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S1E13 · The Big Goodbye

Picard and Riker Confront the Lingering Shadows

On the Enterprise bridge, Captain Picard completes the delicate and culturally significant Jaradan greeting, successfully securing a fragile new diplomatic alliance that promises hope for the Federation. The bridge crew holds tense silence, underscoring the high stakes of this moment. Once the Jaradan leader's approving response echoes across the viewscreen, relief floods the room. Yet the victory is tempered by Riker’s casual, almost tentative attempt to lighten the mood with a remark about vacation. Picard’s grave, haunting reply reveals the enduring psychological scars left by their harrowing Holodeck ordeal—a stark reminder that beneath this political triumph lies a deep personal cost for those who survived the lethal simulation. This moment crystallizes how close they came to death and the invisible wounds carried forward even in victory.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Riker breaks the heavy silence with a casual 'Have a nice vacation?' while Picard’s long smile and grave reply reveal the lingering psychological scars from their ordeal.

relief to somber reflection ['Main Bridge']

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Urgent focus driven by the importance of establishing contact without delay.

Lieutenant Natasha Yar urgently alerts Captain Picard that the hailing frequencies are open, enabling the critical communication channel to the Jaradan leader, displaying professionalism and urgency in a high-pressure moment.

Goals in this moment
  • To confirm and maintain open communications with the Jaradan
  • To support Captain Picard and the diplomatic mission by managing technical operations
Active beliefs
  • Clear and timely communication is key to mission success
  • Maintaining operational readiness under pressure is critical
Character traits
vigilant efficient alert
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Focused and relieved upon diplomatic success but deeply grave and haunted by the near-death experience endured moments before.

Captain Jean-Luc Picard stands at the command station delivering the precise and culturally significant Jaradan greeting with commanding presence and focused solemnity. After securing the alliance, he reveals his internal trauma through a grave, haunted reply to Riker’s lightheartedness, embodying both relief and the lingering psychological weight from the Holodeck crisis.

Goals in this moment
  • To successfully complete the culturally delicate Jaradan greeting without error
  • To secure peaceful diplomatic relations that benefit the Federation
Active beliefs
  • Respectful, accurate communication is essential for building fragile alliances
  • Personal trauma from the Holodeck ordeal will continue to affect him despite external victories
Character traits
disciplined resolute vulnerable haunted
Follow Jean-Luc Picard's journey

Hopeful and lightly amused, masking concern beneath his casual tone.

Commander William Riker stands close by, visibly relaxed and hopeful, breaking the tense silence after the successful greeting with a casual, lighthearted remark about taking a vacation, attempting to ease the crew's collective tension with humor.

Goals in this moment
  • To lighten the mood after a tense diplomatic moment
  • To affirm camaraderie and resilience among the crew
Active beliefs
  • Humor can alleviate tension and reinforce morale
  • Their recent ordeal needs to be acknowledged but not dwelled upon
Character traits
assertive supportive optimistic tactful
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Approving and hopeful, signaling a new diplomatic chapter.

The Jaradan Leader appears on the viewscreen with a dignified, approving presence, responding warmly and respectfully to Picard’s greeting, signaling acceptance and the hopeful beginning of diplomatic relations.

Goals in this moment
  • To evaluate the Federation’s cultural respect and sincerity
  • To establish a fragile but promising alliance
Active beliefs
  • Cultural protocol is paramount in interspecies diplomacy
  • The Federation’s approach will determine future relations
Character traits
authoritative ceremonial respectful
Follow Jaradan Leader's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Enterprise Hailing Frequencies (Bridge Hailing Channel / Open Hailing Frequency)

The Enterprise hailing frequencies serve as the essential communication channel that allows Captain Picard to transmit the culturally significant Jaradan greeting and then receive the approving response from the Jaradan leader, enabling the diplomatic breakthrough.

Before: Hailing frequencies were closed or inactive prior to …
After: Hailing frequencies remain open and active, facilitating ongoing …
Before: Hailing frequencies were closed or inactive prior to being commanded open by Captain Picard.
After: Hailing frequencies remain open and active, facilitating ongoing communication and cementing the nascent alliance.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Main Bridge

The Main Bridge of the USS Enterprise functions as the nerve center where the highest stakes of diplomatic contact unfold. Its high-tech consoles and alert status frame the tense silence as Picard delivers the delicate Jaradan greeting. The bridge captures the crew’s collective anxiety, hope, and relief, embodying the burden of command and the fragile promise of peace.

Atmosphere Tense silence broken by quiet relief, layered with the shadow of recent trauma and the …
Function Command center and diplomatic meeting place where critical first contact is made.
Symbolism Represents the heart of Federation authority and the weight of interstellar responsibility.
Access Restricted to senior officers and essential personnel during this diplomatic exchange.
Dim lighting focused on command consoles The large viewscreen displaying the Jaradan leader Subdued ambient hum of starship operations

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 2
Causal

"Picard's flawless delivery of the Jaradan greeting opens the diplomatic dialogue, directly linking his Holodeck ordeal's consequence to the story's diplomatic resolution."

Picard Secures Fragile Jaradan Alliance Through Mastered Greeting
S1E13 · The Big Goodbye
Emotional Echo medium

"The Jaradan leader's response and new alliance contrast with Riker's casual remark and Picard's grave reply, reflecting lingering psychological scars from the Holodeck ordeal."

Picard Secures Fragile Jaradan Alliance Through Mastered Greeting
S1E13 · The Big Goodbye
What this causes 2
Causal

"Picard's flawless delivery of the Jaradan greeting opens the diplomatic dialogue, directly linking his Holodeck ordeal's consequence to the story's diplomatic resolution."

Picard Secures Fragile Jaradan Alliance Through Mastered Greeting
S1E13 · The Big Goodbye
Emotional Echo medium

"The Jaradan leader's response and new alliance contrast with Riker's casual remark and Picard's grave reply, reflecting lingering psychological scars from the Holodeck ordeal."

Picard Secures Fragile Jaradan Alliance Through Mastered Greeting
S1E13 · The Big Goodbye

Part of Larger Arcs

Key Dialogue

"RIKER: So... Have a nice vacation?"
"PICARD: It was a nice place to visit, but I wouldn't want to die there."