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S2E6 · Star Trek: The Next Generation - Loud as a Whisper
S2E6
· Star Trek: The Next Generation - Loud as a Whisper

Calculated Provocation

In his Ready Room, Picard consults with Troi about Riva's unshakable despair following the loss of his Chorus communication system. Troi emphasizes that confidence must come from within, a truth that Picard absorbs before shifting tactics. When Data arrives demonstrating his rapid mastery of sign languages with excessive enthusiasm, Picard cuts him off, realizing literal translation won't solve Riva's deeper crisis of identity. This moment underscores the episode's central tension between technological solutions and authentic self-belief, with Picard recognizing that only by confronting Riva's core wound can they spark his renewal.

Plot Beats

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Picard converts mounting frustration into decisive action: he orders a direct visit to Riva, closing debate and propelling the mission forward. The command snaps the crew from theorizing into motion toward the mediator at the heart of the crisis.

debate/irritation to resolute determination

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Data
Second Officer
 primary

Excited about linguistic mastery, unaware of social cues

Data demonstrates his new signing skills with mechanical precision and escalating enthusiasm, oblivious to the emotional context.

Goals in this moment
  • • Showcase his newly acquired translation abilities
  • • Provide practical assistance through technical means
Active beliefs
  • • Precision translation enables communication breakthroughs
  • • Captain will value demonstrated competence
Character traits
Enthusiastic Literal-thinking Hyper-competent
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Jean-Luc Picard
Captain
 primary

Concerned about Riva's collapse, frustrated by Data's misdirected enthusiasm

Picard listens intently to Troi, face etched with concern, before decisively interrupting Data's demonstration. His physical posture shifts from attentive leaning to commanding interruption.

Goals in this moment
  • • Find a way to pull Riva out of despair
  • • Redirect the crew's efforts toward meaningful solutions
Active beliefs
  • • Technological solutions alone cannot fix human crises of identity
  • • A captain must act when others falter
Character traits
Diplomatic Decisive Intellectually agile
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Deanna Troi
Counselor
 primary

Professionally detached yet personally invested in Riva's recovery

Troi delivers psychological truths with quiet intensity, offering physical comfort by placing her hand over Picard's before Data's intrusion.

Goals in this moment
  • • Guide Picard toward understanding Riva's psychological state
  • • Maintain therapeutic boundaries despite personal feelings
Active beliefs
  • • True confidence requires internal work
  • • Counselors facilitate growth rather than provide solutions
Character traits
Empathic Insightful Supportive
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Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Captain's Ready Room

The Ready Room serves as an intimate command sanctum where Picard and Troi share quiet counsel about Riva's crisis, its privacy shattered by Data's exuberant intrusion—mirroring the episode's collision between contemplative diplomacy and technological interruption.

Atmosphere Initially hushed with emotional intensity, then abruptly disrupted
Function Private meeting space for command-level consultations
Symbolism Represents Starfleet's institutional attempt to contain human vulnerability
Access Command-level officers only
Polished oak desk where Picard and Troi confer Door chime marking transitions between emotional tones

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Key Dialogue

"TROI: "I can't do anything. It's up to him. Confidence is faith in oneself, it can't be given by another.""
"DATA: "This is blue. This is a blue ocean. This is a blue ocean at sunset. This is two people walking along the beach by a blue ocean at sunset...""
"PICARD: "Enough! Let's talk to Riva.""