Vanishing Ultimatum: Finn's Twelve‑Hour Demand
Plot Beats
The narrative micro-steps within this event
Finn materializes unexpectedly in front of Troi, disoriented from using the inverter, and demands her attention.
Finn delivers his ultimatum: Federation-imposed embargo and sanctions against Rutia within twelve hours, under threat to Starfleet safety.
Security arrives and Finn vanishes, leaving Troi to process the demands as the Red Alert sounds.
Who Was There
Characters present in this moment
Startled but deliberately composed; externally calm while internally alert and appraising the threat and its emotional ripple effects for crew and command.
Troi, en route to her quarters, is startled by Finn's sudden appearance but physically and vocally contains panic, nodding and listening as he issues his ultimatum, presenting calm composure even as the alarm sounds.
- • To maintain personal safety while gathering information and preventing escalation.
- • To stabilize the immediate emotional stakes so she can relay accurate assessment to command.
- • That appearing calm will reduce the likelihood of immediate violence and protect herself and others.
- • That she must quickly translate this emotional encounter into actionable intel for Starfleet leadership.
Determined and threatening on the surface; focused, pain-masked, and deliberately performative to maximize political leverage.
Finn appears in a sudden burst of light, holding one hand up while recovering from pain, then delivers a calm but menacing political demand for embargo, blockade, and mediated talks before vanishing as security arrives.
- • To coerce the Federation into imposing an immediate embargo and blockade on Rutia.
- • To create a public, time‑limited crisis that forces diplomatic concessions and ensures Ansata demands are taken seriously.
- • That direct, dramatic provocation will force institutional response faster than clandestine violence.
- • That demonstrating capacity to abduct and vanish undermines Starfleet's sense of security and will pressure negotiators.
Objects Involved
Significant items in this scene
The Red Alert functions as the immediate signal that Finn's presence has breached ship security; its sudden sounding escalates the private confrontation into a ship‑wide emergency, draws security to the corridor, and creates the dramatic beat in which Finn times his disappearance.
Location Details
Places and their significance in this event
The Enterprise corridor is the narrow, exposed staging ground where a sudden dimensional entry, a political ultimatum, and an immediate security response collide. Its confined, transit-oriented nature amplifies vulnerability, ensures few witnesses, and makes a rapid security intervention possible but belated.
Narrative Connections
How this event relates to others in the story
"Finn's articulation of his strategy to leverage their captivity leads directly to his ultimatum delivered on the Enterprise."
"Finn's articulation of his strategy to leverage their captivity leads directly to his ultimatum delivered on the Enterprise."
Key Dialogue
"FINN: "I'm not here to hurt you. Just hear what I have to say.""
"FINN: "Your people are safe. How long they stay that way depends on you. We demand an embargo and trade sanctions levied against Rutia... You have twelve hours to make your decision.""