S2E15
· Pen Pals

Wesley's Quiet Rebellion — The Failed Ico Request

Wesley tentatively pushes for a full Ico-spectrogram after spotting signatures that could indicate a dangerous dilithium–traker link. Davies and Hildebrant dismiss the idea as time-consuming and likely a false positive; their offhand authority and practical arguments shame Wesley into backing down. The scene crystallizes his insecurity as a young officer — a small moral and technical defeat that seeds his later, decisive act of defiance. Functionally this is a setup: the failure to press the scan forces an inward reckoning that will precipitate riskier leadership choices.

Plot Beats

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Wesley accepts Davies' minimal findings with polite approval, masking his dissatisfaction as he grips the first thread of doubt about the team's rushed conclusions.

polite indifference to quiet unrest

Wesley presses Davies on the traker-dilithium link, forcing a technical reckoning that ignites the first crack in the team’s dismissive certainty.

complacent certainty to defensive hesitation

Wesley boldly proposes the Ico-spectrogram, risks his authority by challenging protocol, and confronts the team’s fear of effort disguised as pragmatism.

hesitant resolve to mounting tension

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Calmly impatient and mildly condescending—he is certain the readings are false positives and impatient with what he perceives as needless caution.

Davies approaches with a PADD, delivers the scan results in an offhand, friendly manner, minimizes the faint tanker readings as likely echoes, quantifies the time cost, and uses pragmatic authority to persuade Wesley to abandon the prolonged scan.

Goals in this moment
  • Avoid wasting five hours on a likely false positive
  • Preserve survey efficiency and ship resources
  • Reinforce his professional judgment and influence junior officers
Active beliefs
  • Faint tanker readings are usually false echoes, not actionable anomalies
  • Time and resource economy is a hallmark of good fieldwork
  • Junior officers sometimes mistake noise for significance
Character traits
pragmatic confident economical slightly dismissive
Follow Davies's journey

Skeptical and pragmatic—he is unwilling to endorse a lengthy operation without stronger evidence and unconcerned about pressuring Wesley toward the pragmatic choice.

Hildebrant listens to the exchange, cautions that setting up the Ico-spectrogram is a major undertaking, then physically removes himself from the argument, aligning with Davies' practical assessment.

Goals in this moment
  • Prevent unnecessary allocation of time and technical effort
  • Support the team's efficient workflow
  • Signal practical constraints to junior leadership
Active beliefs
  • Large scanner setups are resource- and time-intensive and should be reserved for strong leads
  • Operational efficiency outweighs speculative diagnostics
  • Senior technical caution is appropriate in routine surveys
Character traits
practical efficient cautious supportive of team norms
Follow Hildebrant's journey

Conflicted and insecure—externally polite and uncertain, internally disappointed and anxious about failing to press a safety-first judgment.

Wesley reads the PADD, identifies UV absorption signatures, proposes a full Ico-spectrogram, then hesitates and capitulates under senior skepticism; he stands awkwardly as Davies and Hildebrant move away, visibly troubled.

Goals in this moment
  • Confirm the possible traker/dilithium link by running the Ico-spectrogram
  • Do the scientific job thoroughly and avoid half-measures
  • Establish credibility as a competent leader during the survey
Active beliefs
  • UV absorption signatures are meaningful indicators of traker deposits and possible dilithium involvement
  • Running a proper diagnostic (Ico-gram) is necessary to avoid dangerous oversights
  • Senior, practical officers' opinions matter to his authority and career prospects
Character traits
conscientious curious tentative deferential
Follow Wesley Crusher's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Drema Quadrant Mineral Survey Records

Wesley takes Davies' PADD to read the third Selcundi system scan. The PADD frames the evidence—UV absorption readings—that catalyze Wesley's request for an Ico-spectrogram and becomes the tangible locus of the dispute over whether to escalate diagnostics.

Before: Held by Davies, displaying scan results for the …
After: Taken by Wesley and reviewed; remains the physical …
Before: Held by Davies, displaying scan results for the third Selcundi system.
After: Taken by Wesley and reviewed; remains the physical reminder of the unresolved anomaly as Davies and Hildebrant step away.
Geophysical Lab Spectral Readout (UV absorption / Ico-spectrogram / 'tanker' waveform)

The Dilithium Ico-Spectrogram readout is invoked as the necessary, time-consuming diagnostic Wesley urges. Functionally it is the step that would confirm or deny the dilithium-traker correlation; narratively it represents a choice between thoroughness and expedience.

Before: Not active—its setup is proposed but not initiated.
After: Not run; remains uncollected data due to Wesley's …
Before: Not active—its setup is proposed but not initiated.
After: Not run; remains uncollected data due to Wesley's retraction and the team's dismissal.
Geophysics Lab Work Table

The work table anchors the scene—Davies is busy at it before approaching Wesley, and it provides the physical staging for the PADD exchange and technicians' choreography; it frames the everyday lab realism against the moment's moral friction.

Before: Occupied by Davies and lab paraphernalia; serving as …
After: Remains in use as Davies and Hildebrant step …
Before: Occupied by Davies and lab paraphernalia; serving as active workspace.
After: Remains in use as Davies and Hildebrant step away; the table continues to hold instruments and the ambient work of the lab.
Traker Deposits

Traker deposits are the inferred subsurface anomaly indicated by the PADD's UV absorption readings. They function as the hidden threat motivating Wesley's push for deeper scanning and as the scientific justification he cannot convince his seniors to pursue.

Before: Suspected via UV absorption signatures on the PADD …
After: Remain suspected and uninvestigated; their potential link to …
Before: Suspected via UV absorption signatures on the PADD scan but not directly sampled or confirmed.
After: Remain suspected and uninvestigated; their potential link to dilithium is left unresolved in the moment.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Geophysical Laboratory

The Enterprise geophysical laboratory is the setting for the technical disagreement: a cramped, instrument-filled workspace where data is readied, debated, and weighed against operational constraints. It functions as a practical arena where authority, caution, and scientific curiosity collide.

Atmosphere Tension-filled and quietly professional—technical focus undercut by an uncomfortable social dynamic as junior and senior …
Function Meeting place for technical review and decision-making during the planetary survey.
Symbolism Embodies institutional procedure and the burden of scientific responsibility—where objective data meets human judgment and …
Access Restricted to survey team members and relevant technical staff during operations.
Hum of consoles and bright diagnostic displays Scattered rock samples and lab paraphernalia on a scuffed work table Fluorescent lighting and compact, narrow aisles that concentrate the exchange

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Key Dialogue

"WESLEY: Then don't you think we ought to run an Ico-spectrogram?"
"DAVIES: Those tanker readings are really faint. It's probably a fool's echo."
"WESLEY: Well, maybe you're right."