s experience with the hostile laser system leads to the realization and report that the system was deliberately reprogrammed, escalating the investigation and suspicion among the crew."

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Causal

"Data’s experience with the hostile laser system leads to the realization and report that the system was deliberately reprogrammed, escalating the investigation and suspicion among the crew."

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Causal

"Data’s experience with the hostile laser system leads to the realization and report that the system was deliberately reprogrammed, escalating the investigation and suspicion among the crew."

Picard Declares Investigative Command Amidinveling Crisis
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Character Continuity

"Data’s narrow escape from the laser attack establishes the laser system’s hostile reprogramming and sets the stage for suspicion of sabotage directed against the Enterprise team."

Hydraulics Power Shutdown and Laser Sabotage Escalation
S1E17 · Home Soil
Character Continuity

"Data’s narrow escape from the laser attack establishes the laser system’s hostile reprogramming and sets the stage for suspicion of sabotage directed against the Enterprise team."

Data Confronts Deadly Sabotage in Laser Drill
S1E17 · Home Soil
Character Continuity

"Data’s narrow escape from the laser attack establishes the laser system’s hostile reprogramming and sets the stage for suspicion of sabotage directed against the Enterprise team."

Data Alone Confronts Sabotage Amid Laser Barrage
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Key Dialogue

"PICARD'S COM VOICE: Situation report, Number One."
"RIKER: For safety reasons, we're shutting off all power to the hydraulics room before entering to recover the body. Then we'll beam him up to Sickbay, but from the look of his wounds, it's probably hopeless."
"DATA (after dodging laser blast): Servos OFF!"
"GEORDI: La Forge to Enterprise. We have a problem!"
"BENSEN: A year's work destroyed!"
"DATA: I had no choice."