Barclay’s Breakthrough: The Unseen Carrier

In a moment of raw intellectual courage, Barclay—his voice trembling with the weight of his own audacity—proposes a radical theory that upends the crew’s investigation: the crew themselves may be the unwitting carriers of the substance sabotaging the Enterprise. The suggestion is met with initial skepticism, particularly from Wesley, whose dismissive tone ('The computer sensors would’ve picked up anything dangerous') underscores the high stakes of Barclay’s hypothesis. Yet Barclay, emboldened by the logic of his own reasoning, presses forward, tracing a chain of physical interactions (Duffy’s glass, the cargo bay anti-grav failure, O’Brien’s transporter malfunction) to argue that an undetectable substance—transmitted via touch or injectors—could be the culprit. The scene pivots on Barclay’s transformation: his usual hesitation gives way to persistent, almost defiant clarity as he disputes Wesley’s analysis and systematically eliminates impossible substances (Jakmanite, Selgninaem, Lucrovexitrin) until only two remain—Invidium, a relic of ancient medical containment fields, and Saltzgadum. The crew’s collective realization—that the answer has been among them all along—shifts the investigation’s trajectory from external sabotage to an internal, insidious contagion. Geordi’s urgent combadge call to Picard ('We have a working theory, Captain...') marks the moment Barclay’s outsider perspective becomes the key to survival, his social anxiety reframed as an asset in the face of crisis. The event is a masterclass in narrative tension: Barclay’s vulnerability (his stammering, his physical retreat before rallying) contrasts sharply with the escalating stakes (the ship’s vibrating hull, the computer’s dire warnings), while the crew’s dynamic—Wesley’s skepticism, Duffy’s nodding agreement, Geordi’s growing respect—reveals how trust and doubt collide under pressure. Thematically, it underscores the story’s core: what we overlook in others (or ourselves) can destroy us. The revelation of Invidium as the likely culprit isn’t just a plot breakthrough; it’s a metaphor for the unseen fractures in the crew’s own systems—both mechanical and human.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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As Geordi expresses his frustration regarding the lack of a common link between the failing systems, Barclay, overcoming his shyness, hesitantly suggests that the crew themselves might be the connection.

frustration to hesitant suggestion

Despite Wesley's initial skepticism, Barclay persists, suggesting the substance might be undetectable and could have been passed to the injectors.

skepticism to persistence

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Anxious yet defiant; his voice trembles initially but grows steadier as he asserts his theory, masking deep insecurity with intellectual courage.

Barclay stands at the center of the engineering chaos, his body tense but his voice growing steadier as he articulates his theory. Initially hesitant, he clears his throat to speak, then—despite the crew’s initial skepticism—presses forward with growing confidence. He traces the chain of physical interactions (Duffy’s glass, the cargo bay anti-grav failure, O’Brien’s transporter malfunction) to argue that the crew may be unwitting carriers of the sabotage. His hands gesture emphatically as he eliminates impossible substances (Jakmanite, Selgninaem, Lucrovexitrin) until only Invidium and Saltzgadum remain. His emotional arc—from anxiety to defiance—is palpable as he disputes Wesley’s analysis and asserts his theory’s plausibility.

Goals in this moment
  • To prove that the crew’s physical interactions are the key to solving the sabotage mystery
  • To overcome his social anxiety and assert his expertise in front of peers
Active beliefs
  • The crew’s physical contact with systems is the missing link in the sabotage investigation
  • His holodeck escapism has blinded him to real-world problem-solving skills he actually possesses
Character traits
Intellectually bold Persistent despite skepticism Analytical under pressure Emotionally vulnerable yet determined Transformative (from hesitation to leadership)
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Frustrated yet engaged; his initial irritation at the lack of a systemic explanation gives way to urgent focus as Barclay’s theory gains traction.

Geordi La Forge leads the investigation with a mix of frustration and urgency, his hands moving swiftly over the engineering console as he queries the computer for undetectable substances. Initially dismissive of Barclay’s theory, he quickly pivots to collaboration, acknowledging the logic of the crew-carrier hypothesis. He touches the pool table button to display the molecular structures, narrowing the list from 15,525 to five, then to two, with a focus on Invidium. His combadge call to Picard—'We have a working theory, Captain...'—marks the moment Barclay’s outsider perspective becomes the crew’s best hope for survival. His leadership blends technical precision with adaptive thinking, shifting from skepticism to action as the ship’s alarms blare.

Goals in this moment
  • To identify the substance causing the sabotage before the ship’s systems fail completely
  • To validate Barclay’s theory and present a cohesive solution to Picard
Active beliefs
  • The sabotage must have a systemic explanation, even if it defies initial logic
  • Barclay’s social anxiety has hidden his potential as a critical thinker
Character traits
Adaptive leader Technically precise Collaborative under pressure Quick to pivot from skepticism to action Authoritative yet open to unconventional ideas
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Skeptical yet engaged; his initial condescension fades as the logic of Barclay’s theory becomes undeniable, revealing a cautious openness to unconventional solutions.

Wesley Crusher begins the event with skepticism, dismissing Barclay’s theory with a blunt 'The computer sensors would’ve picked up anything dangerous.' His tone is condescending, reflecting his confidence in technology over human intuition. However, as Barclay presses forward and the crew traces the chain of physical interactions, Wesley’s demeanor shifts. He participates in eliminating impossible substances (Selgninaem, Lucrovexitrin) and acknowledges the transporter malfunction as a connection. His nod of agreement as the investigation narrows to Invidium and Saltzgadum signals his growing respect for Barclay’s reasoning, though his initial dismissiveness lingers in the subtext.

Goals in this moment
  • To debunk Barclay’s theory using technical evidence
  • To contribute to the investigation while maintaining his credibility as a junior engineer
Active beliefs
  • Computer sensors are infallible in detecting threats
  • Barclay’s social anxiety makes him an unreliable source of critical insights
Character traits
Initially dismissive Technically confident Adaptive to new evidence Young but learning humility Collaborative when proven wrong
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Questioning yet open-minded; his initial doubt gives way to supportive engagement as the evidence mounts, revealing a pragmatic willingness to follow the data.

Duffy starts the event questioning Barclay’s suggestion but quickly becomes a supporter of the theory. He recalls his interactions with the injectors and the cargo bay anti-grav failure, nodding in agreement when the Mikulaks’ use of Invidium is mentioned. His physical presence—leaning in to study the molecular structures on the screen—underscores his growing conviction. Duffy’s shift from skepticism to cooperation is subtle but significant, as he helps connect the dots between the broken canister and the ship’s malfunctions. His role as a bridge between Barclay’s theory and the crew’s acceptance is pivotal.

Goals in this moment
  • To verify Barclay’s theory by recalling his own interactions with affected systems
  • To help the crew reach a consensus on the substance causing the sabotage
Active beliefs
  • The crew’s physical interactions with systems are a plausible vector for sabotage
  • Barclay’s theory, though initially far-fetched, deserves serious consideration
Character traits
Initially questioning Quick to connect dots Supportive of unconventional theories Practical and observant Collaborative under pressure
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Neutral; the Computer Voice operates without emotional inflection, delivering facts and warnings with mechanical precision.

The Computer Voice serves as the crew’s impartial technical guide, listing 15,525 undetectable substances before narrowing the field to five based on Geordi’s queries. Its sterile, authoritative tone contrasts with the crew’s emotional reactions, providing cold data to counterbalance human intuition. The Computer’s warnings about the engine containment field’s safety limits add urgency to the investigation, reinforcing the stakes of Barclay’s theory. Its role is purely functional but critical, acting as the crew’s factual anchor in a moment of high tension and uncertainty.

Goals in this moment
  • To provide the crew with accurate, actionable data to identify the sabotaging substance
  • To issue timely warnings about the ship’s deteriorating structural integrity
Active beliefs
  • The crew’s investigation requires precise, verifiable information to succeed
  • The ship’s systems are at critical risk and demand immediate attention
Character traits
Impartial Authoritative Data-driven Urgent in crisis Unemotional yet critical
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Miles O'Brien

Miles O’Brien is mentioned indirectly as a likely carrier of the Invidium substance due to his involvement in the transporter …

Jean-Luc Picard

Captain Picard is referenced indirectly through Geordi’s combadge call: 'We have a working theory, Captain...' His implied presence looms over …

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Main Engineering Pool Table

The Main Engineering Pool Table Button serves as the interface that triggers the display of the five candidate substances on the Engineering Station Substance Analysis Display. Geordi touches it with deliberate urgency, his finger pressing firmly as the crew’s desperation mounts. The button’s activation is a small but symbolic moment—it marks the crew’s shift from broad speculation to targeted analysis, as they narrow their focus from 15,525 possibilities to a manageable list. Its functionality is mundane, but its narrative role is significant, as it represents the crew’s collective pivot toward Barclay’s theory.

Before: Inactive; the button is part of the pool …
After: Activated; the button is pressed, and the screen …
Before: Inactive; the button is part of the pool table’s control panel, unused until Geordi queries the computer for substances.
After: Activated; the button is pressed, and the screen displays the molecular structures, advancing the investigation.
Broken Invidium Canister in Cargo Bay Five

The Broken Invidium Canister in Cargo Bay Five is the ultimate source of the sabotage, though it is not physically present in this scene. Its rupture is recalled by Duffy, who notes that 'one of those canisters was broken,' linking it to the chain of physical interactions that spread the contaminant. The canister’s role is symbolic and narrative, representing the unseen threat that has infiltrated the ship. Its mention by Duffy serves as the final piece of evidence that confirms Invidium as the sabotaging substance, tying the crew’s interactions to the broader crisis.

Before: Broken and leaking; the canister ruptured in Cargo …
After: Referenced as the source; the canister’s condition is …
Before: Broken and leaking; the canister ruptured in Cargo Bay Five, releasing Invidium into the ship’s systems.
After: Referenced as the source; the canister’s condition is cited by Duffy to confirm that the Mikulaks’ use of Invidium is the cause of the sabotage.
Duffy's Liquefying Drinking Glass (Dark Ale)

Duffy’s Glass of Dark Ale is referenced indirectly as a clue in the chain of physical interactions that may have spread the sabotage. Though not physically present in this scene, its liquefaction in Ten Forward is recalled by Duffy, who notes that it 'twisted into a shape' after coming into contact with the contaminant. The glass serves as a tangible example of how the substance alters molecular structures, supporting Barclay’s theory that the crew’s physical interactions with objects and systems are the vector for the sabotage. Its absence in this scene underscores the insidious, invisible nature of the threat.

Before: Broken and liquefied; the glass was already contaminated …
After: Referenced as evidence; the glass’s condition is cited …
Before: Broken and liquefied; the glass was already contaminated in Ten Forward, its molecular structure altered by the substance.
After: Referenced as evidence; the glass’s condition is cited by Duffy to support the crew-carrier theory, reinforcing the plausibility of Barclay’s hypothesis.
Engineering Molecular Structure Display (Jakmanite/Selgninaem/Lucrovexitrin/Saltzgadum/Invidium)

The Molecular Structure Graphics for Jakmanite, Selgninaem, Lucrovexitrin, Saltzgadum, and Invidium are displayed on the Engineering Station Substance Analysis Display, serving as the visual foundation for the crew’s investigation. Each substance’s molecular structure is scrutinized as the crew eliminates impossible options, narrowing the field from five to two. The graphics are not just data—they are a narrative device, mirroring the crew’s shift from confusion to clarity. Invidium’s structure, in particular, becomes the focal point as the crew realizes it is the most likely culprit, its silvery, ancient composition contrasting with the ship’s modern systems.

Before: Inactive; the graphics are not displayed until Geordi …
After: Displayed and analyzed; the crew studies the structures, …
Before: Inactive; the graphics are not displayed until Geordi queries the computer for undetectable substances.
After: Displayed and analyzed; the crew studies the structures, eliminating Jakmanite, Selgninaem, and Lucrovexitrin, leaving Invidium and Saltzgadum as the final candidates.
Engineering Station Substance Analysis Display

The Engineering Station Substance Analysis Display is the visual centerpiece of the crew’s investigation, projecting glowing molecular structure graphics for the five candidate substances: Jakmanite, Selgninaem, Lucrovexitrin, Saltzgadum, and Invidium. Barclay, Wesley, and Duffy lean in as Geordi narrows the list, their fingers tracing the screen as they eliminate impossible options. The display’s blue glow cuts through the red-lit tension of Engineering, symbolizing the crew’s shift from confusion to focused analysis. Its role is both functional—providing data—and narrative, as the elimination of substances mirrors Barclay’s growing confidence and the crew’s collective realization that the answer lies within their own interactions.

Before: Inactive; the screen is dark until Geordi queries …
After: Active and critical; the screen displays the final …
Before: Inactive; the screen is dark until Geordi queries the computer for undetectable substances, at which point it flickers to life with the list of 15,525 substances.
After: Active and critical; the screen displays the final two candidates (Invidium and Saltzgadum), with Invidium’s molecular structure highlighted as the most likely culprit.
Enterprise Magnetic Field Regulators (Capacitors)

The Enterprise Magnetic Capacitors are mentioned as part of the chain of physical interactions that may have spread the sabotage. Duffy and Costa realigned these capacitors in the cargo bay, potentially coming into contact with the broken Invidium canister. Their failure is linked to the broader system malfunctions, and Barclay’s theory posits that the crew’s handling of the capacitors may have transmitted the contaminant. The capacitors serve as a critical piece of evidence, connecting the cargo bay incident to the ship-wide crisis and validating Barclay’s hypothesis.

Before: Functional but compromised; the capacitors were realigned by …
After: Confirmed as compromised; the capacitors’ failure is linked …
Before: Functional but compromised; the capacitors were realigned by Duffy and Costa, but their subsequent failure suggests contamination.
After: Confirmed as compromised; the capacitors’ failure is linked to the crew-carrier theory, reinforcing the plausibility of Invidium as the sabotaging substance.
Geordi La Forge's Starfleet Combadge

Geordi’s Starfleet Combadge is the device through which he communicates the crew’s breakthrough to Captain Picard. His finger taps the gold delta shield emblem with urgency, and his voice cuts through the crisis chaos as he reports, 'We have a working theory, Captain...' The combadge symbolizes the chain of command and the crew’s accountability to their leader. Its activation marks the moment Barclay’s outsider perspective is elevated to a ship-wide solution, bridging the gap between Engineering’s frantic investigation and the bridge’s need for actionable intelligence.

Before: Inactive; the combadge is dormant until Geordi taps …
After: Active; the combadge transmits Geordi’s message to Picard, …
Before: Inactive; the combadge is dormant until Geordi taps it to hail the bridge.
After: Active; the combadge transmits Geordi’s message to Picard, initiating the next phase of the crisis response.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Main Engineering

Main Engineering is the battleground for this intellectual and physical crisis, where the crew races to identify the sabotaging substance before the ship’s systems fail. The location is defined by its red-lit urgency, the hum of failing systems, and the crew’s frantic movements as they query the computer, study molecular structures, and debate theories. The warp core’s high-pitched whine and the vibrating decks create a sensory overload that mirrors the crew’s desperation. Engineering is not just a setting—it is a character in this scene, amplifying the stakes and the crew’s collective determination to solve the mystery before it’s too late.

Atmosphere Tension-filled with urgency; the air is thick with the hum of failing systems, the blare …
Function Battleground (intellectual and physical); the crew’s primary workspace for diagnosing and solving the sabotage crisis.
Symbolism Represents the heart of the Enterprise’s technical operations, where human ingenuity and machine precision collide …
Access Restricted to authorized engineering personnel; access is controlled and monitored due to the ship’s crisis.
Red alert lighting casting long shadows Vibrating decks and failing systems emitting a high-pitched whine Consoles flickering erratically with isolinear readouts The Enterprise Computer’s voice issuing urgent warnings about structural integrity

Organizations Involved

Institutional presence and influence

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USS Enterprise Crew

The Starfleet crew of the USS Enterprise is the protagonist collective in this event, working together to identify the sabotaging substance and save the ship. The crew’s dynamic shifts from skepticism to collaboration as Barclay’s theory gains traction, with each member contributing their expertise to the investigation. Geordi leads the technical analysis, Wesley provides scientific scrutiny, Duffy recalls critical interactions, and the Computer Voice supplies data. Their collective effort—rooted in trust, adaptability, and urgency—embodies Starfleet’s values of teamwork and innovation under pressure. The crew’s ability to overcome their initial doubts and unite behind Barclay’s theory is the key to resolving the crisis.

Representation Through the collective action of its members, who collaborate to solve the crisis under extreme …
Power Dynamics Operating under the authority of Starfleet protocols but exercising autonomy in problem-solving. The crew’s hierarchy …
Impact The crisis forces the crew to challenge conventional assumptions and leverage the strengths of all …
Internal Dynamics The crew’s internal dynamics are tested as Barclay, an outsider, proposes a theory that challenges …
To identify the substance causing the sabotage and prevent the ship’s destruction To validate Barclay’s theory and present a cohesive solution to Captain Picard Through technical expertise (e.g., Geordi’s engineering knowledge, Wesley’s scientific analysis) Via collaborative problem-solving (e.g., eliminating impossible substances, tracing physical interactions) Through institutional trust in the crew’s ability to solve the crisis without direct oversight from Picard
USS Enterprise-D Bridge Command Team

The USS Enterprise (Starfleet) is the organizational backdrop for this crisis, representing the collective effort of its crew to solve the sabotage mystery. The ship’s systems are failing, its structural integrity is at risk, and its mission to transport Mikulak tissue samples to Nahmi Four hangs in the balance. The organization’s survival depends on the crew’s ability to identify the sabotaging substance and neutralize it before the Enterprise is destroyed. The Enterprise’s role in this event is both passive (as the victim of the sabotage) and active (as the platform for the crew’s investigation), embodying the tension between institutional vulnerability and human resilience.

Representation Via the collective action of its crew, who collaborate to solve the crisis under extreme …
Power Dynamics Exercising authority over its crew (e.g., through Picard’s implied command) while operating under the constraint …
Impact The crisis exposes the Enterprise’s vulnerability to unseen threats, highlighting the need for adaptive problem-solving …
Internal Dynamics The crew’s hierarchy is tested as Barclay, an outsider, proposes a theory that challenges the …
To identify and neutralize the sabotaging substance before the ship’s systems fail completely To maintain the safety and integrity of the Enterprise and its crew amid the crisis Through the authority of its command structure (e.g., Picard’s leadership, Geordi’s technical expertise) Via the crew’s technical and analytical skills, which are critical to solving the mystery Through institutional protocols and procedures that guide the crew’s response to the crisis

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 9
Callback

"The canister leaking gaseous nitrogen leads to Geordi's announcement that Duffy's broken glass and their presence in the cargo bay when the anti-grav unit failed, while Wesley recalls the transporter malfunction, leading to a clearer picture that they are spreading the contagion and the ship's computer now warns the engine containment field is near safety limits."

The Breaking Point: Barclay’s Incompetence Forces La Forge’s Confrontation
S3E21 · Hollow Pursuits
Callback

"The canister leaking gaseous nitrogen leads to Geordi's announcement that Duffy's broken glass and their presence in the cargo bay when the anti-grav unit failed, while Wesley recalls the transporter malfunction, leading to a clearer picture that they are spreading the contagion and the ship's computer now warns the engine containment field is near safety limits."

The Contamination Revelation: Barclay’s Incompetence Becomes a Ship-Wide Threat
S3E21 · Hollow Pursuits
Callback

"The canister leaking gaseous nitrogen leads to Geordi's announcement that Duffy's broken glass and their presence in the cargo bay when the anti-grav unit failed, while Wesley recalls the transporter malfunction, leading to a clearer picture that they are spreading the contagion and the ship's computer now warns the engine containment field is near safety limits."

Barclay’s Humiliation and the First Fracture: A Crisis of Competence and Control
S3E21 · Hollow Pursuits
Callback

"The canister leaking gaseous nitrogen leads to Geordi's announcement that Duffy's broken glass and their presence in the cargo bay when the anti-grav unit failed, while Wesley recalls the transporter malfunction, leading to a clearer picture that they are spreading the contagion and the ship's computer now warns the engine containment field is near safety limits."

The Anti-Grav Unit's Catastrophic Failure: Barclay's Competence and the Crew's Doubt Collide
S3E21 · Hollow Pursuits
Callback

"The canister leaking gaseous nitrogen leads to Geordi's announcement that Duffy's broken glass and their presence in the cargo bay when the anti-grav unit failed, while Wesley recalls the transporter malfunction, leading to a clearer picture that they are spreading the contagion and the ship's computer now warns the engine containment field is near safety limits."

The Weight of Silence: Barclay’s Shame and Geordi’s Reluctant Mentorship
S3E21 · Hollow Pursuits
Character Continuity

"Geordi is seeking information, and as standard processes are not working, As Geordi expresses his frustration, Barclay, overcoming his shyness, hesitantly suggests that the crew themselves might be the connection."

The Breaking Point: Desperation and the Unseen Culprit
S3E21 · Hollow Pursuits
Character Continuity

"Geordi is seeking information, and as standard processes are not working, As Geordi expresses his frustration, Barclay, overcoming his shyness, hesitantly suggests that the crew themselves might be the connection."

The Weight of Silence: Barclay’s Guilt Under the Gaze of Crisis
S3E21 · Hollow Pursuits
Character Continuity

"Geordi is seeking information, and as standard processes are not working, As Geordi expresses his frustration, Barclay, overcoming his shyness, hesitantly suggests that the crew themselves might be the connection."

The Ship’s Agony: Barclay’s Silence and the Birth of a Crisis
S3E21 · Hollow Pursuits
Character Continuity

"Geordi is seeking information, and as standard processes are not working, As Geordi expresses his frustration, Barclay, overcoming his shyness, hesitantly suggests that the crew themselves might be the connection."

The Enterprise Shudders: Barclay’s Silence Becomes the Ship’s Crisis
S3E21 · Hollow Pursuits
What this causes 2
Causal

"Barclay suggests the crew is the connection, so Barclay proposes to neutralize the Invidium by cooling it to minus two hundred degrees Celsius."

Barclay’s Revelation: The Invidium Gambit
S3E21 · Hollow Pursuits
Causal

"Barclay suggests the crew is the connection, so Barclay proposes to neutralize the Invidium by cooling it to minus two hundred degrees Celsius."

Picard’s Gamble: Trusting the Unproven to Save the Enterprise
S3E21 · Hollow Pursuits

Key Dialogue

"BARCLAY: *What if... what if one of us is the connection?* DUFFY: *Us? How?* BARCLAY: *I don’t know. But we’re looking for a systemic explanation and there isn’t one. We work with all the systems that are affected... what if we’re transmitting something ourselves... by touching it, or something...*"
"WESLEY: *The computer sensors would’ve picked up anything dangerous.* BARCLAY: *But... if it were something... something that we couldn’t scan...*"
"GEORDI: *Wasn’t Invidium used in... medical containment fields?* WESLEY: *Not for over a century.* BARCLAY: *But the Mikulaks might still be using it.* DUFFY: *And one of those canisters was broken.* GEORDI: *((hits combadge)) La Forge to bridge. We have a working theory, Captain...*"