S2E15
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Ash, Recognition, and the Decision to Beam Up

Data materializes in Sarjenka's ash-choked room and methodically surveys the ruined childhood detritus—star pictures, a broken transmitter, a lute. Tremors and a molten river outside make the danger immediate. When a hidden wall vanishes Sarjenka rushes in, coughing and terrified; she freezes, then recognizes Data and collapses into his arms. The intimate, wordless moment—her fingertip on his cheek, her whispered “Data, you came”—converts the Prime Directive debate into a concrete human bond. Data evaluates the environment, steadies the child through another quake, and makes the pivotal choice to call the Enterprise and beam her up. This scene is a turning point: it transforms abstract ethics into personal responsibility and precipitates the unauthorized extraction that forces Starfleet's moral crisis into action.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Data materializes in Sarjenka's ravaged room amid ashfall and molten lava, discovering the destroyed transmitter and unusual star-themed childhood artifacts, then triggers a hidden wall to confront the planet’s apocalyptic eruption.

clarity to dread ['ash-choked room', 'volcano spurting lava outside', …

Sarjenka bursts into the room through the open wall, terrified upon seeing Data, but freezes and reaches out to touch his face as she recognizes him—her long-awaited friend from the stars.

terror to wonder ['crumbling room', 'open doorway revealing volcanic …

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Sarjenka
primary

Terrified and coughing on arrival, rapidly shifting to awe and relief upon recognizing Data, then thrilled and comforted once rescue is imminent.

Sarjenka rushes into the room coughing from ash, freezes at the sight of Data, then recognizes him and reaches out to touch his cheek. Overcome, she throws herself into his arms, answers questions about her family and transmitter, and is positioned for transport off-world.

Goals in this moment
  • Reconnect with Data and maintain contact.
  • Keep evidence of contact (the transmitter) as proof and comfort.
  • Survive the immediate environmental danger.
  • Be rescued and find safety (implied desire to reunite with family).
Active beliefs
  • Data will return if she keeps the transmitter as proof.
  • Adults may abandon items and leave behind things she values unless she hides them.
  • Contact with Data is more trustworthy than other adults in the moment.
  • Her transmitter and the signal are crucial to being found.
Character traits
fearful trusting devoted resilient innocent
Follow Sarjenka's journey

Calmly analytical at first; quickly shades into compassionate determination and mild confusion as emergent empathy overrides strict procedural distance.

Data materializes in the room, immediately deploys his tricorder to scan doorways and structural integrity, steadies Sarjenka during tremors, accepts her embrace with visible confusion, diagnoses imminent danger and taps his insignia to call the Enterprise and effect a beam-out.

Goals in this moment
  • Assess environmental danger and survivability objectively using sensors.
  • Protect and stabilize Sarjenka during tremors.
  • Secure immediate rescue transport for the child.
  • Minimize harm while managing the ethical implications of intervention.
Active beliefs
  • Immediate physical danger creates moral weight that may justify intervention.
  • The Enterprise has resources to perform a safe extraction.
  • Sarjenka's attachment and the transmitter constitute a real human (personhood) claim needing response.
  • Data can interpret rules but must prioritize preserving life when imminent risk is present.
Character traits
analytical compassionate procedural yet flexible protective curious
Follow Data's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Data's Tricorder

Data's tricorder emits high-pitched beeps and is used to map doorway openings and environmental danger. Its tonal shifts across wall sections reveal the vanished portal and help Data assess external volcanic activity, informing his decision to call for immediate extraction.

Before: In Data's hand, active and scanning; emitting high-pitched …
After: Remains in Data's possession, having provided necessary diagnostics …
Before: In Data's hand, active and scanning; emitting high-pitched beeps while sweeping door areas.
After: Remains in Data's possession, having provided necessary diagnostics that directly precipitated the beam call and evacuation decision.
Data's Starfleet Insignia

Data taps his Starfleet insignia to open a voice/transport link to the Enterprise and order two beamed up. The combadge functions as the operative instrument that converts Data's private decision into immediate organizational action.

Before: Affixed to Data's uniform, idle until deliberately activated.
After: Pressed and used to dispatch a beam request; …
Before: Affixed to Data's uniform, idle until deliberately activated.
After: Pressed and used to dispatch a beam request; remains on Data's uniform after activation.
Sarjenka's Hand

Sarjenka's handheld transmitter lies on the floor as the sentimental reason she stayed. She references it when explaining her presence, making it both emotional proof of connection and the narrative catalyst that humanizes the signal the Enterprise answered.

Before: Cracked, soot-streaked, lying on the floor near the …
After: Left behind in the room when Sarjenka is …
Before: Cracked, soot-streaked, lying on the floor near the doorway — clearly used and sentimental to Sarjenka.
After: Left behind in the room when Sarjenka is beamed up; remains as physical evidence of loss and the cost of evacuation.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Drema Four

Drema Four functions as the external, active antagonist: a volcanic, ash-choked world whose eruptions and a crawling river of molten rock make habitation impossible, forcing Data's evacuation decision and grounding the Prime Directive dilemma in immediate mortal peril.

Atmosphere Hostile and elemental — ash-filled skies, spurting volcanoes, and advancing molten flows create urgency and …
Function Source of imminent physical threat motivating the rescue and the ethical breach.
Symbolism Represents an indifferent natural force that challenges institutional rules and compels compassionate action.
Volcano spurting molten lava into the sky visible through the open wall. A river of viscous molten rock crawling toward the house. Ash raining down outside and tremors felt inside the room.
Sarjenka's Room

Sarjenka's room is the intimate, domestic stage where childhood artifacts collide with planetary catastrophe. It shelters the child briefly, frames the personal connection between child and android, and becomes the threshold across which Data must convert ethical analysis into protective action.

Atmosphere Hushed, tense, and mournful with sudden spikes of terror as tremors and ash intrude upon …
Function Refuge for the child; narrative crucible that personalizes the broader planetary crisis.
Symbolism Embodies the fragility of innocence and the personal stakes that convert abstract policy into human …
Lurid red light filters through hexagonal cells. High-pitched tricorder beeps shift in tone while scanning doorways. Ash rains outside and tremors intermittently shake the room. Childhood detritus present: transmitter on floor, lute, pictures, ribbons and tumbled furs.

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 2
NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Data’s transport to Drema Four is the direct outcome of his request to Picard and the subsequent authorization from Riker. His appearance on the planet is the physical manifestation of the moral breach — setting the stage for his ultimate act: saving Sarjenka."

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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Data’s transport to Drema Four is the direct outcome of his request to Picard and the subsequent authorization from Riker. His appearance on the planet is the physical manifestation of the moral breach — setting the stage for his ultimate act: saving Sarjenka."

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What this causes 5
Causal

"Data's rescue of Sarjenka on Drema Four is the direct cause of her unauthorized arrival on the transporter pad. This act—carrying out his moral belief in person—is the single event that forces Starfleet to confront the concrete human cost of the Prime Directive."

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Causal

"Data's rescue of Sarjenka on Drema Four is the direct cause of her unauthorized arrival on the transporter pad. This act—carrying out his moral belief in person—is the single event that forces Starfleet to confront the concrete human cost of the Prime Directive."

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Character Continuity

"When Sarjenka reveals she returned alone to hear Data’s voice, it confirms that she doesn't just see him as a savior—she sees him as her friend. This exact same emotional truth is what makes the neural erasure so monstrous: she doesn’t just need saving—she needs remembering."

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Character Continuity

"When Sarjenka reveals she returned alone to hear Data’s voice, it confirms that she doesn't just see him as a savior—she sees him as her friend. This exact same emotional truth is what makes the neural erasure so monstrous: she doesn’t just need saving—she needs remembering."

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Emotional Echo medium

"Sarjenka’s emotional vulnerability—whispering why she waited alone—mirror's Data’s silent, mechanical departure at the end. She reaches out to comfort him as a child; he, in turn, removes himself like a ghost. Their interaction is one of unspoken sorrow: she feels, he remembers, and both are left alone."

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Key Dialogue

"DATA: "Sarjenka, wait!""
"DATA: "Do not be afraid. I am Data.""
"SARJENKA: "Data, you came.""