Violent Stop — Data Seizes Command
Plot Beats
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The Enterprise violently halts from a chaotic spin, freezing the crew in stunned silence as Data commands the bridge—this abrupt stop shatters the illusion of control and signals an external, incomprehensible force has intervened.
Who Was There
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Externally composed and analytically engaged; internally focused on maximizing situational data rather than emoting, with undertone of urgency expressed as increased processing priority.
Data takes formal command of the bridge immediately after the ship stops, converting the crew's startled reaction into procedural action by issuing or preparing to issue orders, organizing sensors and stabilizing bridge functions with clinical precision.
- • Reassert operational control of the bridge and ship systems.
- • Collect and analyze sensor data to identify the cause of the sudden spin and halt.
- • Orderly, logical procedure reduces chaos and limits harm.
- • Immediate, data-driven action is the most effective defense against unknown external threats.
Location Details
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The Main Bridge is the stage where motion, sound, and command coalesce: it absorbs the physical jerk of the ship, frames the crew's collective reaction, and becomes the arena in which Data imposes procedural order. In this event the bridge embodies both vulnerability and the vessel's last immediate line of coordinated defense.
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