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S3E21 · Hollow Pursuits

Picard’s Rebuke: The Weight of Leadership and the Cost of Dismissal

In the sterile confines of the Enterprise’s ready room, Captain Picard confronts the crew’s collective failure of empathy toward Lieutenant Barclay, a moment that serves as both a moral reckoning and a structural turning point. The scene opens with Picard’s quiet but cutting observation of Barclay’s ‘unsatisfactory’ rating—a phrase that hangs in the air like a verdict. Riker’s dismissive framing of Barclay as ‘Enterprise material’ or not is met with Picard’s sharp correction, exposing the crew’s casual cruelty (epitomized by the mocking nickname ‘Broccoli’) as a dereliction of duty. Geordi’s reluctant admission—‘I just can’t stand the guy’—reveals the depth of his personal bias, but Picard’s response is a masterclass in leadership: he doesn’t just reject the transfer request; he reframes Barclay’s worth, invoking his past service and Starfleet’s shared commitment. The subtext is devastating: Picard isn’t just defending Barclay; he’s holding a mirror to Riker and Geordi, forcing them to confront their own complicity in marginalizing a vulnerable colleague. The order to ‘make him your best friend’ isn’t just a directive—it’s a challenge to their humanity. The scene’s tension lies in the clash between Picard’s idealism and the crew’s pragmatic (if callous) instincts, while the unresolved subtext—why Barclay’s holodeck fantasies have become a coping mechanism—looms like a storm on the horizon. This moment isn’t just about Barclay’s professional future; it’s a pressure point in the crew’s moral fabric, one that will fracture under the weight of the coming crisis.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Picard dismisses the crew's unprofessional nickname for Barclay. He then pushes back against the transfer request, citing Barclay's prior good service and commitment to Starfleet, suggesting Riker and Geordi are taking the easy way out.

acceptance to disapproval

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Indirectly portrayed as vulnerable and isolated; the crew's dismissive language and nicknames paint him as an outcast whose worth is being contested.

Barclay is the absent but central figure of this confrontation. His 'unsatisfactory' rating and the nickname 'Broccoli' serve as proxies for his presence, framing him as both victim and catalyst. The discussion reveals his seclusive tendencies, his past service on the Zhukov, and the crew's collective dismissal of his worth. His holodeck escapism, though not explicitly mentioned, looms as the subtextual reason for his marginalization.

Goals in this moment
  • Implicitly, to be seen as a valuable member of the crew
  • To have his past service and potential recognized
Active beliefs
  • His worth is tied to his ability to fit in with the crew
  • His holodeck escapism is a coping mechanism for his social anxieties
Character traits
Marginalized Symbolic victim Unseen catalyst Holodeck-dependent
Follow Reginald Barclay's journey

Stern but empathetic; his disappointment in Riker and Geordi is palpable, but his focus on Barclay's potential reveals a deeper concern for the crew's moral health.

Picard stands behind his desk, commanding the room with quiet authority. He begins with a measured observation of Barclay's 'unsatisfactory' rating, then systematically dismantles Riker and Geordi's arguments with a blend of moral clarity and institutional pride. His posture is erect, his tone shifting from stern inquiry to cutting rebuke, culminating in a directive that reframes Barclay's worth and challenges the crew's biases. The computer screen on his desk serves as a visual anchor for the discussion, but Picard's focus remains on the human dynamics at play.

Goals in this moment
  • Expose and dismantle the crew's biases against Barclay
  • Reframe Barclay's worth by invoking his past service and Starfleet's shared commitment
Active beliefs
  • Every crew member deserves a chance to prove their value
  • Leadership requires holding subordinates accountable to higher standards of empathy
Character traits
Moral clarity Authoritative presence Empathetic leadership Strategic reframing Uncompromising integrity
Follow Jean-Luc Picard's journey

Defensive and slightly chastened; his skepticism is tempered by Picard's rebuke, leaving him in a state of reluctant reflection.

Riker stands beside Geordi, initially aligning with his dismissive stance toward Barclay. He cites Barclay's psychological profile and seclusive tendencies as evidence of his unsuitability, but his argument falters under Picard's scrutiny. His body language shifts from defensive pragmatism to reluctant acknowledgment as Picard invokes Barclay's past service and Starfleet's values. Riker's role as the voice of institutional pragmatism is undermined by Picard's moral authority.

Goals in this moment
  • Justify the transfer request by citing Barclay's psychological and professional shortcomings
  • Align with Geordi's perspective to present a united front against Barclay's retention
Active beliefs
  • Efficiency and institutional standards should dictate personnel decisions
  • Personal discomfort with a crew member is a valid reason for transfer
Character traits
Defensive pragmatism Institutional loyalty Reluctant introspection Tactical retreat under moral pressure
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Defensive and resentful; his admission of discomfort is tinged with guilt, and his incredulity at Picard's order reveals his deep-seated aversion to Barclay.

Geordi stands beside Riker, visibly uncomfortable as the conversation unfolds. He admits his personal discomfort with Barclay, using the nickname 'Broccoli' to articulate his aversion. His body language is tense, and his voice carries a mix of frustration and resignation. When Picard orders him to mentor Barclay, Geordi's incredulity is palpable, but he ultimately acquiesces to the directive, exchanging a depressed glance with Riker as they exit.

Goals in this moment
  • Justify his request for Barclay's transfer by acknowledging his personal inability to work with him
  • Avoid direct confrontation with Picard's moral authority
Active beliefs
  • Personal compatibility is a valid criterion for crew dynamics
  • Leadership should accommodate individual preferences in team assignments
Character traits
Visceral discomfort Reluctant honesty Defensive pragmatism Forced compliance
Follow Geordi La …'s journey
Supporting 2

Not directly observable, but implied to be supportive of Barclay's potential.

Captain Gleason is referenced by Picard as a former commanding officer who spoke highly of Barclay's service aboard the Zhukov. Riker questions whether Gleason's endorsement was inflated to secure Barclay's transfer to the Enterprise. Gleason's role in this event is limited to being invoked as a counterpoint to the crew's current perception of Barclay, adding a layer of institutional complexity to the discussion.

Goals in this moment
  • Implicitly, to advocate for Barclay's transfer based on his past performance
  • To provide a counter-narrative to the crew's dismissive attitude
Active beliefs
  • Barclay's past service demonstrates his potential value to the crew
  • Institutional endorsements should carry weight in personnel decisions
Character traits
Symbol of institutional endorsement Counterpoint to current biases Absent but influential
Follow Gleason's journey

Not directly observable, but implied to be complicit in the crew's dismissive attitude toward Barclay.

Wesley is mentioned in passing as the originator of the 'Broccoli' nickname, which has since been adopted by the crew. His role in this event is limited to being invoked as a symbol of the crew's casual cruelty and the normalization of mocking behavior. The reference to him serves as a reminder of the broader cultural dynamics that have marginalized Barclay.

Goals in this moment
  • Implicitly, to fit in with the crew's social norms
  • To contribute to the crew's dynamic, even if it means participating in marginalizing behavior
Active beliefs
  • Social acceptance is tied to conforming to the crew's humor and norms
  • Mocking behavior is a harmless way to bond with peers
Character traits
Catalyst for mockery Symbol of crew culture Peripheral but impactful
Follow Wesley Crusher's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Computer Screen Displaying Barclay's Performance Report

The computer screen on Picard's desk serves as a visual anchor for the discussion of Barclay's 'unsatisfactory' rating. It is the first point of focus in the scene, drawing attention to the formal documentation that frames Barclay's professional standing. Picard uses it to launch his rebuke, pointing to the screen as he challenges Riker and Geordi's biases. The screen's glowing text underscores the institutional weight of the rating, making the crew's dismissal of Barclay feel like a dereliction of duty. Its presence is both a clue and a catalyst, prompting Picard to reframe the conversation around Barclay's worth.

Before: Displaying Barclay's 'unsatisfactory' rating, drawing the crew's attention …
After: Remains on display, but its significance is reframed …
Before: Displaying Barclay's 'unsatisfactory' rating, drawing the crew's attention to the formal documentation of his performance.
After: Remains on display, but its significance is reframed by Picard's intervention, shifting the focus from Barclay's shortcomings to his potential.
Geordi La Forge's Performance Evaluation of Reginald Barclay

Reginald Barclay's performance report is the formal basis for Riker and Geordi's request to transfer him off the *Enterprise*. Picard wields the report as a tool to dismantle their arguments, pointing out specific incidents of Barclay's awkwardness while exposing the crew's impatience and nicknames like 'Broccoli.' The report is not just a document; it is a mirror held up to the crew, reflecting their biases and forcing them to confront the humanity behind the ratings. Its role in the event is to serve as both evidence and a catalyst for Picard's moral intervention.

Before: Displayed on a PADD, serving as the formal …
After: Reframed by Picard to highlight Barclay's past service …
Before: Displayed on a PADD, serving as the formal justification for Barclay's transfer request.
After: Reframed by Picard to highlight Barclay's past service and potential, its significance shifts from a tool of dismissal to a prompt for mentorship.
Starfleet Psychological Assessment: Reginald Barclay (Enterprise-D Duty Evaluation)

Barclay's psychological profile is cited by Riker as evidence of his seclusive tendencies and unsuitability for the *Enterprise*. The profile is invoked to justify the transfer request, but Picard dismisses it as irrelevant to Barclay's commitment to Starfleet. The profile serves as a symbolic battleground in the clash between institutional pragmatism (Riker) and moral leadership (Picard). Its mention highlights the crew's tendency to pathologize Barclay's behavior rather than address the root causes of his social anxiety.

Before: Reviewed by Riker prior to the meeting, serving …
After: Dismissed by Picard as an insufficient justification for …
Before: Reviewed by Riker prior to the meeting, serving as evidence for Barclay's transfer request.
After: Dismissed by Picard as an insufficient justification for marginalizing Barclay, its influence wanes in the face of Picard's moral authority.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Captain's Ready Room

Picard's ready room serves as the neutral ground for this moral reckoning, its sterile confines amplifying the tension between institutional authority and personal bias. The room's formal setting—Picard behind his desk, Riker and Geordi standing before him—creates a power dynamic that underscores Picard's role as arbiter. The absence of Barclay makes the room a symbolic battleground for his worth, with the crew's dismissive language and nicknames clashing against Picard's idealism. The ready room's atmosphere is one of controlled intensity, where every word carries weight and the stakes are not just professional but moral.

Atmosphere Tension-filled with whispered conversations and unspoken judgments; the air is thick with the weight of …
Function Neutral ground for moral confrontation and institutional accountability; a controlled arena for leadership challenges and …
Symbolism Represents the institutional power of Starfleet and the moral responsibility of its leaders to uphold …
Access Restricted to senior staff and those directly involved in the discussion; a space for private …
Picard's desk as a symbolic barrier and focal point The glowing computer screen displaying Barclay's rating, drawing attention to the formal documentation The sterile, institutional decor reinforcing the gravity of the discussion

Organizations Involved

Institutional presence and influence

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Starfleet

Starfleet is invoked as the moral and institutional authority that binds the crew together. Picard uses Starfleet's shared commitment as a counterpoint to Riker and Geordi's biases, emphasizing that Barclay has made the same commitment as everyone else. The organization's values—empathy, mentorship, and accountability—are the lens through which Picard challenges the crew's dismissive attitude. Starfleet's presence in the event is not overt but is deeply embedded in Picard's arguments, serving as the foundation for his moral authority.

Representation Through Picard's invocation of Starfleet's values and shared commitment, framing the discussion as a test …
Power Dynamics Exercising moral authority over the crew, challenging their biases and demanding adherence to higher standards …
Impact The event underscores Starfleet's role as a unifying force that demands its members rise above …
Internal Dynamics The tension between institutional pragmatism (Riker/Geordi) and moral leadership (Picard) reflects broader debates within Starfleet …
Uphold the values of empathy, mentorship, and accountability in crew dynamics Ensure that institutional commitments are honored, even in the face of personal discomfort Through Picard's leadership and moral authority Via the invocation of shared institutional values and past service
USS Enterprise Crew

The crew of the *Enterprise* is the collective entity whose biases and dynamics are under scrutiny in this event. Their dismissive attitude toward Barclay—epitomized by the nickname 'Broccoli'—is exposed as a dereliction of duty, and Picard's intervention forces them to confront their complicity in marginalizing a vulnerable colleague. The crew's internal dynamics are laid bare, revealing a culture that prioritizes efficiency and social conformity over empathy and inclusion. Their collective action (or inaction) in this moment will have ripple effects on the ship's moral fabric.

Representation Through the collective dismissal of Barclay and the normalization of mocking behavior, as well as …
Power Dynamics Being challenged by Picard's moral authority, which exposes their biases and demands accountability for their …
Impact The event highlights the crew's role as both the problem and the solution, forcing them …
Internal Dynamics The tension between institutional pragmatism and moral leadership reflects the crew's struggle to balance efficiency …
Maintain efficiency and institutional standards in crew assignments Uphold social norms and conformity within the crew Through collective action (or inaction) in marginalizing Barclay Via the normalization of mocking behavior and dismissive language

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What this causes 3
Character Continuity

"Picard rejects the transfer request and tasks Geordi with mentoring Barclay. Geordi begrudgingly gives Barclay a complex task to solve the drinking glass mystery, showing a forced attempt to mentor Barclay that stems directly from Picard's orders."

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Character Continuity

"Picard insists that Geordi put aside his feelings and work with Barclay. Barclay then retreats into a holodeck fantasy with Holo-Troi's encouragement to embrace love, truth and joy, demonstrating Barclay's coping mechanism after feeling misunderstood and dismissed."

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Character Continuity

"Picard insists that Geordi put aside his feelings and work with Barclay. Barclay then retreats into a holodeck fantasy with Holo-Troi's encouragement to embrace love, truth and joy, demonstrating Barclay's coping mechanism after feeling misunderstood and dismissed."

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Key Dialogue

"PICARD: *I'm not accustomed to seeing an unsatisfactory rating for one of my crew.* RIKER: *I guess the issue is whether Mister Barclay is Enterprise material.* PICARD: *By all indications, Barclay has served honorably in Starfleet for many years... He's made the same commitment to Starfleet that we all have... It's easy to transfer our problem to someone else. Too easy.*"
"GEORDI: *I hate to say it... I always thought I could work with anyone... but I just can't stand the guy. Broccoli makes me nervous... he makes everyone nervous...* PICARD: *Broccoli?* RIKER: *Young Mister Crusher started it. I'm afraid it's caught on.* PICARD: *Let's get it uncaught, shall we?*"
"PICARD: *He's on your team. Manage him. Pull him in. Find ways to help him make a positive contribution. Get to know the man. Make him your best friend.* GEORDI: *With all respect, sir... my best friend? I can barely tolerate being in the same room with the man...* PICARD: *I suggest you put your personal discomfort with him aside, Commander.*"