S3E20
· Tin Man

The Unwanted Guest Arrives: Elbrun’s First Impression and the Crew’s Unease

The scene opens with Captain Picard, Counselor Troi, and Data entering the Transporter Room, where Troi prefaces Tam Elbrun’s arrival with a warning: ‘He’s not what you might expect, Captain.’ The moment Elbrun materializes, his abrasive, dismissive demeanor immediately disrupts the crew’s professionalism. He flips mission orders to Picard like a chore‘You want to know all about your mission. Everything’s on there.’—ignoring protocol and hierarchy. His rude, abrupt tone (e.g., cutting off Picard’s introduction, ordering Data to the bridge without consultation) establishes him as a wild card: a genius with unmatched telepathic skills but a volatile, unpredictable personality that threatens mission cohesion. The real turning point comes when Elbrun whirls on Data, startled by the android’s unreadable mind—a moment of vulnerability masked by fascination. His childlike wonder (‘Incredible, an android. I can’t read you at all.’) contrasts sharply with his earlier arrogance, hinting at a deep-seated insecurity beneath his bravado. Meanwhile, Troi’s embarrassed laughter and Picard’s visible annoyance reveal the crew’s immediate discomfort, while Riker’s off-screen revelation (via Geordi) about the Ghorusda disaster—where Elbrun’s failure to warn a captain led to 47 deathsforeshadows the stakes of trusting him now. The scene ends with Elbrun’s blunt rejection of Picard’s hospitality (‘I’d rather get this briefing over with. Then be left alone.’), asserting control while isolating himself. This first contact isn’t just with the alien starship—it’s with Elbrun’s fractured psyche, and the crew’s doubt hangs heavy as the Enterprise turns toward its mission. The tension is palpable: Will Elbrun’s skills save the day, or will his unpredictability doom them all?

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Troi introduces Tam Elbrun, emphasizing his extraordinary talent as a telepath and specialist in first contact, hinting at his unconventional nature and warning Picard not to expect the expected.

anticipation to apprehension ['Corridor', 'Transporter Room']

Tam Elbrun arrives on the Enterprise, greeting Captain Picard dismissively and handing him a data cassette containing mission details, displaying an abrupt and rude attitude.

politeness to annoyance ['Transporter Room']

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Amused yet embarrassed, torn between her therapeutic history with Elbrun and her duty to the crew’s cohesion.

Troi serves as the emotional bridge between Picard’s authority and Elbrun’s volatility, her familiarity with the Betazoid evident in their lighthearted exchange. She warns Picard beforehand about Elbrun’s unconventional nature, but her embarrassment at his tactlessness—her laughter despite the tension—reveals a complex dynamic: she is both his former therapist and a crewmate caught between professionalism and personal history. Her observation of Elbrun’s fascination with Data and his dismissal of Picard underscores her role as an empathic observer, though she ultimately defers to the mission’s demands, her apologetic glance at Picard acknowledging the awkwardness of the situation.

Goals in this moment
  • Ease the tension between Elbrun and the crew by leveraging her familiarity with him.
  • Ensure Picard understands Elbrun’s unique challenges without undermining his authority.
Active beliefs
  • Elbrun’s behavior stems from trauma or insecurity, not malice.
  • Her role as counselor requires her to advocate for understanding, even if it challenges the chain of command.
Character traits
Empathic mediator Emotionally conflicted (professional vs. personal) Observant of subtext Diplomatic in tense situations
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Tam Elbrun
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Defensive and abrasive on the surface, but deeply insecure and fascinated by Data’s uniqueness.

Elbrun materializes with a nervous energy, his informal attire and wide-eyed demeanor contrasting sharply with the Enterprise’s protocol. His abrupt dismissal of Picard’s welcome and the casual flip of the data cassette establish him as a wildcard—unpredictable, dismissive, and unapologetically so. Yet his fascination with Data’s unreadable mind reveals a childlike wonder beneath his bravado, a moment of vulnerability that humanizes him. His blunt rejection of Picard’s hospitality and demand to be left alone assert his control, but also his isolation, setting the stage for his role as both an asset and a liability on the mission. His off-screen history with the Ghorusda disaster looms large, foreshadowing the distrust and tension his presence will engender.

Goals in this moment
  • Assert his independence and control over the mission’s telepathic aspects.
  • Avoid personal connections that might expose his past failures (e.g., Ghorusda).
Active beliefs
  • His telepathic skills are unmatched, but his past mistakes make him untrustworthy in the eyes of others.
  • Isolation is the only way to protect himself from judgment or failure.
Character traits
Defiantly nonconformist Fascinated by the unfamiliar (Data) Emotionally guarded but vulnerable Assertive to the point of rudeness
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Controlled irritation masking deeper unease about Elbrun’s reliability and the mission’s stability.

Picard enters the Transporter Room with measured authority, only to be immediately undermined by Elbrun’s dismissive demeanor. His attempt to welcome Elbrun is cut short as the Betazoid flips a data cassette to him with casual disdain, ignoring protocol and hierarchy. Picard’s visible annoyance—his grip tightening on the cassette, his clipped orders to Data—reveals his frustration at Elbrun’s lack of respect. Despite his authority, he is forced into a reactive role, delegating the mission briefing to Data and ultimately conceding to Elbrun’s demand for isolation. His final severe glance at Troi speaks volumes about his unease with this unpredictable wildcard.

Goals in this moment
  • Establish command authority and professionalism despite Elbrun’s disruption.
  • Ensure mission parameters are communicated and followed, even if it means deferring to Elbrun’s demands.
Active beliefs
  • Elbrun’s behavior reflects a deeper instability that could jeopardize the mission.
  • Protocol and hierarchy must be maintained, even if it requires adapting to unpredictable personalities.
Character traits
Authoritative but reactive Frustrated by disrespect Strategic in delegation Disciplined under provocation
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Puzzled and slightly unnerved by Elbrun’s intense reaction, but otherwise focused on his assigned tasks.

Data, unnoticed at first, becomes the unexpected focal point of Elbrun’s curiosity when the Betazoid whirls around upon sensing his presence. Elbrun’s childlike wonder at Data’s unreadable mind—‘It’s like you’re not there’—reveals a rare moment of vulnerability in the android, who is typically the observer, not the observed. Data’s puzzled frown and subsequent exit to fulfill Picard’s orders highlight his role as the neutral, functional counterpart to Elbrun’s emotional chaos. His interaction with Elbrun, though brief, foreshadows a potential alliance between two isolated beings: one who cannot be read, the other who reads too much.

Goals in this moment
  • Understand why Elbrun is so fascinated by his android nature.
  • Execute Picard’s orders efficiently to maintain mission momentum.
Active beliefs
  • His lack of emotions makes him an anomaly to telepaths like Elbrun.
  • Elbrun’s behavior, while unusual, may be rooted in a need for connection.
Character traits
Unintentionally disruptive (to Elbrun’s expectations) Curious about human/alien reactions Dutiful and adaptable Momentarily vulnerable to scrutiny
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Supporting 2

Neutral and professional, absorbed in his duties.

O’Brien operates the transporter console with his usual efficiency, materializing Elbrun aboard the Enterprise without incident. His presence is functional and unobtrusive, serving as the technical backbone for Elbrun’s arrival. While he does not engage in dialogue or react visibly to the tension between Elbrun and the crew, his role is critical: he is the unseen hand that facilitates the mission’s first major interaction. His later off-screen report of the transporter malfunction foreshadows the technical challenges ahead, but in this moment, he is the steady professional ensuring the scene’s logistics proceed smoothly.

Goals in this moment
  • Ensure the transporter functions flawlessly for Elbrun’s arrival.
  • Maintain operational readiness for potential follow-up tasks.
Active beliefs
  • His role is to support the mission without drawing attention to himself.
  • Technical precision is the key to avoiding complications.
Character traits
Efficient and unobtrusive Reliable under pressure Focused on technical execution
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Apprehensive about Elbrun’s involvement, but deferential to Picard’s authority.

Riker’s voice, heard only through Picard’s communicator, acknowledges the mission orders and Data’s arrival on the bridge. While physically absent from the Transporter Room, his presence is felt through Picard’s delegation of authority. His later conversation with Geordi in the corridor—revealing the Ghorusda disaster and his skepticism about Elbrun—adds depth to the off-screen tension. Riker’s role here is that of the pragmatic first officer, whose doubts about Elbrun’s reliability will later clash with Picard’s need for his expertise. His voice, though brief, underscores the institutional distrust that Elbrun’s past has sown.

Goals in this moment
  • Ensure the mission’s technical and tactical aspects are executed flawlessly.
  • Voice his concerns about Elbrun’s reliability to Picard and the crew.
Active beliefs
  • Elbrun’s past failures make him a liability, regardless of his skills.
  • The crew’s safety and the mission’s success must take precedence over individual egos.
Character traits
Pragmatic and skeptical Loyal to the chain of command Cautious about high-risk assets
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Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Captain Picard's Comlink

Picard’s communicator serves as the bridge between the Transporter Room’s chaos and the *Enterprise*’s command structure. Its activation—‘Number One?’—marks the transition from Elbrun’s disruptive arrival to the mission’s operational phase. The device facilitates Riker’s acknowledgment of the orders and Data’s summons to the bridge, ensuring that despite Elbrun’s abrasiveness, the chain of command remains intact. The communicator’s clipped, efficient exchange contrasts with the emotional undercurrents of the scene, reinforcing the crew’s professionalism amid personal tensions.

Before: Attached to Picard’s uniform, inactive until needed.
After: Activated and used to relay orders, then deactivated.
Before: Attached to Picard’s uniform, inactive until needed.
After: Activated and used to relay orders, then deactivated.
Tam Elbrun's Mission Data Cassette

The data cassette is the physical manifestation of Elbrun’s dismissive authority and the mission’s urgency. Flipped casually to Picard like an afterthought, it symbolizes Elbrun’s contempt for protocol and his assumption of control over the mission’s telepathic aspects. The cassette’s contents—orders, briefings, and technical schematics—are critical to the *Enterprise*’s preparation, but its delivery method underscores the tension between Elbrun’s expertise and his lack of respect for Starfleet’s hierarchy. Picard’s immediate delegation of the cassette to Data highlights the crew’s need to adapt to Elbrun’s unpredictability while ensuring the mission’s logistics proceed.

Before: Possessed by Tam Elbrun, contained in his pocket, …
After: In Data’s possession, en route to the bridge …
Before: Possessed by Tam Elbrun, contained in his pocket, ready to be handed over.
After: In Data’s possession, en route to the bridge for processing and dissemination.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Transporter Room Six (Emergency/High-Priority) (USS Enterprise-D)

The Transporter Room, typically a clinical and orderly space, becomes a stage for Elbrun’s disruptive arrival. The sterile environment—marked by O’Brien’s console, the transporter pads, and the hum of machinery—contrasts sharply with the emotional volatility of the scene. Elbrun’s materialization here, his rude gestures, and his fascination with Data transform the room from a functional hub into a battleground of personalities. The confined space amplifies the tension, with Troi’s embarrassed laughter and Picard’s annoyance echoing off the walls. The room’s symbolic role is twofold: it is both the threshold of Elbrun’s integration into the crew and the site of his immediate rejection of their norms.

Atmosphere Tension-filled with whispered conversations and abrupt, disruptive actions, the clinical sterility of the room heightened …
Function Threshold for Elbrun’s arrival and immediate clash with the crew’s expectations.
Symbolism Represents the friction between institutional protocol and individual idiosyncrasy.
Access Restricted to authorized personnel; Elbrun’s unannounced materialization challenges this norm.
The hum of the transporter console and the swirl of energy as Elbrun materializes. The sterile, metallic surfaces reflecting the crew’s uneasy expressions.

Organizations Involved

Institutional presence and influence

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Starfleet

Starfleet’s influence is palpable in the Transporter Room, embodied by Picard’s authority, the mission’s orders, and the crew’s adherence to protocol. Elbrun’s dismissive handling of the data cassette and his rejection of Picard’s hospitality directly challenge Starfleet’s institutional norms, forcing the crew to adapt. The organization’s goals—ensuring the mission’s success and maintaining diplomatic relations with the alien entity—are momentarily threatened by Elbrun’s volatility. However, Picard’s delegation of the cassette to Data and his relaying of orders to Riker demonstrate Starfleet’s ability to absorb and redirect disruption, ensuring the mission’s parameters are met despite personal conflicts.

Representation Through Picard’s authority, the mission’s orders, and the crew’s adherence to protocol.
Power Dynamics Exercising authority over individuals (Picard, Data, Riker) while being challenged by Elbrun’s nonconformity.
Impact The tension between Elbrun’s individualism and Starfleet’s structure foreshadows broader institutional challenges in the mission …
Internal Dynamics Picard’s frustration with Elbrun’s behavior highlights the strain between individual expertise and organizational expectations.
Ensure the mission’s telepathic and diplomatic objectives are met despite Elbrun’s disruptive behavior. Maintain the chain of command and institutional protocol amid personal tensions. Through Picard’s delegated authority and the crew’s professionalism. Via the mission’s orders and the expectation of adherence to Starfleet protocols.
United Federation of Planets

The United Federation of Planets’ role in this event is indirect but critical, as it is the Federation that deployed Elbrun as a specialist for first contact. His past involvement in the Ghorusda disaster—where his failure to warn the captain led to 47 deaths—looms as a shadow over his current mission. The Federation’s trust in Elbrun’s telepathic skills, despite his personal flaws, is reflected in his assignment to the *Enterprise*. However, the crew’s skepticism (e.g., Riker’s off-screen conversation with Geordi) reveals the Federation’s reliance on high-risk assets, which may come at a cost to crew morale and mission cohesion.

Representation Through Elbrun’s deployment as a Federation specialist and the crew’s awareness of his past failures.
Power Dynamics Operating under the Federation’s mandate to explore and make first contact, while being constrained by …
Impact The Federation’s reliance on Elbrun’s skills, despite his personal demons, highlights the tension between institutional …
Internal Dynamics The crew’s skepticism about Elbrun reflects broader institutional debates about the use of high-risk assets …
Leverage Elbrun’s telepathic expertise to facilitate first contact with the alien entity. Balance the Federation’s exploratory imperatives with the crew’s concerns about past failures. Through the deployment of specialists like Elbrun for high-stakes missions. Via the Federation’s protocols for first contact and diplomatic outreach.

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 9
Causal

"Picard invites Data and Troi to greet Elbrun; then, Troi formally introduces Elbrun, setting the stage for his arrival and behavior."

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Causal

"Picard invites Data and Troi to greet Elbrun; then, Troi formally introduces Elbrun, setting the stage for his arrival and behavior."

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Causal

"Picard invites Data and Troi to greet Elbrun; then, Troi formally introduces Elbrun, setting the stage for his arrival and behavior."

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Character Continuity

"Riker's reaction to Elbrun's name (due to the Ghorusda incident) is directly explored in a later scene between Riker and Geordi, where they discuss the specifics of the incident and Riker's reservations about Elbrun."

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Character Continuity

"Riker's reaction to Elbrun's name (due to the Ghorusda incident) is directly explored in a later scene between Riker and Geordi, where they discuss the specifics of the incident and Riker's reservations about Elbrun."

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Character Continuity

"Riker's reaction to Elbrun's name (due to the Ghorusda incident) is directly explored in a later scene between Riker and Geordi, where they discuss the specifics of the incident and Riker's reservations about Elbrun."

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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Tam arrives with mission details and acts dismissively, furthering the mystery around his character and setting the stage for the mission briefing."

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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Tam arrives with mission details and acts dismissively, furthering the mystery around his character and setting the stage for the mission briefing."

Tam’s Rejection of Connection: A Telepath’s Isolation and Picard’s Silent Fury
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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Tam arrives with mission details and acts dismissively, furthering the mystery around his character and setting the stage for the mission briefing."

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What this causes 9
Character Continuity

"The Ghorusda incident mentioned by Riker here directly connects to Elbrun's confrontation with Riker later in the observation lounge, where he defends his actions."

Tam’s Unraveling: The Weight of Isolation and the Cost of Trust
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Character Continuity

"Tam's inability to read Data's mind, and his fascination with the android, is later echoed in his conversation with Troi, where they discuss Data's 'restful' presence and Tam's unique feelings towards him."

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Character Continuity

"Tam's inability to read Data's mind, and his fascination with the android, is later echoed in his conversation with Troi, where they discuss Data's 'restful' presence and Tam's unique feelings towards him."

The Romulan Gambit: Deception, Divide, and the Cost of First Contact
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Character Continuity

"The Ghorusda incident mentioned by Riker here directly connects to Elbrun's confrontation with Riker later in the observation lounge, where he defends his actions."

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Character Continuity

"Tam's inability to read Data's mind, and his fascination with the android, is later echoed in his conversation with Troi, where they discuss Data's 'restful' presence and Tam's unique feelings towards him."

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Character Continuity

"Tam's inability to read Data's mind, and his fascination with the android, is later echoed in his conversation with Troi, where they discuss Data's 'restful' presence and Tam's unique feelings towards him."

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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Tam arrives with mission details and acts dismissively, furthering the mystery around his character and setting the stage for the mission briefing."

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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Tam arrives with mission details and acts dismissively, furthering the mystery around his character and setting the stage for the mission briefing."

The Ghost of Ghorusda: Riker’s Grief and the Weight of Trust
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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Tam arrives with mission details and acts dismissively, furthering the mystery around his character and setting the stage for the mission briefing."

Tam’s Unreadable Encounter: Vulnerability, Control, and the Android Paradox
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Key Dialogue

"TAM: *‘You want to know all about your mission. Everything’s on there.’* (flipping the cassette to Picard, dismissive)"
"TAM: *‘Incredible, an android. I can’t read you at all. It’s like you’re not there.’* (staring at Data, fascinated)"
"TAM: *‘I’d rather get this briefing over with. Then be left alone until I’m needed.’* (exiting abruptly, rejecting Picard’s offer of quarters)"