Make Us Strong — Coerced Engineering
Plot Beats
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Grebnedlog and Reginod hustle Geordi to their crude gun turrets; he clocks the shoddy setup and fires back, "You've gotta be kidding," as Grebnedlog pushes the demand: "Make us strong." The power dynamic snaps into place—Pakled pressure meets Geordi’s incredulity.
Geordi dismisses their weapons as too weak to scratch a passing asteroid, but Grebnedlog slams the order again to "make us strong," tightening the screws for immediate results.
Who Was There
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Eagerly approving and alert; pleased at the prospect of greater firepower while suspicious and watchful for trickery.
Stands alongside Grebnedlog, echoing approval for increased power, watches Geordi closely, and functions as both technical accomplice and enforcer—reinforcing commands, gesturing to meters, and signaling the captors' watchful expectation.
- • Ensure Geordi follows orders and produces usable power increases.
- • Gather technical detail that can be used to replicate or improve their hardware.
- • Reinforce the captors' control dynamic through apparent technical competence.
- • Power (weapons/performance) equals value and security.
- • Demonstrations of force will strengthen their position.
- • They can detect attempts at deception and must police against it.
Incredulous and privately affronted, shifting to resigned compliance; externally controlled calm that masks a simmering determination to protect his crew and undercut enemy capabilities.
Ushered to crude gun mounts by his captors, Geordi reacts with disbelief and professional scorn, verbally critiques the armaments' lack of power, concedes a technical fix (increasing anti-matter charges), and physically begins to work—masking intent while buying time.
- • Avoid immediate harm or escalation to himself or his shipmates.
- • Appear to comply while buying time to sabotage or limit the weapons' effectiveness.
- • Collect information about the crude turrets' circuitry and limitations.
- • Maintain as much professional dignity and control as possible under coercion.
- • These weapons are technically inferior and can be outwitted.
- • Open defiance will endanger lives; subtle subversion is safer.
- • He, as an engineer, can manipulate systems to protect the Enterprise despite being a captive.
- • The Pakleds prize power but lack the technical discipline to detect sophisticated tampering.
Objects Involved
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Referenced as the Mondor's broader armament signatures—the turrets' power readings and targeting traces—this object represents the ship's defensive posture. It is the technical backdrop for the exchange and the reason the Pakleds demand 'strength'.
The crude gun turrets are the physical focus of coercion: Geordi is forced up against them to probe panels, tweak regulators, and pretend to increase potency. They function narratively as both an object of ridicule and the instrument through which Pakled power is staged and measured.
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Key Dialogue
"GREBNEDLOG: Make us strong."
"GEORDI: There isn't enough juice in these to blow off a passing asteroid."
"GREBNEDLOG: Do not try to trick us. We can tell."