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S2E13 · Bartlet's Third State of the Union

Sam Clinches Blue Ribbon Vote Amid Final Speech Tweaks

In the frenetic Outer Oval Office, Sam paces anxiously on a high-stakes call, negotiating votes for the Blue Ribbon commission. Toby rushes to the Oval Office, directing speechwriters to soften 'vigorously pursue' campaign finance reform and tweak cop scandal phrasing per Senator McGowan's sensitivities. Nervous Bartlet arrives; Leo presses on Sam's status. Sam secures the deal—backing a highway bill (SP 380) and parkland naming—pumps his fist triumphantly, confirming the quid pro quo as the team motorcades out. This convergence amplifies pre-SOTU tension, exposing raw deal-making and vulnerability beneath White House polish.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Sam anxiously waits on the phone for confirmation of a crucial deal while staffers, including Mrs. Landingham, move quickly through the office.

anxiety to anticipation ['Outer Oval Office']

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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C.J. Cregg
primary

Anticipatory for go-ahead

C.J. positioned as recipient of Ginger's dispatched Blue Ribbon green light message, primed for briefing room rollout post-deal confirmation.

Goals in this moment
  • Receive and deploy announcement
  • Brief media on triumph
Active beliefs
  • Green lights enable spin
  • Timing amplifies policy wins
Character traits
resilient strategic poised terse dutiful
Follow C.J. Cregg's journey

Nervous tension exploding into triumphant relief

Sam paces anxiously in the Outer Oval, gripping the phone in tense negotiation with McGowan, glancing at his watch, then erupts in fist-pumping triumph upon sealing the Blue Ribbon deal via SP 380 and park trades, joining the motorcade surge.

Goals in this moment
  • Secure Blue Ribbon votes
  • Verify quid pro quo with Leo
Active beliefs
  • Horse-trading advances ideals
  • Precision wins razor-thin margins
Character traits
tenacious idealistic quick-witted
Follow Sam Seaborn's journey

Surgical focus under deadline pressure

Toby rushes through Outer Oval with Ginger into Oval, sharply directing Pettit and speechwriters to delete 'vigorously pursue' and change 'chokehold' to 'tight grip' per McGowan, instructs Ginger on C.J. greenlight, coordinates speech handoff while heading to limo.

Goals in this moment
  • Finalize non-inflammatory SOTU draft
  • Propel Blue Ribbon announcement
Active beliefs
  • Compromise sharpens rhetoric
  • McGowan's leverage demands precision
Character traits
combative precise urgent
Follow Toby Ziegler's journey

Steady reassurance in tension

Charlie trails nervous Bartlet into Oval, steadily assists with suit jacket, calmly affirms Abbey's seating twice, then enters middle limo with Leo and Bartlet post-deal.

Goals in this moment
  • Equip Bartlet physically
  • Confirm First Lady logistics
Active beliefs
  • Routine calms nerves
  • Protocol ensures seamlessness
Character traits
poised attentive unflappable
Follow Charlie Young's journey

Presumed composed in position

Abigail Bartlet referenced as already seated, invoked by Bartlet seeking confirmation amid pre-SOTU jitters, underscoring marital and protocol steadiness.

Goals in this moment
  • Occupy designated seat
  • Support presidential poise
Active beliefs
  • Presence anchors family
  • Positioning signals unity
Character traits
supportive poised strategically vital
Follow Abigail Bartlet's journey

Calmly observant amid frenzy

Dolores Landingham swiftly navigates the frenetic Outer Oval Office amid staffers, embodying poised efficiency as background anchor to Sam's pacing negotiation and the mounting SOTU countdown chaos.

Goals in this moment
  • Maintain operational flow
  • Support executive transition
Active beliefs
  • Discipline pierces chaos
  • Routine steadies high stakes
Character traits
composed efficient gatekeeping
Follow Dolores Landingham's journey
Ginger
primary

Alert and ready in high-velocity chaos

Ginger rushes alongside Toby into Oval Office, stands by during speech tweak directives, receives Toby's order to relay Blue Ribbon green light to C.J., then bolts off to execute amid hallway exodus.

Goals in this moment
  • Relay critical message to C.J.
  • Sustain communications chain
Active beliefs
  • Swift action bridges crises
  • Directives demand instant compliance
Character traits
efficient responsive poised
Follow Ginger's journey
Pettit
primary

Primed for directive execution

Pettit snaps immediate affirmation to Toby's summons in Oval Office, poised as speech surgery unfolds on 'vigorously pursue,' anchoring the writers' scrum under four-minute deadline pressure.

Goals in this moment
  • Implement Toby's revisions
  • Meet SOTU timeline
Active beliefs
  • Chain of command accelerates fixes
  • Word choice sways senators
Character traits
compliant professional
Follow Pettit's journey

Focused under time crunch

Speechwriter 1 crisply confirms 'Yeah' to Toby's 'tight grip' tweak amid Oval frenzy, executing last-second draft changes while noting the razor-edge four-minute countdown to motorcade.

Goals in this moment
  • Confirm phrasing alterations
  • Finalize speech for prompter
Active beliefs
  • Accuracy averts senatorial backlash
  • Deadlines forge precision
Character traits
reliable concise
Follow Speechwriter 1's journey
Bob Novak
primary

Laudatory from afar

Bob Novak cited by Bartlet for praising the speech as 'of my political life,' injecting rare pundit validation into Oval tension before tweaks.

Goals in this moment
  • Evaluate SOTU rhetoric
  • Shape public perception
Active beliefs
  • Bartlet's address peaks career
  • Media endorsement elevates
Character traits
perceptive laudatory influential
Follow Bob Novak's journey
McGowan
primary

Appeased by concessions

Senator McGowan's sensitivities dictate Toby's speech excisions—'vigorously' inflammatory, approving post-tweak—while Sam trades pork for his Blue Ribbon vote on phone.

Goals in this moment
  • Extract phrasing concessions
  • Secure highway/park quid pro quo
Active beliefs
  • Inflammatory words risk votes
  • Pork solidifies support
Character traits
brinkmanship leveraging
Follow McGowan's journey

Ritualistic formality

Edgar Finney invoked by TV reporter as ceremonial Doorkeeper introducing Bartlet to House floor, ritualistically framing the imminent SOTU protocol.

Goals in this moment
  • Execute traditional introduction
  • Uphold congressional rite
Active beliefs
  • Speaker permission gates power
  • Protocol elevates spectacle
Character traits
dutiful ceremonial authoritative
Follow Edgar Finney's journey

nervous but composed

enters Oval rolling down sleeves looking nervous, asks status, approves speech changes and deal, confirms Abbey's seat, helped with suit jacket by Charlie, enters middle limo

Goals in this moment
  • finalize speech tweaks and vote deal before departing for SOTU
Character traits
protective resolute self-aware principled
Follow Josiah Bartlet's journey

provides commentary on TV about President Bartlet's upcoming State of the Union address and House protocols

Goals in this moment
  • inform audience about SOTU proceedings
Follow Unnamed White …'s journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Mrs. Landingham's Outer Oval Landline Phone

Mrs. Landingham's Outer Oval Landline Phone serves as Sam's lifeline for high-stakes negotiation with McGowan, gripped tightly during pacing anxiety, hung up post-fist-pump triumph, catalyzing Blue Ribbon deal verification and team momentum.

Before: Idle on desk in Outer Oval
After: Hung up, abandoned as group surges to hallway
Before: Idle on desk in Outer Oval
After: Hung up, abandoned as group surges to hallway
Outer Oval Office Televisions

Outer Oval Office Television broadcasts reporter's SOTU countdown and Edgar Finney protocol, drawing ambient attention amid Sam's call and staff frenzy, heightening temporal pressure and external stakes.

Before: On-air in corner, visible to staff
After: Still broadcasting as office empties
Before: On-air in corner, visible to staff
After: Still broadcasting as office empties
Sam's Wristwatch

Sam's Wristwatch snaps into focus during phone pause, its face amplifying six-minute countdown urgency, spurring negotiation intensity and fist-pump release as deal seals.

Before: Worn on wrist during pacing
After: Glanced, then ignored in triumph rush
Before: Worn on wrist during pacing
After: Glanced, then ignored in triumph rush
Bartlet's Suit Jacket

Bartlet's Suit Jacket is lifted by Charlie onto his rolled sleeves in Oval, transforming nervous disarray into armored composure, symbolizing transition to public command amid speech tweaks.

Before: Aside, ready in Oval shadows
After: Worn by Bartlet in middle limo
Before: Aside, ready in Oval shadows
After: Worn by Bartlet in middle limo
SP 380 Highway Bill

SP 380 Highway Bill emerges as Sam's clinched bargaining chip—White House weight pledged alongside parkland—in exchange for McGowan's Blue Ribbon support, verified by Leo, propelling policy victory.

Before: Negotiable asset on phone line
After: Locked in quid pro quo, en route to …
Before: Negotiable asset on phone line
After: Locked in quid pro quo, en route to Capitol
Presidential Motorcade Limousines

Presidential Motorcade Limousines wait at North Entrance; Sam/Toby enter front, Leo/Bartlet/Charlie middle, staff rear—doors slamming as frenzy converts to convoy surge toward SOTU.

Before: Idling in formation outside
After: Occupied, departing for Capitol
Before: Idling in formation outside
After: Occupied, departing for Capitol

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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West Wing Corridor (Exterior Hallway Outside Leo McGarry's Office)

West Wing Hallway channels the exodus post-deal—crowd verifies quid pro quo, Toby dispatches Ginger, building rhythmic surge from Oval tweaks to motorcade, blending triumph with haste.

Atmosphere Echoing with rapid verification chatter
Function Transit artery for team mobilization
Symbolism Corridor from prep to performance
Access White House inner circle
Linoleum footfall echoes Crowd clustering voices
North Entrance

North Entrance frames motorcade departure—limos poised as principals divvy cars (Sam/Toby front, Leo/Bartlet/Charlie middle)—culminating frenzy in armored launch toward Capitol crucible.

Atmosphere Charged with departure urgency
Function Launch point for SOTU convoy
Symbolism Gateway from White House to national stage
Access Secure presidential egress
Idling engine hum Stone floors slick with haste

Organizations Involved

Institutional presence and influence

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U.S. House of Representatives

U.S. House of Representatives pulses via reporter's countdown to Bartlet's floor entrance, Finney's gavel ritual invoked, framing SOTU as tiered-bench crucible where speech lands amid partisan eyes.

Representation Via televised procedural anticipation
Power Dynamics Hosts executive oratory under sovereignty
Impact Ceremonial power balances executive shine
Uphold introduction protocol Absorb presidential agenda Doorkeeper ceremony Speaker gatekeeping
Congress

Congress looms via TV protocol (Speaker permission, Finney intro) and McGowan's tweaks/votes, its procedural gates and swing leverage dictating White House concessions en route to SOTU spectacle.

Representation Through senatorial demands and ritual broadcast
Power Dynamics Wields veto via individual senators
Impact Highlights razor margins of bipartisanship
Internal Dynamics Senatorial brinkmanship tests unity
Enforce address permissions Extract legislative pork Phrasing sensitivities Vote withholding pressure
Blue Ribbon Commission on Reform

Blue Ribbon Commission crystallizes as Sam's phone-sealed prize—votes horse-traded for SP 380/parkland—greenlit for C.J. via Ginger, transforming backroom pork into policy propulsion amid SOTU brinkmanship.

Representation Via White House negotiation proxy (Sam)
Power Dynamics Sought via senatorial concession extraction
Impact Exposes elite commissions as pork-forged
Secure congressional backing Enable advisory panel launch Quid pro quo leverage Policy announcement timing

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What this causes 3
Causal

"Sam's deal with Senator McGowan directly leads to the announcement of the Blue Ribbon Commission during the State of the Union address."

C.J. Brushes Off Press on Last-Minute Commission and Capital Beat Perks
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Character Continuity medium

"Bartlet's visible nerves before the State of the Union address contrast with his composed demeanor when sharing a prayerful moment with Charlie, highlighting his personal reliance on his aide for support."

Locking the Softened SOTU Speech and Presidential Handover
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Character Continuity medium

"Bartlet's visible nerves before the State of the Union address contrast with his composed demeanor when sharing a prayerful moment with Charlie, highlighting his personal reliance on his aide for support."

Bartlet's Nervous Ritual and Regal Entrance
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Key Dialogue

"SAM: "I'm still here. All right. Is that a yes? Is it a yes?""
"SAM: "I'm gonna tell him it's a yes." [pumps fist in air] "Thank you.""
"LEO: "I want to be clear. This is the understanding that we build him a highway and name a park after him and we have the support for the Blue Ribbon?" SAM: "Yep.""