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S2E6 · Star Trek: The Next Generation - Loud as a Whisper

Special Recognitions

The Enterprise prepares to depart Ramatis as the away team boards, including Riva and his Chorus. Riker expresses surprise at Riva's deafness and unconventional communication method. Introductions unfold on the bridge, notably highlighting Geordi's instant kinship with Riva through their shared experience with assistive technology. When Pulaski observes Riva's genuine curiosity about others as part of his disarming charm, Riva requests Troi as his escort—a choice charged with unspoken mutual attraction. The event establishes Riva's unique mediation method (via the Chorus's headband technology) while foreshadowing his profound connection with Troi and Geordi—relationships that will become pivotal when his translation device fails.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Riker and Pulaski register that Riva is unlike expectations—Pulaski names his disarming quality and genuine curiosity—and in guest quarters Troi and Riva exchange charged eye contact, signaling personal chemistry beneath the professional mission.

surprise to fascination / sensual tension ['INT. GUEST QUARTERS']

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Professionally detached yet personally invested

Operates seamlessly as Riva's voice, with members adopting specialized roles—the Woman explains technology to Geordi, the Scholar/Artist handles formal introductions, and the Warrior/Adonis chaperones Troi with silent flirtation.

Goals in this moment
  • Accurately convey Riva's thoughts and emotions
  • Maintain ceremonial decorum during introductions
Active beliefs
  • Their role is essential for Riva's success
  • Different situations require different Chorus members
Character traits
Disciplined Adaptable Highly specialized
Follow Chorus's journey

Clinically intrigued by Riva's psychological approach

Observes Riva's interactions clinically yet appreciatively, noting his authentic curiosity as key to his diplomatic success, providing outsider perspective on his method.

Goals in this moment
  • Assess Riva's psychological profile
  • Understand the Chorus' operational dynamic
Active beliefs
  • Effective mediation requires genuine human connection
  • Unconventional methods can yield superior results
Character traits
Analytical Perceptive Professionally discreet
Follow Katherine Pulaski's journey

Welcoming yet strategically observant

Officiates introductions with diplomatic grace, facilitating cultural exchange by explaining Riva's communication method to the crew and offering ship's hospitality.

Goals in this moment
  • Ensure smooth integration of Riva's team
  • Prepare for complex mediation mission
Active beliefs
  • Starfleet should accommodate diverse communication needs
  • First impressions shape diplomatic outcomes
Character traits
Culturally sensitive Authoritative Diplomatic
Follow Jean-Luc Picard's journey

Anxious to depart but intrigued by Riva's unconventional methods

Commands the bridge with professional efficiency but visibly reacts with surprise when learning of Riva's deafness, revealing unconscious biases about disability and communication norms.

Goals in this moment
  • Ensure timely departure from Ramatis
  • Assess Riva's capabilities for the upcoming mediation
Active beliefs
  • Effective mediators rely on verbal communication skills
  • Starfleet protocols should accommodate cultural differences
Character traits
Prone to assumptions Professionally disciplined Tactically focused
Follow William Riker's journey

Attracted but maintaining professional decorum

Escorts Riva at his request, exchanging unspoken attraction through sustained eye contact while the Warrior/Adonis chaperones, demonstrating immediate intuitive connection beyond verbal communication.

Goals in this moment
  • Facilitate Riva's comfort aboard ship
  • Explore their intuitive connection
Active beliefs
  • Emotional resonance transcends language barriers
  • Mediators benefit from psychological insight
Character traits
Emotionally open Professionally adaptive Empathetic
Follow Deanna Troi's journey

Warmly receptive to shared experience with Riva

Engages Riva with immediate camaraderie, demonstrating his VISOR when questioned and articulating pride in his adaptive technology with philosophical insight about identity.

Goals in this moment
  • Establish rapport through shared technological dependence
  • Educate others about his perspective as a blind officer
Active beliefs
  • Technological adaptations are integral to personal identity
  • Open dialogue reduces prejudice about disabilities
Character traits
Empathetic Technologically adept Self-assured
Follow Geordi La …'s journey

Engaged and socially strategic

Communicates through the Chorus while forming multiple connections—intellectual with Geordi, romantic with Troi—demonstrating his mediation skills through attentive questioning and physical expressiveness.

Goals in this moment
  • Establish trust with Enterprise crew
  • Initiate personal connection with Troi
Active beliefs
  • Alternative communication methods foster deeper understanding
  • Personal bonds enhance professional mediation
Character traits
Charismatic Intellectually curious Emotionally perceptive
Follow Rivan's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Geordi La Forge's VISOR with Visual Acuity Transmitter

Geordi's VISOR becomes the focal point of his connection with Riva, serving as both practical adaptive technology and symbolic representation of their shared experience navigating a world not designed for their sensory realities.

Before: Functioning normally on Geordi's face during bridge operations
After: Touched by Riva as part of their bonding …
Before: Functioning normally on Geordi's face during bridge operations
After: Touched by Riva as part of their bonding moment, then returns to normal use
Riva's Chorus Communication Device

Riva's headband enables the Chorus to vocalize his thoughts, demonstrating its critical function when explaining the technology to Picard and facilitating all interactions aboard the Enterprise bridge.

Before: Actively transmitting Riva's thoughts to the Chorus during …
After: Continuing operation as Riva exits with Troi, foreshadowing …
Before: Actively transmitting Riva's thoughts to the Chorus during transport
After: Continuing operation as Riva exits with Troi, foreshadowing its later failure

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Main Bridge

The main bridge serves as the formal meeting point where Riva is introduced to the senior staff, with its professional Starfleet environment contrasting with Riva's unconventional communication method, creating dramatic tension between institutional norms and individual adaptation.

Atmosphere Professionally formal with undercurrents of curiosity and surprise
Function Site of first contact and cultural exchange
Symbolism Represents Starfleet's institutional framework encountering unconventional diplomacy
Access Limited to senior officers during formal introductions
LCARS displays operational data Turbolift doors opening/closing for arrivals
Brekkian Guest Quarters

The guest quarters become the destination where Troi escorts Riva, establishing a more private space for their developing personal connection away from the bridge's formality, foreshadowing deeper intimacy to come.

Atmosphere Intimate and sensorially muted compared to the bridge
Function Private interaction space for personal connection
Symbolism Represents movement from professional to personal engagement
Access Assigned to guest use with Troi as escort
Doors sliding open for entry Presumably more subdued lighting than bridge

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

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Character Continuity

"The revelation on Ramatis (Riva's deafness and Chorus' function) is carried forward and reiterated during shipboard introductions, maintaining continuity of how the crew must understand and interact with Riva."

Riva's Ceremonial Revelation
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Character Continuity

"The revelation on Ramatis (Riva's deafness and Chorus' function) is carried forward and reiterated during shipboard introductions, maintaining continuity of how the crew must understand and interact with Riva."

Ceremonial Welcome and Flirtations
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Character Continuity

"The revelation on Ramatis (Riva's deafness and Chorus' function) is carried forward and reiterated during shipboard introductions, maintaining continuity of how the crew must understand and interact with Riva."

The Chorus' Revelation: Unmasking Riva's Deafness
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Character Continuity

"The revelation on Ramatis (Riva's deafness and Chorus' function) is carried forward and reiterated during shipboard introductions, maintaining continuity of how the crew must understand and interact with Riva."

Riva's Commanding Presence
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Character Continuity

"The revelation on Ramatis (Riva's deafness and Chorus' function) is carried forward and reiterated during shipboard introductions, maintaining continuity of how the crew must understand and interact with Riva."

Chorus Unveils Riva's Multifaceted Nature
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Character Continuity

"The revelation on Ramatis (Riva's deafness and Chorus' function) is carried forward and reiterated during shipboard introductions, maintaining continuity of how the crew must understand and interact with Riva."

Riva Commits to the Solais Mission
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What this causes 3
Character Continuity medium

"The immediate kinship established between Geordi and Riva (both reliant on external aids) motivates Geordi's personal commitment to diagnose and attempt to repair Riva's device in Engineering."

The Collapse Into Silence
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Character Continuity medium

"The immediate kinship established between Geordi and Riva (both reliant on external aids) motivates Geordi's personal commitment to diagnose and attempt to repair Riva's device in Engineering."

The Anguish of Incommunicability
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Character Continuity medium

"The immediate kinship established between Geordi and Riva (both reliant on external aids) motivates Geordi's personal commitment to diagnose and attempt to repair Riva's device in Engineering."

The Weight of Silence
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Themes This Exemplifies

Thematic resonance and meaning

Key Dialogue

"RIKER: You mean, the most respected negotiator in the Federation -- is deaf? Amazing."
"WOMAN: Your VISOR serves the same purpose as my Chorus, which 'hears' my thoughts and translates them into sound."
"TROI: This way. (while sharing charged eye contact with Riva)"