Riker’s Rage Shatters Barclay’s Delusion: The Picnic’s Violent End
Plot Beats
The narrative micro-steps within this event
Geordi, Riker, and Troi enter the holodeck glade and witness the elaborate fantasy scene featuring Holo-Picard, Holo-Data, Holo-Geordi, and Holo-Wesley enjoying a picnic.
The holo-characters acknowledge the arrival of the real Geordi, Riker, and Troi, and Riker visibly reacts with anger at Barclay's escapism before a fade out.
Who Was There
Characters present in this moment
Righteously indignant, with frustration boiling over at Barclay’s inability to meet expectations and the surreal nature of the holodeck intrusion.
Riker stands rigid in the Glade, his jaw clenched and his eyes locked onto the frozen holograms. His body language radiates barely contained fury, directed both at the absurdity of the scene and Barclay’s continued avoidance of duty. The holographic crew’s eerie stillness seems to mock his authority, amplifying his frustration. His reaction is a volatile mix of professional exasperation and personal disappointment in Barclay’s repeated failures.
- • Force Barclay to confront his responsibilities and the consequences of his holodeck escapism.
- • Restore order to the *Enterprise* by addressing the immediate threat posed by the malfunctioning program.
- • Barclay’s behavior is a direct threat to the ship’s functionality and crew morale.
- • Escapism has no place in Starfleet, and Barclay must be held accountable for his actions.
Thoughtfully observant, assessing the emotional dynamics at play while remaining composed amid the tension.
Troi stands calmly in the Glade, her Betazoid senses likely picking up the emotional undercurrents of the scene. She observes the frozen holograms with a mix of curiosity and concern, her gaze shifting between the real crew and the surreal tableau. Her presence is a grounding force, her empathy allowing her to see beyond the immediate conflict to the psychological roots of Barclay’s behavior.
- • Understand the emotional triggers behind Barclay’s holodeck fantasy and its destabilization.
- • Mediate the crew’s reaction to the scene, ensuring a balanced approach to addressing Barclay’s issues.
- • Barclay’s holodeck escapism is a cry for connection and validation, not mere avoidance.
- • The crew’s frustration, while justified, risks alienating Barclay further if not tempered with understanding.
Cautiously observant, balancing professional concern with personal unease at the surreal confrontation.
Geordi stands in the Glade, his VISOR reflecting the surreal tableau of holographic musketeers frozen mid-picnic. His posture is tense, his attention split between the eerie stillness of the holograms and Riker’s simmering anger. He reacts with a mix of surprise and discomfort, his engineering instincts likely grappling with the program’s instability while his personal connection to Barclay adds emotional weight to the moment.
- • Assess the holodeck program’s instability to prevent further malfunctions aboard the *Enterprise*.
- • Support Barclay indirectly by understanding the root of his psychological retreat into fantasy.
- • Barclay’s holodeck escapism is a symptom of deeper social anxiety, not mere laziness.
- • The crew’s intervention, while necessary, risks exacerbating Barclay’s fragility if handled without empathy.
Neutral (holographic), but the frozen expression conveys a sense of lost innocence, contrasting with the real crew’s urgency.
Holo-Wesley, dressed as 'Blue Boy,' sits frozen with a blueberry pie in hand, his mouth smeared with blue filling. His unnatural stillness and eerie smile add to the surreal tension of the scene. As a holographic stand-in, he embodies Barclay’s idealized, carefree version of Wesley, a figure untouched by the pressures of duty or expectation.
- • None (holographic, programmed behavior).
- • Represents Barclay’s longing for a time or space where rules and responsibilities do not apply.
- • None (holographic).
- • Symbolizes Barclay’s desire to escape the constraints of adulthood and Starfleet’s expectations.
Neutral (holographic), but the frozen pose conveys a sense of mechanical disruption, highlighting the program’s glitch.
Holo-Data sits frozen among the other holographic musketeers, his sword resting beside him and a blueberry pie in hand. His unnatural stillness and twisted smile create a disconcerting effect, emphasizing the holodeck program’s instability. As a holographic representation, he serves as a silent witness to the collision of Barclay’s fantasy and reality.
- • None (holographic, programmed behavior).
- • Represents Barclay’s view of Data as a logical yet adventurous figure, blending efficiency with camaraderie.
- • None (holographic).
- • Symbolizes Barclay’s desire for a crew that values both competence and companionship.
Neutral (holographic), but the frozen expression conveys a sense of disrupted authority, mirroring Barclay’s internal conflict.
Holo-Picard sits frozen on the ground, his musketeer costume and half-eaten pie adding to the surreal atmosphere. Like the other holograms, his smile is locked in an unnatural grimace as he stares at the intruding crew. His presence as a holographic stand-in for Barclay’s idealized captain underscores the fantasy’s collapse, his stillness a stark contrast to the real Riker’s fury.
- • None (holographic, programmed behavior).
- • Represents Barclay’s idealized vision of Picard as a fierce yet supportive leader.
- • None (holographic).
- • Symbolizes Barclay’s longing for a captain who is both commanding and personally affirming.
Objects Involved
Significant items in this scene
The holographic blueberry pie, held by Holo-Wesley, serves as a symbolic centerpiece of Barclay’s idealized fantasy. Its messy, indulgent state—smeared across Wesley’s face and hands—contrasts sharply with the eerie stillness of the frozen holograms. The pie represents Barclay’s longing for carefree, unstructured moments, a stark counterpoint to the disciplined reality of Starfleet. Its presence in the Glade underscores the collision between fantasy and duty, with the pie’s juicy, chaotic texture mirroring the emotional turmoil beneath Barclay’s escapism.
Location Details
Places and their significance in this event
The Glade serves as the battleground where Barclay’s holodeck fantasy and the *Enterprise*’s reality violently collide. Originally designed as a serene, idyllic escape—complete with lush hills, rock formations, and a still pond—it is now a surreal, frozen tableau. The holographic musketeers, locked in grotesque poses, and the real crew’s tense reactions create a disorienting atmosphere. The Glade’s shift from sanctuary to site of confrontation underscores the fragility of Barclay’s illusion and the inescapable demands of his role aboard the ship.
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Key Dialogue
"**Riker** (growling, stepping forward): "Barclay, you *pathetic* excuse for an officer! You’re hiding in here while the ship’s falling apart around us!""
"**Holo-Picard** (smiling, oblivious, raising a glass): "Ah, Commander Riker! Do join us—we were just discussing the *art of diplomacy* over blueberry pie.""
"**Barclay** (whispering, horrified, to himself): "No… no, this isn’t how it’s supposed to go…""
"**Troi** (softly, to Riker): "Will, this isn’t the way. He’s not avoiding duty—he’s *drowning* in it.""