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S3E21 · Hollow Pursuits

The Breaking Point: Barclay’s Incompetence Forces La Forge’s Confrontation

In the Enterprise’s cargo bay, Geordi La Forge’s simmering frustration with Barclay’s chronic tardiness and erratic performance reaches a boiling point. As Geordi vents to Riker—calling Barclay ‘Broccoli’ (a derisive nickname from Wesley)—the tension escalates when Duffy discovers a leaking nitrogen canister, forcing Geordi to intervene. Barclay, visibly uncomfortable and socially awkward, stumbles through excuses, only to be publicly reprimanded by Riker for his subpar performance. The scene’s turning point arrives when Barclay’s attempt to fix the anti-grav unit fails spectacularly, crashing a pallet of tissue samples and exposing the crew’s mounting concern over his unchecked holodeck-induced malfunctions. Geordi’s reluctant request for Barclay’s help—delivered with barely concealed impatience—underscores the crew’s fractured trust in him, while Barclay’s nervous, rambling apology reveals his deep-seated insecurity. The moment forces Geordi to confront his own reluctance to intervene more forcefully, setting the stage for Barclay’s eventual crisis and the ship’s looming threat. The event functions as a catalyst: Barclay’s incompetence is no longer a private issue but a direct threat to the Enterprise’s stability, compelling Geordi to act beyond his discomfort. The subtext—Geordi’s frustration masking genuine concern, Barclay’s anxiety masking latent competence—drives the narrative toward Barclay’s eventual redemption, while the leaking nitrogen canister foreshadows the Invidium contamination crisis to come.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Geordi complains to Riker about Barclay's poor performance and lack of punctuality, expressing his frustration and questioning how Barclay ever made it through the Academy.

frustration to exasperation

Riker suggests to Geordi that they speak to the captain about Barclay, whom Wesley has nicknamed 'Broccoli,' marking the casual derision Barclay faces and foreshadowing the official ramifications of his poor performance.

frustration to determination

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Crushed by embarrassment and self-doubt, but with a fragile undercurrent of resilience beginning to surface.

Reginald Barclay enters the cargo bay visibly uncomfortable, his body language tense and his eyes averted. He stumbles through excuses for his tardiness, his voice hesitant and apologetic, but his nervous energy betrays his insecurity. When tasked with fixing the anti-grav unit, he fumbles through the diagnosis, his confidence shattered when the unit fails spectacularly, crashing the pallet. Barclay’s attempts to assist Geordi are awkward, his dialogue rambling and self-deprecating, revealing his deep-seated anxiety. His emotional state is a mix of guilt, embarrassment, and a flicker of determination beneath the surface.

Goals in this moment
  • To avoid further reprimand and prove—even to himself—that he can perform his duties competently.
  • To escape the scrutiny of Geordi and Riker, whose disapproval amplifies his anxiety.
Active beliefs
  • His holodeck escapism is the only place he feels capable and confident, making real-world interactions unbearable.
  • The crew’s disdain for him is justified, and he deserves their criticism.
Character traits
Socially awkward Anxious Self-deprecating Guilt-ridden Latently competent (buried under insecurity)
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Frustrated by Barclay’s repeated failures but committed to upholding the Enterprise’s reputation for excellence.

William Riker listens to Geordi’s venting with a mix of agreement and authority, his posture commanding as he reinforces the Enterprise’s expectations. He publicly reprimands Barclay, his tone firm and unyielding, making it clear that Barclay’s performance is unacceptable. Riker’s exit after Barclay’s acknowledgment signals his trust in Geordi to handle the situation, though his presence looms as a reminder of the crew’s shared responsibility. His dialogue is measured, his demeanor authoritative, and his emotional state reflects a balance of frustration and institutional pride.

Goals in this moment
  • To reinforce the *Enterprise*’s high standards and ensure Barclay understands the consequences of his actions.
  • To support Geordi’s leadership in resolving the cargo bay malfunction while maintaining crew morale.
Active beliefs
  • Barclay’s behavior reflects poorly on the *Enterprise* and must be addressed immediately.
  • Geordi is capable of handling the situation, but Barclay’s holodeck addiction is a deeper issue that requires attention.
Character traits
Authoritative Firm but fair Institutional Supportive of Geordi Unyielding in standards
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Exasperated but professionally contained, with flashes of reluctant empathy beneath his criticism.

Geordi La Forge stands beside the malfunctioning anti-grav unit in Cargo Bay 38, his frustration with Barclay’s chronic lateness and incompetence boiling over as he vents to Riker. He derisively refers to Barclay as 'Broccoli,' a nickname that underscores the crew’s collective disdain. When Duffy discovers the leaking nitrogen canister, Geordi’s professional demeanor snaps into action—he orders its destruction and turns his impatience toward Barclay, assigning him to fix the anti-grav unit. After Barclay’s failure causes the pallet to crash, Geordi’s impatience gives way to reluctant collaboration, as he asks Barclay to help lift a canister, his body language tense but his actions pragmatic. His dialogue is sharp, his movements precise, and his emotional state oscillates between exasperation and a grudging acknowledgment of Barclay’s potential.

Goals in this moment
  • To hold Barclay accountable for his chronic incompetence and tardiness, reinforcing the *Enterprise*’s standards.
  • To diagnose and resolve the anti-grav unit malfunction before it jeopardizes the Mikulak tissue samples, ensuring the ship’s mission remains on track.
Active beliefs
  • Barclay’s holodeck escapism is undermining his duty and the crew’s trust in him.
  • The *Enterprise*’s high standards require immediate intervention, even if it means confronting an uncomfortable truth about Barclay’s capabilities.
Character traits
Impatient Authoritative Frustrated but pragmatic Masking concern with criticism Reluctantly collaborative
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Supporting 3

Annoyed by the unnecessary complication, but focused on resolving the issue quickly.

Miles O’Brien operates the transporter console, materializing the nitrogen canisters with routine efficiency. His frustration peaks when the anti-grav unit fails, causing the pallet to crash. His exclamation of 'Dammit' is sharp and reactive, reflecting his investment in the cargo bay’s operations. Though he doesn’t engage in dialogue beyond this outburst, his presence underscores the high stakes of the malfunction, as the leaking nitrogen canister foreshadows the broader contamination crisis.

Goals in this moment
  • To ensure the transporter operations proceed without further disruption, maintaining the cargo bay’s efficiency.
  • To assist in diagnosing the anti-grav unit failure to prevent additional delays.
Active beliefs
  • Barclay’s incompetence is directly contributing to the cargo bay’s malfunctions, and his holodeck addiction is a liability.
  • The *Enterprise*’s mission is too critical to tolerate avoidable errors.
Character traits
Efficient Frustrated by setbacks Invested in operational success Reactive to failures
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Neutral, with a subtle undercurrent of frustration at the unnecessary complications.

Costa assists Duffy in moving the canisters, his role in the scene largely supernumerary but functional. He reacts to the leaking nitrogen canister with quiet alertness, his presence reinforcing the cargo bay’s bustling activity. Though he doesn’t speak or engage directly in the conflict, his actions contribute to the scene’s atmosphere of controlled urgency. His demeanor is calm and efficient, reflecting his reliability in routine operations.

Goals in this moment
  • To support Duffy in transporting the canisters without incident.
  • To maintain the cargo bay’s operational flow despite Barclay’s disruptions.
Active beliefs
  • Barclay’s holodeck addiction is a known issue, and his presence in the cargo bay is a liability.
  • The crew’s primary focus should be on the mission, not individual shortcomings.
Character traits
Reliable Calm Efficient Supernumerary but functional
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Focused and pragmatic, with no visible reaction to Barclay’s incompetence beyond mild annoyance.

Duffy moves the nitrogen canisters with methodical precision, his attention to detail evident when he discovers the leaking canister. He follows Geordi’s orders to destroy it without hesitation, his actions efficient and unemotional. His role in the scene is functional, but his discovery of the leak serves as a catalyst for the escalating tension, highlighting the fragility of the cargo bay’s operations. His demeanor is neutral but alert, reflecting his professionalism amid the chaos.

Goals in this moment
  • To follow protocols and ensure the cargo bay’s operations remain safe and efficient.
  • To assist in identifying and mitigating potential hazards, such as the leaking nitrogen canister.
Active beliefs
  • Barclay’s errors are a distraction from the crew’s primary objectives.
  • The *Enterprise*’s mission is too important to be derailed by individual failures.
Character traits
Methodical Alert Professional Unemotional
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Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Cargo Bay Anti-Grav Equipped Canister (Disassembled for Diagnosis)

The cargo bay canister carried by Geordi and Barclay is a heavy, unwieldy object that becomes a metaphor for the burden of Barclay’s incompetence. After the anti-grav unit fails, Geordi and Barclay are forced to lift it manually, their awkward interaction underscoring the strain in their working relationship. The canister’s weight and the silence between them as they carry it across the cargo bay highlight the tension and unresolved issues between the two. Its presence in the scene serves as a physical manifestation of the crew’s fractured trust and the immediate consequences of Barclay’s failures.

Before: Stacked on the anti-grav unit, awaiting transport, part …
After: Manually lifted and relocated by Geordi and Barclay, …
Before: Stacked on the anti-grav unit, awaiting transport, part of the cargo bay’s operational load.
After: Manually lifted and relocated by Geordi and Barclay, symbolizing their reluctant collaboration amid the crisis.
Cargo Bay Antigrav Unit Diagnostic Access Panel

The anti-grav unit is a critical piece of cargo bay equipment, responsible for lifting and transporting heavy loads. When Barclay attempts to fix it, his failure causes the unit to malfunction, crashing the pallet of tissue samples. The unit’s breakdown serves as a catalyst for the scene’s conflict, exposing Barclay’s incompetence and forcing Geordi to intervene. Its malfunction foreshadows the broader systemic failures aboard the *Enterprise*, tied to the Invidium contamination. The anti-grav unit’s role in the scene is both practical and symbolic, representing the fragility of the ship’s operations and the crew’s reliance on each other’s skills.

Before: Malfunctioning but operational, with an open access panel …
After: Completely failed, crashing the pallet and scattering the …
Before: Malfunctioning but operational, with an open access panel revealing internal components. Barclay is tasked with diagnosing the issue.
After: Completely failed, crashing the pallet and scattering the Mikulak tissue samples, requiring immediate attention.
Cargo Bay Gaseous Nitrogen Canisters

The nitrogen canisters are critical cargo in the cargo bay, intended to preserve the Mikulak tissue samples during transport. When Duffy discovers a leaking canister, it becomes a symbol of the broader contamination threat looming over the *Enterprise*. Geordi orders its immediate destruction, recognizing that the leaking nitrogen could taint the samples and compromise the mission. The canister’s leak foreshadows the Invidium contamination crisis, serving as an early warning of the systemic failure about to unfold. Its presence in the scene underscores the fragility of the cargo bay’s operations and the high stakes of Barclay’s incompetence.

Before: Sealed and functional, stacked on the anti-grav unit …
After: Destroyed due to the leaking seal, removed from …
Before: Sealed and functional, stacked on the anti-grav unit alongside other canisters, awaiting transport to Nahmi IV.
After: Destroyed due to the leaking seal, removed from the cargo bay to prevent contamination.
Mikulak Donation Tissue Samples (Canisters) on Anti-Grav Pallet

The pallet of Mikulak tissue samples is the mission-critical cargo aboard the *Enterprise*, destined for Nahmi IV to combat Correllium Fever. When Barclay’s attempt to fix the anti-grav unit fails, the pallet crashes to the deck, scattering the samples and symbolizing the fragility of the crew’s efforts. The crash serves as a turning point, exposing Barclay’s incompetence and forcing Geordi to confront the severity of the situation. The pallet’s destruction highlights the stakes of the cargo bay’s malfunctions and the urgency of resolving them before the *Enterprise*’s mission is compromised.

Before: Securely stacked on the anti-grav unit, stabilized for …
After: Crushed on the cargo bay floor, samples scattered, …
Before: Securely stacked on the anti-grav unit, stabilized for transport, containing fragile Mikulak tissue samples.
After: Crushed on the cargo bay floor, samples scattered, mission integrity threatened.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Cargo Bay 38 (USS Enterprise-D)

Cargo Bay 38 is the operational hub of the *Enterprise* where the Mikulak tissue samples are being prepared for transport. The bay’s utilitarian design—stacked pallets, anti-grav units, and transporter pads—creates a sense of controlled urgency, but the leaking nitrogen canister and crashing pallet introduce chaos. The location’s atmosphere is tense, with the crew’s frustration and Barclay’s anxiety amplifying the stakes. The cargo bay symbolizes the intersection of the crew’s duties and their personal conflicts, where mission-critical tasks collide with individual shortcomings. Its role in the event is both practical (a workspace for transporting cargo) and thematic (a stage for the crew’s fractured trust).

Atmosphere Tension-filled with whispered frustrations, the hum of malfunctioning equipment, and the echo of crashing cargo. …
Function Operational hub for cargo transport and mission-critical tasks, where the crew’s competence—and incompetence—are put to …
Symbolism Represents the fragility of the *Enterprise*’s operations and the crew’s reliance on each other’s skills, …
Access Restricted to authorized crew members; the cargo bay is a high-security area due to the …
Harsh overhead lighting casting long shadows over stacked pallets and canisters. The hum of the anti-grav unit, interspersed with the sharp *crash* of the pallet hitting the deck. The scent of ozone and nitrogen gas lingering in the air after the canister leak. The distant murmur of crew members coordinating repairs in other sections of the bay.

Organizations Involved

Institutional presence and influence

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USS Enterprise-D Bridge Command Team

The USS *Enterprise* (Starfleet) is the primary setting and organizational framework for this event, embodying the values of discipline, efficiency, and mission priority. The crew’s interactions in the cargo bay reflect Starfleet’s expectations—Geordi and Riker enforce standards, while Barclay’s failures highlight the consequences of deviating from them. The leaking nitrogen canister and crashing pallet symbolize the organizational stakes: a single individual’s incompetence can jeopardize the ship’s critical mission. The *Enterprise*’s presence in the scene is both institutional (through protocols and hierarchy) and human (through the crew’s personal dynamics), underscoring the tension between personal failings and professional duty.

Representation Through the actions and dialogue of its crew members (Geordi, Riker, Barclay, O’Brien, Duffy, and …
Power Dynamics Exercising authority over individual crew members (e.g., Riker reprimanding Barclay, Geordi assigning tasks) while operating …
Impact The event reinforces the *Enterprise*’s reliance on its crew’s competence and the consequences of allowing …
Internal Dynamics Tensions between Geordi’s frustration with Barclay and Riker’s institutional authority, as well as the crew’s …
To transport the Mikulak tissue samples to Nahmi IV without incident, ensuring the containment of Correllium Fever. To maintain operational efficiency and crew accountability, upholding Starfleet’s standards of excellence. Through institutional protocols (e.g., reprimands, task assignments, destruction of contaminated canisters). Through the collective actions of crew members, who enforce standards and resolve malfunctions. Through the symbolic weight of the *Enterprise*’s mission, which frames individual failures as organizational risks.

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 4
Causal

"Geordi assigns Barclay to fix the anti-grav unit and almost immediately after Barclay activates it, it fails, creating suspicion about Barclay's competence or a more deliberate involvement."

The Contamination Revelation: Barclay’s Incompetence Becomes a Ship-Wide Threat
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Causal

"Geordi assigns Barclay to fix the anti-grav unit and almost immediately after Barclay activates it, it fails, creating suspicion about Barclay's competence or a more deliberate involvement."

Barclay’s Humiliation and the First Fracture: A Crisis of Competence and Control
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Causal

"Geordi assigns Barclay to fix the anti-grav unit and almost immediately after Barclay activates it, it fails, creating suspicion about Barclay's competence or a more deliberate involvement."

The Anti-Grav Unit's Catastrophic Failure: Barclay's Competence and the Crew's Doubt Collide
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Causal

"Geordi assigns Barclay to fix the anti-grav unit and almost immediately after Barclay activates it, it fails, creating suspicion about Barclay's competence or a more deliberate involvement."

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What this causes 7
Callback

"The canister leaking gaseous nitrogen leads to Geordi's announcement that Duffy's broken glass and their presence in the cargo bay when the anti-grav unit failed, while Wesley recalls the transporter malfunction, leading to a clearer picture that they are spreading the contagion and the ship's computer now warns the engine containment field is near safety limits."

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Callback

"The canister leaking gaseous nitrogen leads to Geordi's announcement that Duffy's broken glass and their presence in the cargo bay when the anti-grav unit failed, while Wesley recalls the transporter malfunction, leading to a clearer picture that they are spreading the contagion and the ship's computer now warns the engine containment field is near safety limits."

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Callback

"The canister leaking gaseous nitrogen leads to Geordi's announcement that Duffy's broken glass and their presence in the cargo bay when the anti-grav unit failed, while Wesley recalls the transporter malfunction, leading to a clearer picture that they are spreading the contagion and the ship's computer now warns the engine containment field is near safety limits."

The Unseen Carrier: Barclay’s Intuition Breaks the Code
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Causal

"Geordi assigns Barclay to fix the anti-grav unit and almost immediately after Barclay activates it, it fails, creating suspicion about Barclay's competence or a more deliberate involvement."

The Contamination Revelation: Barclay’s Incompetence Becomes a Ship-Wide Threat
S3E21 · Hollow Pursuits
Causal

"Geordi assigns Barclay to fix the anti-grav unit and almost immediately after Barclay activates it, it fails, creating suspicion about Barclay's competence or a more deliberate involvement."

Barclay’s Humiliation and the First Fracture: A Crisis of Competence and Control
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Causal

"Geordi assigns Barclay to fix the anti-grav unit and almost immediately after Barclay activates it, it fails, creating suspicion about Barclay's competence or a more deliberate involvement."

The Anti-Grav Unit's Catastrophic Failure: Barclay's Competence and the Crew's Doubt Collide
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Causal

"Geordi assigns Barclay to fix the anti-grav unit and almost immediately after Barclay activates it, it fails, creating suspicion about Barclay's competence or a more deliberate involvement."

The Weight of Silence: Barclay’s Shame and Geordi’s Reluctant Mentorship
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Part of Larger Arcs

Key Dialogue

"GEORDI: I just don’t know what to do with him. He’s always late, never gives his best effort, always slides by... I can’t deal with it anymore. How does a guy like him ever make it through the Academy..."
"RIKER: I think it’s time we talked to the captain about Broccoli. (off Geordi’s look) That’s what Wesley calls him. Keep it to yourself."
"GEORDI: Is it a problem for you to report to duty on time, Lieutenant?"
"BARCLAY: Problem? Nossir. I’m... I’m very sorry, sir... it’s just... I had a very important communique... it required my immediate response and..."
"RIKER: Mister Barclay, I’m tired of seeing your name on report. I don’t know what you got away with on your last posting, but this is the *Enterprise*. We set a different standard here. Understood?"
"BARCLAY: Understood... sir."
"GEORDI: We could use a hand, Mister Barclay..."
"BARCLAY: I’ll... I’ll disassemble it later, Commander... it shouldn’t do that... well, of course, it shouldn’t do that... I mean... well, it shouldn’t do that."