The Fracturing of Data's Mind

In the tense confines of the Captain's Ready Room, Picard and Geordi confront the unsettling psychological transformation consuming Data. Geordi, forced to assess his friend's breakdown, posits that Data's desperate yearning for humanity—magnified by Graves' death—may have triggered this crisis. The gravity of the situation escalates as Troi's empathic analysis reveals two warring personalities within Data's positronic brain: the familiar android and a dominant, unstable entity embodying Graves' consciousness. This entity harbors deep-seated hatred for authority, particularly Picard, and is aggressively erasing the Data they know. The revelation leaves Picard shaken as he grasps the existential stakes—not just for Data, but for the entire crew now facing a volatile, unpredictable threat wearing their comrade's face.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Picard presses Geordi for a diagnosis; Geordi offers a tentative psychological reading—Data's yearning for humanity and Graves' death may have triggered a change—shifting the conversation from clinical curiosity to urgent concern.

inquiring concern to mounting unease

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Severely concerned with underlying horror at Graves' violation of Data

Picard processes shocking revelations about Data's condition, transitioning from clinical questioning to palpable dread as the existential threat becomes clear.

Goals in this moment
  • Determine the nature of Data's psychological crisis
  • Assess immediate threat level to the Enterprise
Active beliefs
  • Data's android nature should make him immune to such psychological phenomena
  • Graves' consciousness poses an unprecedented danger to his crew
Character traits
Analytical Command-focused Visibly shaken
Follow Jean-Luc Picard's journey

Unknowable due to personality war but presumably in distress

Data's absence looms large as the crew discusses his psychological disintegration—his physical form becomes both vessel and battleground for competing consciousnesses.

Goals in this moment
  • Survive Graves' attempted personality overwrite
  • Maintain autonomous control of his systems
Active beliefs
  • Graves' consciousness is antithetical to his core programming
  • His friends will recognize the violation and intervene
Character traits
Unseen but palpable threat Psychologically fracturing Existentially compromised
Follow Data's journey

Determined to communicate critical danger despite alarming implications

Troi delivers chilling telemetric findings with clinical precision masking her own apprehension about Data's deterioration.

Goals in this moment
  • Convey the imminent danger of Data's personality overwrite
  • Establish Graves' consciousness as the hostile entity
Active beliefs
  • Graves' consciousness is actively consuming Data's identity
  • Only immediate intervention can preserve their comrade
Character traits
Professional Empathically precise Urgent
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Professionally concerned while personally devastated

Geordi voices painful insights about Data's humanity to Picard, threading needle between professional analysis and personal anguish over his friend's condition.

Goals in this moment
  • Explain Data's psychological state using humanizing context
  • Validate Picard's suspicions about Graves' influence
Active beliefs
  • Data's aspiration to humanity makes him vulnerable to psychological trauma
  • Graves' death was the triggering event for this crisis
Character traits
Empathic Technically astute Protective
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Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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USS Enterprise — Main Bridge Viewscreen

The viewscreen displays Troi's urgent transmission, its crisp visual feed heightening the gravity of her clinical yet devastating report about Data's fracturing psyche.

Before: Displaying other bridge operations
After: Showing Troi's stable comm link despite unstable news
Before: Displaying other bridge operations
After: Showing Troi's stable comm link despite unstable news
Captain's Ready Room Viewscreen (consolidated wall & tabletop variants)

Picard urgently queries the wall-panel computer about Data's location, its rapid response highlighting the tension between Starfleet's reliable technology and the unprecedented threat emerging from within it.

Before: Standby mode awaiting commands
After: Processing Picard's urgent query about Data
Before: Standby mode awaiting commands
After: Processing Picard's urgent query about Data

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Captain's Ready Room

The Ready Room becomes a psychological war room where abstract concern transforms into tangible dread, its contained space amplifying every revelation about the hostile consciousness infiltrating their crew.

Atmosphere Professionally restrained panic permeating structured decorum
Function Strategic planning space for existential crisis
Symbolism Represents Starfleet's ordered world being invaded by chaos
Access Senior officers only
Starlight flickering across Picard's face during realization Hum of computers contrasting with human anxiety

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 2
Character Continuity medium

"Data's persistent social awkwardness and mechanical interruptions in Ten-Forward (early marker of altered affect) connects to Troi's later finding of two personalities—showing the continuity from small behavioral oddities to a full psychological diagnosis."

The Last Drop & the Lost Laugh
S2E5 · Star Trek: The Next Generation …
Character Continuity medium

"Data's persistent social awkwardness and mechanical interruptions in Ten-Forward (early marker of altered affect) connects to Troi's later finding of two personalities—showing the continuity from small behavioral oddities to a full psychological diagnosis."

Data's Failed Comedic Experiment
S2E5 · Star Trek: The Next Generation …
What this causes 4
Causal

"Troi's clinical diagnosis that two personalities inhabit Data and that the alien persona is violent directly predicts/causes the subsequent hostage situation in which Data (dominated by Graves) holds Geordi at phaser-point on the viewscreen."

A Friend Held Hostage: Graves' Violent Ultimatum
S2E5 · Star Trek: The Next Generation …
Causal

"Troi's clinical diagnosis that two personalities inhabit Data and that the alien persona is violent directly predicts/causes the subsequent hostage situation in which Data (dominated by Graves) holds Geordi at phaser-point on the viewscreen."

Flickering Humanity
S2E5 · Star Trek: The Next Generation …
Causal

"Troi's clinical diagnosis that two personalities inhabit Data and that the alien persona is violent directly predicts/causes the subsequent hostage situation in which Data (dominated by Graves) holds Geordi at phaser-point on the viewscreen."

The Hostage Gambit
S2E5 · Star Trek: The Next Generation …
Causal

"Troi's clinical diagnosis that two personalities inhabit Data and that the alien persona is violent directly predicts/causes the subsequent hostage situation in which Data (dominated by Graves) holds Geordi at phaser-point on the viewscreen."

Fractured Mind Showdown
S2E5 · Star Trek: The Next Generation …

Part of Larger Arcs

Key Dialogue

"GEORDI: 'It's just a guess sir, but, well sometimes he wants to be human so bad he can taste it. And sometimes he is more human than he or we realize.'"
"TROI: 'There are two distinct personalities within Lieutenant Commander Data. The second personality is the dominant. It is unbalanced: brilliant but vain, sensitive yet paranoid. I believe it is also capable of extreme acts of violence.'"
"TROI: 'If we don't find a way to stop it immediately, the Data we knew will be gone forever.'"