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S2E21 · Peak Performance

Reluctant Concession and Kolrami's Public Slight

On the Enterprise bridge Picard is forced to balance protocol and pride: Riker requests Ensign Crusher be allowed to reboard, and Picard grudgingly grants permission while ordering Burke to enforce strict escort and research-only limits. Kolrami, the smug Zakdorn strategist, punctures the formality with a deliberately loud aside—dismissing Crusher as "a non-commissioned child." Picard contains his anger; the concession becomes a turning point that transforms a procedural decision into a personal, political provocation that hardens tensions and raises stakes for command judgment.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Picard consults Kolrami on simulation rules; Kolrami demands an escort and research-only access, and Picard grants the constrained permission and orders Burke to execute.

consultation to constrained approval ['Hathaway bridge via Main Viewer']

Kolrami fires a contemptuous aside, belittling Crusher as a 'non-commissioned child,' and Picard muzzles his irritation, letting the insult harden the brewing clash.

surface civility to restrained anger

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Composed and businesslike; focused on executing orders without engaging in the political friction on the bridge.

At Tactical, Burke announces and receives Picard's order to 'handle that,' then promptly exits to carry out the escort and enforce the limits on Ensign Crusher's access.

Goals in this moment
  • Execute Picard's orders precisely and without causing further disturbance.
  • Ensure the safety and procedural compliance of the returning crew member (Crusher).
Active beliefs
  • Chain of command must be followed without debate.
  • Operational orders should be implemented quickly to preserve efficiency and discipline.
Character traits
dutiful efficient unobtrusive
Follow Burke's journey

Smug and superior; deliberately testing social and command nerves to provoke a reaction and assert intellectual dominance.

Seated to Picard's left, Kolrami weighs in on the simulation rules, prescribes an escort and research-only restriction, then makes a deliberately loud aside dismissing Crusher’s status and mocking Riker’s choice.

Goals in this moment
  • Assert Zakdorn strategic superiority by publicly critiquing personnel choices.
  • Elicit a visible reaction from Picard or Riker that reveals command weaknesses.
Active beliefs
  • Hierarchy and commission status matter more than individual competence.
  • Provocation can be a diagnostic tool to expose leadership flaws.
Character traits
provocative intellectually arrogant socioculturally provocative
Follow Sirna Kolrami's journey

Irritated but controlled; outwardly composed while inwardly stung by Kolrami's insult and aware of the political implications of his decision.

Seated in the command chair, Picard hears Riker's request, solicits Kolrami's opinion, grants permission with limits, and directs Burke to enforce the escort—containing visible irritation at Kolrami's aside.

Goals in this moment
  • Preserve Starfleet protocol and the simulation's integrity by asking for objections and imposing research-only limits.
  • Protect crew morale and reputation by granting the request without escalating a public row with Kolrami.
Active beliefs
  • Command decisions must balance procedure with humanity.
  • Public confrontation with a provocative observer (Kolrami) will damage authority and morale, so restraint is prudent.
Character traits
measured authority disciplinarian pragmatism self-control
Follow Jean-Luc Picard's journey

Absent physically; the mood his absence creates is one of slight procedural vulnerability on the bridge.

Mentioned as conspicuously absent from the bridge; Data's absence is noted implicitly as a gap in analytic presence and affects how command distributes attention and responsibilities in the scene.

Goals in this moment
  • N/A (absent) — his usual goal of providing analysis is unmet in this moment.
  • By being absent, he inadvertently emphasizes human command dynamics between Picard, Riker, and Kolrami.
Active beliefs
  • N/A for present action — the crew expects Data's analytic contributions when present.
  • His absence will require human officers to compensate for diagnostic and tactical analysis.
Character traits
analytic presence (not physically present) reliability implied by absence silent authority via omission
Follow Data's journey

Concerned and practical; focused on the consequence of unattended experiments rather than engaging in political theater.

Appearing on the Main Viewer from the Hathaway bridge, Riker requests Crusher be allowed to reboard and explains the pragmatic reason—unfinished critical experiments—positioning the request as an operational necessity.

Goals in this moment
  • Secure the Enterprise's help to remedy operational oversights on the Hathaway.
  • Protect his crew (Crusher) from professional harm and ensure mission continuity.
Active beliefs
  • Crew competence and the success of the mission trump hierarchy in urgent operational matters.
  • Picard will act reasonably if presented with practical facts.
Character traits
pragmatic protective of crew straightforward
Follow William Riker's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Enterprise Bridge Main Viewer

The Main Viewer presents Riker and the Hathaway bridge visually, converting a remote logistic question into an immediate, bridge‑floor drama and orienting attention to the request's human consequences.

Before: Idle or displaying other bridge data prior to …
After: Shows the Hathaway and Riker; continues as the …
Before: Idle or displaying other bridge data prior to the Hathaway transmission.
After: Shows the Hathaway and Riker; continues as the visual conduit for the communication that precipitated the decision.
Message from the Hathaway

The incoming 'Message from the Hathaway' functions as the trigger for the exchange: it presents Riker, conveys the operational problem (unfinished experiments), and compels Picard to make a judgment about personnel movement and safety.

Before: Queued in ship comms as an awaiting transmission; …
After: Displayed on the Main Viewer and acknowledged; prompted …
Before: Queued in ship comms as an awaiting transmission; not yet displayed.
After: Displayed on the Main Viewer and acknowledged; prompted Picard's orders and Burke's departure.
USS Enterprise-D Bridge Command Chair

The Captain's command chair anchors Picard physically and symbolically as he listens, solicits objections, makes rulings, and withholds public rebuke. It frames his authority as he absorbs Kolrami's provocation and issues the escort order.

Before: Occupied by Picard; serving as the locus of …
After: Still occupied by Picard; retains symbolic authority after …
Before: Occupied by Picard; serving as the locus of command and decision-making.
After: Still occupied by Picard; retains symbolic authority after the decision and the contained tension.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Bridge Tactical Station

Conn Station sits as a quiet witness to the interaction; its posted supernumeraries reflect the bridge's heightened attention and serve as background anchors to Picard's public exercise of authority.

Atmosphere Tense and anticipatory; stillness punctuated by clipped communication.
Function Passive observational node that amplifies the public nature of the decision being made on the …
Symbolism Represents the crew's gaze — the bridge as a public forum for leadership display.
Access Staffed by posted bridge crew; not an open-access area during command operations.
Quiet hum of consoles Supernumeraries posted but motionless Focused, aware glances toward the command chair and Main Viewer

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Key Dialogue

"RIKER: "I'd like to request permission for Ensign Crusher to reboard the Enterprise, Captain.""
"KOLRAMI: "He should be escorted, and have no contact with anything save his research.""
"KOLRAMI: "I saw no sense in Riker choosing him anyway -- he is just a non-commissioned child.""