Giving Them Teeth
Plot Beats
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Geordi hauls himself out of the weapons bay as meters flare to life; Grebnedlog and Reginod thrill at the surge, declaring themselves strong.
Geordi bluntly defines the upgrade—photon torpedoes, armed to the teeth—pushing past Grebnedlog’s literalism to make the threat unmistakable.
Grebnedlog claims power and, alongside Reginod, savors how to wield it, turning Geordi’s coerced work into immediate leverage.
Who Was There
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Ecstatic, almost childlike delight at the sensation of newfound power; proud and eager to demonstrate strength.
Watches the weapons-force meters and overhead lights surge with obvious delight, vocalizing the new power by repeating 'We are strong' as proof and celebration of the retrofit's success.
- • Validate and celebrate the success of the upgrade to secure status within the Pakled pair.
- • Translate the technical upgrade into immediate leverage over the Enterprise.
- • Support Grebnedlog's leadership by echoing triumph and reinforcing the power dynamic.
- • Power is tangible and immediately useful; possession of weapons equals dominance.
- • Visible indicators (meters, lights) confirm status and confer legitimacy.
- • Following Grebnedlog's cues will keep him safe and rewarded.
Weary restraint: outwardly calm and matter-of-fact while containing frustration and concern; using composure as a tactical shield.
Crawls out of the weapons bay, dusts himself off, and delivers a clipped technical confirmation that the Pakled rig now functions as photon torpedoes; his tone is patient and weary, calibrated to avoid provoking an immediate violent reaction.
- • Confirm the functional status of the weapon system so he and any rescuers can assess the threat.
- • Avoid provoking the Pakleds into immediate violence by remaining cooperative in appearance.
- • Buy time and keep the Pakleds confident so he can sabotage later or be rescued.
- • The Pakleds will exploit any demonstrated power; telling them they are armed increases their confidence and may make them careless.
- • Compliance now is the safest short-term tactic; real mitigation (sabotage/rescue) will come later.
- • Visible diagnostic readouts (meters, lights) will be persuasive to simple, power-focused adversaries.
Objects Involved
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The Mondor's overhead lights surge to life and reflect off consoles and Geordi's hands, providing a sudden, hard-lit confirmation of system activation while contributing to the scene's clinical, mechanical mood and the Pakleds' sensory thrill.
The weapons-force meters serve as the audible/visual proof that the retrofitted torpedo system now carries significant energy; their needles and LED bars spike, humming under load and convincing the Pakleds—and Geordi—that the conversion is functionally complete.
The improvised photon torpedo rig is the narrative MacGuffin: previously a cobbled, dormant threat, it is now confirmed by diagnostics to be operational, converting crude components into an immediate, ship‑level danger that the Pakleds interpret as leverage.
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Key Dialogue
"REGINOD: "We are strong.""
"GEORDI: "You're now armed to the teeth.""
"GEORDI: "You have photon torpedoes. You are strong.""