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S3E21 · Hollow Pursuits

The Anti-Grav Unit's Catastrophic Failure: Barclay's Competence and the Crew's Doubt Collide

In the tense, high-stakes environment of the Enterprise's Cargo Bay, Lieutenant Barclay—already under scrutiny for his chronic lateness and social awkwardness—is assigned to inspect a malfunctioning anti-grav unit by Geordi La Forge. The scene opens with Geordi and Riker openly criticizing Barclay's performance, their frustration palpable as they dismiss him as incompetent ('Broccoli,' as Wesley derisively calls him). Barclay, visibly uncomfortable, stumbles through excuses, his body language radiating anxiety—avoided eye contact, hesitant speech, and a palpable fear of saying the wrong thing. The tension escalates when Barclay activates the anti-grav unit, only for it to fail spectacularly, sending a pallet crashing to the floor. The malfunction is a gut punch to Barclay, who reacts with genuine shock and guilt, his stammering ('I... I don't understand...') betraying his self-doubt. Geordi’s immediate impatience and the crew’s collective frustration—epitomized by O’Brien’s exasperated 'Dammit...'—paint Barclay as the likely cause, whether through incompetence or something more sinister. The moment is a turning point: Barclay’s holodeck-induced psychological instability is no longer just a personal failing but a potential threat to the ship’s operations. The failure forces Geordi to call for additional engineers, while Barclay’s awkward, silent assistance in moving a canister with Geordi underscores the strained dynamic between them. The scene is a microcosm of the larger crisis—personal discomfort and professional doubt colliding in a way that threatens the Enterprise's stability. The anti-grav unit’s failure isn’t just a mechanical issue; it’s a symptom of Barclay’s unraveling psyche and the crew’s growing unease with his presence.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Barclay reports that the anti-grav unit looks normal, but almost immediately after he activates it, the unit fails, causing the pallet to crash and raising suspicions about Barclay's competence or potential involvement.

confidence to disaster

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Crushing anxiety and shame, bordering on panic, as his failures are publicly exposed and his incompetence is confirmed.

Reginald Barclay enters the Cargo Bay visibly uncomfortable, his body language closed off—avoided eye contact, hesitant speech, and a palpable fear of saying the wrong thing. When assigned to inspect the anti-grav unit, he stumbles through excuses for his lateness, his anxiety escalating as Riker and Geordi admonish him. The unit’s failure sends him into a spiral of guilt and confusion ('I... I don’t understand...'), his stammering and awkward movements amplifying the crew’s frustration. Later, he awkwardly assists Geordi in moving a canister, his silence and evasive glances revealing his deep embarrassment and self-doubt.

Goals in this moment
  • To avoid further reprimand and humiliation by fixing the anti-grav unit or at least appearing competent.
  • To escape the scrutiny of Geordi and Riker, retreating into his shell or seeking a way to redeem himself.
Active beliefs
  • His social anxiety and holodeck dependencies are the root cause of his professional failures.
  • The crew’s disdain for him is justified, and he is unworthy of his position on the *Enterprise*.
Character traits
Anxious Self-doubting Guilty Avoidant Socially inept
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Disappointed but resolute, reinforcing the Enterprise’s standards without personal malice.

William Riker stands alongside Geordi, his posture authoritative and his tone firm as he joins in criticizing Barclay. He admonishes Barclay for his chronic lateness and poor performance, emphasizing the Enterprise’s high standards. His reprimand is direct and unyielding, though he allows Barclay a moment to acknowledge his understanding before exiting. Riker’s presence amplifies the pressure on Barclay, his disapproval serving as a reminder of the crew’s expectations and the consequences of falling short.

Goals in this moment
  • To ensure Barclay understands the *Enterprise*’s expectations and the seriousness of his repeated failures.
  • To support Geordi’s leadership and the crew’s morale by addressing underperformance.
Active beliefs
  • Barclay’s behavior is unacceptable for a Starship crew member, particularly on the *Enterprise*.
  • Consistent accountability is necessary to maintain the ship’s operational excellence.
Character traits
Authoritative Disapproving Firm Supportive of Geordi Uncompromising
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Exasperated but professionally composed, masking deeper concern about Barclay’s impact on the ship’s operations.

Geordi La Forge stands near the malfunctioning anti-grav unit, his frustration with Barclay evident in his body language—crossed arms, tight jaw, and impatient glances. He openly criticizes Barclay to Riker, calling him incompetent and questioning how he graduated from the Academy. When Barclay fails to fix the unit, Geordi’s impatience escalates; he calls for additional engineers via his combadge and later assists Barclay in moving a canister, though his glare and silence convey his disapproval. His actions reflect a mix of professional duty and personal exasperation, highlighting the crew’s low tolerance for Barclay’s perceived failures.

Goals in this moment
  • To resolve the anti-grav unit malfunction and restore cargo bay operations.
  • To hold Barclay accountable for his chronic lateness and perceived incompetence, reinforcing the *Enterprise*'s standards.
Active beliefs
  • Barclay’s social anxiety and holodeck escapism are undermining his professional performance.
  • The *Enterprise*’s high standards require immediate corrective action for underperforming crew members.
Character traits
Impatient Authoritative Frustrated Duty-bound Judgmental
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Supporting 4

Annoyed and concerned, reacting to the malfunction as a disruption to the ship’s smooth operations.

Miles O’Brien operates the transporter console, materializing canisters before turning his attention to the anti-grav unit’s failure. His exasperated 'Dammit...' captures the crew’s collective frustration with the malfunction and, by extension, Barclay’s perceived role in it. O’Brien’s reaction is brief but telling, reflecting the tension and urgency of the moment as the crew grapples with the potential consequences of the failure.

Goals in this moment
  • To ensure the transporter and cargo bay systems function correctly to avoid further disruptions.
  • To contribute to the resolution of the anti-grav unit failure, however indirectly.
Active beliefs
  • Barclay’s incompetence is contributing to the ship’s operational issues.
  • The crew must work efficiently to prevent minor malfunctions from escalating into major crises.
Character traits
Frustrated Exasperated Observant Professionally invested
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Neutral but attentive, reacting to the malfunction as part of the crew’s shared challenge.

Costa assists Duffy in moving canisters from the transporter pad to the anti-grav unit, his role largely supernumerary but contributing to the cargo bay’s operational flow. He is present during the anti-grav unit’s failure, witnessing Barclay’s awkward attempts to diagnose the problem. Costa’s presence underscores the crew’s collective effort and the high stakes of the cargo bay’s operations.

Goals in this moment
  • To assist in the smooth operation of the cargo bay and transporter systems.
  • To ensure the safety and integrity of the Mikulak tissue samples.
Active beliefs
  • The crew must work together to overcome technical challenges, regardless of individual shortcomings.
  • Barclay’s behavior is disrupting the team’s cohesion and efficiency.
Character traits
Supportive Reliable Observant Low-key
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Professionally focused, with a hint of irritation at the mounting problems in the cargo bay.

Duffy moves canisters from the transporter pad to the anti-grav unit, his focus shifting when he discovers a leaking nitrogen canister. He reports the issue to Geordi, who orders its destruction. Duffy’s actions are efficient and routine, but his discovery adds to the growing sense of unease in the cargo bay. Later, he watches as Barclay fails to fix the anti-grav unit, his presence contributing to the collective frustration directed at Barclay.

Goals in this moment
  • To complete his assigned tasks efficiently and report any issues to senior officers.
  • To avoid being drawn into Barclay’s personal or professional struggles.
Active beliefs
  • Barclay’s errors are creating unnecessary work and risks for the crew.
  • The cargo bay’s operations must remain prioritized, regardless of individual performance issues.
Character traits
Attentive Efficient Observant Neutral (but implicitly critical of Barclay)
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Focused and slightly annoyed by the disruption, but committed to resolving the issue.

Engineering Technicians move canisters from the transporter pad to the anti-grav unit, their actions part of the cargo bay’s routine operations. They react to the anti-grav unit’s failure with mild frustration, their presence reinforcing the crew’s collective effort and the high stakes of the cargo bay’s mission. Their role is largely supernumerary but contributes to the scene’s atmosphere of urgency and professionalism.

Goals in this moment
  • To complete their assigned tasks without delay, ensuring the cargo bay’s operations remain on schedule.
  • To support Geordi and the senior officers in diagnosing and fixing the anti-grav unit.
Active beliefs
  • The crew’s ability to work together is critical to the *Enterprise*’s success.
  • Barclay’s incompetence is a liability that must be addressed.
Character traits
Professional Efficient Reactive Team-oriented
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Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Cargo Bay Anti-Grav Equipped Canister (Disassembled for Diagnosis)

The Cargo Bay Canister carried by Geordi and Barclay becomes a symbolic object of the strained dynamic between them. After the anti-grav unit fails, Geordi calls for additional engineers and then turns to Barclay, who is still fumbling with the unit. Geordi orders Barclay to assist in moving the canister, a task that Barclay performs awkwardly and in silence. The canister itself is unremarkable, but its role in this moment underscores the tension and discomfort between Geordi and Barclay, as well as the crew’s collective frustration with Barclay’s performance. The act of carrying the canister together is a physical manifestation of their professional obligation to work as a team, despite their personal and professional differences.

Before: Securely placed on the anti-grav unit, awaiting transport …
After: Moved by Geordi and Barclay across the cargo …
Before: Securely placed on the anti-grav unit, awaiting transport to its destination. It is one of several canisters containing Mikulak tissue samples, critical to the *Enterprise*’s mission.
After: Moved by Geordi and Barclay across the cargo bay, its transport completed but the moment serving as a stark reminder of the crew’s dissatisfaction with Barclay.
Cargo Bay Antigrav Unit Diagnostic Access Panel

The Cargo Bay Anti-Grav Unit is the central focus of this event, its malfunction serving as a catalyst for Barclay’s humiliation and the crew’s frustration. Initially, Barclay inspects the unit’s open access panel, finding nothing obviously wrong before activating it. The unit briefly functions but almost immediately fails, causing a pallet of Mikulak tissue samples to crash to the floor. This failure exposes Barclay’s incompetence and the crew’s growing distrust of him, while also highlighting the unit’s critical role in the cargo bay’s operations. The unit’s malfunction is not just a mechanical issue but a symptom of the broader crisis—Barclay’s psychological instability and the crew’s inability to rely on him.

Before: Partially disassembled, with its access panel open and …
After: Completely non-functional after its spectacular failure, with the …
Before: Partially disassembled, with its access panel open and Geordi examining its internal components. It is non-functional but appears to be in need of minor repairs rather than a complete overhaul.
After: Completely non-functional after its spectacular failure, with the pallet of tissue samples scattered on the floor. The unit is now a source of frustration and a symbol of Barclay’s perceived incompetence.
Cargo Bay Gaseous Nitrogen Canisters

The Cargo Bay Nitrogen Canisters are part of the cargo bay’s operational infrastructure, used to maintain the stability and integrity of the Mikulak tissue samples. While not the direct focus of this event, their presence is implied in the broader context of the cargo bay’s operations. Duffy’s earlier discovery of a leaking nitrogen canister adds a layer of tension, as it suggests that the cargo bay’s systems are not functioning as they should. This contributes to the growing sense of unease and the crew’s frustration with the mounting problems, which are indirectly tied to Barclay’s perceived incompetence.

Before: Securely stacked on pallets or in storage, with …
After: The leaking canister has been removed and destroyed, …
Before: Securely stacked on pallets or in storage, with one canister previously identified as leaking gaseous nitrogen. The canisters are part of the cargo bay’s standard operational equipment, used to preserve the tissue samples.
After: The leaking canister has been removed and destroyed, but the incident lingers as a reminder of the cargo bay’s vulnerabilities. The remaining canisters are still in use, though their integrity is now a point of concern for the crew.
Mikulak Donation Tissue Samples (Canisters) on Anti-Grav Pallet

The Pallet of Tissue Samples is the most immediate casualty of the anti-grav unit’s failure. When Barclay activates the unit, it briefly functions before collapsing, sending the pallet crashing to the floor. The samples scatter, creating a sense of urgency and chaos in the cargo bay. This moment is a turning point, as the failure of the pallet’s anti-grav support is directly tied to Barclay’s inability to diagnose or fix the unit. The pallet’s destruction symbolizes the fragility of the *Enterprise*’s mission and the high stakes of Barclay’s incompetence, as the Mikulak tissue samples are vital to containing the Correllium Fever outbreak on Nahmi IV.

Before: Hovering stably on the anti-grav unit, secured and …
After: Crash-landed on the cargo bay floor, its contents …
Before: Hovering stably on the anti-grav unit, secured and ready for transport. The pallet contains fragile Mikulak tissue samples, which are mission-critical for the *Enterprise*’s delivery to Nahmi IV.
After: Crash-landed on the cargo bay floor, its contents scattered. The samples are at risk of contamination or damage, adding to the crew’s frustration and the urgency of the situation.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Cargo Bay 38 (USS Enterprise-D)

The Cargo Bay serves as the primary setting for this event, a utilitarian space where the *Enterprise*’s operational efficiency is put to the test. The high ceilings, stacked pallets, and flickering anti-grav units create an atmosphere of controlled chaos, where every movement and action is critical to the ship’s mission. The cargo bay’s functional role in this event is twofold: it is the stage for Barclay’s humiliation and the crew’s frustration, and it is the site of the anti-grav unit’s failure, which threatens the integrity of the Mikulak tissue samples. The location’s mood is tense and urgent, with the crew’s collective focus on resolving the malfunction and preventing further disruptions. Symbolically, the cargo bay represents the *Enterprise*’s operational backbone, where the crew’s ability to work together is tested under pressure.

Atmosphere Tense and urgent, with a palpable sense of frustration and high stakes. The cargo bay’s …
Function Operational hub for the *Enterprise*’s cargo handling, where the crew’s ability to work together is …
Symbolism Represents the *Enterprise*’s operational backbone and the crew’s collective responsibility to maintain the ship’s mission …
Access Restricted to authorized crew members, with senior officers like Geordi and Riker overseeing operations. The …
Fluorescent lighting casting a sterile glow over the cargo bay’s metal surfaces. The hum of anti-grav units and the occasional clank of canisters being moved. The scattered pallet and its contents, creating a sense of disarray amidst the usual order. The crew’s tense body language and hushed, urgent conversations.

Organizations Involved

Institutional presence and influence

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Starfleet

Starfleet Academy is invoked indirectly in this event, as Geordi and Riker question how Barclay could have graduated from the Academy given his chronic lateness and perceived incompetence. The Academy’s name serves as a benchmark for professionalism and competence, highlighting the discrepancy between Barclay’s performance and the standards set by Starfleet. The organization’s influence is felt in the crew’s expectations of Barclay and their frustration with his failures, as well as in the broader context of the *Enterprise*’s mission and the high stakes of the cargo bay’s operations.

Representation Through the crew’s references to Barclay’s graduation from the Academy and their expectations of his …
Power Dynamics Operating as an institutional benchmark for competence and professionalism, with the crew’s frustration with Barclay …
Impact The event reinforces the importance of Starfleet Academy’s standards in shaping the crew’s expectations and …
To uphold the standards of professionalism and competence set by Starfleet Academy, ensuring that all crew members meet the expectations of their roles. To reinforce the crew’s commitment to the *Enterprise*’s mission and the high stakes of their operations, particularly in high-pressure situations. Through the crew’s collective expectations and the standards set by Starfleet, which are enforced by senior officers like Geordi and Riker. By serving as a point of comparison for Barclay’s performance, highlighting the discrepancy between his behavior and the Academy’s standards. Via the crew’s professionalism and their commitment to maintaining the *Enterprise*’s operational integrity, despite individual shortcomings.
USS Enterprise-D Bridge Command Team

The USS *Enterprise* (Starfleet) is the overarching organizational context for this event, embodying the high standards and operational excellence expected of its crew. The event highlights the tension between individual performance and the ship’s collective mission, as Barclay’s failures threaten the *Enterprise*’s ability to transport the Mikulak tissue samples to Nahmi IV. The crew’s frustration with Barclay is not just personal but reflects their commitment to the *Enterprise*’s reputation and the lives at stake in the mission. The organization’s influence is manifest in Geordi’s and Riker’s reprimands, the crew’s collective effort to resolve the anti-grav unit’s failure, and the urgency with which they address the malfunction.

Representation Through the actions and dialogue of its senior officers (Geordi and Riker) and the crew’s …
Power Dynamics Exercising authority over individual crew members, with senior officers like Geordi and Riker enforcing the …
Impact The event underscores the *Enterprise*’s commitment to its mission and the crew’s role in maintaining …
Internal Dynamics The crew’s frustration with Barclay reflects internal tensions between individual performance and the ship’s collective …
To ensure the successful transport of the Mikulak tissue samples to Nahmi IV, fulfilling the *Enterprise*’s mission and preventing the spread of Correllium Fever. To maintain the ship’s operational excellence and uphold the high standards expected of its crew, addressing underperformance and incompetence where necessary. Through the chain of command, with senior officers like Geordi and Riker enforcing discipline and expectations. Via the crew’s professionalism and collective effort to resolve technical challenges, reinforcing the *Enterprise*’s commitment to its mission. By setting clear consequences for underperformance, as demonstrated by Riker’s reprimand of Barclay.

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 4
Causal

"Geordi assigns Barclay to fix the anti-grav unit and almost immediately after Barclay activates it, it fails, creating suspicion about Barclay's competence or a more deliberate involvement."

The Breaking Point: Barclay’s Incompetence Forces La Forge’s Confrontation
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Causal

"Geordi assigns Barclay to fix the anti-grav unit and almost immediately after Barclay activates it, it fails, creating suspicion about Barclay's competence or a more deliberate involvement."

The Contamination Revelation: Barclay’s Incompetence Becomes a Ship-Wide Threat
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Causal

"Geordi assigns Barclay to fix the anti-grav unit and almost immediately after Barclay activates it, it fails, creating suspicion about Barclay's competence or a more deliberate involvement."

Barclay’s Humiliation and the First Fracture: A Crisis of Competence and Control
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Causal

"Geordi assigns Barclay to fix the anti-grav unit and almost immediately after Barclay activates it, it fails, creating suspicion about Barclay's competence or a more deliberate involvement."

The Weight of Silence: Barclay’s Shame and Geordi’s Reluctant Mentorship
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What this causes 7
Callback

"The canister leaking gaseous nitrogen leads to Geordi's announcement that Duffy's broken glass and their presence in the cargo bay when the anti-grav unit failed, while Wesley recalls the transporter malfunction, leading to a clearer picture that they are spreading the contagion and the ship's computer now warns the engine containment field is near safety limits."

Barclay’s Breakthrough: The Unseen Carrier
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Callback

"The canister leaking gaseous nitrogen leads to Geordi's announcement that Duffy's broken glass and their presence in the cargo bay when the anti-grav unit failed, while Wesley recalls the transporter malfunction, leading to a clearer picture that they are spreading the contagion and the ship's computer now warns the engine containment field is near safety limits."

The Crew as the Carrier: Barclay’s Radical Hypothesis
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Callback

"The canister leaking gaseous nitrogen leads to Geordi's announcement that Duffy's broken glass and their presence in the cargo bay when the anti-grav unit failed, while Wesley recalls the transporter malfunction, leading to a clearer picture that they are spreading the contagion and the ship's computer now warns the engine containment field is near safety limits."

The Unseen Carrier: Barclay’s Intuition Breaks the Code
S3E21 · Hollow Pursuits
Causal

"Geordi assigns Barclay to fix the anti-grav unit and almost immediately after Barclay activates it, it fails, creating suspicion about Barclay's competence or a more deliberate involvement."

The Breaking Point: Barclay’s Incompetence Forces La Forge’s Confrontation
S3E21 · Hollow Pursuits
Causal

"Geordi assigns Barclay to fix the anti-grav unit and almost immediately after Barclay activates it, it fails, creating suspicion about Barclay's competence or a more deliberate involvement."

The Contamination Revelation: Barclay’s Incompetence Becomes a Ship-Wide Threat
S3E21 · Hollow Pursuits
Causal

"Geordi assigns Barclay to fix the anti-grav unit and almost immediately after Barclay activates it, it fails, creating suspicion about Barclay's competence or a more deliberate involvement."

Barclay’s Humiliation and the First Fracture: A Crisis of Competence and Control
S3E21 · Hollow Pursuits
Causal

"Geordi assigns Barclay to fix the anti-grav unit and almost immediately after Barclay activates it, it fails, creating suspicion about Barclay's competence or a more deliberate involvement."

The Weight of Silence: Barclay’s Shame and Geordi’s Reluctant Mentorship
S3E21 · Hollow Pursuits

Key Dialogue

"GEORDI: I just don't know what to do with him. He's always late, never gives his best effort, always slides by... I can't deal with it anymore. How does a guy like him ever make it through the Academy..."
"RIKER: I think it's time we talked to the captain about Broccoli. (off Geordi's look) That's what Wesley calls him. Keep it to yourself."
"RIKER: Mister Barclay, I'm tired of seeing your name on report. I don't know what you got away with on your last posting, but this is the *Enterprise*. We set a different standard here. Understood?"
"BARCLAY: I... I don't understand... (after the crash, stammering, guilty)"
"GEORDI: We could use a hand, Mister Barclay... (Barclay avoids Geordi's glare as they carry the canister in silence)"