S3E20
· Tin Man

Tam’s Rejection of Connection: A Telepath’s Isolation and Picard’s Silent Fury

The moment Tam Elbrun materializes aboard the Enterprise, his abrupt, almost hostile demeanor immediately establishes his emotional detachment and disdain for social niceties. Instead of accepting Picard’s hospitality or engaging in the expected formalities, Tam dismisses the captain’s welcome with a cold, preemptive gesture—tossing a data cassette containing mission details as if to say, ‘Here’s what you need; now leave me alone.’ His refusal to visit his quarters and his insistence on rushing through the briefing before retreating into solitude reveal a man who has weaponized isolation, using it as both shield and armor. Picard’s restrained but palpable irritation—visible in his clenched jaw and the sharpness of his orders—signals a clash of authority and empathy, where the captain’s expectation of professional courtesy collides with Tam’s raw, unfiltered self-preservation. The tension is further amplified by Tam’s fascination with Data, whose unreadable android mind offers him a rare, fleeting respite from the overwhelming noise of human thoughts. Yet even this moment of curiosity is cut short by Tam’s abrupt dismissal, reinforcing his preference for control over connection. Meanwhile, the off-screen exchange between Riker and Geordi—where the Ghorusda disaster looms like a specter—hints at the deeper distrust and unresolved trauma that will later erupt, framing Tam not just as a volatile asset but as a walking wound, one whose past may yet unravel the mission. This scene is a masterclass in subtext: every line, every gesture, and every silence speaks volumes about the characters’ unresolved conflicts and the fragile trust that must hold if they are to succeed.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Tam expresses disinterest in seeing his quarters, preferring to attend the briefing and then be left alone, highlighting his desire for solitude; he exits, leaving Troi apologizing to a visibly severe Picard.

discomfort to severity

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Tam Elbrun
primary

Defensive fascination masking deep trauma; his hostility is a shield against the overwhelming noise of human thoughts, and Data’s silence offers him a fleeting respite—one he can’t afford to acknowledge.

Tam Elbrun materializes aboard the Enterprise with a nervous energy, his wide eyes scanning the room before he dismisses Picard’s welcome with a flip of a data cassette. His interaction with Troi is brief but familiar, revealing a history of shared understanding amid his isolation. He’s fascinated by Data’s lack of telepathic presence, a rare moment of vulnerability, but his default mode is hostility—cutting off Picard’s offer of quarters and insisting on rushing the briefing. His detachment is a shield, but it’s also a prison, and his refusal to engage hints at the trauma of Ghorusda still haunting him.

Goals in this moment
  • Maintain control over the mission’s pace to avoid being overwhelmed by telepathic input.
  • Avoid any personal connection that might expose his vulnerability or past failures.
Active beliefs
  • Trusting others—especially Starfleet—leads to failure (as seen in *Ghorusda*).
  • His telepathic abilities are both a curse and his only value, so he must protect them at all costs.
Character traits
Hostile and dismissive Fascinated by the unfamiliar (Data’s mind) Isolationist, weaponizing detachment Traumatized, though unwilling to show it
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Restrained irritation masking deeper skepticism; his authority is challenged by Tam’s detachment, and the ghost of Ghorusda looms in his silence.

Picard stands in the Transporter Room, extending a formal welcome to Tam Elbrun, only to be met with a dismissive flip of a data cassette. His jaw tightens as Tam’s abruptness disrupts protocol, and he hands the cassette to Data with visible annoyance. He attempts to assert command by directing Tam to his quarters, but Tam rebuffs him, insisting on rushing the briefing. Picard’s restrained irritation is palpable, a mix of professional frustration and the unspoken weight of Tam’s past failures—like Ghorusda—hanging over the interaction.

Goals in this moment
  • Establish command and protocol aboard the *Enterprise* despite Tam’s resistance.
  • Assess Tam’s reliability and state of mind to determine if he’s a liability for the mission.
Active beliefs
  • Tam’s behavior is a sign of instability, potentially endangering the mission.
  • First contact requires discipline and adherence to protocol, which Tam is actively undermining.
Character traits
Disciplined but visibly annoyed Assertive yet restrained Suspicious of Tam’s motives Professionally formal, personally frustrated
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Puzzled curiosity; Data doesn’t understand Tam’s reaction, but he files it away as data to be analyzed later.

Data approaches Tam Elbrun unnoticed, startling him with his lack of telepathic presence. Tam’s fascination is immediate and childlike, a rare moment where his guard drops. Data accepts the data cassette from Tam and is directed to the bridge, his puzzlement at Tam’s reaction hinting at his own curiosity about human (and Betazoid) behavior. His exit is swift, complying with Picard’s orders, but the encounter leaves an impression—Tam’s fascination with his ‘silence’ is a narrative thread yet to unravel.

Goals in this moment
  • Understand Tam’s unusual reaction to his presence (for future reference).
  • Execute Picard’s orders efficiently to contribute to the mission.
Active beliefs
  • Human (and Betazoid) behavior is often illogical but fascinating.
  • His lack of telepathic signature is an anomaly worth studying.
Character traits
Curious and observant Unintentionally disruptive (due to his lack of telepathic signature) Compliant with orders but processing the interaction Emotionally detached yet analytically engaged
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Embarrassed warmth tinged with professional concern; she’s caught between her past connection to Tam and her role as counselor, where his instability is a liability.

Troi stands beside Picard in the Transporter Room, her expression a mix of warmth and embarrassment as Tam’s familiar, tactless demeanor resurfaces. She engages in a brief, familiar exchange with him, laughing despite his rudeness—a dynamic that suggests a history of shared understanding. Her role as mediator is subtle but critical; she observes Tam’s fascination with Data and Picard’s frustration, her empathy extending to both but her loyalty ultimately to the Enterprise’s mission.

Goals in this moment
  • Ease the tension between Tam and Picard to prevent mission disruption.
  • Assess Tam’s mental state to determine if he’s fit for the mission, given his history.
Active beliefs
  • Tam’s isolation is a coping mechanism, but it’s unsustainable for a high-stakes mission.
  • Picard’s authority is necessary, but Tam’s skills are irreplaceable—balancing the two is key.
Character traits
Empathetic but embarrassed Mediating between conflicting personalities Familiar with Tam’s behavior, accepting it with resigned warmth Professionally composed, personally conflicted
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Supporting 2

Neutral professionalism; O’Brien is used to eccentric crew members and focuses on his task.

O’Brien operates the transporter console as Tam Elbrun materializes, his focus on the technical aspects of the beam-in. He’s a silent but critical presence, ensuring the transporter functions smoothly despite Tam’s abrupt arrival. His role is purely operational, but his presence grounds the scene in the Enterprise’s machinery—the hum of the transporter, the glow of the console, all part of the ship’s rhythm.

Goals in this moment
  • Ensure the transporter functions correctly for Tam’s arrival.
  • Maintain the ship’s operational integrity amid the mission’s uncertainties.
Active beliefs
  • His job is to make the ship’s systems work, regardless of who beams aboard.
  • Personal drama is irrelevant to his duties.
Character traits
Professionally focused Silent but essential Unfazed by Tam’s demeanor (part of the job) Reliable technician
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Reserved skepticism; Riker’s acknowledgment of orders is perfunctory, but his off-screen conversation reveals his lingering distrust of Tam and the Ghorusda disaster’s toll.

Riker’s voice comes over the communicator, acknowledging Picard’s orders to meet Data on the bridge. While not physically present in the Transporter Room, his off-screen exchange with Geordi in the turbolift—where the Ghorusda disaster is discussed—hints at the deeper skepticism and trauma that will later clash with Tam’s presence. His role here is functional, but his voice carries the weight of past failures, setting up future conflict.

Goals in this moment
  • Support Picard’s command while ensuring the crew’s safety.
  • Prepare for the mission briefing, despite personal reservations about Tam.
Active beliefs
  • Tam’s past failures make him a risk to the mission.
  • Starfleet’s reliance on specialists like Tam is flawed if it leads to disasters like *Ghorusda*.
Character traits
Reserved and professional Skeptical of Tam’s role (off-screen but implied) Loyal to Picard but protective of the crew Haunted by past mission failures
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Geordi La Forge

Geordi is not physically present in the Transporter Room during this event, but his off-screen conversation with Riker in the …

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Captain Picard's Comlink

Picard’s communicator is a small but pivotal object, bridging the Transporter Room’s immediate conflict with the broader mission. Its activation to summon Riker is a moment of command assertion, but the device also underscores the crew’s fractured communication—Picard’s orders are met with Riker’s acknowledgment, yet the *Ghorusda* disaster looms unspoken between them. The communicator’s chirp is a reminder that the mission’s success hinges on trust, which Tam’s arrival has already strained. Its role here is functional, but its symbolic weight lies in the unspoken tensions it carries.

Before: Attached to Picard’s uniform, dormant but ready for …
After: Activated and used to relay orders, now a …
Before: Attached to Picard’s uniform, dormant but ready for use.
After: Activated and used to relay orders, now a conduit for the mission’s operational chain of command.
Tam Elbrun's Mission Data Cassette

The data cassette is the physical manifestation of Tam’s detachment and the mission’s urgency. Flipped casually to Picard like an afterthought, it contains all the mission details—orders, briefings, destination, and heading—but its delivery underscores Tam’s disdain for protocol. The cassette becomes a symbol of the tension between Starfleet’s structured approach and Tam’s chaotic, isolationist methods. Its transfer to Data marks the shift from Tam’s control to the *Enterprise*’s operational machinery, setting the mission in motion despite the personal friction.

Before: Possessed by Tam Elbrun, carried in his pocket …
After: In Data’s possession, en route to the bridge …
Before: Possessed by Tam Elbrun, carried in his pocket as a casual but critical prop for the mission.
After: In Data’s possession, en route to the bridge for processing and briefing preparation.
Transporter Console (Enterprise-D Transporter Room 1)

O’Brien’s transporter console is the technical backbone of Tam’s arrival, its hum and glow a constant presence in the Transporter Room. It materializes Tam with precision, but the console’s role extends beyond logistics—it’s a metaphor for the *Enterprise*’s ability to integrate (or fail to integrate) outsiders. Tam’s abrupt materialization and immediate dismissal of Picard disrupt the room’s usual rhythm, turning the console from a mundane tool into a stage for the clash between isolation and command. Later, its malfunction during the beam-out to Tin Man will mirror Tam’s own instability.

Before: Operational and ready, with O’Brien at the controls, …
After: Still functional, but now a silent witness to …
Before: Operational and ready, with O’Brien at the controls, awaiting Tam’s arrival.
After: Still functional, but now a silent witness to the tension between Tam and the crew; its later failure foreshadows the mission’s fragility.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Bridge of the USS Enterprise-D

While the bridge isn’t the primary setting for this event, its looming presence is felt through Picard’s communicator call to Riker. The bridge represents the heart of the *Enterprise*’s command structure, where decisions are made and executed. Tam’s insistence that Data take the data cassette "up to the bridge" frames the bridge as the mission’s nerve center, but also as a space Tam seeks to control from afar. His refusal to engage with Picard in the Transporter Room foreshadows his later resistance to the bridge’s authority, setting up a power struggle between individual expertise and institutional command.

Atmosphere Not directly observed in this event, but implied as a space of urgency and authority, …
Function Mission command center, where Tam’s technical directives (via Data) will be executed, but also where …
Symbolism Embodies Starfleet’s institutional power and the crew’s reliance on structured hierarchy, which Tam’s methods challenge.
Access Restricted to senior staff and mission-critical personnel; Tam’s indirect engagement with it highlights his outsider …
The bridge’s forward viewscreen would later display the USS Hood’s intercept, but here it’s a backdrop for the off-screen tension between Riker and Geordi. The hum of warp drive and the crew’s whispered conversations create a sense of controlled urgency.
Main Transit Corridor Near the Transporter Room (USS Enterprise-D)

The corridor outside the Transporter Room serves as a transitional space where the crew’s personal tensions surface before being contained (or not) within the mission’s structure. Picard, Troi, and Data pass through it en route to the Transporter Room, their footsteps echoing the unspoken weight of Tam’s arrival. Later, Riker and Geordi walk this same corridor, their discussion of the *Ghorusda* disaster hinting at the deeper distrust that will later erupt. The corridor is a liminal space—neither the private quarters nor the public bridge—where doubts and histories collide before being funneled into action.

Atmosphere A space of quiet tension, where personal conversations and unspoken doubts linger before being addressed …
Function Transitional space between private interactions (e.g., Tam’s quarters) and public command (e.g., the bridge), where …
Symbolism Represents the threshold between personal and professional spheres, where the crew’s individual histories (like *Ghorusda*) …
Access Open to crew but monitored; a space for private conversations that may have public consequences.
The smooth-lit corridor’s vibrations underscore the ship’s operational hum, a constant reminder of the mission’s urgency. Riker and Geordi’s low voices in the corridor contrast with the later urgency of the bridge, highlighting the shift from personal to professional modes.
Transporter Room Six (Emergency/High-Priority) (USS Enterprise-D)

The Transporter Room is a clinical, high-tech space designed for precise beaming, but Tam’s arrival turns it into a pressure cooker of unspoken tensions. The sterile environment—gleaming consoles, transporter pads, and humming machinery—contrasts sharply with the emotional charge of the scene. Tam’s rude gesture (flipping the data cassette) echoes off the walls, amplifying the awkwardness, while Troi’s embarrassed laughter and Picard’s clenched jaw create a charged atmosphere. The room’s usual purpose (efficient transport) is subverted by the human drama unfolding within it, making it a microcosm of the mission’s larger conflicts: protocol vs. chaos, trust vs. isolation.

Atmosphere Tension-filled with unspoken history; the clinical setting amplifies the awkwardness of Tam’s rudeness and Picard’s …
Function Entry point and interaction hub for Tam’s arrival, where his detachment clashes with Picard’s authority …
Symbolism Represents the *Enterprise*’s attempt to integrate outsiders (like Tam) into its structured world, but also …
Access Restricted to authorized personnel; Tam’s unorthodox arrival disrupts the usual protocol.
The hum of the transporter console and the glow of the pads create a sterile, technical atmosphere. Tam’s nervous energy and abrupt movements contrast with the room’s clinical order. Troi’s laughter and Picard’s clenched jaw add layers of emotional subtext to the space.

Organizations Involved

Institutional presence and influence

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Starfleet

Starfleet’s influence is palpable in this event, not through overt representation but through the institutional protocols Tam dismisses and the mission parameters he enforces. The data cassette, the *Enterprise*’s chain of command, and the urgency of the first-contact scenario are all products of Starfleet’s directives. Tam’s refusal to engage with Picard’s hospitality reflects his distrust of Starfleet’s methods, particularly in light of the *Ghorusda* disaster. Meanwhile, Picard’s insistence on protocol and Riker’s off-screen skepticism reveal Starfleet’s internal tensions: the need for specialists like Tam clashes with the institutional caution born of past failures.

Representation Via institutional protocol (mission orders, chain of command, and the *Enterprise*’s operational structure) and the …
Power Dynamics Exercising authority over individuals (Picard’s command, Riker’s compliance) but being challenged by external forces (Tam’s …
Impact The tension between Starfleet’s need for specialists and its caution after *Ghorusda* creates a fragile …
Internal Dynamics Internal debate over whether to rely on specialists like Tam, given the risks they pose …
Ensure the mission adheres to Starfleet protocols despite Tam’s unorthodox methods. Mitigate risks posed by specialists like Tam, whose past failures (*Ghorusda*) threaten institutional credibility. Through formal mission orders and data cassettes (e.g., Tam’s delivery of mission details). Via the chain of command (Picard’s orders to Riker and Data). Through the *Enterprise*’s operational structure (transporter protocols, bridge briefings).
United Federation of Planets

The United Federation of Planets is the ultimate authority behind Tam’s deployment, but its presence in this event is indirect, manifested through Starfleet’s protocols and the *Enterprise*’s mission. Tam’s role as a "specialist" sent by the Federation to prevent misunderstandings (as Riker later explains) highlights the Federation’s reliance on telepaths for first contact. However, his past failure at *Ghorusda* casts a shadow over this trust, revealing the Federation’s own internal conflicts: the need for diplomatic tools like Tam clashes with the moral and political costs of their use. The Federation’s goals—exploration, diplomacy, and cultural understanding—are at odds with the personal tolls its methods exact.

Representation Through the deployment of Tam Elbrun as a specialist and the mission’s diplomatic objectives, but …
Power Dynamics Operating under the constraint of past disasters (e.g., *Ghorusda*) while pursuing exploratory imperatives. The Federation’s …
Impact The Federation’s reliance on specialists like Tam creates a tension between its exploratory goals and …
Internal Dynamics Debate over the Federation’s use of telepaths for first contact, particularly after disasters like *Ghorusda*. …
Facilitate first contact with the sentient entity Tin Man to expand diplomatic and scientific understanding. Mitigate risks posed by telepathic specialists by ensuring their integration into Starfleet’s structured command. Through the deployment of specialists like Tam Elbrun for high-stakes missions. Via Starfleet’s protocols and the *Enterprise*’s operational framework, which Tam both relies on and resists. Through the Federation’s diplomatic and exploratory mandates, which shape the mission’s objectives.

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 9
Causal

"Picard invites Data and Troi to greet Elbrun; then, Troi formally introduces Elbrun, setting the stage for his arrival and behavior."

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Causal

"Picard invites Data and Troi to greet Elbrun; then, Troi formally introduces Elbrun, setting the stage for his arrival and behavior."

The Ghost of Ghorusda: Elbrun’s Arrival and the Crew’s Unspoken Dread
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Causal

"Picard invites Data and Troi to greet Elbrun; then, Troi formally introduces Elbrun, setting the stage for his arrival and behavior."

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Character Continuity

"Riker's reaction to Elbrun's name (due to the Ghorusda incident) is directly explored in a later scene between Riker and Geordi, where they discuss the specifics of the incident and Riker's reservations about Elbrun."

Picard’s Strategic Delegation: Trust and Trauma Collide in the Wake of Elbrun’s Arrival
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Character Continuity

"Riker's reaction to Elbrun's name (due to the Ghorusda incident) is directly explored in a later scene between Riker and Geordi, where they discuss the specifics of the incident and Riker's reservations about Elbrun."

The Hood’s Phantom Warning: A Mission Specialist’s Shadow Arrives
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Character Continuity

"Riker's reaction to Elbrun's name (due to the Ghorusda incident) is directly explored in a later scene between Riker and Geordi, where they discuss the specifics of the incident and Riker's reservations about Elbrun."

The Ghost of Ghorusda: Elbrun’s Arrival and the Crew’s Unspoken Dread
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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Tam arrives with mission details and acts dismissively, furthering the mystery around his character and setting the stage for the mission briefing."

Tam’s Unreadable Encounter: Vulnerability, Control, and the Android Paradox
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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Tam arrives with mission details and acts dismissively, furthering the mystery around his character and setting the stage for the mission briefing."

The Ghost of Ghorusda: Riker’s Grief and the Weight of Trust
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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Tam arrives with mission details and acts dismissively, furthering the mystery around his character and setting the stage for the mission briefing."

The Unwanted Guest Arrives: Elbrun’s First Impression and the Crew’s Unease
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What this causes 9
Character Continuity

"The Ghorusda incident mentioned by Riker here directly connects to Elbrun's confrontation with Riker later in the observation lounge, where he defends his actions."

Tam’s Unraveling: The Weight of Isolation and the Cost of Trust
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Character Continuity

"Tam's inability to read Data's mind, and his fascination with the android, is later echoed in his conversation with Troi, where they discuss Data's 'restful' presence and Tam's unique feelings towards him."

The Bridge Tenses: First Contact Becomes a Race Against Time and the Romulans
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Character Continuity

"Tam's inability to read Data's mind, and his fascination with the android, is later echoed in his conversation with Troi, where they discuss Data's 'restful' presence and Tam's unique feelings towards him."

The Romulan Gambit: Deception, Divide, and the Cost of First Contact
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Character Continuity

"The Ghorusda incident mentioned by Riker here directly connects to Elbrun's confrontation with Riker later in the observation lounge, where he defends his actions."

The Race to Tin Man: Science, Secrets, and the Shadow of War
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Character Continuity

"Tam's inability to read Data's mind, and his fascination with the android, is later echoed in his conversation with Troi, where they discuss Data's 'restful' presence and Tam's unique feelings towards him."

The Shadow Unfolds: Echoes of Betrayal and the Weight of Isolation
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Character Continuity

"Tam's inability to read Data's mind, and his fascination with the android, is later echoed in his conversation with Troi, where they discuss Data's 'restful' presence and Tam's unique feelings towards him."

Tam’s Telepathic Breaking Point: The Hidden Bond with Tin Man Revealed
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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Tam arrives with mission details and acts dismissively, furthering the mystery around his character and setting the stage for the mission briefing."

Tam’s Unreadable Encounter: Vulnerability, Control, and the Android Paradox
S3E20 · Tin Man
NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Tam arrives with mission details and acts dismissively, furthering the mystery around his character and setting the stage for the mission briefing."

The Ghost of Ghorusda: Riker’s Grief and the Weight of Trust
S3E20 · Tin Man
NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Tam arrives with mission details and acts dismissively, furthering the mystery around his character and setting the stage for the mission briefing."

The Unwanted Guest Arrives: Elbrun’s First Impression and the Crew’s Unease
S3E20 · Tin Man

Key Dialogue

"TAM: *((flatly))* **‘Like to see my quarters. No. I’d rather get this briefing over with. Then be left alone until I’m needed.’**"
"PICARD: *((annoyed, to Riker via comm))* **‘Meet Mister Data on the bridge. He has our orders and new heading.’** *((to Tam, severe))* **‘Mister Elbrun.’**"
"TAM: *((to Data, fascinated))* **‘Incredible, an android. I can’t read you at all. It’s like you’re not there.’**"
"RIKER: *((to Geordi, voice tight with old grief))* **‘Forty-seven, including the captain of the *Adelphi*—and two friends from my class at the Academy.’** *((after a pause))* **‘If Elbrun’s so good, why didn’t he warn Darson? What was he there for, if he couldn’t sense that much hostility?’**"