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S2E15 · Pen Pals
S2E15
· Pen Pals

Clandestine Ten-Minute Extraction

In the transporter room Riker converts procedure into cover: he orders O'Brien to 'take a nap' and lays down a strict ten-minute window for Data's covert descent to retrieve Sarjenka. O'Brien performs willful ignorance while Data accepts the literal and moral deadline—vowing to beam out if anyone else appears—turning professionalism into a face-saving cloak for a deliberate Prime Directive breach. Picard's incoming comm shatters the moment, ratcheting urgency and exposing how fragile this ethical gambit is.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Data materializes on Drema Four, his physical departure severing the last tether to Starfleet protocol and launching him into the heart of the catastrophe.

containment to irrevocable commitment ['Transporter Room']

Picard’s urgent com call shatters the fragile silence, forcing Riker to abandon oversight as O’Brien feigns awakening—masking the moral breach with bureaucratic theatre.

private urgency to public deception ['Transporter Room']

Riker confirms O’Brien’s readiness to extract Data under pressure, weaponizing professionalism to conceal imminent treason — the ship’s last line of defense before the unthinkable unfolds.

anxiety to controlled readiness ['Transporter Room']

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Nonchalant on the surface, with a professional steadiness that conceals awareness of the risk and potential consequences.

O'Brien adopts the pretense of dozing against a wall, verbally affirms his willingness to perform the transporter operation covertly, and assures Riker that he will execute a smooth beam‑out when called upon.

Goals in this moment
  • Carry out Riker's order and operate the transporter without raising suspicion
  • Ensure Data and any recovered person are beamed out safely and cleanly
  • Maintain the appearance that no unauthorized extraction occurred
Active beliefs
  • Following a superior's direct order is both duty and protection
  • A skilled transporter operator can obscure minor breaches through execution
  • Operational competence can mitigate political or disciplinary consequences
Character traits
professional reliable laconic complicit
Follow Miles O'Brien's journey

Calm and resolute — measured in tone but carrying the weight of a consequential ethical action.

Data climbs onto the transporter, accepts Riker's ten‑minute constraint, explicitly commits to signal for an immediate beam‑out if he meets anyone other than Sarjenka, and then dematerializes from the pad.

Goals in this moment
  • Locate and retrieve Sarjenka safely
  • Avoid escalating the Prime Directive breach by withdrawing if conditions change
  • Comply with the operational parameters given by Riker
Active beliefs
  • Protocol and contingency signaling are reliable safeguards
  • Preserving life can necessitate procedural compromise
  • Clear rules of engagement reduce risk for all involved
Character traits
precise obedient morally attentive resolute
Follow Data's journey

Tense and urgent — outwardly controlled but anxious about exposure and the moral compromise he is authorizing.

Riker issues the cover instruction, sets a strict ten‑minute operational deadline, briefs Data on the contingency, reacts with alarm when the bridge calls, and exits hurriedly to handle the fallout.

Goals in this moment
  • Enable Data to retrieve Sarjenka while minimizing institutional exposure
  • Preserve plausible deniability for the ship and crew
  • Return Data and the child safely within the imposed time limit
Active beliefs
  • Rules should be upheld, but commanders must act when lives are at stake
  • A small procedural cover can contain the ethical fallout
  • Subordinates (like O'Brien) will follow orders to protect the mission
Character traits
decisive pragmatic protective of subordinates secretive
Follow William Riker's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Transporter Room Entrance Doorway

The transporter room doorway functions as the formal threshold that would expose any materialization; its presence heightens the risk that a rematerialized person would be seen. Though not explicitly crossed in this snippet, its symbolic function pressures the team to conceal the extraction and informs O'Brien's promise of a "smooth" beam‑out.

Before: Idle within the transporter room, closed/recessed in its …
After: Remains unchanged physically in the scene; its function …
Before: Idle within the transporter room, closed/recessed in its frame and ready to receive arrivals but not used in this immediate cut of action.
After: Remains unchanged physically in the scene; its function as an exposure point continues to loom over the clandestine operation.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Enterprise Transporter Room (Transporter Platform)

The transporter pad is the operational stage for the clandestine extraction: Data stands on its hexagonal surface preparing to dematerialize while O'Brien manœuvres the room's routine cover. The pad's technology creates a literal threshold that embodies the ethical brink the crew is standing on between non‑interference and rescue.

Atmosphere Tense, furtive, and clinically mechanical — a hush of professional concentration underlaid with moral urgency.
Function Operational staging area for a covert rescue and the site of the ten‑minute countdown that …
Symbolism Represents the moral limbo between Starfleet protocol and compassionate intervention; the pad is the point …
Access Restricted to transporter personnel and authorized officers; the operation is intentionally concealed from normal tracking …
Low electric hum from the transporter coils Clinical overhead lights and a hexagonal dematerialization surface Technicians feigning routine behaviour to mask the extraction A charged silence broken only by terse instructions

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What this causes 3
NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Data’s transport to Drema Four is the direct outcome of his request to Picard and the subsequent authorization from Riker. His appearance on the planet is the physical manifestation of the moral breach — setting the stage for his ultimate act: saving Sarjenka."

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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Data’s transport to Drema Four is the direct outcome of his request to Picard and the subsequent authorization from Riker. His appearance on the planet is the physical manifestation of the moral breach — setting the stage for his ultimate act: saving Sarjenka."

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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Data’s transport to Drema Four is the direct outcome of his request to Picard and the subsequent authorization from Riker. His appearance on the planet is the physical manifestation of the moral breach — setting the stage for his ultimate act: saving Sarjenka."

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Key Dialogue

"RIKER: O'Brien, take a nap. You didn't see this, you're not involved."
"RIKER: Ten minutes, Data, that's it, and if you meet anybody but Sarjenka --"
"DATA: I will signal for immediate beam out."