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S2E6 · Star Trek: The Next Generation - Loud as a Whisper

The Silence Between Us

In the aftermath of his Chorus' collapse, Riva faces profound isolation as Picard discovers the full extent of the communication barrier. The discovery that Riva's Chorus lacks sign language skills and Riva himself is illiterate creates an existential crisis for the mediator. For the first time in his career, Riva experiences raw terror without his harmonious translators, his identity as a negotiator crumbling. Picard moves swiftly to mitigate the crisis, assigning Data to establish communication while Pulaski examines medical solutions. The scene reveals Riva's absolute dependence on external mediation tools and sets up the pivotal question: can this mediator rediscover his authentic voice when technology fails him? As Picard comforts the distraught Chorus members, we witness the fragility of a man whose entire being was constructed around a now-broken system.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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PICARD pivots to a concrete solution—communication—and discovers the Chorus lacks sign language and that Riva neither reads nor writes; a WOMAN confirms he's never needed those skills before.

problem-focused to dawning crisis

A stage-direction note reveals Riva does know sign language from a past mission, but immediate emotion takes over: a WOMAN asks "what's going to happen?" and Riva expresses raw disorientation—he's never been without his Chorus.

concern to personal panic

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Acute existential panic at their sudden purposelessness

Collectively exhibits complete disorientation and panic upon admitting their dependence on Riva's guidance, displaying emotional disintegration as they confess their inability to communicate independently through sign language.

Goals in this moment
  • Seek reassurance about Riva's condition
  • Avoid complete emotional collapse in the interim
Active beliefs
  • They have no independent identity outside serving Riva's communication needs
  • Their own survival depends entirely on Riva's wellbeing
Character traits
Distraught Dependent Fearful
Follow Chorus's journey

Raw fear about impending irrelevance

Voices the Chorus's collective terror most explicitly, directly pleading with Picard about their future while admitting Riva's illiteracy, embodying the group's complete psychological dependence on their mediator.

Goals in this moment
  • Make Picard understand the severity of their situation
  • Seek comfort amid disintegration of their structured world
Active beliefs
  • Their entire existence has been predicated on never needing independent communication skills
  • Without Riva's guidance, they are fundamentally lost
Character traits
Expressive Desperate Honest
Follow Cultured Woman's journey

Detached concern with scientific curiosity about the rare condition

Offers professional medical assistance to Riva with clinical detachment, framing his deafness as a rare exception in a galaxy where such conditions are typically remedied, prepared to examine him in Sickbay.

Goals in this moment
  • Assess whether Riva's congenital deafness has any medical solution
  • Maintain Starfleet medical protocol despite unusual circumstances
Active beliefs
  • Most physical impairments can be medically addressed given Federation technology
  • Her duty is to provide options regardless of probable success
Character traits
Professional Clinical Direct
Follow Katherine Pulaski's journey

Concerned urgency masking deeper alarm about the mediation crisis

Shifts from diplomatic inquiry to crisis management as he realizes the depth of Riva's communication barrier, demonstrating decisive leadership by coordinating medical examination and linguistic solutions while attempting to reassure the distraught Chorus.

Goals in this moment
  • Stabilize the emotional state of Riva and his Chorus
  • Establish functional communication channels with Riva before planetary negotiations collapse
Active beliefs
  • Starfleet has a responsibility to preserve the Solari peace process at all costs
  • Technological solutions can bridge even severe communication barriers
Character traits
Decisive Diplomatic Compassionate
Follow Jean-Luc Picard's journey

Neutral focus on solving the technical communication challenge

Notes the complexity of Federation sign language variations with characteristic precision, demonstrating linguistic awareness as he's tasked with establishing communication channels with the suddenly isolated mediator.

Goals in this moment
  • Catalog available linguistic options for communicating with Riva
  • Apply his computational abilities to bridge the communication gap
Active beliefs
  • Communication systems can be systematically analyzed and decoded
  • His android capabilities make him uniquely suited for this task
Character traits
Analytical Efficient Methodical
Follow Data's journey

Professional focus masking mild concern

Provides stoic physical assistance to Riva, escorting the shaken mediator to Sickbay with professional detachment, embodying Starfleet's disciplined support during the crisis.

Goals in this moment
  • Ensure Riva's safe transport to medical facilities
  • Maintain security protocols amid the diplomatic crisis
Active beliefs
  • Physical safety protocols must be maintained regardless of circumstances
  • His role is to execute orders precisely during crises
Character traits
Stoic Protective Efficient
Follow Worf's journey

Concerned but solution-oriented

Adopts pragmatic crisis response, suggesting Picard personally take over mediation duties if Riva proves incapable, balancing concern for the Solari situation with realistic assessment of Riva's current limitations.

Goals in this moment
  • Ensure contingency plans are in place for failed negotiations
  • Protect Picard from overextending himself diplomatically
Active beliefs
  • The Solari conflict requires immediate intervention regardless of mediator availability
  • Starfleet captains must sometimes step beyond traditional roles in crises
Character traits
Practical Protective Proactive
Follow William Riker's journey

Existential terror about losing his identity and purpose

Experiences profound vulnerability and terror as his lifelong mediation system fails, reduced to silent nods when prompted about sign language knowledge, appearing physically diminished when escorted to Sickbay by Worf.

Goals in this moment
  • Conceal the full extent of his panic from the Starfleet officers
  • Seek any possible solution to restore his communication ability
Active beliefs
  • His entire worth as a mediator is tied to his Chorus system
  • Without technological mediation, he has nothing substantive to offer
Character traits
Fragile Vulnerable Disoriented
Follow Rivan's journey

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Captain's Ready Room

The Ready Room becomes an impromptu crisis center where the full extent of Riva's communication barrier is revealed, its normally orderly space contrasting with the emotional chaos unfolding as the Chorus disintegrates without their mediator's guidance.

Atmosphere Tension-filled with whispered confessions of inadequacy
Function Site of devastating truth revelation and initial crisis response
Symbolism Representative of Starfleet's structured world confronting unfixable human limitation
Access Limited to senior staff during crisis management
Starfleet emblem visible on wall contrasting with the human vulnerability on display Subdued lighting emphasizing the gravity of revelations
Enterprise Sickbay

Sickbay becomes the impending destination for Riva's medical assessment, representing both hope for potential technological solution and institutional processing of his perceived 'defect,' its clinical sterity contrasting with the emotional nature of his crisis.

Atmosphere Anticipatory tension about medically examining an incurable condition
Function Site of potential (though unlikely) medical resolution
Symbolism Representation of Federation's faith in technological solutions facing biological limits
Access Medical staff and escorted patients only
Biobeds prepped for examination signaling procedural readiness Medical equipment humming with potential yet limited efficacy
Observation Lounge (USS Enterprise-D)

The Observation Lounge serves as secondary crisis coordination point where Picard assigns roles to bridge the communication gap, its expansive windows metaphorically representing both the vastness of the challenge and the isolation Riva now experiences.

Atmosphere Urgent but controlled problem-solving amid quiet desperation
Function Command decision hub for managing the mediation crisis
Symbolism Window to both the cosmic scale of the problem and human isolation within it
Access Senior staff only during crisis briefing
Stars visible through panoramic windows emphasizing interstellar stakes Conference table serving as focal point for solution brainstorming

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

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Causal

"Once the device is identified in the Observation Lounge, Picard moves to concrete problem-solving and discovers the Chorus lacks sign language skills—deepening the communication crisis."

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Causal

"Once the device is identified in the Observation Lounge, Picard moves to concrete problem-solving and discovers the Chorus lacks sign language skills—deepening the communication crisis."

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Themes This Exemplifies

Thematic resonance and meaning

Part of Larger Arcs

Key Dialogue

"PICARD: "You are not alone. We will solve this together.""
"WOMAN: "I feel so strange. I've never been without him before... never. I feel like I'm losing my mind.""
"PICARD: "It is not me they want. They believe in Riva. The problem is, he no longer believes in himself.""