Kolrami's Forty‑Eight‑Hour Ultimatum
Plot Beats
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Kolrami keys up a solar system diagram, naming the Braslota System and the derelict starcruiser Hathaway as the war‑game target. The room pivots from stargazing to target‑lock.
Kolrami needles the choice of commander; Picard answers without flinching, confirming Riker to captain the Hathaway.
Kolrami sets the clock and the rules—forty‑eight hours, simulated weapons, computer‑enforced damage—while Riker presses for clarity on battle conditions. Picard and Riker exchange a look and accept the terms.
Kolrami probes Picard’s earlier resistance; Picard stakes Starfleet’s exploratory ethos, then invokes the Borg threat to justify sharpening tactics.
Who Was There
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Controlled contempt — calm and intellectually confident while deliberately unsettling his hosts to force a visible reaction.
Kolrami drives the briefing: he keys the viewscreen, announces the Braslota diagram and Hathaway target, defines the 48‑hour constraint and technical rules, and levels thinly veiled contempt at Riker and Starfleet doctrine.
- • Impose a rigorous, measurable trial to evaluate tactical competence.
- • Assert intellectual and strategic superiority over Enterprise officers.
- • Strategy and testing under pressure reveal true command ability.
- • Starfleet's exploratory ideals are a liability unless tempered by military readiness.
Measured, morally engaged — outwardly composed but privately uneasy about subordinating exploratory values to martial preparedness.
Picard answers Kolrami's challenge with measured restraint: he names Riker as commander, acknowledges initial resistance, and justifies the exercise as a defensive necessity against the Borg while preserving Starfleet's exploratory identity.
- • Protect Starfleet's institutional values while accepting necessary preparedness measures.
- • Maintain command cohesion and shield his officers from rhetorical provocation.
- • Starfleet's primary mission is exploration and moral conduct.
- • Preparedness against existential threats (the Borg) justifies limited military conditioning.
Quietly determined and slightly annoyed by Kolrami's condescension; eager to prove himself and protect Picard's trust in him.
Riker receives the appointment, questions the realism of the exercise, accepts command with defiant composure and a private pledge to do what he promises, replying with a mixture of skepticism and resolve.
- • Prepare the Hathaway within the forty‑eight hour window and demonstrate competence.
- • Disprove Kolrami's implied contempt by performing effectively under imposed constraints.
- • Tactical skill is a smaller part of command than judgment and intellect.
- • When he commits to a duty he will see it through successfully.
Objects Involved
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The Braslota system diagram is projected as the core visual brief: it identifies orbital vectors, the Hathaway's position and serves as the focal map converting abstract strategy into an executable, time‑boxed task for Riker and Picard.
The ship's holodeck/computer subroutine is invoked conceptually as the adjudicator: it will record 'hits,' register simulated damage and command shutdowns of affected systems, turning data into enforced consequences during the exercise.
Kolrami specifies that Engineering will link a modified laser‑pulse beam to the Enterprise systems so each 'hit' registers electronically; the beam functions as the controlled instrument that will simulate weapon impacts and trigger system responses.
The Hathaway is named and framed as the exercise's objective: an eighty‑year‑old Starcruiser put into the center of the tactical problem, its orbit around the second planet turning it into a tangible, moral and operational test target.
The meeting table anchors the senior staff gathering: data pads, briefing materials and body language are staged around its surface as officers lean, debate and exchange looks while the simulation parameters are laid down.
Location Details
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The second planet of the Braslota system is invoked as the physical locus around which the Hathaway orbits, turning a distant world into the technical battleground and moral anchor for the simulation.
The Observation Lounge functions as the formal but intimate briefing chamber where institutional values collide with tactical demands: its panoramic view and central table provide a ceremonial stage for Kolrami's provocation and Picard's restrained rebuttal.
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Key Dialogue
"KOLRAMI: "The Braslota System. In orbit around the second planet is the eighty-year old Starcruiser, Hathaway.""
"PICARD: "Starfleet is not a military organization. Our purpose is exploration.""
"RIKER: "Mister Kolrami, when I agree to do a thing. I do it.""