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S1E13 · The Big Goodbye

Jaradan Reject Riker, Demand Captain’s Direct Greeting

On the Enterprise bridge, the fragile diplomatic tensions with the Jaradan escalate sharply. Commander Riker attempts to engage the alien delegation, but their alien communication voice layers simultaneous tones, rejecting Riker’s authority outright and demanding a direct message from Captain Picard. The Jaradan's refusal to acknowledge any subordinate highlights their deep mistrust and inflames the crisis. Isolated and frustrated, Riker must now grapple with both the diplomatic impasse and the urgent need to retrieve Picard from the malfunctioning Holodeck, underscoring his impotence amid mounting external threats.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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The Jaradan voice, a disturbing fusion of three distinct tones, demands the Enterprise honor them and awaits the captain’s greeting, escalating diplomatic pressure.

tense formality to mounting menace ['USS Enterprise main bridge']

Riker identifies himself as first officer, prompting an angry Jaradan interruption rejecting him for the absent captain and refusing to show themselves to a subordinate.

assertive diplomacy to outright rejection ['USS Enterprise main bridge']

Riker fumes quietly as the Jaradan end communication with growing unrest, his frustration mirrored by the faint buzzing underscoring their anger.

hope to frustration ['USS Enterprise main bridge']

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Controlled frustration with undertones of isolation and urgency

Commander Riker attempts to assert command and engage diplomatically with the Jaradan despite their clear rejection of his authority. He remains composed but visibly frustrated, leading the interaction from the bridge and making a decisive command to retrieve Captain Picard from the Holodeck following the communication breakdown.

Goals in this moment
  • Establish formal, respectful diplomatic communication with the Jaradan
  • Maintain command authority and control over the crisis
  • Secure Captain Picard’s immediate retrieval to resolve the impasse
  • Prevent escalation of tensions with the alien delegation
Active beliefs
  • Only direct communication from Captain Picard will satisfy the Jaradan
  • Diplomatic protocol and hierarchy must be respected to preserve peace
  • Delays in resolving the Holodeck malfunction endanger the mission
  • The Jaradan are deeply mistrustful and quick to perceive affront
Character traits
authoritative diplomatic resilient decisive frustrated
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Focused professionalism with underlying concern for mission jeopardy

Geordi La Forge receives the hostile Jaradan subspace message and promptly relays it to Riker. After Riker’s command, he physically exits the bridge to locate and retrieve Captain Picard from the malfunctioning Holodeck, acting as a vital link between the bridge command and the Holodeck.

Goals in this moment
  • Ensure the bridge is informed of all incoming communications
  • Locate Captain Picard swiftly to assist in resolving the diplomatic deadlock
  • Maintain technical control amidst increasing external and internal pressures
  • Support Commander Riker’s command decisions effectively
Active beliefs
  • Picard’s presence is crucial to calming the Jaradan crisis
  • Timely technical and logistical coordination underpins mission success
  • The Jaradan’s rejection signals serious risk to Federation diplomacy
  • Holodeck malfunction presents an urgent operational threat requiring immediate action
Character traits
responsive technical efficient supportive
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Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Captain's Ready Room Data Terminal and Information Viewscreen

The Jaradan Subspace Message acts as the medium through which the alien delegation communicates their rejection of Commander Riker and demands the captain's direct involvement. It is the catalyst for the diplomatic impasse and heightens the tension aboard the Enterprise bridge.

Before: Idle, pending receipt of critical alien communication aboard …
After: Displayed and acknowledged; message content causes diplomatic escalation …
Before: Idle, pending receipt of critical alien communication aboard the Enterprise bridge
After: Displayed and acknowledged; message content causes diplomatic escalation and command action
USS Enterprise — Main Bridge Viewscreen

The Enterprise Bridge Viewer Screen displays the Jaradan subspace communication in real-time, serving as the visual and auditory interface through which Riker and the crew perceive the alien voices. It embodies the fragile, tense atmosphere of the diplomatic crisis and the challenge Riker faces in commanding respect.

Before: Operational and ready to receive subspace transmissions
After: Continuing to display the hostile message; focal point …
Before: Operational and ready to receive subspace transmissions
After: Continuing to display the hostile message; focal point of bridge attention

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Main Bridge

The Main Bridge of the USS Enterprise serves as the nerve center for command decisions and diplomatic engagement during the crisis. It frames the tense confrontation with the Jaradan, amplifying the emotional and procedural stakes through its high-tech environment and concentration of senior officers.

Atmosphere Tense and charged with underlying frustration, marked by technological alerts and controlled urgency
Function Central command hub and stage for escalating diplomatic confrontation
Symbolism Represents Starfleet authority and the fragile veneer of control amid external threats
Access Restricted to senior staff and authorized personnel during crisis
High-tech consoles with flashing alerts Wall-mounted communication viewscreen displaying alien message Ambient hum of starship operations Constrained, high-pressure atmosphere
Holodeck Dixon Hill San Francisco Simulation

The Holodeck Dixon Hill San Francisco Simulation is the off-stage location referenced as the place where Captain Picard is trapped due to malfunction. It represents both a mental escape and an operational bottleneck, underscoring the urgency to recover Picard to restore effective command and satisfy the Jaradan’s demands.

Atmosphere Implied tension and urgency, framed by malfunction and entrapment
Function Critical mission objective location for retrieving the captain
Symbolism Embodies isolation, escapism, and the fragility of command continuity
Access Restricted to authorized personnel; currently inaccessible due to malfunction
Advanced holographic technology Simulated 1941 noir setting Malfunction causing entrapment Absent visual presence in the bridge scene

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 4
Causal

"Riker's increasing frustration with the hostile Jaradan communications leads to the order to fetch Picard from the Holodeck, accelerating the crisis response."

Jaradan Abruptly Sever Communications, Escalating Diplomatic Tensions
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Causal

"Riker's increasing frustration with the hostile Jaradan communications leads to the order to fetch Picard from the Holodeck, accelerating the crisis response."

Jaradan Ultimatum Forces Picard's Recall from Holodeck
S1E13 · The Big Goodbye
Thematic Parallel medium

"Jaradan refusal to negotiate with Riker as subordinate parallels their distrust and hostility, thematically underscoring the diplomatic difficulties Picard faces and the tension aboard Enterprise."

Jaradan Abruptly Sever Communications, Escalating Diplomatic Tensions
S1E13 · The Big Goodbye
Thematic Parallel medium

"Jaradan refusal to negotiate with Riker as subordinate parallels their distrust and hostility, thematically underscoring the diplomatic difficulties Picard faces and the tension aboard Enterprise."

Jaradan Ultimatum Forces Picard's Recall from Holodeck
S1E13 · The Big Goodbye
What this causes 4
Causal

"Riker's increasing frustration with the hostile Jaradan communications leads to the order to fetch Picard from the Holodeck, accelerating the crisis response."

Jaradan Abruptly Sever Communications, Escalating Diplomatic Tensions
S1E13 · The Big Goodbye
Causal

"Riker's increasing frustration with the hostile Jaradan communications leads to the order to fetch Picard from the Holodeck, accelerating the crisis response."

Jaradan Ultimatum Forces Picard's Recall from Holodeck
S1E13 · The Big Goodbye
Thematic Parallel medium

"Jaradan refusal to negotiate with Riker as subordinate parallels their distrust and hostility, thematically underscoring the diplomatic difficulties Picard faces and the tension aboard Enterprise."

Jaradan Abruptly Sever Communications, Escalating Diplomatic Tensions
S1E13 · The Big Goodbye
Thematic Parallel medium

"Jaradan refusal to negotiate with Riker as subordinate parallels their distrust and hostility, thematically underscoring the diplomatic difficulties Picard faces and the tension aboard Enterprise."

Jaradan Ultimatum Forces Picard's Recall from Holodeck
S1E13 · The Big Goodbye

Key Dialogue

"RIKER: One could get the feeling they don't exactly trust us."
"JARADAN'S COM VOICE: En-ter-prise. The time has come to honor us. We await your greeting."
"JARADAN'S COM VOICE: -- You are not captain?!"
"JARADAN'S COM VOICE: -- You offend us! We will not show ourselves to a mere subordinate. We await your captain's greeting with growing unrest. End of communication!"
"RIKER: (sighing) Terrific. Get the captain. You'll find him in the Holodeck."