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S3E7 · The Enemy
S3E7
· The Enemy

Wreckage, Ultri-treachery, and the Pit

Geordi's VISOR slices through Galorndon's storm to reveal Romulan wreckage laced with ultritium — proof the craft was deliberately destroyed and that there may be survivors. As Riker orders a rapid sweep, Worf finds a gravely injured Romulan who suddenly lashes out. In the same instant the ground collapses beneath Geordi, ripping off his VISOR and burying him. The team must evacuate with the captive before the transporter window closes, leaving Geordi isolated and the discovery to ignite a larger diplomatic crisis. This beat turns a forensic revelation into immediate personal peril and moral pressure.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Geordi detects electrically conductive objects with his VISOR, leading the team to discover Romulan wreckage.

curiosity to tension ['storm-ravaged desolation of Galorndon Core']

Riker and Worf identify the wreckage as Romulan, raising suspicions about their presence in Federation space.

tension to suspicion

Geordi reveals ultritium residue, indicating the Romulan craft was deliberately destroyed, suggesting survivors.

suspicion to alarm

The team spreads out to search for survivors, aware of the shrinking transporter window.

alarm to urgency

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Patahk
primary

Delirious, terrified and aggressive — survival-driven rage that manifests as an immediate attack when confronted.

Lying amid wreckage, moaning and delirious; when Worf leans over him he lashes out by attempting to seize Worf's throat, then is physically overpowered and immobilized.

Goals in this moment
  • Avoid capture and harm
  • Strike at an immediate perceived threat (the Klingon) to protect himself
Active beliefs
  • Enemies (especially Klingons) cannot be trusted and must be fought
  • Being captured likely means death or severe consequences
Character traits
desperate paranoid reflexively violent
Follow Patahk's journey

Tense and professional — prepared for violence, maintaining restraint even when provoked by an enemy casualty.

Discovers a seriously wounded Romulan (Patahk), physically rolls and assesses him, then suppresses a sudden violent lunge — immobilizing the injured man quickly and efficiently while calling for Riker.

Goals in this moment
  • Protect the away team from immediate physical threat
  • Stabilize and secure the wounded Romulan to prevent further violence or escape
Active beliefs
  • An injured Romulan can still be dangerous and must be restrained
  • Duty requires both securing the threat and preserving a potential survivor for intelligence and diplomatic reasons
Character traits
physically dominant disciplined controlled restraint
Follow Worf's journey

Commanding with an undercurrent of concern — balancing mission priorities with crew safety and the diplomatic danger implied by Romulan involvement.

Commands the away team on scene — inspects wreckage markings, issues tactical orders for radius and timing, organizes a rapid sweep under a strict transporter window, and reacts when ground collapses beneath him.

Goals in this moment
  • Secure evidence and any survivors before the transporter window closes
  • Maintain team cohesion and safety while minimizing diplomatic exposure
Active beliefs
  • Time is finite and procedural constraints (transporter window) are critical
  • Romulan presence in Federation space escalates the stakes and demands careful handling
Character traits
decisive procedural operationally responsible
Follow William Riker's journey

Focused and alert — professional curiosity that borders on urgency as the forensic readout implies survivors and sabotage.

Takes point through the storm, actively scanning with his VISOR; identifies electrically conductive fragments and ultritium traces on the wreckage, then continues into deteriorating visibility and disappears from the group's sightline.

Goals in this moment
  • Locate survivors and additional forensic evidence at the wreckage
  • Verify the presence and distribution of ultritium residue to determine cause of destruction
Active beliefs
  • Sensor data is reliable enough to indicate sabotage (ultritium traces point to an explosive)
  • Finding survivors is a priority and justifies moving ahead despite worsening conditions
Character traits
technically precise methodical searcher calm under environmental strain
Follow Geordi La …'s journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Geordi La Forge's VISOR with Visual Acuity Transmitter

Geordi's VISOR is actively used to pierce Galorndon's storm interference, detecting electrically conductive fragments and registering ultritium residue on the smashed Romulan craft — providing the forensic basis for concluding an explosive was used and catalyzing the team's search for survivors.

Before: Worn by Geordi and functioning, providing augmented visual …
After: Still in Geordi's use as he disappears into …
Before: Worn by Geordi and functioning, providing augmented visual and spectral readouts through the storm.
After: Still in Geordi's use as he disappears into the storm; remains the team's primary sensor though Geordi falls out of visual contact.
Romulan Scout/Landing Craft (Crashed on Galorndon Core)

The small Romulan landing craft's smashed hull and scattered wreckage provide the physical locus for the forensic readouts; its damaged plating and markings identify Romulan origin and contextualize the ultritium traces as evidence of deliberate destruction.

Before: Badly destroyed, half-buried in storm-lashed soil; charred and …
After: Remains the scene under investigation, being combed for …
Before: Badly destroyed, half-buried in storm-lashed soil; charred and fragmented but still identifiable by markings.
After: Remains the scene under investigation, being combed for evidence and survivors by the away team.
Starfleet standard‑issue hand phaser — Enterprise tactical/away-team (handheld)

Away-team phasers are drawn by the crew as a defensive precaution while investigating the wreckage; they serve to underscore the threat level, are held ready during Worf's struggle with Patahk, and enforce the team's posture of controlled force.

Before: Carried in hand by away-team members, charged and …
After: Still in the team's possession and at ready …
Before: Carried in hand by away-team members, charged and at low-ready while sweeping the wreckage.
After: Still in the team's possession and at ready as they manage the wounded Romulan and react to changing conditions.
Storm‑Wreckage Explosive Device

An explosive device is inferred by Geordi's ultritium readings (though no specific device is recovered in the visible action). Its narrative role is to convert wreckage into a crime scene and justify the urgent sweep for survivors and responsible parties.

Before: Not visibly recovered in the immediate scene; its …
After: Its inferred presence elevates the incident to potential …
Before: Not visibly recovered in the immediate scene; its effects are visible in the wreckage.
After: Its inferred presence elevates the incident to potential sabotage; physical device is not established as secured by the team within this event.
Ultritium Residue

Ultritium residue appears on Geordi's VISOR readouts as concentrated traces on wreckage fractures — functioning narratively as the smoking-gun forensic clue that implies an explosive was used and elevates the incident from accident to probable sabotage.

Before: Embedded in fractures and surfaces of the wreckage, …
After: Remains on-site as forensic evidence being recorded and …
Before: Embedded in fractures and surfaces of the wreckage, present as an anomalous sensor signature.
After: Remains on-site as forensic evidence being recorded and implicating foul play.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Galorndon Surface

The Galorndon Surface is the hostile, storm-racked stage where forensics, rescue, and combat converge: low visibility and electrical interference force dependency on augmented sensors, scatter wreckage creates tactical hazards, and collapsing earth physically endangers team members and fragments command cohesion.

Atmosphere Ruthless, tension-filled: a howling, electrically charged storm that compresses visibility and elevates urgency and danger.
Function Battleground and investigation site — both the obstacle that impedes rescue and the crucible that …
Symbolism Represents moral and operational isolation: the storm strips away easy command control and forces intimate …
Access Effectively restricted by environmental hazards (low visibility, wind, collapsing ground), limiting safe movement and emergency …
Gale-force wind and stinging dust reduce visibility to a few meters Electrical arcs and sensor interference force reliance on VISOR readouts Jagged, charred wreckage pocks the mud and hides hazards like unstable ground

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 1
NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"The initial struggle against the storm leads directly to Geordi detecting the Romulan wreckage."

VISOR Pierces the Storm — Wreckage Detected
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What this causes 5
Causal

"Geordi's fall into the pit isolates him on the planet, setting up his survival arc."

Visor Lost — Geordi Left in the Pit
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Causal

"Geordi's discovery of ultritium residue is later used by Picard to challenge Tomalak's story."

Tomalak's Five‑Hour Ultimatum
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Causal

"Geordi's discovery of ultritium residue is later used by Picard to challenge Tomalak's story."

Ultimatum at the Neutral Zone: Patahk as a Diplomatic Pawn
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Causal

"Geordi's discovery of ultritium residue is later used by Picard to challenge Tomalak's story."

Ultimatum on the Bridge
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Causal

"Worf's discovery of Patahk leads to the medical dilemma requiring Worf's ribosomes."

Worf Refuses to Be Donor
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Themes This Exemplifies

Thematic resonance and meaning

Key Dialogue

"GEORDI: Over here. Some electrically conductive objects."
"RIKER: Recognize the markings, Worf?"
"GEORDI: I'm picking up traces of ultritium residue with my VISOR, Commander. An explosive device must've been used to destroy the craft after it crashed."