Leap Through the Flickering Gate

As the Iconian control room collapses around him, Picard makes an impossible, moral decision: the gateway image wildly flickers between the Enterprise bridge and the Romulan cruiser, presenting two futures in a blink. The alien computer's relentless countdown provides a metronome to his choice. Hesitating only an instant—born of duty, fear, and the knowledge of what the Romulans could do with Iconian power—Picard plunges through the unstable portal. This desperate act is the story's hinge: a tactical gamble that precipitates rescue, sacrifice, and the irreversible denial of the gateway's technology.

Plot Beats

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Sparks spit from the console and the room shudders as steam hisses from the walls; the gateway displays the Enterprise bridge, offering a fleeting promise of rescue while an unseen countdown presses the space toward catastrophe.

stability to mounting dread ['gateway showing the bridge of the …

Picard lunges for the aperture, then the view snaps away— the gate now shows the Romulan cruiser's bridge— and he freezes, torn between seizing escape and the knowledge that stepping through may carry fatal consequences.

hope to paralysis ['gateway switches view from Enterprise bridge …

Picard steels himself and plunges through the portal as the globe shatters, committing to a desperate, irreversible act amid the control room's collapse.

hesitation to decisive action ['gateway briefly shows Romulan cruiser bridge']

A computerized litany intones — "Kandar qetar, Kandar jet, kandar piqe, kandar..." — the relentless, alien cadence serving as the control room's countdown and amplifying the scene's ritualized menace.

dread to inevitability

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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No emotion — coldly procedural, producing psychological pressure through cadence rather than affect.

The Iconian Computer Voice intones a relentless, metrically precise countdown in an alien tongue, providing the scene's auditory metronome, escalating urgency and imposing a do-or-die tempo on Picard's decision.

Goals in this moment
  • Continue and complete the programmed launch/countdown sequence without regard for present occupants.
  • Execute its archival/operational directive to activate the gateway mechanism.
Active beliefs
  • The system's prime directive is to complete its sequence; external interference is anomaly, not determinant.
  • Preservation of sequence integrity is paramount, regardless of current biological stakeholders.
Character traits
mechanical relentless authoritative implacable
Follow Iconian Computer …'s journey

Resolute determination undercut by fear—public calm with inner urgency and the heavy weight of potential geopolitical consequences.

Picard dashes across a shaking chamber toward the active gateway, pauses when the destination flickers between two bridges, and then forces himself through the unstable portal as the globe disintegrates, converting doubt into decisive, sacrificial action.

Goals in this moment
  • Prevent Iconian gateway technology from being seized or used by the Romulans.
  • Stop the activation/launch sequence before it can project or replicate dangerous access across civilizations.
Active beliefs
  • If the Romulans gain Iconian gateway access it will endanger the Enterprise and wider peace.
  • Personal action and sacrifice are warranted to protect crew, Federation interests, and to deny a greater harm.
Character traits
decisive morally driven courageous self-sacrificing
Follow Jean-Luc Picard's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Iconian Control Console

The central control console emits sparks and is violently overloaded, its failures signaling system-wide collapse and creating immediate physical hazard that drives characters to act and prevents safe, deliberative solutions.

Before: Operating but critically overloaded; panels sparking and systems …
After: Severely damaged and still sparking; functionally compromised and …
Before: Operating but critically overloaded; panels sparking and systems failing under strain.
After: Severely damaged and still sparking; functionally compromised and contributing to the chamber's instability.
Iconian Control Room Walls

The control room walls vent steam and shudder, contributing to the collapsing environment that forces compressed decision-making and physically restricts safe operation and retreat.

Before: Structurally stressed with vents and conduits failing; steam …
After: Continuing to vent and shake; the room remains …
Before: Structurally stressed with vents and conduits failing; steam beginning to escape from seams.
After: Continuing to vent and shake; the room remains unstable and hazardous after the globe breaks.
Iconian Gateway Globe

The Iconian Gateway Globe projects the portal image and governs the aperture's stability; it serves as both interface and fail-safe, and it physically shatters at the climactic instant, rendering the gateway unstable and marking the technological loss that follows Picard's leap.

Before: Spinning and actively projecting the gateway image; emitting …
After: Shattered at the moment of Picard's transit, producing …
Before: Spinning and actively projecting the gateway image; emitting focused hum and interface light.
After: Shattered at the moment of Picard's transit, producing debris and terminating stable projection capability.
Iconian Silver Gateways

One of the silver Iconian gateways alternates its projected destination between the Enterprise and the Romulan bridge, presenting Picard with two divergent futures and functioning narratively as the literal choice point between alliance and enemy possession.

Before: Active and projecting the Enterprise bridge image, then …
After: Left visually unstable and indeterminate as the globe …
Before: Active and projecting the Enterprise bridge image, then flickering to show the Romulan bridge.
After: Left visually unstable and indeterminate as the globe shatters and Picard passes through.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Main Control Room

The Iconian Control Room is the scene's crucible: a collapsing, ancient technology hub where physical danger and moral stakes intersect, forcing Picard into immediate action that will shape diplomatic and tactical outcomes.

Atmosphere Chaotic, metallic, claustrophobic — the space throbs with mechanical noise and the relentlessness of the …
Function Battleground and technological fulcrum where a decision must be made to stop or accept the …
Symbolism Represents the seductive and corrupting power of ancient, inscrutable technology and operates as a moral …
Access Effectively restricted by environmental hazard — unsafe for general personnel; only priority or desperate entry …
Sparks flying from consoles Walls venting steam and shaking An audible alien countdown A gateway image flickering between two bridges A central globe that shatters

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Key Dialogue

"COMPUTER VOICE: "Kandar qetar, Kandar jet, kandar piqe, kandar...""